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SBYRD5 · 02-26-2003, 06:49 PM

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ost_uid0="SBYRD5"]Umm I made this last year it was...well if she reads it she will know it's her...

MY LOVE FOR JOY(Umm I know what you like to be called..but it fits better here...)

The music in my head...

I've known you almost as long as a year now,
You seem to be like wine,
Each day your sweetness is more divine,
You really gave me a chance to come in your mind,

You and you alone are the only girl I think I have,
Ever loved,but never meet,I knew you were special,
From my first reply from you..and your friends are even cool
You seem happy and I want that to stay,

I realized one day I liked you to much..so I pushed away,
Yea that sounds foolish,and our bound slowly begin to
fade away like the memory of you was a dream,
A fantasy....but one day I woke up.....

I only had you on my mind that day....
I waited all day to just get a reply from you
But you never came.....

You know you helped me so much..
I felt lost and you said some nice..*snif*
Beautiful things to me...even though today..
I know what your body looks like,

I think your mind is your best feature,
I remeber you saying things like this to me...
"James what is your favorite flavor of icecream"
I would've said the same as you just to make you happy..

You told me people change...and your right,
But sometimes your feelings don't completly change,
For that someone...that someone you love...
You might not say it right nor express this love..

But love never dies...if it was ever there...
What I felt for you wasn't lust...but love..
I don't know what to think of you or myself now..
BUT I DO KNOW EVERYDAY AND EVERY PASSING SEC.

OF THOSE DAYS WE SPENT TO GATHER JUST TALKING I LIKED YOU FOR YOU.....I NEVER REALLY HAD A GOOD CONVERSATION WITH MY GIRLFRIENDS OR EVEN MY MOM.

You seem so cool...and your beauty is so divine...so
Baby girl I pray one day you will be mine....[/quote]
Darkmaster examine this poem..it barely rhymes but it has a touching point...aslong as the poem has a message it is a poem...

Actually Rapping is poetry just the rhyming scheme your thinking about...

02-26-2003, 06:49 PM	#48
SBYRD5 Banned Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: North Carolina Posts: 6,549 Post Thanks / Like Thanks (Given): Thanks (Received): Likes (Given): Likes (Received): Dislikes (Given): Dislikes (Received): Points: 0 Mentioned: 0 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s) Quoted: 0 Post(s)	[quoteost_uid0="SBYRD5"]Umm I made this last year it was...well if she reads it she will know it's her... MY LOVE FOR JOY(Umm I know what you like to be called..but it fits better here...) The music in my head... I've known you almost as long as a year now, You seem to be like wine, Each day your sweetness is more divine, You really gave me a chance to come in your mind, You and you alone are the only girl I think I have, Ever loved,but never meet,I knew you were special, From my first reply from you..and your friends are even cool You seem happy and I want that to stay, I realized one day I liked you to much..so I pushed away, Yea that sounds foolish,and our bound slowly begin to fade away like the memory of you was a dream, A fantasy....but one day I woke up..... I only had you on my mind that day.... I waited all day to just get a reply from you But you never came..... You know you helped me so much.. I felt lost and you said some nice..snif Beautiful things to me...even though today.. I know what your body looks like, I think your mind is your best feature, I remeber you saying things like this to me... "James what is your favorite flavor of icecream" I would've said the same as you just to make you happy.. You told me people change...and your right, But sometimes your feelings don't completly change, For that someone...that someone you love... You might not say it right nor express this love.. But love never dies...if it was ever there... What I felt for you wasn't lust...but love.. I don't know what to think of you or myself now.. BUT I DO KNOW EVERYDAY AND EVERY PASSING SEC. OF THOSE DAYS WE SPENT TO GATHER JUST TALKING I LIKED YOU FOR YOU.....I NEVER REALLY HAD A GOOD CONVERSATION WITH MY GIRLFRIENDS OR EVEN MY MOM. You seem so cool...and your beauty is so divine...so Baby girl I pray one day you will be mine....[/quote] Darkmaster examine this poem..it barely rhymes but it has a touching point...aslong as the poem has a message it is a poem... Actually Rapping is poetry just the rhyming scheme your thinking about...