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God i wish i can draw :( i feel so handicaped its nice it look like the left side of his jaw is drooping o_0

Its good man. He looks scared.....lol. I think its better than what i can do. good job Resta.

[quote:post_uid0="LAB~MONSTER"]Its good man. He looks scared[/quote]
Thanks, man. Just the feedback I was looking for. That's the concept - he is apparently very powerful yet he portrays fear. I wanted to get that emotion through and you nailed it, Lab. More to come.

And with his chin being alittle lower, Ski, his head is tilted a bit and also if you notice some people's faces aren't always symetrical anyway.

Edited By Restavega on 1120511781

What can I say, as always, this and every other picture you draw is the S##T! Very powerful... A lot of people can draw, but its very hard to portray such an emotional drawing. Love your work babe. :love: I can't wait for you to post the self portrait one.

The face as I said before is ver detialed..

The shadowing/Shading is good.

Even the blood lip,and a look that says "What's next"

Is cool.

down side....The neck is to large...ir builds into his back space like it's part of his back..making it appear hunchbacked...

you also told me you wont change this...

For the most part..this is good stuff...

If you can reduce neck muscle mass into a more even scenrio..then it'll be a good piece of work..

rating..

7.8/10

I think it might look cooler if the shade lines all pointed in the same direction. Maybe if some areas were darker than others it might add some dynamic lighting.

[quote:post_uid0="SBYRD5"]The neck is to large...ir builds into his back space like it's part of his back..making it appear hunchbacked...[/quote]
I see what you mean. Good observation.

The neck size is perfect. Of course, in art (and imagination) there are no boundaries to size or limitations. That neck looks great to me.

He is looking up, throwing his neck and head up, but you're right. The neck line should be shorter on his left side (which would be your right when you look at the picture) so it doesn't look so much like a hunchback or odd extention.

I still need some polishing up.

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I think it might look cooler if the shade lines all pointed in the same direction. Maybe if some areas were darker than others it might add some dynamic lighting.

About the shade lines pointing in a the same direction... I've done that before and it gives presence of light an awkward look on the subject. I was taught to shade away from the center of the face or an object. Still something I'm experimenting with so I'm not too familiar with shading in general.

And about shading areas being darker than others, that is an important issue I need some practice with as well. I don't have strong grasp of it yet. Thanks for pointing that out

Edited By Restavega on 1120513014

Post the Alien looking girl, that I colored... lolz Sorry getting ahead of myself. Anyway, I think that the face is the main focus in this picture, that is why it has the most detail and work put in to it, not so much the neck.

that's dam good.

If only i had natural talents like that :down:

but still....a real good job. :biggrin: