*going to nock out everybody so i could blow thos creatures up my self goes behind roll nocks her out than i more than i blow them up with won vicios atack kamehameha blood flys ol over*

[quote:post_uid0="mysticveggeto"]*i go behind luda nock him out with a chop than i blew up all thos creature thinges than i look for more*[/quote]
*Luda's wakes up with a headache*.......

Luda:ouch that lil'guy hits hard anyways he's lucky he's not around, anyway I gotta and north and kill those moogles......

As Luda walks through the dense vegetation, he hears a loud scream

unknow person:AAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

Luda: oh no!!!!!! I gotta go save whoever the person is.......

and in a flash, Luda ran toward the scream without knowing what is awaiting him.........

[quote:post_uid0="mysticveggeto"]*going to nock out everybody so i could blow thos creatures up my self goes behind roll nocks her out than i more than i blow them up with won vicios atack kamehameha blood flys ol over*[/quote]
:eh: Okay, guy, don't post in this thread if you're gonna post like that. :eh:

Oh my gosh, you didn't read my post did you? You need to learn to read, and understand. I specifically told you that that was not an acceptable part of the story. I also told you to fit in with the story. That does not fit in. It does not explain anything at all. Heck, it isn't even a story. It's just a sentence! And you double posted too! I also told you not to do that! It's a rule on the forum! Vegetto, you're beginning to step out of line.

i already destrode does ceatur thinges you were about to destroy

Vegetto, you do NOT know the first thing aboot RPing/RPBing!!!
This is the most important rule you need to know:
Do NOT make your character "all powerful"!!! Do NOT try to solve everything with one post!!! I can't emphasize on this rule enough! Everywhere I go there are always the #### RPers who make their characters the msot powerful beings ever. AND THAT IS JUST GAY!!! It makes it boring/not fun for everyone else! And most of all, IT'S FRIGGIN ANNOYING!!!

Another important rule: Make your post worth reading!!! and WRITE THEM SO THEY MAKE SENSE!!!

your getting on my nervs roll im starting not to like so just leave me alone ok!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :angryfire: :angryfire: :angryfire:

no, vegetto, YOU are geting on everyone else's nerves! Roll is absoloutely right!!

Razz... you don't have to defend me...

I'm not really defending you... just, Vegetto is REALLY annoying me! I hope you understand :alien: :eh:

*secrect organization headquarters*

scientist:sir... did you see the power readings on those warriors?

man:yes..Im impressed I thought only our technology could produce fighters of that caliber.
scientist:ummm.. sir these warriors were not created.
man:what!
scientist:well it seems that karma is a warrior from an alien race called saiyens, TJ was not created by any of our scientists neither was sbyrd or dark piccolo. and that roll girl seems to be some sort of sorceress,but we lost track of her a while ago.
man:well...then this a most unpleasant suprise...I was sure we could take control of them and use them for our own purposes
*a soldier enters the room*
soldier:excuse sir, but here are the status reports on the test subject.
man:thank you, that will be all.
scientist:test subject?..
man: yes. i requested that we try a few "expirements" on the civillian.
scientist:but sir! the last subject was uncontrollable and almost killed our crew!
man:no need to worry i took care of that remeber..anyways this time we are going to insert memory implants. he will only remeber what we want him too.
scientist:but why?
man:we need a guinie pig to test out our strength enhacements. so that I..err i mean our "soldiers" will be safe.
scientist:but sir, you aura is much stronger than those warriors.
man:yes, you are right but there seems to quite a number of those remarkable fighters..if they multiply too much then they could be quite a problem. that is why we must despose of them now. do you understand...
scientist:yes sir.
man:good...I want you to double our subjects training and expirements. I want him to be a perfect killing machine...
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who is this mysterious organization and why are bent on destroying our heros? also who is this powerfull new evil?
what horrors will our heros face when they unleash their "perfect killer"

I understand, Razz. Thanks anyway.

Geez Silent_Bob, that wasn't very good. :sarcasm:

HEY ROLL OR SBYRD

I havnt posted here in a while and i wanna catch back up in the story....so could you tell me whats going on?

*you guys we need to team up*

*Luda arrives in front of a wooden cabin*

Luda: the scream are comin from there, I gotta break down the door

*Luda steps back and charge head first at the door*

Luda:AIYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!

*Luda crashes into the door but no good, the door is still standing and Luda as a even bigger headache*

Luda:ouch!!!!!!! I guess that wasn't the brightest move......maybe if I knock someone's going to open the door

*Luda knocks on the door*

Resident:who is it?

*the resident was a girl*

Luda:I heard someone scream........are U ok miss?

*the door opens, Luda can't believe his eyes!!!!!!!!!*

[quote:post_uid0="Roll"]I understand, Razz. Thanks anyway.

Geez Silent_Bob, that wasn't very good. :sarcasm:[/quote]
yeah i guess it could have been better but i was feeling left out when yall were doing your stories so i thought i might add a lil twist..

Roll i'll ake care of this..(Thats why I fused to take care of people that just want to mess up the plot of the story...

*DHCliculo teleports infront of MysticVeggeto*

Mystic Veggeto=Who the Hell are you.

DHCliculo=We're your worst nightmare.

*DHCiculo engages with a fight with Mystic Veggeto.About 2 mins. later Mystic Veggeto loses his head*

If you want to see what Mystic Veggeto looks like without a head please go to this link=

Here is the link=

http://www.newgrounds.com/portals....Sweeney

Please look at this flash when you get there=

Revenge and me
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Silent_Bob if you want to join the story just read the past two pages and become TJ5's partner.(Yeah you TJ)

*aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
hhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa groes back his head ha i wont lose next time ill win flys*

Your persistance to keep your posts short in this thread are wild, yet wierd. It's a story thread. You know, Long lines, paragraphs, detailed information, etc. Try again Vegetto.

Piccolo, Right now, I am trapped all alone on a heart shaped tower thing, I can't get off of it, and Brooklyn and Nanaki are knocked out. The source of the evil is standing near me, but that's SSJKarma's part of the story to tell. You're who knows where, and so is SByrd. Dun worry, so far, your part in the story is unrevealed, and it's your job to show what you did. But please try not to undo the parts in the story that were already done (like the fact that my party was attacked by a big monster that wouldn't die), ok?
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*a small little animal comes by and looks at Mystic Vegetto. Vegetto looks at the animals and kills it with a beam. Unknown to him though, the monster cast a spell on itself to take the life and soul of the being who kills it. Vegetto is lost forever.*
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Sorry vegetto, but you're ruining the storyline.

could i be on the good side please :( :(

*Stares at Veggeto flying away and holds up two fingers*

DHCliculo=Fool!!!!!!!

*MysticVeggeto is no more*

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Silent_Bob=If you really feel left out you can go to the thread "top secert" and become my partner since you like military talk,or you could become TJ5's partner.

Oh if MysticVeggeto posts after me he's gay......

*wait lets talk about this i wanna be on the good side arent thos creatures evil

Like I said and he is going to post after me again....

Insuring us he likes the same sex..Please someone continue the story...n e w b i e s and people that want to mess up the plot are coming.

*wait dont blow me up im on the goood side some won told me there was an evil forece and most of the warriros are runnig all over the city trying to find the evil forece so could you help me the evil forece and roll is traped in the tower thingyim going to look for this evil forece bye teleports to find evil*

I'll try, Sbyrd... but I can't do much until SSJkarma reveals more.
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*Brooklyn and Nanaki were still laying unconcious, as Roll was being carried up. A lot of people passed them by, and they were thought to be defeated/dead. Although, for some strange reason, they were moving around a lot, and they were muttering words and saying some strange prayer.*
Brooklyn: Roll... in trouble.... get out of there...
Nanaki: Roll....trapped... hurt... pain... argh....
Brooklyn: I'm..coming.... *tears* don't...die...
Nanaki: I'm....coming too... *tears* please... don't... die...
*There tears let out some strange energy which began to float towards Roll slowly... very slowly... it had a message in it... and it wasn't going to stop moving no matter how hard anything tried to stop it... it was invisible to any normal eye... but it was seen by many animals, nearby and far away. Humans were looking around in the park, seeing unusual activity with the animals, and they also noticed that the plants were becoming rigid. They began to think it was the result of the strange phenominon that was happening to the sun today. But the birds felt the evil sources energy and became uneasy, as did the other animals and plants.... something was happening....*
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Not really a great addition to the story but at least we know what is happening outside.

But but Veggeto your already died...I killed you with my superior mind. :laugh:

thanx for the update Roll ;)

back to da story
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DHCliculo(stand silently on a mountain peek while his cape flows in the wind)

KH Cloud thinks: i think we are ready Piccolo......we have trained hard and now posses the power to destroy Roll, her gargoyles and that medalsome Karma


Dark Piccolo thinks: yes that is true....but wait. there is one more thing we must do.....we must go see Vegeta...he knows a special technique that we may be able to use if we are despret enough..

KH Cloud thinks:but what if he doesnt agree to teach us the attack

Dark Piccolo thinks: oh he will...(cracks nukles)


hey SBYRD what ever happens now is up to you okay....i'll pick the story back up after your next post ^_^

*hahahahahah :biggrin: dident you no im emortal and leave me be let me find that evil teleports again*

[quote:post_uid0="SBYRD5"]But but Veggeto your already died...I killed you with my superior mind. :laugh:[/quote]
:lol:

*piccolo piccolo could you here me*

DHCliculo stares at the moonlight,and begins to have a conversation with himself*

KHCloud=Would Vegeta really help us Dark Piccolo.

DarkPiccolo=He is good now....KHCloud.

KHCloud=But we're not also why would the prince of all saiyians help us defeat and conquer the world.

*The fused warrior continues his medition more confused than ever,but yet clear of his objectives*

KHCloud=Forget vegeta we are strong enough to defeat Roll now we most make haste I since someones spirit growing.

Darkpiccolo=KHCloud listen......

Please take over Piccolo.

Oh my god, Vegetto, Do YOU EVER READ?! You are dead! If you're immortal then you lost your soul because of me! And nothing can even do ANYTHING without their souls! So you can't do anything anymore. Goodbye, and do not come back until you learn to RP and write stories. There is no room for people like you who want to be lazy and ignorant.

[quote:post_uid0="mysticveggeto"]*hahahahahah :biggrin: dident you no im emortal and leave me be let me find that evil teleports again*[/quote]
When I distroyed you with my superior mind you we're breakin down to tiny minerals of your orignal being.Yes, your immortal,but your just crumbs that can never regenerate,because sayians don't know that tech.

Since your going to say some corny #### after this i'm going to blow your crumbs into the "Death Zone".Where you will live out the rest of your days with your Eternal butt buddy "Garlic Jr."

*DHCliculo picks up Veggeto's ashes*

DAHCliculo=Please Email me about your new Crumby life. :laugh:

Also if you post a retort comment after me you are a SUPER LOSERRR if your MysticVeggeto.

Man just leave this thread like Roll said.

[quote:post_uid0="mysticveggeto"]*piccolo piccolo could you here me*[/quote]
LMAO @ YOU BRO.........dont you understand that if you wanna join this story you gotta do it right.....better luck next time :lol: cough

[quote:post_uid1="DARKPICCOLO"]MEANWHILE AT KAMIES POINT


Dark Piccolo: i was hoping it wouldnt come to this

KH Cloud: whats wrong Dark?

Dark Piccolo: cant you see? by fusing with Kame i am gaining great power, but you must understand that if i die all of this earths dragonballs will vanish forever.

Light Kame: not true Piccolo........there is a way......we must find someone who can replace me as gardian of the dragonballs.

KH Cloud: but who?

Dark Piccolo angrily: who cares we have no time
:angryfire: what ever happens happens( come on old man lets do this)


**so with that said both worriors agree that thier fusion has been postponed for long enough**

**and now a new force emerges**

KH Cloud: Dark is that you?

Dark Piccolo shows an evil grin




To be continued[/quote:post_uid1]
Ahem I will take the role as the guardian of the Earth :biggrin: That is all takes the kame light staff :biggrin: Starts growing sensu beans they are going to need it :lol: Darkpiccolo good luck if you try to destroy the planet.I will have to ask King yema to let you stay in.H*ll a lil longer after I send ya there my self personally :lol:

hey could some one wish me back with the dragonballs i need to get down there and stop this madnes evil some one wish me wish me back hello could anyone here me down there urrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrhell o some one please wish me back uurr wish me back hey piccolo could you here me piccalo yu there could you wish me back with the dragon ballz please comon wish me back someone hey piccolo wish me back please someone anyone just wish me back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!1 :nervous:

[quote:post_uid0="SBYRD5"][quote:post_uid0="mysticveggeto"]*hahahahahah :biggrin: dident you no im emortal and leave me be let me find that evil teleports again*[/quote]
When I distroyed you with my superior mind you we're breakin down to tiny minerals of your orignal being.Yes, your immortal,but your just crumbs that can never regenerate,because sayians don't know that tech.

Since your going to say some corny #### after this i'm going to blow your crumbs into the "Death Zone".Where you will live out the rest of your days with your Eternal butt buddy "Garlic Jr."

*DHCliculo picks up Veggeto's ashes*

DAHCliculo=Please Email about your new Crumby life. :laugh:

Also if you post a retort comment after me you are a SUPER LOSERRR if your Mystic Veggeto[/quote]
and the reign of Mysticvegetto is over.........and if he ever comes back just ignore him guys :biggrin:

Hey guess what guys there is another moogle thread on the forum we moved our stories there so all you n e w b i e s and people that like to mess up threads go there.

Everyone else...don't listen to me.

Also we have already used the Dragonballs this year your going to have to live there for a year,and also how can you post here your in the "DEAD ZONE" so stay there...queer. :laugh:

o cmon can you just gimmy another chance

GO TO THE OTHER MOOGLE THREAD....GO AWAY.