ok here is one have

There are so many things can say
To make you feel the same way
Girl you are like a pearl so beautiful
But I want to know will you go wit me
Make me feel like the boy that I was sapusta to be
Girl I can be the key to set your soul free
You may think I am playing but if you choose me
You will see what the key can open for you

If you don't have a clue
A boy like me came out of the blue
And wanted to talk to you
Cuz I like you since I saw you
You had this thing that I could not explain
It nearly drove me insane
That was it that little thing
That made you appealing to my feeling

'Twas pretty good . . .
Here's one of mine.

<span style='font-family:unicorn'><span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'>Holy War</span></span>

Angels descend from the heavens,
And Demons from the ground.
The fight will soon begin,
For the humans chained and bound.
They stand there ready and willing.
All standing their grounds.
The battle will be everywhere,
The Supernatural has no bounds.

A single sound of the shofar,
Has just begun the war.
The Angels with their righteous cry,
And the Demons with their roar.
The sounds of clashing blades,
Echo as the Light,
And the Darkness battle,
For eternity

i can free style now its time to show my poetic skillz...lol


roses are red
violets are blue
ehhh forget it i aint no dam poet

[quote:post_uid0="Razz"]'Twas pretty good . . .
Here's one of mine.

<span style='font-family:unicorn'><span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'>Holy War</span></span>

Angels descend from the heavens,
And Demons from the ground.
The fight will soon begin,
For the humans chained and bound.
They stand there ready and willing.
All standing their grounds.
The battle will be everywhere,
The Supernatural has no bounds.

A single sound of the shofar,
Has just begun the war.
The Angels with their righteous cry,
And the Demons with their roar.
The sounds of clashing blades,
Echo as the Light,
And the Darkness battle,
For eternity

down the alleys and down the streets.
territory for the gangs to keep.
watch what u say, watch what u do.
or sum1 will bust a cap in ur ass. :biggrin:

cops in full force, fat as they may be.
always at dunken doughnuts with a trainee.
the black man cant drive down the streets.
hell, they already commited a crime: being black with a benz for keeps. :biggrin:
whites in the suburbs, blacks in the slums.
at least the hughleys r lucky, as well as the klumps.

U.S at war. bush is insane. :biggrin:
saddam hussein? he's so damn insane.

i think thats good.

here is a good one i have

Love

What is it to you
is it when i say i love you
or is it when they make it through
is it when i kick the ill will game to you
to make you feel the same
well i don't know so i ask you
what does it take to make you my L-O-V-E
so is when they understand your view
if only you knew what i could do for you
then you know i why i am misunderstood
is cuz my love is true cuz i am one young of
poeple who are mature to understand
what love is....




this was what i did when i was in love wiht this girl even though i am 13

NATURE BEYOND THE THICKNEES OF WATER

I set where I am in a calm state of mind,
No fears,no failures that bond me,
Just the sounds of voices that echo truth,
A truth that demands reason,
Reason that has to be answered,

I seat on this rock...as though I'm on top of the world,
My mind is clear I can see my victories,and learned battles,
My soul is an eruption in a small container,
The deepness of the sounds around me come so clearly,
Dap...Dap... I can hear the rain..

The same touch and feel I can imatate now is my peaceful state of mind,Nothing can break it not cliques,Prejudice ignorance doesn't move me from my rock,I remain firm and calm....


I don't feel like writing any more right now.

Oooh, Sbyrd, pretty funky!

Oh, and thank you kindly, Blossom!
I don't have any more poems, but I do have a few songs. Here's one.

<span style='font-family:unicorn'><span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'>Crash and Burn</span></span>

Verse 1
Everything I

[b:post_uid6]ALONE OUTSIDE[/b:post_uid6]


Alone Outside

Through childhood...one wants to belong,
To feel the inbracement of peers,
Through any means...even join cliques,
Yet inside our souls are dreary,

My soul demands to have it's own unique taste,
Yet we tend to deny from giving our soul....food,
We poison them...in being followers in which we disbelieve,
I'm one of GOD's SONS...in what I believe..

I'm a bouncer in the tides of my homeland,
Supposed as an ignorant follower without direction,
I remain silent even though I scream tears inside,
Which is the direction of the tide?
Is it really my choice to fight the tide...

My parents...never gave me direction,
Yet I'm alone in ideas of this world of war,and production,
I'm outside writing my soul to paper..soon it will reach other souls,
Those to far to be reached by my oral words...maybe my writing can reach them...

Perhaps,...yet will they respond in agreeing or in uncomprehending manner.....

Look at my banner it shows my rage,
And hate,and even my will to keep my pride,
Now..I see pride as ignorance,
To be pride full you will only lose,

Enlightment is a long road to walk,
Yet I come closer to it by each passing day,
The road to Enlightment is a road that must be traveled alone,
So I'm outside in this world of culture,and machines,

And I realize everyone walking past me is going there own direction,

It's time I walked mine,

I won't shame my last name in that direction either,
I will have the dreams of my father..my mental sibling,and myself to insure now,

When my father died he was angry..angry because he didn't have the strenght to control his life.
He looked at me his only son to have success were he had fallen weak,and defeated.
When he had seen me fail he wanted me to have perfect success with my goals.....

From what I was taught to believe my father won't join me in me in Thugz Mansion.
No matter how I live my life from this day onward it will be to my best,

When I die..if he is judged to be with me after that death..then he will see that his son was a boy,and became a true man.
Thats what I'm striving for....If we can't be together then he will look above and see a mans tears crying for him to ease the pain of his heart....and him alone...must be the way the fates played our cards...

Because some how...I'm going to make right of my life...

and....I'm still outside...walking my journey...accept this time I'm going somewhere....

yall is mad deep feel yall

HOLY WAR...Razz you know that time is close...very well said...

I hope I can see my father again that day...it doesn't matter what side he's on....

man all those poems where deep.......now ma turn

*AHEM*

"paper"

first you get a paper
any kind of paper
but i prefer a dried swiffer

"how to get cash"

now you put da ashes
the ones they call golden scratches
on the paper to make some cashes ($$ching$$)

"busted"

when you get caught youl get some lashes
for those ashes
dat you sold for your cashes ($$ching$$)

"ways not to pay"

it aint a big deal
cause it gave you some meal
but wen you get da bill run for the hill (peace)
cause you know dey will kill

*claps all around him*

if ya think dis about drugs or sumtin, you may be right
but the main thing about this says is dont do drugs.....i think

Lmfao, i just suck at poetry, give me a few years to write a decently good one :D

i thought it would never end there is no one to tend so
i live the bowles of the earth so i am in all was in search
for someone to turn to for help since i think
i might go insane i can not explain what it is like
i try to put on my flight but it is to tight there is nothing in sight
but wait i see the light i try to touch try to cluch it
but it keet moving it left me with out a clue then out of the blue
i see a wanderer moving towards me i ran it ran i hope it had a plan
then it stop then it said then end of forever is now and it ended.....


this one is phat :)

i got one...it's called you suck

You Suck...
You Suck Little Ducks..
After You Suck Little Ducks..
You Want To You Know What To Little Ducks...
Now Forget This Little Poem...
Before I Do To You Know What In The Butt


:laughlong:

did u kno that poems, DONT NEED TO RHYME, so in ur case white tiger, dont ryhme lol

*AHEM*
"a drug addicts pain"

i use to be a alcholic
i use to be narcotic
now i just use dem

for pleasure and pain
which cause great amount of strain...

wen ever i see them, it drives me crazy
for these moments always causes me to go frenzy

da only thing i see is now crazy bunnies
and for these bunnies had great amout of energy


ok......this poem talk about "bbbaaaddd" drugs
never use them cause they cause u pain and strain, sometimes pleasure

you need to finsh it had a good start

another one of my great poems.....

*AHEM*

"wen ever i get high"

wen i get high
things go die
for i have no controls
over my mind
this crazy momemts
makes me feel bad
cause i have no dad

drugs cause u to do bad stuff

alright,let me show you how it's done.
Razz, your poems are very good indeed, but know it's time for your demise!
yugioh!!!! it's time to duel! uhhh, ahem... ehh... ??? eh uhh sorry bout that.. to much yugioh.. anyway here's the poem.

Cow
There once was a cow from Main,
Who ate almost half of Spain.
He devoured the stores
and munched on the floors
And finally flew back in the rain.

well.. 0k so it's not that good,,, :laugh: but i tried.



Edited By mooo1 on Feb. 08 2003 at 23:34

who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who feels ignored?
who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy that works hard to be recognized?
who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who feels like a nobody?
who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who has big dreams?
who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who is tormented every day?
who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who is poor?

who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who has nobody in his life.
i will pay attention to that depressed boy.
because i am that depressed boy.

solidsnake78 went deep wit dat one

ok...i shall make another poem

*AHEM*

for many days passed
many knights clashed

deaths and wounded flesh
covered the feild
for their future was never fortold

now in our world
da same things happen
war and battles terorism too

why does this happen
wut was the cause
is there any reason for this many loss

ok......ma poem doesnt talk about drugs dis time......
and mooo1 urs is good...it rhymes :D

Snake I know what it's like to be that boy....deep.



Constallations Of Mankind
Classical Music(It set my mind for this poem)

Love is printed in the stars is it not?
The same plot as Romeo and Juliet,
There stars were written to only end in tragic love,
But is it not better to have love than to not have loved at all?

We ask these questions to our inner self,
And sometimes share this with others,
But those you truely love you keep hidden,
In fear of being the victim of pain,

Isn't love it's on pain on the heart,
Cupid's arrow has it's way of striking,
The time you first wore your BIRTHDAY SUIT
Seems to decide your fate in those days...

We only consider stars beautiful,
Like Flowers that never wilt,
We often wish for a falling star to appear,
So we can have our chance to wish...

Wish for our inner desires,
Oh how we admire a companion,
To watch this wish asked for,and later recieved..

I have to go to sleep my eyes are burning

[quote:post_uid0="mooo1"]alright,let me show you how it's done.
Razz, your poems are very good indeed, but know it's time for your demise!
yugioh!!!! it's time to duel! uhhh, ahem... ehh... ??? eh uhh sorry bout that.. to much yugioh.. anyway here's the poem.

Cow
There once was a cow from Main,
Who ate almost half of Spain.
He devoured the stores
and munched on the floors
And finally flew back in the rain.

well.. 0k so it's not that good,,, :laugh: but i tried.[/quote]
Wow, what an amazing limmerick.
(in french accent)
Ah shallenj yiu to ah dooell!
*slap*


Cheese
Look in the holes of this cheese
It makes you fall on your knees
Once you get up
You will throw up
And after that, you will sneeze


muhahahah . . .

i got another poem......

"how u feel wen your high"

u feel so high
you think your higher dan the sky
den you try to fly
but you keep falling and die
and u still always try

"pass it on, and run"

wen you get it
puff and pass it

wen its your turn run and take da whole thing
wen they catch up say u wer joking
and wen dey fall for it run again

friends come and friends go.
but for me, they all just go.
why dont any girl just like me for who i am?
why am i always hated through my life?
why is there conflict in this world?
why cant i find peace?




why do pple hate and ignore me?

"wen i get high"

wen i get high
i look at da sky
it always looks pale
sometimes looking like a whale
and right next to me a can of ale

but one thing you must always
bring is a can of air freshner
so wen your parents come
they wont smell a thing
they will smell two things
and if dat doesnt help, run and say daddy did it...............

[quote:post_uid0="SolidSnake76"]friends come and friends go.
but for me, they all just go.
why dont any girl just like me for who i am?
why am i always hated through my life?
why is there conflict in this world?
why cant i find peace?




why do pple hate and ignore me?[/quote]
I don't hate or ignore you . . . and I'm sure not a lot of ppl hate you.

razz its is the junk here


World War 3

yo its like every day is a strugle
cuz it is like i am a pawn
and soon i will be gone
so when i die no one will cry
cuz everyone will still be fighting on

days will go by and so many people will die
because diesese will mutiply
when i look in the sky
i see the blood of every man and woman
who died fighting they where the first

that god placed a curse on
but that was not the worse one
now listen to this verse
people are scared to converse
they will disperse

cuz when they hear the sound
when bodies hit the ground
it feels like i am bound
to this place every time
i breath it tastes like waste

so now i am on the front line
putting my life on the line
its like going down stairs blind
you never know when its going to end
and you never know what going to happen


this is my feeling

[quote:post_uid0="Razz"][quote:post_uid0="mooo1"]alright,let me show you how it's done.
Razz, your poems are very good indeed, but know it's time for your demise!
yugioh!!!! it's time to duel! uhhh, ahem... ehh... ??? eh uhh sorry bout that.. to much yugioh.. anyway here's the poem.

Cow
There once was a cow from Main,
Who ate almost half of Spain.
He devoured the stores
and munched on the floors
And finally flew back in the rain.

well.. 0k so it's not that good,,, :laugh: but i tried.[/quote]
Wow, what an amazing limmerick.
(in french accent)
Ah shallenj yiu to ah dooell!
*slap*


Cheese
Look in the holes of this cheese
It makes you fall on your knees
Once you get up
You will throw up
And after that, you will sneeze


muhahahah . . .[/quote]
wow Razz.... I'm flattered..( what does that word mean?) anyway, thx! i tought mine was nothing compared to your poems, but thx. now i got another one.


The sun and moon
The time has come for us to rise,
For all the birds and bees and flies
The light is shining bold and bright,
The time has come for one more fight,
Every day goes by the same,
Every day we play the same game
Then all is quiet and the day is done,
Then the moon comes out, and takes over the sun.

I hope you guys like this one better than my other one. Heh, not bad for a thirteen year old, eh?

I rembered this poem form years ago during my early childhood I remeber almost every word of it and I even added some....


Mysidian Legend
Mystic Paladin

In the world of today we have two sets of mind,
We have pure evilness,and then we have pure goodness,
Some of our souls demand to share both sides evenly,
Often one of the sides prove to be more powerful,

What side rules your life?We all begin innocent,
Somewhere we are influenced then..some mantipulated,
Either way all our thoughts are different from the next being,
Me my soul...tells me to always honor my parents,

To honor the friendship of my comrades,
To protect those that can't protect there selves,
My soul tells me defeat all evil..even hidden evil,
I'm the holy knight and this is my legend....

One to be born from a dragon hoisting the light
And the dark arises high up in the sky to the still land.
Veiling the moon with the light of eternity,
It brings another promise to Mother Earth
With a bounty and mercy
That will in trust peace between two worlds..........

I sink fear deep in the heart of foul people,
And bring joy to those that only want peace,
My state of mind will not fail them,
I'm there Night light in the darkness,

My words make the devil scream in his fire kingdom,
I'm one of god's son's,and I tend to stay that,
I'm a christian that donates to the poor,
I slay the rude and give to the just....

I'm me...SBYRD5 the Paladin

Wish Upon a Shattered Star
by Trung Nguyen

Your beauty astounds me,
Set even brighter than the stars in the nighttime sky.
To the essense that lights my world.

You are the moon and stars in a lovers mind,
If you don't have a clue
A boy like me came out of the blue
I set you upon a pedestal atop the world.

Alas, you do not love me.
Lost forever, meant for another.
So what am I to do now that you are gone,
Wait for the moon's setting, East's first sign of dawn.

But my love for you still stays true.
A thousand words I yet cannot describe,
Two thousand, three thousand, my love still survives.
Because love is life and life is love,
Therefore I cannot live without you.

*sigh* :biggrin:

:D Roses r Red
Violets r Blue
The Smell of $hit Reminds me of u ! :D
:hehe:

your smile makes my day
its simple your dimples
your eyes from your hips and thighs
got me hypnotized

sometimes i want take you for stroll
czu i like you i want you
i tried playing these roles
of a nice guy and a bad guy

but now i am going to be me
its like i am paying toll
cuz now my soul
is being suck down a black hole

and now i feel no emotion
to others but girl
you can be the one that makes
me see the turing point

when i talk to you
you make forget the worries of my life
i don't care what they think of you
cuz i love you

it seems like use love alot
cuz i think its always apart of the plot
i can't like someone cuz that is to weak
they might think i am a geek

but i have what for you
is passion compassion
its so strong not even iraq
can crack it

and now you know what i think
but now i am not sure you feel me
but thats ok if do call me

this is from victor
the boy who loves you

SBYRD5: i am the poertry master :D

lol :buttrock:

um, ok let me try.

Frog

One sunny autumn day I saw,
As i was eating my fish errrr....raw
I noticed soemthing small and green,
It wriggled a little and threw up his uhhhh..... spleen.
I stared in suprise as it started to glow,
It jiggled a little and started to blow!
I got up and started to run,
Watching frogs was now no more fun,
For what I wasn't a frog at all
but a- hmm.. u don't what else to put here.
well i hoped ya liked it.

Umm I made this last year it was...well if she reads it she will know it's her...


MY LOVE FOR JOY(Umm I know what you like to be called..but it fits better here...)

The music in my head...

I've known you almost as long as a year now,
You seem to be like wine,
Each day your sweetness is more divine,
You really gave me a chance to come in your mind,

You and you alone are the only girl I think I have,
Ever loved,but never meet,I knew you were special,
From my first reply from you..and your friends are even cool
You seem happy and I want that to stay,

I realized one day I liked you to much..so I pushed away,
Yea that sounds foolish,and our bound slowly begin to
fade away like the memory of you was a dream,
A fantasy....but one day I woke up.....

I only had you on my mind that day....
I waited all day to just get a reply from you
But you never came.....

You know you helped me so much..
I felt lost and you said some nice..*snif*
Beautiful things to me...even though today..
I know what your body looks like,

I think your mind is your best feature,
I remeber you saying things like this to me...
"James what is your favorite flavor of icecream"
I would've said the same as you just to make you happy..

You told me people change...and your right,
But sometimes your feelings don't completly change,
For that someone...that someone you love...
You might not say it right nor express this love..

But love never dies...if it was ever there...
What I felt for you wasn't lust...but love..
I don't know what to think of you or myself now..
BUT I DO KNOW EVERYDAY AND EVERY PASSING SEC.

OF THOSE DAYS WE SPENT TO GATHER JUST TALKING I LIKED YOU FOR YOU.....I NEVER REALLY HAD A GOOD CONVERSATION WITH MY GIRLFRIENDS OR EVEN MY MOM.

You seem so cool...and your beauty is so divine...so
Baby girl I pray one day you will be mine....

that was hot man :( i admit defeat

















sike soon i will write another one