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well i wrote something for all the warriors in sfo ^_^ and i know it's not the best but i tried for u guys so i hope u guys like it to all the fighters out there this poems for u ^_^
I need to know the man behind the dark eyes The secrets and lies The warrior who fights an endless battle with his soul The lover who keeps this on going war I need to know the shadows that lurk in his heart Which he wants to keep in the dark The man I know so well And the shadow that lurks beneath The man who can love so much His hand a tender caress And the fighter who's hand a deadly touch 2 souls trapped in one body like day and night Your soul longs to find that balance between the warrior and the lover the Caretaker and the destroyer Needing seeking looking for that answer that |
i love it. ur poem is great and if i need help with poem i'll contact u
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very good congratulations I like enough the footpath of the warrior jejeje
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wow! i'm not very good when it comes 2 writing poems, but urs was gr8!
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y thankies *blushes and looks down all shy* i never thought anyone would like it or it'd be consider great by anyone. it means a lot to me that u guys like it for it was written for all u fighters in sfo ^_^ much love to the dark warriors out there. take care ofurselves and good luck with all that u do.
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yeah that was good..i wrote this one last nite..while i was listening to my boyz ll men cd..hmm
im not to good myself but hey wat the fack! there are times i wish i wasnt here here im always in fear my dying heart is in so much pain right now it just feels like the end with you by my side you make it so much easier like my life is worth more then it seems its a journey between me and you itll never end, i hope this is true it feels so right when im chillen with you im getting scared it feels too good to be true here i lie in my bed wondering why? how? never had a friend like yu before your the best and i love ya for that its like i can give a smack and yu can still joke about that things are too perfect but still i ask myself how? someone like you?" are you fo real? yeah her name is mirella shes the best of the best my best friend for life nothing can come between us cause its best friends for life Edited By Sportschick155 on Aug. 19 2004 at 17:23 |
Nice poems nferno and sports. Damn u guys are good.
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kool thx
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Great poems. Bravo. :thumbsup:
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^_^ nice poem sports. ur a better poet then i can ever wish to become *smiles* ^_^ well heres another one for u all
Like lovers entwined on a Grecian vase Like a poster of a beautiful face In captured in ever lasting time I hold u close and call u mine Like soft rain that falls with grace Like lilies that adorn the surface of a lake My fingers gently trace those soft lips I wish to kiss Those gentle eyelids upon your face Like summers last warmth that slips to fall Like my heart that |
[quote:post_uid0="girlNferno666"]^_^ nice poem sports. ur a better poet then i can ever wish to become *smiles* ^_^ well heres another one for u all
Like lovers entwined on a Grecian vase Like a poster of a beautiful face In captured in ever lasting time I hold u close and call u mine Like soft rain that falls with grace Like lilies that adorn the surface of a lake My fingers gently trace those soft lips I wish to kiss Those gentle eyelids upon your face Like summers last warmth that slips to fall Like my heart that |
i never thought id feel this way for you
i dumped you like just another fool you loved me you cared for me you protected me you did everything no one else has done for me i was blinded by the light and put you outta my sight dropped you like it was hot i didnt know any better im now mature and better you made me feel special like no other it was you who really cared it took months for me to notice that made my stupid mistakes ive always ended up being true too you and you know that and now you dont want me back it hurts like someone stabbed me in the back i feel like a fool for being so selfish its time to move on but badly i dont want too u will always be loved by me and i hope u feel the same way too its just time to set u free like one of them mother flipin bees hahahahahaha sorry didnt kno how to end it |
[quote:post_uid0="Sportschick155"]i never thought id feel this way for you
i dumped you like just another fool you loved me you cared for me you protected me you did everything no one else has done for me i was blinded by the light and put you outta my sight dropped you like it was hot i didnt know any better im now mature and better you made me feel special like no other it was you who really cared it took months for me to notice that made my stupid mistakes ive always ended up being true too you and you know that and now you dont want me back it hurts like someone stabbed me in the back i feel like a fool for being so selfish its time to move on but badly i dont want too u will always be loved by me and i hope u feel the same way too its just time to set u free like one of them mother flipin bees hahahahahaha sorry didnt kno how to end it[/quote] lolz like da ending... |
o 0 lol theyre bette than mine so i give them a 10/10
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^_^ very nice
heres one that goes out to those who have been forgotten and misused and abused much love to u all i know how it feel like *gives a huggle to them all* Have you ever wonder where those things left over go Those things left uncared for Like pieces of a puzzle that have no use Are those people who have been abused No one hears the silent cries that we hide The hurts we have inside The darkness that consumes our souls The things left untold Things we've long to unload Pain that scorches our souls And burns our flesh Like memories of being lashed Sins of the past Our only crime is being born next in line In an endless cycle made before our time |
Nice poems girlnferno and you too sports =)
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i love both ofur poems girlnferno and sportchicks there breath taking....i wrote this it well just tell me what u think cause i dont no what to say
.its call only time can heal...im sorry ..........only time can heal all things that are said hole in your heart...the hole in my head only in time that time can stop the pain ...only in time that i can stop the pain...the pain i gave in haste is now...what i gave in shame deep in my heart i know u feel the the same when i say that its a shame that things could not stay the same but i never give up hope that i take to my gave when i say that im sorry well u ever for give me for the shame i know i'm theone to place blame when we all say its just a dam shame...... |
This isn't really a poem, but it's close enough.
Don't mind the guitar chords. REFLECTION Capo 7 Verse 1: E As I saw you Walking up to say goodbye A It didn't hit me How much it would hurt inside E As later on it Sunk into my mind B That I wouldn't see you smile For a very long time E I just hugged you And sent you on your way A I didn't think that There was any more to say E Now that I reflect I regret it B I should have held you longer And I wish that you could stay Chorus: A Everytime I turn around B I see you standing there In my mind, holding on B7 Keeping me back in time Verse 2: E I'm at home on my own And I'm missing you A Don't even have a decent picture To remember you by E I took a survey and The colour of my life is blue B but it would be gray If it wasn't for meeting you -Chorus- Bridge: E? I'll go out of my way A? To tell you E? Just what you mean to me A? I miss you B I may be shy A It may feel akward at times B but I want you to know A Em I've got you on my mind -Verse 1- -Chorus- |
to my Nferno666
with no more then a smile u light up my world like sun shine peircing the darkest night with one soft whisper of i love u jade from ur lips gives me wings and i take flight my heart soars and knows no fears i know no wants no needs no worldly things as long as u love me for all i need is thee u free my soul and make my mind believe in me u show me the world through ur eyes and i can see past all the lies and when i'm with u i no longer hurt inside i close my eyes and know there will no longer be any more tears for all i hear is i love u my dear and u have no reason to fear |
Time moves with no speed
Each day passes like the last Nights fall with no notice Days comes with no markings Seasons come and go From spring buds to autumn leaves before snow Years move like sands through the hourglass like minuets as they slide past The only thing that change is the wrinkling of the flesh but nothing has aged since last My eyes soften with care whenever you are near My heart still holds you close and dear Time had no meaning since you were last here |
dude...uhm..r u with nferno?
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two strangers we were
in danger of losing what we held dear so very scared your smile so sweet your touch so tender and so my heart i surrender my vowels of love i gave your hand i took i know you love me with just one look those lips so soft your fingers gentle caress and so to you i gave all my trust your loving kisses those gentle hands whos soft touch tells me you understand those warm arms that hold me safe from harm the melody of your heart when i lay my head upon your chest tells me i've found true love at last. . . |
[quote:post_uid14="Sportschick155"]dude...uhm..r u with nferno?[/quote:post_uid14]
[color=blue:post_uid14]Yea i am.[/color:post_uid14] |
Yeah, Saijin and Nferno have had the hots for eachother for a while now.
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[quote:post_uid0="Razz"]Yeah, Saijin and Nferno have had the hots for eachother for a while now.[/quote]
don't make me kill you.... :biggrin: |
Hold on a sec are girlnferno and nferno together? Lol what a good couple that would be.
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i dont know, but girlnferno is a very good poet, and so is sportchick! u guys must spend ages finkin of things 2 rite bout!
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hehe y thank you and no not really i do it when i have a lot of things inside i don't know how to say or express so i write it down on paper or else draw it out in my sketch pad well heres another one for u all much love to those i've come to know and call friend and for those ofui haven't had the honor of meeting yet ^_^ feel free to say hi when u see me in the servers *smiles*
your not perfect u don't always tell me what i wanna hear but one thing i know thats for sure is you'll always be there to wipe away the tears someone who won't mind taking the time to make sure i'm fine always doing something silly and wild to get me to smile i'm glad what you've given me just didn't last for a while this thing you've given me i'll cheerish to the end *kisses u softly on the cheek and whispers* thank u my friend |
Lost in a lonely and distant land
Staring at the blood stains on his hand Hordes of evil approaching with haste He tightens the armour around his waste All good has perished and all hope is lost His tears drifting in the cold frost The monsters appear fiery all through The humongous army crying death awaits you He has no where to run and must hold them off His hopes of survival are severely rough He ready's his sword for a final fight The creatures surround him through marching and flight He calls upon the light one last time And charges forward with a chill upon his spine His glistening blade darting in several directions Slashing at monsters of many selections He dodges around, faster than any but the odds are against him although he's killed many The evil winged beasts swoop down low And the edge of a sword pierce him to his sorrow Staring at the cackeling horrors all in chrome Flashbacks rush through his mind of his former home His blood spills as he staggers by a tree This heroe's soul has finally been set free Edited By alamgir on Aug. 21 2004 at 22:45 |
aww i like it ^_^ hehe good job meanie well done ^_^ *hands u her bra autograph? jk hands u a sheet paper like a normal person for once x.x thats scary me being normal well heres another one for u all
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there all lovely poems ur really good and jade is really really really good :buttrock: ^_^
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i agree...they're awesome
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go ahead shy shake ur boom boom give us a A give us a W give us a E give us a S give us a O give us a M give is a E what that spell awesome !!!! what that spell AWESOME now give me some G,s cause im b.r.o.k.e after that letters aint cheap ..... :p
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dubya tee eff? ??? u on crack? u must be...
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.......MAY B.....WANT SOME (not really im just freaking nuts with my post that all)
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aww u guys i'm glad u guys like it so much ^_^ well heres another one for all those long term couples i hope u all like it
Long kisses in the night Strong arms holding me tight Movies and dinner by candle light Our love burning bright Gentle love melodies floating in the air You holding me near Soft whispers of I love you against my ear Things I recall from over the years Little special things we've shared From dances under the moon light And stolen kisses in the night Little love fights And making up after we turn off the lights Before saying our good nights and holding each other tight Waking up in your soft gaze that says I care Doing laundry and washing your underwear All blessings we've had through out the years Things I |
AWWW SNIFF SNIFF SNIFF....THAT WAS SO BEAUTYFULL ...JUST...LIKE...U HERE A POEM I HOPE U LOVE ITS ABOUT A SHY GUY WHO LIKE THIS GURL ITS CALL....
DREAM GIRL: I no as I stair knowing that u dont care to know that im their..wishing and dreaming that u was there by my side. the way you look at me make me feel all warm inside. i love the way your hair flow thought the air with out a care as i wish that i was there leting my hand flow down the side. i dream from afar asking god why WHY dont i have the courage deep inside to say hi but i do have enough to say good bye.... as i watch from afar. i feel so alnoe as i watch your sweet tender lips sing my heart flys with many wings. I walk to her and ask her nicely may i plz have a date . she looks at me as she smiles (as i say to my self oplz let me hear!!) she say: ok i see u at 8 THEN OK ITS A DATE....that was the start of the best thing that happen.......so the messge is clear its not to have fear when the one u love is near in stead give a cheer to know that the one u love is here.........THE END xoxoxoxo :buttrock: Edited By dragon_cloud on Aug. 22 2004 at 05:37 |
[quote:post_uid2="girlNferno666"]^_^ very nice
heres one that goes out to those who have been forgotten and misused and abused much love to u all i know how it feel like *gives a huggle to them all* Have you ever wonder where those things left over go Those things left uncared for Like pieces of a puzzle that have no use Are those people who have been abused No one hears the silent cries that we hide The hurts we have inside The darkness that consumes our souls The things left untold Things we've long to unload Pain that scorches our souls And burns our flesh Like memories of being lashed Sins of the past Our only crime is being born next in line In an endless cycle made before our time[/quote:post_uid2] um i like all ur poems i know the other ones u did are better but um i personaly like this one the most. i give u props on all of them um ill try to do some also but i dont know if it will be poetry ill do something different something with no rhyme but with tendeness and all Edited By jz3232 on Aug. 23 2004 at 03:12 |
[quote:post_uid0="girlNferno666"]aww i like it ^_^ hehe good job meanie well done ^_^ *hands u her bra autograph? jk hands u a sheet paper like a normal person for once x.x thats scary me being normal well heres another one for u all
Here I lie where I |
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