hehe lol i didnt write it ( I think ) but i did physicaly write it


my body was there but not my being

[quote:post_uid0="dragon_cloud"]..... :shocked: well.....that sure is some thing..... :shocked: is that a rap or a poem.......( he sound a little nuts) at least the guy in it dose not u....yet..... :shocked:[/quote]
yo i got that from scary movie the rest i made up

My second poem that my spiritual self made was

Normal friends, unnormal self
To be normal be unnormal what everyone else is, so they can see your like them, to take the personality of what is, to be someone else is being normal, to be unnormal be yourself and show them the real you, the you thats hidden behind your friends, To be unnormal shows your trueself the person only you know, consealed well that is only seen by your soul. Keep hidden for the time being, but when facing eternity, become nothing but normal.

when i write these it feels like these are messages sent form my spiritual being to my physical to become one

:buttrock: DEEP

very well done ^_^ nice imagery and feelings behind ur words in ur poems ^_^ heres another one for u all who don't mind reading my poems they're not that great so yeah



when time has past
and you have gone
and here at last i still stand waiting for that grain of sand to fall to mark that last moment with u
but in the end i'm a fool just dreaming away unreal dreams of you
when at last i'm left alone the ghost of yesterday haunts my home
your laughter rings like enchanted melodies in the night
your smiles like faded ambers
reminding me of a passion that once let me on fire
but like the ashes of yesterday and the sands of time u slip away
leaving me to face yet another day of not having u here with me
one last good bye one last touch one last sweet memory for my heart. . .


for those who have loved and lost

nice what inspired u to wright it was it something you were going through or a friend of yours ( or was it a poem that u just thought of

really cool

Nice poems everone. I dont make as many good ones nowadays.

i wrote it when i broke up with the last ex ^_^ so yeah hard times but we all see them every once in a while i guess it's good to have a cry every now and then u write good poems too silly so tell me what inspires u

ur poems ur so sweet but i wish i cant stop u from ever seeing hard times so u never have to see hard times again ,_ _, :buttrock:

My world.. forgotten and full of hate
Sad, destroyed and desolate
I run through, lifeless, thoughtless and emotionless
Without giving thoughts to things I should expect
With the slightest hint of respect,
I welcome the juggernaut of my ascent
Thy words shall continue to affect
My very thought and emotions.. but regardless
should I say I have the emotions of one with something to spare
Nay... yeah.. nay.. yeah.. nay DAMMIT
For thus, I shall remain a purist
Even with Scott, Ryu, Ken and Spidey,
I graze the SFO world with a lost and complicated mind
Waiting for thou to come and bind
with great words, a loving heart and one that would combine
My inner essence and my soul entwined
No one shall ever replace that sound of mine
till today, I shall honestly and truely say
Dear lady, please come my way..


That was the Dr. Jekkyl of Blanka09 .. and I'll try my possible best to keep him in check :biggrin: