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[ooc] Ikaruga, there is a reason why he objected to your story. Basically, it has nothing to do with our storyline, it has too many complicated elements in it to be combined into our storyline, and this thread is its very own rp. This thread should have only one adventure, and maybe some sub-adventures branching in and out from the main one(which is Karmas plot). Be it Random Insanity or not, respect and order still is kept here. There are still some rules to follow, and you are expected to follow them, or not be here at all.

And Led, that was very good. I love the character, but you should add a little more depth to your character. It's a good thing to save some juicy details about your character for later, but you need to add something more. I mean to say things such as a personality, and some abilities/qualities that make him formidable in some way as a fighter, runner, etc. If you look at your post, you kind of gave the poor thing a robot personality (I can even imagine it talking like the biased Sci-fi robots). Give it some more thoughts, and add a little bit of yourself into the character. ^._ You'll be great, trust me. [/ooc]