[SSJKarma]

[ooc]mizuki... your story is good, it snot what is wrong... its just that the fun we had is gone now... its up to you to bring it back, by writing good stories that will make our characters fun to play !

don'T stop the story, just do not do puzzles that are that long to solves... getting the crystals and basically the whole puzzle you had thought was just too big and would have taken too long to accomplish ! that's all !

as for the crystals, noticing how all the temples had them, it was just a matter of thinking to know they were needed !
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*kedjin is still running, the creature far behind. to lose it, kedjin took turns after turns without even looking what was there.*
KEDJIN:"theres light, so there is another room ahead !"
[upon entering the room, kedjin flown away, feets in front. there was abig maelstrom going on... an hell of a tempest was brewing in that room, no wonder that the creature didn't follow]
*KEDJIN grabbed the rocky floor*
KEDJIN:"WHAT THE HELL IS THAT THING !"
[the storm there was just too strong, there was a hole in the center, the storm was sucking everything in. the floor started to crumble]
KEDJIN:"damn thing, its just a matter of time before the floor let me loose !"
[the storm slowed down drastically, there was periods that could only be calculated in seconds.; now was the only time kedjin would have to help himself out]
KEDJIN:"what the... the storm slowed down... i'll take the time."
*kedjin, hand by hand, grabbed the floor and pulled himself out of the room*
[the storm brewed again, ever stronger then before, the floor collapsed.]
*kedjin grabbed the doorway rocks and pulled himself out of the room*
KEDJIN:"its an hell in there, i'm not gonna stay here any longer !"
*kedjin walked in the corridor while holding the wound on his stomach*

[after a while kedjin saw a purple light emanating from a certain wall]
KEDJIN:"can it be ? a fake wall wouldn't appears that easily. there must be a trap."
[kedjin looked around and tryed to see any traps... but once he found it it was too late. the floor openned and he fell into another room, it was full of purple crystals... but there was a big problem, dare i say a giant problem.]
KEDJIN:"holy ####... AMYTISTS !"
*kedjin suddently saw a big big shadow covering him.*
KEDJIN:"that doesn'T sound good !"
*he looked above him, a crystal giant was near him and looking at him.*
KEDJIN:"i must say that i'mn impress to still be alive after that maelstrom in the last room, but fighting off that monster is suicide !"
*the giant tryed to stomp KEDJIN who barely dodged the foot*

TO BE CONTINUED...