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[quote:post_uid0="darkmasterX"]its does ryme go to poetry.com cuz i to lazy to explain it[/quote]
Poems do not need to rhyme. Look at hikuis and a poems(or others) by langston huges called mother to son. It does not ryhme but it is a poem never the less. |
Love 50 like a fat kid loves..donuts
Anyway listen to Elena.. |
[color=blue]This is.. a little late but... it's not quite over a month. I found's this poem, and I think it's sort of cool..
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[quote:post_uid0="Razz"]Oooh, Sbyrd, pretty funky!
Oh, and thank you kindly, Blossom! I don't have any more poems, but I do have a few songs. Here's one. <span style='font-family:unicorn'><span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'>Crash and Burn</span></span> Verse 1 Everything I |
Did you write that Razz?
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sorry people i was wrong i forgot about free verse :D
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Well.. um.. any opinions on the poem thingy I wrote? Or is it to worthless to wrote about, lol
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Roses Are Red
Violets Are Blue What Is That Poo? It's Under Your Shoe :laugh: |
all of u have great poems...such poetic talent :) mine...well itz limited..lol..but herez one of my poemz that i made a long time ago...
The world spins around and around, Never stopping The scenery passes me by. The crazy merry-go-round, Itz never stopping. Memories spin with the scenery. Memories of happiness and lies, The memories of being told one too many lies... No one knoz wut goes on behind the curtain, They only see the show. Never understanding the pain, Never caring, Never looking backstage... Only seeing the show... Few lights dimly shine thru the darkness, Just to be covered by the shadows again. My soul and heart can be ripped only so many times. Why should i even try Just to be torn apart over and over again? Nothing is ever good enough, But i don't have to worry nemore Why you ask? Because i've given up. I shouldn't have tried before, No one realized how much i had to sacrifice No one understood My scarred self trusts so few now Never letting anyone in...never letting them understand... Never will i sit, Blaming me, myself, and i. All those "happy" memories Have gone down to the cellar, To be buried, never to be seen again... I can finally open my wings and fly Fly away from all the pain... I'm never going back to that hell that was once paradise. I'm never going to have my mind clouded with confusion, Then suspicions And turning into frustration With my feelings being bottled up And kept deep within me.. Never will i go thru the pain that i've suffered all those days Never will i break and fall For i only have my pride and spirit Never will it happen again... Never... |
[quote:post_uid0="WhiteTigerClaw"]Roses Are Red
Violets Are Blue What Is That Poo? It's Under Your Shoe :laugh:[/quote] pff... |
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