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:barfs: lol :p
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awww girlnferno .....that was sad........i feel sorry 4 u if any one u love die
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here's another poem...
there are times when she just feels like crying behind the pretty face is a girl that is slowly dying always feeling out of place she tries so hard to fit in when will someone see what she's hiding whithin she's always misunderstood if she could change her destiny she would she just needs a shoulder to cry on someone who she can rely upon she can't take all the suffering all the burden that she's bearing can anybody save her from this ignorant world? Edited By shy_gurL21 on 1096864239 |
,-.- I CANT TAKE IT IM CRYING!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAA IT WAS GOOD buT U TO SOUND SO SAD
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dragon cloud stop with your lies you did not cry. It was not even that sad of a poem to read over the internet and cry about it. I can see your pathetic ass crying over e-greeting cards with poems in it. Get a life.
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0 0....get of my d1(k any way no i didnt thats ghay (at least 4 that ) and besides i ran out of things to say so howbout u get a life and get the @#$ out of mines u mother@!#@!#@!
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those sad eyes that i be hold
lets me know i've hurt u so u need not say a word for i undestand the unjust i've done with my 2 hands those tears i've made u cry makes me hurt and wanna die i never meant to hurt u so much inside i know i've not made it easy for u to love me for it's hard to meet my many needs and at times i know i forget to say thank you for all the many things that you do for all those countless i love u's that you'd say at the end of each of our days and all those other wonderful things u show me how to do that seems so amazing and new to someone like me who could not understand the basics of how a computer works muchless how to type and so i don't know how to say this but i'm sorry i hurt u a lot last night please forgive me. . . |
I sent these special angels
To keep you safe and sound, To bless you and to love you When I am not around. I asked them to look after you, And not to let you frown. To cheer you up when times are rough, Or whenever you feel down. I hope they take good care of you And bring you lots of love, Because I called upon them specially From Heaven up above. |
i dont write poems, i dont read poems..i juss like dem
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i was a poet..
i didnt even know it.. man.. i love to rhyme i wish i could do this all the time. :biggrin: |
Mornings like this, so clear and quiet
Seem to let the time go by And with you and I, the way we wander While the world goes on and on Does it really matter with all of the worries And yet at times we cry Sometimes we spend all of our hours In thoughts we should not ponder but at least with you, I can feel good From the morning until the dawn |
Darkstrider senses talent.. nice work everyone:laugh:
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[quote:post_uid0="dragon_cloud"]0 0....get of my d1(k any way no i didnt thats ghay (at least 4 that ) and besides i ran out of things to say so howbout u get a life and get the @#$ out of mines u mother@!#@!#@![/quote]
Now is that a way for a child your age to speak? Having misspelled crap all over the damn post. And please get the hell out of here with that corny poop, not even an animal would lie on your dic.k so you can keep your dumbass mouth shut. Telling me to get a life but yet you are the one chasing every girl who talks to you. She can be fat, ugly as hell, have STDs whateva and you still chase them trying to hook up with them. What a loser, do you not have any standards at all? lmao You my friend are the one who needs a social life. You have been bitch slapped by LancerPX. Here's 2 dollars. *gives them to you* Now save up money and buy yourself a life. And I better not find out you used it to buy your gay porn, or else ill bitch slap you again. |
it seems like i'm invisible
every move that i am about to make is and will always remain unpredictable nobody really tries to understand me nobody listens to what i have to say when i speak it's just blah blah i always try to be someone i am not i've always wanted to be perfect but it's hard living life as a reject i got nobody by my side my pain, i just hide it deep inside i wish i could open up heaven's door and ask for a new life, n3wbeginning so i can live life over again and forget about everything... Edited By shy_gurL21 on 1097473868 |
[quote:post_uid0="shy_gurL21"]it seems like i'm invisible
every move that i am about to make is and will always remain unpredictable nobody really tries to understand me nobody listens to what i have to say when i speak it's just blah blah i always try to be someone i am not i've always wanted to be perfect but it's hard living life as a reject i got nobody by my side my pain, i just hide it deep inside i wish i could open up heaven's door and ask for a new life, n3wbeginning so i can live life over again and forget about everything...[/quote] very nice shy very nice :D :buttrock: |
wow all these poems r so good!!! i have no talent in the poetry field =/
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[quote:post_uid0="island_chick"]wow all these poems r so good!!! i have no talent in the poetry field =/[/quote]
the same for me |
the enchanting ways of a lovely face
everyone sees and adores yet a person everyone ignores better to be seen then heard they say at lease ur face shines with grace leaving countless smiles upon every fellows face the bell of the ball the gale they say who has it all except that someone to catch her as she falls the one thing she wants most of all that simple guy who won't lie the one who won't just love her for her beautiful smile or love her for just a while the man who's not afraid of her growing old or giving her his hand and heart to hold that smiple pleasures in life that few ofus get to know thats beautys fatal flaw to all those girls who everyone claim to have it all we'll never find that guy that'll loves us for who we are inside |
[quote:post_uid0="dominicankid098"][quote:post_uid0="dragon cloud"]0 0....get of my d1(k any way no i didnt thats ghay (at least 4 that ) and besides i ran out of things to say so howbout u get a life and get the @#$ out of mines u mother@!#@!#@![/quote]
Now is that a way for a child your age to speak? Having misspelled crap all over the damn post. And please get the hell out of here with that corny poop, not even an animal would lie on your dic.k so you can keep your dumbass mouth shut. Telling me to get a life but yet you are the one chasing every girl who talks to you. She can be fat, ugly as hell, have STDs whateva and you still chase them trying to hook up with them. What a loser, do you not have any standards at all? lmao You my friend are the one who needs a social life. You have been bitch slapped by LancerPX. Here's 2 dollars. *gives them to you* Now save up money and buy yourself a life. And I better not find out you used it to buy your gay porn, or else ill bitch slap you again.[/quote] ....and im the one who needs a life nooo i think u do cause u go out ofur way to talk down to me i hate kids like u....i cant wait to see u burn in hell .....only sad ppl like u going on and on how u talk about ppl to do this and that is the one who needs a life like the senders ppl ur just like them and if they was not watching i cuss u out uncut style ........0.0 hehe o and i love every one poems...... Edited By dragon_cloud on 1097544117 |
oh my word... when will the flaming, the bitching and the arguing stop? let's just all get along and everything will be fine.
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nice poem girlNferno666
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aww y thankies underaie ^_^ *huggles* see u around sfo ^_^
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i'm here sitting quietly
waiting for him to notice me i'm falling in love with this guy i want to approach him but i'm too shy so i just ask myself with anticipation what do i have to do to win his attention? does he realize my presence? is he bothered by my absence? if i disappear will he even care? does he miss me when i'm not there? i find my happiness when he's around every pain that i feel he relieves i know in his eyes i'm just a face in the crowd but i'm sure when everyone else leaves i will be the only one to stay and never let him go astray. |
I really liked that poem shygurL. Very nice and emotional.
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i like ur poem alot i think it tell alittle about u do it shy ^.*
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thanks dominicankid and dragoncloud. :)
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[quote:post_uid0="shy_gurL21"]thanks dominicankid and dragoncloud. :)[/quote]
who was that poem about lol |
the man i see is not whole his heart is broken and his soul is numb
with lifes many truths does this come he grew up in a broke home all the yelling, fighting, and beatings is all he's ever know a mothers tender touch her loving grace he can't even recall her face much less know a mothers role when she let him go for all his life she was a no show the harsh realities r cold in and out of his life many come and go many will love him for simple reasons then leave and those that stay usually go astray yet he still searches and looks for that one girl that'll stay who will love him till his dying days to heal the hurt thats in his heart to teach him the loving arts and teach him something he's never known how it's like to have a loving home |
[quote:post_uid0="Evil-Blanka"][quote:post_uid0="shy gurL21"]thanks dominicankid and dragoncloud. :)[/quote]
who was that poem about lol[/quote] hmm... someone.. lol.. my bf |
i like shy gurls poem more then girlnferno's (sry girlnferno) mayb cuz shy gurl ends her sentences with the same suffix as the previous sentence... girl nfernos is nice 2 but some sentences dunt connect. theyr both good ^.^
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rabbitalien i don't write to compete with shy i write to express myself wether u like hers more or mine is fine with me ^_^ i could careless i don't write to please anyone else but myself so i don't need anyones approval ^_^ and if i wrote only to compete with shy i rather not write at all for believe it or not she's really not worth all that effort and thats not to be mean it's just truthful i don't even know her so y waste the time to write all that just to compete with her so till i feel like it my poems they'll end the way i feel they should and theres no rules to writing a poem it's call free writing because u write it the way it please u no rules of english applies to it
poems ryhem all the time except for some maybe one but it's not a crime not to ryhem :P Edited By girlNferno666 on 1097774527 |
[quote:post_uid0="girlNferno666"]the man i see is not whole his heart is broken and his soul is numb
with lifes many truths does this come he grew up in a broke home all the yelling, fighting, and beatings is all he's ever know a mothers tender touch her loving grace he can't even recall her face much less know a mothers role when she let him go for all his life she was a no show the harsh realities r cold in and out of his life many come and go many will love him for simple reasons then leave and those that stay usually go astray yet he still searches and looks for that one girl that'll stay who will love him till his dying days to heal the hurt thats in his heart to teach him the loving arts and teach him something he's never known how it's like to have a loving home[/quote] yo that was good i have 1 your eyes are deep your foot is wide why do you have so mutch pride let it out let it go let that crap melt in the snow the snow i am a yo call me that you get hit with a bat i am not playing all i know is the bloody hoody in my closet is praying praying you know i have a gat and i am spraying thats a stupid poem i am way better than that |
^_^ hehe evil that was cute it made me smile to read ur poem hehe ur so silly *huggles ya* i missed u i hope i see u on the server more or u should add me to ur msn u dork ^_^
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this ones to all the shy guys who's afraid to tell a girl how he feels much less say hi
for one breif moment i saw ur face like an angel u appeared with grace as u gently passed me by i saw the soft glimmer of joy in ur eye as if you were saying hi my heart stops and i forget to breath for some reason i feel all weak in the knees and then u passed without a backwards glace making me wonder if i'd missed my chance your beauty my hearts enchant your smile so lovely and magnificent those eyes that burn with fire my hearts desires the angel i sawby chance on the street is what dreams r made of when i sleep i'm sure you've all had these encounters before of seeing a beautiful girl your heart adores making u wonder if she's the girl you've been searching for and yet before u know it she's out the door Edited By girlNferno666 on 1097778630 |
[quote:post_uid0="girlNferno666"]this ones to all the shy guys who's afraid to tell a girl how he feels much less say hi
for one breif moment i saw ur face like an angel u appeared with grace as u gently passed me by i saw the soft glimmer of joy in ur eye as if you were saying hi my heart stops and i forget to breath for some reason i feel all weak in the knees and then u passed without a backwards glace making me wonder if i'd missed my chance your beauty my hearts enchant your smile so lovely and magnificent those eyes that burn with fire my hearts desires the angel i sawby chance on the street is what dreams r made of when i sleep i'm sure you've all had these encounters before of seeing a beautiful girl your heart adores making u wonder if she's the girl you've been searching for and yet before u know it she's out the door[/quote] girl nferno here is my email email me some timeskhalilj92@yahoo.com dont ask why the name is that a few days ago my bro made it that for some stupid reason |
heres a dedication to chunforever from evilken123456 a.k.a kyo898989 he asked me to write him a poem for the girl he loves so here goes nothing ^_^ he hopes u like it
my raven hair angel who's eyes r that of the midnight skies who has no wings to fly the angel of my dreams the most lovely of all things o how u make my heart sing with that melody that rings of love untold and so I must say my heart u do hold if i am to live then it is to u that i must give this love which i feel in my heart for i do not part my lips and say i love u more each day then it shall surely brust from keeping it all inside and i will surely die for not expressing that which i feel inside |
awww ths so sweet nferno girl!! when i read poems...for som reason...memories just flood back! happens all the time!
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i don't write poems to compete with other people. i write them because it's one way to express how i feel.
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nice poems girlNferno666 and shy
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[quote:post_uid0="shy_gurL21"]i'm here sitting quietly
waiting for him to notice me i'm falling in love with this guy i want to approach him but i'm too shy so i just ask myself with anticipation what do i have to do to win his attention? does he realize my presence? is he bothered by my absence? if i disappear will he even care? does he miss me when i'm not there? i find my happiness when he's around every pain that i feel he relieves i know in his eyes i'm just a face in the crowd but i'm sure when everyone else leaves i will be the only one to stay and never let him go astray.[/quote] omgoSH!! my sweety is sOooO talented..=T!! girlnferno yours is awesome !! cant make any good poems compare to yooh guys.. :love: |
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