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azncat 10-15-2004 08:41 PM

Roses, exquisitely
fragrant
Overpowering me in
the garden of love
Their secret delight,
delightful
Spinning in aromatic
pleasure
Breathing in deeply
of their complexity
Their scent of pleasure,
dreams of paradise
Dazzling, glistening
exotic petals in
sunbeam days
The pleasure everlasting
in my mind of
those roses
Fragrant roses to
soothe my soul
Fragrance to delight
my senses
Fragrant roses of love


.... o o..... For a certain friend close to me... very close




Edited By azncat on 1097898302

shy_gurL21 10-15-2004 09:04 PM

[quote:post_uid0="party_gurl"][quote:post_uid0="shy gurL21"]i'm here sitting quietly
waiting for him to notice me
i'm falling in love with this guy
i want to approach him but i'm too shy
so i just ask myself with anticipation
what do i have to do to win his attention?
does he realize my presence?
is he bothered by my absence?
if i disappear will he even care?
does he miss me when i'm not there?
i find my happiness when he's around
every pain that i feel he relieves
i know in his eyes i'm just a face in the crowd
but i'm sure when everyone else leaves
i will be the only one to stay
and never let him go astray.[/quote]
omgoSH!! my sweety is sOooO talented..=T!!

girlnferno yours is awesome !! cant make any good poems compare to yooh guys.. :love:
[/quote]
lol. let me see a sample of your poem. it doesn't matter if it's good or not. :cheesy:

nice poem azncat.

girlNferno666 10-15-2004 10:02 PM

^_^ aww cats got a sweet side and he's not just 100% crazy :P like i thought he was *huggles the cat* kisses ya on the cheek* hey nice poem silly u should share more offten u have quite a talent ^_^

dominicankid098 10-15-2004 10:10 PM

Quote:

azncat Posted: Oct. 15 2004,11:41

Roses, exquisitely
fragrant
Overpowering me in
the garden of love
Their secret delight,
delightful
Spinning in aromatic
pleasure
Breathing in deeply
of their complexity
Their scent of pleasure,
dreams of paradise
Dazzling, glistening
exotic petals in
sunbeam days
The pleasure everlasting
in my mind of
those roses
Fragrant roses to
soothe my soul
Fragrance to delight
my senses
Fragrant roses of love
Not to embarrass anyone in this place but I read that poem azncat posted before.

Oh lookie, I got a link of it. =)

http://www.seekermagazine.com/v0798/sun.html

Now unless your name is Michael David Coffey, then I don't think you wrote that.




Edited By dominicankid098 on 1097905356

evilhadoken 10-16-2004 02:16 PM

heres one that i saw somewhere :

Roses are red
violets are blue
they'll need dental records
to identify you.

Necro2k2 10-16-2004 03:20 PM

Plagerizing is an illegal form of writing young azn cat. Would you know that I could call the police and if the writer wanted to put any charges against you, you could get sued for a TON of money. It's just something I'd like you to know. Young girls like you shouldn't be getting into any type of controversy like that, now should you?



Edited By Necro2k2 on 1097965332

girlNferno666 10-16-2004 09:50 PM

i haven't slit my wrist but y is there pain
theres isn't any blood but yet i see the red stains
no ones dead but i hear morners
as i sit here in this dark coner
my world torn and shatter
and nothing any more in life matters
time is of no essesence
i've learned all of lifes lessons
there is nothing more for me here but tears
the hurt my soul bears
i am broken inside
so i wonder y am i still alive
y won't u let me die
i've forgotten the warmth of the sun
or how it's like to laugh and have fun
my soul is numb
and to me life is done
so let me go
hold me not here supsended in pain
let all those memories of me slide down the drain
there is nothing left for u and me
so let it be
you've broken me

mastergrim8 10-18-2004 12:22 PM

Nice poem and the panda is cute

mastergrim8 10-18-2004 12:30 PM

I got a poem so dont read it, it's crazy

Love,
A better sweet feeling
its the best of life
nothing brings more joy
through near the end
it shall be in there
to whom it gives
yall dont know
wat is meant
is meant to be
it aint bought
every soul has a true 1
be patient
patient
till the day comes
u wont know wat true love is
when that day comes
u will truly be free
I will do all for love
I am not worth living
with the love ofu.

Written by the one and only. Dedicated to my love




Edited By mastergrim8 on 1098128763

girlNferno666 10-18-2004 02:31 PM

may i ask who's love that is ur talking about ^_^ it's a rather intresting poem you've written there grim ^_^ thankies for sharing it

mastergrim8 10-18-2004 02:46 PM

u really think it's interesting. that's touchy. My true love. Oh it's somebody. I perfer to keep it a secret

shy_gurL21 10-19-2004 08:38 PM

=)

your love is so rare
it's so special that nothing else can compare
every day with you is golden
when i cry you're there to listen
you're always there to stand by me
i know you'll always be eternally
i don't want to know what it is like without you
i can live forever without a single clue
all the things that you have done
assure me you are the one
it doesn't matter what others think
in my heart you'll always be my everything
as i reminisce on our past
looking back on the times that had passed
there is not one thing that i regret
i remember the first day we met
i thought you were just like those other guys
but i found out that you were an angel in disguise
sent from the heaven's above
who showed me that unconditional love...




Edited By shy_gurL21 on 1098331650

mastergrim8 10-23-2004 02:33 PM

nice poem

pip99 10-28-2004 07:40 AM

Rice is nice ,

but

paster is faster.

mastergrim8 10-29-2004 07:02 PM

post a poem PIP!

shy_gurL21 11-01-2004 11:44 PM

you treated me like dirt
to you i was just a tart
i ignored all your childish things
i even gave up everything
you took control of my life
kept me out of the light
you never paid attention to me
i was blind i couldn't see
you were two-timing me all along
i thought i was wrong
until i caught you in a lie
now you're asking me why do i cry?
you could've just shot me in the head
flip all the things that you said
there are some things i won't get through
i wish i never met you
i was dumb to let things misshappen
why didn't i sense that you were lyin
i hope you realize what you got yourself into
i'm lost now all i can say is flip you

vx_unicom 11-02-2004 04:11 AM

[quote:post_uid0="Saijin_Ryu"][quote:post_uid0="Sportschick155"]dude...uhm..r u with nferno?[/quote]
Yea i am.[/quote]
Lol rob...,anyways i love reading peoms and read all of them..."Woah", most impressive...,however.."few indivuals"..didn't quiet come up with the poem by themselves....but very well done..!!




Edited By vx_unicom on 1099397665

shy_gurL21 11-08-2004 05:44 PM

meh... i just wrote another poem.. it's like the only way i can express how i really since i don't really have anybody to trust with these kinds of things...

she's separated from the rest
she has given everything
she has tried her best
yet nobody takes her side
she conceals pain inside
nobody hears her voice
being different is not her choice
if they could feel her pain
maybe all their love
she will gain
nobody listens when she cries
she pretends it's okay
but it's just a lie
every person she meets is a two face
isolates her because this isn't her place
she doesn't know where to belong
she has nothing to call her own
yet she still tries to stay strong

KenDaShoto 11-13-2004 02:19 PM

these demons in my brain
tryin to escape
tryin to distort the kindness always upon my face
so hard it is to contain
somethin u must let go
somethin the doctor tells u u just gotta let blow
but what the doctor doesnt kno
is that what im holdin is evil
cause if youlet it go then what will happen is lethal
it might end up in murder,battery, assult or rape
so the doctor is wrong when he says let it escape
so im still tryin to hold it
and i will as long as i should
so please dont test my patience when u see me in ya hood
cause when the evil is out i might just pull a trigger
or beat u down till i distort ya bodily figure
now im the nicest homie that most of my people kno
and have any ever seen me let this demon go
no!
and if havent caught on
or on ya own u couldnt figure
that the demon that im talkin bout
is my uncontrollable temper

(and dont worry im not crazy i wrote this when i got mad a long time ago and yea i controlled my temper i actually only let it loose once)
i didnt know this site had the sensor replace thingy either




Edited By KenDaShoto on 1100384643

girlNferno666 11-14-2004 09:45 PM

red roses and chilled white wine
writing u love poems that ryhme
taking u out to fancey places to dine
things i did for u when u were mine
always giving u all my time
never making u take a number or wait in line
i loved you and it was divine
you, my goddess o so fine
i can recall that loving angelic face
those dark velet locks that fell with grace
to gently frame that beautiful face
i gave u all i had
so when u stopped loving me it hurt so bad
i don't know how someone so sweet and kind
could kill this love that was so pure and divine
to break my heart and shatter my world beyound words to describe
to cause this pericing pain i feel inside
even though you've hurt more then words can say
i still think ofuand love u each and every single day
and so as i sit here wirtting this confession of my soul
bearing all for others to see for i have nothing left to lose
for my soul can take no more abuse
then what it's recieved from you
with all this said my confession is done
i feel that part inside of me thats hurting numb
this world slips away cold and gray
maybe i shall find peace in my dying day. . . .

mastergrim8 11-15-2004 03:01 PM

great poem. Too bad I'm too dumb to read it just kidding :blues: but I have my goals

dragon_cloud 11-16-2004 10:34 PM

shy that was a nice poem ken...u got problems....haha im joking its good and girlnfero i love ur poem it was great but the ending was sad........i hope u find peace....cause someone like u and shy should never fell.....pain................(puts up hood turns around pull me cape and walks away in the misty moon lightwith a tear down my cheek.)

shy_gurL21 11-16-2004 10:39 PM

hah! thanx dawg...

-----------------------------------

love once broke me down
now it's turned my life around
i'm the same old me but brand new
the only reason why i'm here is you
i've loved and lost many
and i know this is my destiny
sometimes i know you get hurt
and it's not what you deserve
to me the world is what you worth
i wish i can always be there
to take away the pain that you bear
it's only you that i wanna live for
i've opened up the magic door
and i found you my angel on the other side
you always know when i'm hurting inside
you're here to save me from my loneliness
because of you i know i'm truly blessed.




Edited By shy_gurL21 on 1100842645

KenDaShoto 11-20-2004 08:45 PM

shy are these poems to a boyfriend or somethin cause if i was gettin stuff like this a girl would have me on a leash

shy_gurL21 11-20-2004 10:56 PM

yessir, they are. well sort of...
btw... is that bad or wat? ???




Edited By shy_gurL21 on 1101020297

KenDaShoto 11-21-2004 06:06 PM

no its not bad at all
i was just wonderin but i wish some of my girlfriends would write stuff like that for me :(
or maybe they did and i didnt kno
does ur bf kno u write that stuff

Riseabove 11-24-2004 09:19 PM

think ill call you autumn's whisper
tell me something of a winter's love
i love the way you show your soul
i love the way we crash like leaves
blown together by october's breeze
you dont know what you mean to me
we play our games yet i see
there is so much love for you
still left in me.

dear autumn.

i am so thankful to have you in this life
here with me or someplace else
i love god for creating you
who else could tame me
so glad god gave me
you in this life
your smile is
the sunrise
you are
my sky.



I wrote this for my high school sweetie. I have known her since jr high. I miss her so much it hurts. She's visiting me in NY in exactly 31 days. :xmas:




Edited By Riseabove on 1101360383

Nantuko Joe 11-25-2004 07:24 PM

Viciously attacking the living
Asking unanswerable questions
Masking their true feeling
Preying on the weak and fool-hearted
Indiscriminately killing all who cross their paths
Returning the bodies lifelessly
Envying our mortal souls
Suffering throughout eternity alone

__________

Tearful eyes hide in the brain
Mourning the loss of a brilliant light
A light to bring joy to the darkest regions of sorrow
To rend chaos into order
To forge order into chaos
but the fire is waning
The forge has grown cold
And the tears flow deep in darkness

blueseyes 11-26-2004 01:45 PM

rose are red violets are blue umm..... lets get some fried chicken :p

Riseabove 11-27-2004 10:13 PM

Ill just make one up on the spot.

I call it, Hey Rise.



I paid Tmy so my gi's can be black.
It says it next to my name
Every time i enter the chat.
They see the name Rise
Everyone quickly steps back.
Knowing that i will own, every time.
My name is heavy on their minds.

That is why i only fight ####s.
####s dont know who i am.
I chew em like gum, because i can.
They tend to get stuck beneath my shoes.
I consume ####s like daddy with booze.
I step on your pride, i laugh, you cry.
Your tears make me feel happy inside.

This is what happens when you say "Hey Rise"

Merry Christmas to all my children :xmas:




Edited By Riseabove on 1101623462

`Crystal 12-02-2004 05:52 PM

hold u can post any type of poems right? not juss sad love and stuff like dat?

Riseabove 12-02-2004 06:45 PM

anything you want bro....yeah i know, alot of love stuff. that seems to be the motivation for most writers these days.

say whatever you want tho. thats why i am jsut writing things up on the spot.

Jewel03 12-05-2004 08:32 AM

i like those poem.becuz i cant really write poems that good

SBYRD5 12-06-2004 07:11 PM

Grass was cyan,
Desire was in the air,
The winter wind swirled in the curls of her hair.
The trees embraced the land..like straightened hair,
And the grass hazed as a goatee...for everyone to see.

I waltz into the world...alone my soul wasn't alive.
Till I began to walk...I ventured from homes.
Everyone told me thier stories..and invited me to remeber thier memories...

With thier soul came experience....with experience came wisdom.
I was only a teenager with the hair of a drunken master,
So much wisdom I have gathered for only being 1 month from Adultry...

This is my story....supplied by me..byrd....not a poultry....




Edited By SBYRD5 on 1102389190

Sportschick155 12-14-2004 04:42 PM

hmm,,

SBYRD5 12-15-2004 12:39 PM

She said she could treat me better,but she abandoned me,
Sticked my heart then decided to hand it to me,
Evey woman in my life abandons me,
Drives lunatics like me near insanity,
I'm not a toy soldier...when I break I break,
I'm not from harlem...when I'm cold I shiver..I don't shake,

I smoke in my longevity,
Jimi Hendrix "Purple Haze" is my gravity,
That keeps me to earth grounds....from riding an escalada to heaven bounds,
This isn't a rap this is my own sound...my heart is distroyed...when well that guy in a robe..descend from heaven to end it all...maybe now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


:down:




Edited By SBYRD5 on 1103143274

75-1103076306 12-15-2004 12:58 PM

[quote:post_uid0="Sportschick155"]hmm,,[/quote]
Well i like those poems they are realy good.Here is myn

Every thing is dark purpl and blue
The girl who i love is looking rgith at you
i think in my head how dare you
i looke at the guy who tooke my gurl mad and blue
I just want to rush your head and stab you
but if i do the gurl in purple in blue will miss you
then she will go boo hoo

Short but it was ok.

SBYRD5 12-15-2004 01:01 PM

I was angry today..better take it out in another post here...


MY eye's searching like an eagle,
My hands tensed ready to let the marrow escape,
My heart is burning red...my pulse is quick,
MY ears are being eaten alive by haters an exlovers that bring words that break my clique..I took so long to build my heart with bricks,

So bad love is the big bad wolf..blowing our hearts down,
Or is it just my humanity being questioned on this lifestream,

I MEAN "Who am I." "like phuck who am I"
A lad making ends meet on a burger King Salary...my escape being my words,
If I was mute I'd have nothing...like a painter that paint's landscapes being blind,

My depression creates insects whenever I close my eyes and try to think with my mind,

I got tooth decay from kissing a princess so sweet even a queen of spades couldn't resist her...

And now I'm something less to her....
Once I meant more to her than my mother's birthright to my last name,
All a young man like me can do is just tie on his du-rag tight...and keep wearing his chain....=/



:dozingoff:




Edited By SBYRD5 on 1103235354

75-1103076306 12-15-2004 07:06 PM

[quote:post_uid0="SBYRD5"]I was angry today..better take it out in another post here...


MY eye's searching like an eagle,
My hands tensed ready to let the marrow escape,
My heart is burning red...my pulse is quick,
MY ears are being eaten alive by haters an exlovers that bring words that break my clique..I took so long to build my heart with bricks,

So bad love is the big bad wolf..blowing our hearts down,
Or is it just my humanity being questioned on this lifestream,

I MEAN "Who am I." "like phuck who am I"
A lad making ends meet on a burger King Salary...my escape being my words,
If I was mute I'd have nothing...like a painter that paint's landscapes being blind,

My depression creates insects whenever I close my eye's and try to think with my mind,

I got tooth decay from kissing a princess so sweet even another queen of spades couldn't resist her...

And now I'm something less to her....
Meant more to her than my mother's birthright to to my last name,
All a young man like me can do is just tie on his du-rag tight...and keep wearing his chain....=/



:dozingoff:
[/quote]
That was a good poem and sbyrd you looke like carmello lol. thats my name 2 i looke just like him i realy do.well thats what all the girls say.

theWhale 12-16-2004 02:08 PM

id post my pic but i cant find student card..........damn..
ill post this instead:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6.../woviejugg.jpg


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