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girlNferno666 08-18-2004 09:47 PM

well i wrote something for all the warriors in sfo ^_^ and i know it's not the best but i tried for u guys so i hope u guys like it to all the fighters out there this poems for u ^_^



I need to know the man behind the dark eyes
The secrets and lies
The warrior who fights an endless battle with his soul
The lover who keeps this on going war
I need to know the shadows that lurk in his heart
Which he wants to keep in the dark
The man I know so well
And the shadow that lurks beneath
The man who can love so much
His hand a tender caress
And the fighter who's hand a deadly touch
2 souls trapped in one body like day and night
Your soul longs to find that balance between the warrior and the lover the
Caretaker and the destroyer
Needing seeking looking for that answer that

EvilAkuma 08-19-2004 06:57 AM

i love it. ur poem is great and if i need help with poem i'll contact u

gouki2008 08-19-2004 07:14 AM

very good congratulations I like enough the footpath of the warrior jejeje

Gambit036 08-19-2004 07:15 AM

wow! i'm not very good when it comes 2 writing poems, but urs was gr8!

girlNferno666 08-19-2004 01:58 PM

y thankies *blushes and looks down all shy* i never thought anyone would like it or it'd be consider great by anyone. it means a lot to me that u guys like it for it was written for all u fighters in sfo ^_^ much love to the dark warriors out there. take care ofurselves and good luck with all that u do.

Sportschick155 08-19-2004 02:17 PM

yeah that was good..i wrote this one last nite..while i was listening to my boyz ll men cd..hmm
im not to good myself but hey wat the fack!

there are times
i wish i wasnt here
here im always in fear
my dying heart is in so much pain
right now it just feels like the end
with you by my side you make it so much easier
like my life is worth more then it seems
its a journey between me and you
itll never end, i hope this is true
it feels so right when im chillen with you
im getting scared it feels too good to be true
here i lie in my bed
wondering why? how?
never had a friend like yu before
your the best and i love ya for that
its like i can give a smack and yu can still joke about that
things are too perfect
but still i ask myself how? someone like you?" are you fo real?
yeah her name is mirella
shes the best of the best
my best friend for life
nothing can come between us
cause its best friends for life



Edited By Sportschick155 on Aug. 19 2004 at 17:23

alamgir 08-19-2004 02:20 PM

Nice poems nferno and sports. Damn u guys are good.

Sportschick155 08-19-2004 03:08 PM

kool thx

akuma_forever 08-19-2004 05:23 PM

Great poems. Bravo. :thumbsup:

girlNferno666 08-19-2004 05:50 PM

^_^ nice poem sports. ur a better poet then i can ever wish to become *smiles* ^_^ well heres another one for u all


Like lovers entwined on a Grecian vase
Like a poster of a beautiful face
In captured in ever lasting time
I hold u close and call u mine
Like soft rain that falls with grace
Like lilies that adorn the surface of a lake
My fingers gently trace those soft lips I wish to kiss
Those gentle eyelids upon your face
Like summers last warmth that slips to fall
Like my heart that

party_gurl 08-19-2004 06:56 PM

[quote:post_uid0="girlNferno666"]^_^ nice poem sports. ur a better poet then i can ever wish to become *smiles* ^_^ well heres another one for u all


Like lovers entwined on a Grecian vase
Like a poster of a beautiful face
In captured in ever lasting time
I hold u close and call u mine
Like soft rain that falls with grace
Like lilies that adorn the surface of a lake
My fingers gently trace those soft lips I wish to kiss
Those gentle eyelids upon your face
Like summers last warmth that slips to fall
Like my heart that

Sportschick155 08-19-2004 07:03 PM

i never thought id feel this way for you
i dumped you like just another fool
you loved me
you cared for me
you protected me
you did everything no one else has done for me
i was blinded by the light
and put you outta my sight
dropped you like it was hot
i didnt know any better
im now mature and better
you made me feel special
like no other
it was you who really cared
it took months for me to notice that
made my stupid mistakes
ive always ended up being true too you and you know that
and now you dont want me back
it hurts like someone stabbed me in the back
i feel like a fool for being so selfish
its time to move on
but badly i dont want too
u will always be loved by me
and i hope u feel the same way too
its just time to set u free
like one of them mother flipin bees

hahahahahaha sorry didnt kno how to end it

party_gurl 08-19-2004 08:16 PM

[quote:post_uid0="Sportschick155"]i never thought id feel this way for you
i dumped you like just another fool
you loved me
you cared for me
you protected me
you did everything no one else has done for me
i was blinded by the light
and put you outta my sight
dropped you like it was hot
i didnt know any better
im now mature and better
you made me feel special
like no other
it was you who really cared
it took months for me to notice that
made my stupid mistakes
ive always ended up being true too you and you know that
and now you dont want me back
it hurts like someone stabbed me in the back
i feel like a fool for being so selfish
its time to move on
but badly i dont want too
u will always be loved by me
and i hope u feel the same way too
its just time to set u free
like one of them mother flipin bees

hahahahahaha sorry didnt kno how to end it[/quote]
lolz like da ending...

azncat 08-19-2004 08:19 PM

o 0 lol theyre bette than mine so i give them a 10/10

girlNferno666 08-19-2004 08:35 PM

^_^ very nice

heres one that goes out to those who have been forgotten and misused and abused much love to u all i know how it feel like *gives a huggle to them all*



Have you ever wonder where those things left over go
Those things left uncared for
Like pieces of a puzzle that have no use
Are those people who have been abused
No one hears the silent cries that we hide
The hurts we have inside
The darkness that consumes our souls
The things left untold
Things we've long to unload
Pain that scorches our souls
And burns our flesh
Like memories of being lashed
Sins of the past
Our only crime is being born next in line
In an endless cycle made before our time

coolkilla 08-19-2004 08:50 PM

Nice poems girlnferno and you too sports =)

dragon_cloud 08-19-2004 10:36 PM

i love both ofur poems girlnferno and sportchicks there breath taking....i wrote this it well just tell me what u think cause i dont no what to say

.its call only time can heal...im sorry ..........only time can heal all things that are said hole in your heart...the hole in my head only in time that time can stop the pain ...only in time that i can stop the pain...the pain i gave in haste is now...what i gave in shame deep in my heart i know u feel the the same when i say that its a shame that things could not stay the same but i never give up hope that i take to my gave when i say that im sorry well u ever for give me for the shame i know i'm theone to place blame when we all say its just a dam shame......

Razz 08-19-2004 10:48 PM

This isn't really a poem, but it's close enough.
Don't mind the guitar chords.

REFLECTION
Capo 7

Verse 1:
E
As I saw you
Walking up to say goodbye
A
It didn't hit me
How much it would hurt inside
E
As later on it
Sunk into my mind
B
That I wouldn't see you smile
For a very long time

E
I just hugged you
And sent you on your way
A
I didn't think that
There was any more to say
E
Now that I reflect
I regret it
B
I should have held you longer
And I wish that you could stay

Chorus:
A
Everytime I turn around
B
I see you standing there

In my mind, holding on
B7
Keeping me back in time

Verse 2:
E
I'm at home on my own
And I'm missing you
A
Don't even have a decent picture
To remember you by
E
I took a survey and
The colour of my life is blue
B
but it would be gray
If it wasn't for meeting you

-Chorus-

Bridge:
E?
I'll go out of my way
A?
To tell you
E?
Just what you mean to me
A?
I miss you
B
I may be shy
A
It may feel akward at times
B
but I want you to know
A Em
I've got you on my mind

-Verse 1-

-Chorus-

girlNferno666 08-20-2004 02:47 AM

to my Nferno666


with no more then a smile u light up my world like sun shine peircing the darkest night
with one soft whisper of i love u jade from ur lips gives me wings and i take flight
my heart soars and knows no fears
i know no wants no needs no worldly things as long as u love me
for all i need is thee
u free my soul and make my mind believe in me
u show me the world through ur eyes and i can see past all the lies
and when i'm with u i no longer hurt inside
i close my eyes and know there will no longer be any more tears
for all i hear is i love u my dear and u have no reason to fear

girlNferno666 08-20-2004 09:31 AM

Time moves with no speed
Each day passes like the last
Nights fall with no notice
Days comes with no markings
Seasons come and go
From spring buds to autumn leaves before snow
Years move like sands through the hourglass like minuets as they slide past
The only thing that change is the wrinkling of the flesh
but nothing has aged since last
My eyes soften with care whenever you are near
My heart still holds you close and dear
Time had no meaning since you were last here

Sportschick155 08-20-2004 12:03 PM

dude...uhm..r u with nferno?

girlNferno666 08-20-2004 04:00 PM

two strangers we were
in danger
of losing what we held dear
so very scared
your smile so sweet
your touch so tender
and so my heart
i surrender
my vowels of love i gave
your hand i took
i know you love me
with just one look
those lips so soft
your fingers gentle caress
and so to you i gave all my trust
your loving kisses
those gentle hands
whos soft touch
tells me you understand
those warm arms
that hold me safe from harm
the melody of your heart
when i lay my head upon your chest
tells me
i've found true love
at last. . .

Saijin_Ryu 08-20-2004 04:03 PM

[quote:post_uid14="Sportschick155"]dude...uhm..r u with nferno?[/quote:post_uid14]
[color=blue:post_uid14]Yea i am.[/color:post_uid14]

Razz 08-20-2004 04:54 PM

Yeah, Saijin and Nferno have had the hots for eachother for a while now.

Sportschick155 08-21-2004 03:07 AM

=\

Nferno666 08-21-2004 05:59 AM

[quote:post_uid0="Razz"]Yeah, Saijin and Nferno have had the hots for eachother for a while now.[/quote]
don't make me kill you.... :biggrin:

alamgir 08-21-2004 06:06 AM

Hold on a sec are girlnferno and nferno together? Lol what a good couple that would be.

Gambit036 08-21-2004 07:31 AM

i dont know, but girlnferno is a very good poet, and so is sportchick! u guys must spend ages finkin of things 2 rite bout!

girlNferno666 08-21-2004 02:18 PM

hehe y thank you and no not really i do it when i have a lot of things inside i don't know how to say or express so i write it down on paper or else draw it out in my sketch pad well heres another one for u all much love to those i've come to know and call friend and for those ofui haven't had the honor of meeting yet ^_^ feel free to say hi when u see me in the servers *smiles*


your not perfect
u don't always tell me what i wanna hear
but one thing i know thats for sure
is you'll always be there to wipe away the tears
someone who won't mind taking the time
to make sure i'm fine
always doing something silly and wild
to get me to smile
i'm glad what you've given me just didn't last for a while
this thing you've given me
i'll cheerish to the end
*kisses u softly on the cheek and whispers*
thank u my friend

alamgir 08-21-2004 02:42 PM

Lost in a lonely and distant land
Staring at the blood stains on his hand
Hordes of evil approaching with haste
He tightens the armour around his waste
All good has perished and all hope is lost
His tears drifting in the cold frost
The monsters appear fiery all through
The humongous army crying death awaits you
He has no where to run and must hold them off
His hopes of survival are severely rough
He ready's his sword for a final fight
The creatures surround him through marching and flight
He calls upon the light one last time
And charges forward with a chill upon his spine
His glistening blade darting in several directions
Slashing at monsters of many selections
He dodges around, faster than any
but the odds are against him although he's killed many
The evil winged beasts swoop down low
And the edge of a sword pierce him to his sorrow
Staring at the cackeling horrors all in chrome
Flashbacks rush through his mind of his former home
His blood spills as he staggers by a tree
This heroe's soul has finally been set free



Edited By alamgir on Aug. 21 2004 at 22:45

girlNferno666 08-21-2004 04:51 PM

aww i like it ^_^ hehe good job meanie well done ^_^ *hands u her bra autograph? jk hands u a sheet paper like a normal person for once x.x thats scary me being normal well heres another one for u all

Here I lie where I

dragon_cloud 08-22-2004 12:04 AM

there all lovely poems ur really good and jade is really really really good :buttrock: ^_^

shy_gurL21 08-22-2004 12:10 AM

i agree...they're awesome

dragon_cloud 08-22-2004 01:09 AM

go ahead shy shake ur boom boom give us a A give us a W give us a E give us a S give us a O give us a M give is a E what that spell awesome !!!! what that spell AWESOME now give me some G,s cause im b.r.o.k.e after that letters aint cheap ..... :p

shy_gurL21 08-22-2004 01:12 AM

dubya tee eff? ??? u on crack? u must be...

dragon_cloud 08-22-2004 01:18 AM

.......MAY B.....WANT SOME (not really im just freaking nuts with my post that all)

girlNferno666 08-22-2004 01:40 AM

aww u guys i'm glad u guys like it so much ^_^ well heres another one for all those long term couples i hope u all like it


Long kisses in the night
Strong arms holding me tight
Movies and dinner by candle light
Our love burning bright
Gentle love melodies floating in the air
You holding me near
Soft whispers of I love you against my ear
Things I recall from over the years
Little special things we've shared
From dances under the moon light
And stolen kisses in the night
Little love fights
And making up after we turn off the lights
Before saying our good nights and holding each other tight
Waking up in your soft gaze that says I care
Doing laundry and washing your underwear
All blessings we've had through out the years
Things I

dragon_cloud 08-22-2004 01:48 AM

AWWW SNIFF SNIFF SNIFF....THAT WAS SO BEAUTYFULL ...JUST...LIKE...U HERE A POEM I HOPE U LOVE ITS ABOUT A SHY GUY WHO LIKE THIS GURL ITS CALL....

DREAM GIRL:
I no as I stair knowing that u dont care to know that im their..wishing and dreaming that u was there by my side. the way you look at me make me feel all warm inside. i love the way your hair flow thought the air with out a care as i wish that i was there leting my hand flow down the side. i dream from afar asking god why WHY dont i have the courage deep inside to say hi but i do have enough to say good bye.... as i watch from afar. i feel so alnoe as i watch your sweet tender lips sing my heart flys with many wings. I walk to her and ask her nicely may i plz have a date . she looks at me as she smiles (as i say to my self oplz let me hear!!) she say: ok i see u at 8 THEN OK ITS A DATE....that was the start of the best thing that happen.......so the messge is clear its not to have fear when the one u love is near in stead give a cheer to know that the one u love is here.........THE END xoxoxoxo
:buttrock:



Edited By dragon_cloud on Aug. 22 2004 at 05:37

jz3232 08-22-2004 03:03 AM

[quote:post_uid2="girlNferno666"]^_^ very nice

heres one that goes out to those who have been forgotten and misused and abused much love to u all i know how it feel like *gives a huggle to them all*



Have you ever wonder where those things left over go
Those things left uncared for
Like pieces of a puzzle that have no use
Are those people who have been abused
No one hears the silent cries that we hide
The hurts we have inside
The darkness that consumes our souls
The things left untold
Things we've long to unload
Pain that scorches our souls
And burns our flesh
Like memories of being lashed
Sins of the past
Our only crime is being born next in line
In an endless cycle made before our time[/quote:post_uid2]
um i like all ur poems i know the other ones u did are better but um i personaly like this one the most. i give u props on all of them um ill try to do some also but i dont know if it will be poetry ill do something different something with no rhyme but with tendeness and all



Edited By jz3232 on Aug. 23 2004 at 03:12

alamgir 08-22-2004 03:55 AM

[quote:post_uid0="girlNferno666"]aww i like it ^_^ hehe good job meanie well done ^_^ *hands u her bra autograph? jk hands u a sheet paper like a normal person for once x.x thats scary me being normal well heres another one for u all

Here I lie where I


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