Tudeki: "Jopia, run away with Corona... I don't want you to get hurt."

Jopia: "OK!!"

Tudeki: "Tacq and Zegar, can you hold the many smaller monsters off?"

Tacq: "Yes."

Zegar: "Sure thing."

Tudeki: "Mizuki, keep the big one busy."

Mizuki: "Ok."

Tudeki: "GO NOW!!"

The heroes wen't off to face the monsters.

Tudeki pulls out his katana and points it upwards. Tudeki's sword starts glowing green, with whisps of energy firing out of the top.

Tacq: "No Way!"

Zegar: "What the?"

Mizuki: "HURRY UP!!!"

Tudeki's sword keeps glowing bigger, and brighter.

Tudeki: "EVERYONE RUN!!!"

Everyone runs as fast as they can, and all the monsters go towards Tudeki.

Tudeki: "Thats right, come to me."

The monsters are about ready to attack.

The green light from Tudeki's sword fires directly up into the sky.

Just as the monsters are about to attack Tudeki...

Green light comes down from the sky in gigantic pulses... disinigrating the monsters.

Tacq: "He's gotta be!!"

Zegar: "How did he?!"

Mizuki: "Oh my..."

[OOC]You guys can finish this :D [/OOC]

[OOC]nice one, but...[/OOC]
ZEGAR:"that's impossible, not after that !"
*everyone looked behind*
MIZUKI:"nooooo ! what kind of monster is it !"
TACQ:"how can he still be alive ?"
TUDEKI:"this... cannot... be... happenning !"
*the big monster was still alive and standing, just a little weaker then before, he was now very angered and was starting to rush at our heroes*
ZEGAR:"RUN FOR YOUR LIFE !"
*the gang ran away, has no one knew what to do against it*
TACQ:"we gotta hide and wait for it to go away"
TUDEKI:"i will never lose to that scum"
MIZUKI:"you're gonna die if you go against it !"
ZEGAR:"all creature have a weakness that makes em able to be defeated. an invincible creature is impossible"
*and everyone hided in the forest, the monster was looking for them but didn't saw any, but still, he continued to search*
ZEGAR:[there must be a way to destroy it, but what is it]
MIZUKI:[hope he will not see any of us and go away]

TO BE CONTINUED...
[OOC]that's for some trouble ![/OOC]

[OOC] Hehehe :laughlong: [/OOC]

Tudeki goes into a deep meditation.

Tacq: "Oh brother..."

Mizuki: "Tacq, where did this guy come from, why is he so powerful?"

Tacq: "He's a Samurai from an ancient clan, his father was an awesome warrior, but I think he's leaving something out."

Zegar: "Definately leaving something out."

The heroes are anticipating the attack from the giant monster, and are wondering what Tudeki is doing this time.

Tudeki: "ICE!!!"

Tacq: "Ice?"

Tudeki: "It's the monsters weakness."

Tacq: "Ok"

[OOC] OK, fixed. [/OOC]

[OOC] Okay, Tantum I have a few things to tell you.

1) Don't make your character "all powerful"
2) Tacq doesn't use magic... you should read the post where I describe him.
3) It was a HUGE and FEARSOME monster! Don't friggin defeat it in ONE FRIGGIN POST! So, let's begin again from where you find that his weakness is ice...[/OOC]

Tudeki," I'll distract it. When you see signs of the monster being damaged, run out, and perform your magic."
Uhhh... I don't have any magic.
Tudeki," Huh? What do you mean? You just teleported us here!"
That wasn't magic, that was a skill. I don't believe in using magic. Sure, it is done by many, but it's just not my style.
Tudeki," I see... well, do you have any ice... "skills"?"
Nope, sorry.
Tudeki," Hmmm..."
Zegar," I'm sure there's another way to defeat this thing! There MUST be!"
Hmm... well, let's find out!
Tacq ran out toward the monster.
Mizuki," Tacq! What are you doing?"
Tacq ran to the monster. He quickly ran all around it a few times then up, down, and everywhere on the creature examining it. After, Tacq ran back to the group with absoloute stealth.
Well . . . Nothing that I can see.

Tudeki: "I'll take care of this."

Tudeki pulls out his katana, and it turns bright light blue. Tudeki rushes at the monster, swiping here and there, leaving frosted slice marks everywhere.

The monster was damaged, but the iced blade doesn't seem to be enough.

Tacq: "Wait, I have an idea... I teleported some of the smaller monsters to a volcano... I could teleport this one to the antarctic."

Tudeki: "Good idea."

Tacq: "But it will take a bit of time to charge up to teleport this big guy."

Tudeki: "Good enough."

Tudeki slashes at the monster again, leaving frosted blade marks all over it.

Tudeki: "Ready yet?"

Tacq: "Not yet."

Mizuki: "Cmon, hurry up!"

Tudeki holds his sword up in the air again, while it grows brighter. He charges at the monster again, leaving bigger frost marks all over the monster, but it still isn't enough.

Tacq: "Almost!"

Tudeki: "Hurry up, We need to get to Jopia."

Tacq: "Got it!"

The giant monster is consumed with a brightness, and disapears.

Tudeki: "Great work."

Mizuki: "Let's find Corona, and Jopia now."

Tudeki: "They are that way, just a couple minutes walk. No need to teleport."

Tacq: "Let's hurry anyways."

The heroes run through the woods in search of Jopia, and Corona.

Tudeki: "Over this way."

Tudeki: "Jopia, there you are..."

Jopia is wounded, and Corona is licking his face.

Jopia: "I'm here, glad you found me... but some monsters did too..."

Tudeki: "How many?"

Jopia: "4 of them, I can't believe we made it out alive... good thing Corona was here, or I wouldn't be... :( "

Tudeki: "It's ok Jopia, it's not your fault... you did great."

Jopia: "I guess you're right, but I wan't to be as strong as you!"

Tacq: "Jopia, you're still a young boy, with only a few years of training... You'll become a great warrior some day."

Jopia: "I guess you're right, but these monsters are so hard, I'm just slowing you down."

Tudeki: "No you're not, you are great help, and a wonderful companion. The more help the better. I think we should get going now, no time to waste, we must find Duraga."

[OOC]tantum, is this the first time you ROLE PLAY ?

your chars...
- knows everything
- have EVERY magic there is existing
- cannot be surprised at all
- sens everyone even when they are 50 miles away

don't you think it is a little to exagerating for a character ?
think DIABLO game, your characters has to learn things and having weaknesses is good too.

next i would have to say that TACQ isn't doing all this without a lost of anything ! he needs light to do his things and now he will have to recharge entirely and that is IF TACQ isn't unconsious because of the SIZE of the monster and the DISTANCE he was teleported ![/OOC]

ZEGAR:"some one is there !"
MIZUKI:"what do you mean ?"
TACQ:"he's right, someone looking at us !"
TUDEKI:"i sens it too, but i cannot pin point it !"
MIZUKI:"why am i the only one who cannot sens people ?"
ZEGAR:"your no FIGHTER, you have not been trained for that !"

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somewhere on the biggest tree

?:"they spoted me ! how ? let's wait longer, i am not sure of what i should do !"

TO BE CONTINUED...
[OOC]for those who wonder what it is... it is a queue for SBYRD5 character. or anyone else who wants to enter[/OOC]

[OOC] He can sense people's energy, he's a very skilled fighter, and his sword is magical, and can use spells. That is not all powerful. [/OOC]

[OOC]not all powerfull ? tell me ONE of his weaknesses !

- knows magic, so what, does it include he knows EVERY SINGLE MAGIC in existence ? you're playing like that is true !
- VERY SKILLED FIGHTER ! mine is a fighter too and ghe gets hit lots of time so why isn't your getting any hit in any of your posts ?
- magical sword ! so what, i have an BLADE OF VENGEANCE with an intelligence of 18/25 that can move all by his own and use magic. so what, it doesn't give me all the POWER to kill or destroy anything in my path !

in case you didn't knew, all your description is currently making your character a GOD that cannot even be touched !
we aren't asking too much i think, just that your character has MORE troubles with monsters. that thing survived your biggest Magic and still you destoyed it with one go !

anyway...[/OOC]

[OOC] Tacq killed the monster... My guy isn't invincible... dude, don't ruin the story, I'm working up to something important storywise. [/OOC]

[ooc] Tantum, he's right. You're character is a bit too powerful. And besides... my character uses magic as well... I just haven't revealed any new spells yet. Although, you DO have to "level up" your character, you know. Also, you need to balance your character stats. If he has high Strength and Stamina, then he should (in contrast) have low Vitality and Magic. I don't want to be mean to you, but I have to say that your character was becoming too tough for a real character even if it is for a story-line.

However, if you're going to keep him the same, then I have an idea. In Resident Evil 2, Claire spent a LOT of her time protecting Sherry. Because of that, she couldn't go to her full potential in fighting the monsters away. Therefore, Jopia could be like Sherry. You have to protect him, and he has to be... er.. helpless, kinda. In other words, (if you don't understand what I mean) you're full potential in fighting must be held back quite a bit when Jopia is around, or he may be hurt by your attacks or the monster you're up against...[/ooc]

Zegar: "That's quite a sword Tudeki. You saved our hides."

Mizuki: "I'd say."

Tacq: "You know Tudeki, I've heard of a sword much like yours. The powers from your sword match the description explained to me. He said the sword was created over 1000 years ago, by Suko the goddess of war. I also have heard it only works in the hands of her desendants."

Jopia: "Cool!"

Tudeki: "....."

Tacq: "What else have you been hiding from us?"

Tudeki: "....."

Tacq: "What do you want with us?"

Tudeki: "I guess I have something to tell you. The one who killed my father, the one you call Duraga... is a servant of the underworld, he is seeking out all of the greatest warriors on the planet... he is on a mission to kill anyone with significant powers. The lord of the underworld is trying to take over the planet. Duraga already killed my father, and brother..."

Tacq: "This is not good news, but why are you here with us?"

Tudeki: "After I killed the man who attacked my village, and killed my mother... I saw a spirit that told me to come to Thonia, the rest has come to me like a forgotten memory."

Zegar: "But what is at Lake Kasp?"

Tudeki: "I'm not sure."

Mizuki: "We aren't far, we shall find out soon enough."

Tacq: "A Trap?"

Tudeki: "Almost certain, but I think he is there for some other reason as well."

Mizuki: "I love traps!"

Zegar: ":shocked: you scare me sometimes."

Mizuki: " :laugh: "

Jopia: "But wait... why did you bring me along...?"

Tudeki: "When you bumped into me I saw my brothers face on you... and I sensed something amazing."

Tacq: "If you are of Suko's Bloodline, why aren't you extremly stronger than us?"

Tudeki: "I just found out the swords secret powers not long ago, my father never knew. I have no where near mastered the swords abilities, It holds a very amazing power... it is extremely hard to control. I wish I had more time to practice, perhaps the previous fights will have had some effect."

Tacq: "You seemed to control the magic quite well... but from what I've heard, the sword has the ability to defeat anything in the right hands, man or god."

Tudeki: "I'm far away from that..."

Zegar: "You are young, give yourself more credit."

Jopia: "Yeah, remember what you told me!"

Mizuki: "That's a good wolfie, here's a treat."

Corona: "Woof woof!"

Tacq: "Hahahaha, Mizuki pay attention.... :laugh:."

Mizuki: "What? Corona wanted a treat!"

Zegar: "I'd say this is a little more important than feeding rover.... :angry: "

Tudeki: "We should get going, time is wasting."

Tacq: "Agreed."

<Narrator> With new found information, the gang is now on a journey to save the planet! Find out what happens next, in the next EXCITING post!!! </Narrator>

[ooc].....I was gonna say something, but I forgot what I was going to say.[/ooc]

[OOC] Don't need to critique the new post, it brought much more excitement to the story. And a much more in-depth story plot. Oh yeah, stop using your banners in OOC posts :p [/OOC]

[OOC]not gonna say anything as it is clear that you won't do a single thing about your character ! anyway... here it goes.[/OOC]

ZEGAR:{that guy is still following us ! why is he like that ?}
MIZUKI:"you seem lost in your thought zegar, is there something on your mind ?"
ZEGAR:"..."
MIZUKI:"have it your way then !"
*zegar looks above and to his sides*
ZEGAR:{nothing, what's so special about this place ? i mean duraga wouldn't come in here without any reason !}
TACQ:"here we are, the lake and its vast forest !"
TUDEKI:"i heard that forest had dangerous creatures !"
JOPIA:"but we have you to protect us !"
TUDEKI:"..."
TACQ:"everyone needs help at a time or another. let's camp here. night is coming fast and we still don't have any plans incase everything goes wrong !"
ZEGAR:"with my experience on the battlefield, i must say it is NEVER going according to plan !"
MIZUKI:"good night everyone"
*and the gang goes to sleep*
ZEGAR:{what is this all about ? what is my fate anyway ? i use to know it for sure, but i am just hesitating right now, why is that so ?5 days ago, i would have killed anyone if i had a problems with them, now i am... having feelings i never had before. what does that mean ?}
ZEGAR:"blade of vengeance, guard this place and attack anything that goes to near us"
BLADE:"yes, my lord !"
*the blade execute the order !*
ZEGAR:{hope everything will goes right this night !}

Tudeki, and Zegar wake at the same time.... realizing that Mizuki is missing.

Zegar: "Can you sense her?"

Tudeki: "Hmmm.... no. I just woke up :D Give me a few minutes."

Zegar: "...."

Tudeki: "Oh, you're ready for everything the minute you wake up??"

Zegar: "Pretty much."

Tudeki: "Well, maybe when I'm an old geezer, I'll have the same ability."

Zegar: "I hear something...."

Mizuki: "Stop fooling around you two, I was just getting some extra food."

Tudeki: "Well, it's time to get up anyways... GET UP YOU TWO!!"

Tacq: "WHAT?! We under attack??"

Mizuki: :laughlong:

Jopia: (In a half-asleep quiet voice) "What's going on Tudeki, are we under attack?"

Tacq: "No, they must be irritating each other... and are passing it along. Damn you Tudeki and Zegar, I'm tired!"

Tudeki: "We must get up, since it seems that Duraga is just waiting for us there, let's get some training in before we get going."

Mizuki: "Sounds like a good idea, I also caught a couple of rabbits, and found a wide variety of nuts, berries, and edible roots. Can you cook, Jopia?"

Jopia: "Yes, I can."

Tudeki: "Good Jopia, you cook the meal... I'll train alone, after we eat, I'll train you."

Zegar: "Tudeki, let's train together."

Tudeki: "Sure, but I need some time alone too."

So the gang gets up, and gets started on their training.

Jopia: "I wish they made Tacq cook... I have to sit here by myself and cook these damn rabbits and roots. Atleast I have these walnuts to snack on :sly: "

Tudeki: "Let's run another few minutes."

Zegar: "Ok."

Tudeki: "Can you keep up old man? :D "

Zegar: "Come on, stop with the old man garbage."

Tudeki: :laugh:

Zegar: "Enough running. Now we really train."

Tudeki: "Hmmm... Want to go weaponless first?"

Zegar: "Of course."

And so the fighting commenses!

Tudeki: "I know I'm far quicker than you, but let's see who can hit harder."

Tudeki gives Zegar a kick to the chest, pushing him back several feet.

Zegar comes back, punching Tudeki in the face.

Tudeki: "Good one" *grabs face* "Real good."

Tudeki hits Zegar with multiple quick kicks to the face, followed by a double fist thrust to his stomach.

Zegar: *coughs*

Zegar lands a left jab, followed by a right cross, a left hook to the body, and a right uppercut to his jaw.

Tudeki flies landing straight on his back

Tudeki: "Oh my."

Zegar: "Heh. I told you I'm no old man."

Tudeki: "Ok, good spar... I think I should go weapon train alone, we might kill just each other..."

Zegar: "Ok, I just hope we don't have to fight again some day."

Tudeki: *Grabs his chin* "Agreed."

Tudeki runs off.

Zegar: {I can't believe how strong he is, I almost puked all over the place on that last hit.} "I hope we all live through this, so I can see that kid reach his potential."

Tudeki: "How is the food coming along Jopia?"

Jopia: "It's gonna be a while. What happened to you?!"

Tudeki: "That geezer can really throw a punch..."

Jopia: "I'd say."

Tudeki: "Well, it's time for me to practice with my sword. I'll be back when the food is done."

Tudeki runs off. He pulls out his katana. His sword becomes surronded with blue flames, and he stops in front of a big tree.

Tudeki: *Slashes the tree*

The slice goes all the way through the tree. And it falls over.
Tudeki Slices the trunk into many smaller pieces, he lifts his sword, and the pieces go flying in the air.

Jopia: "I really want to train, this is boring... What the heck?"

The pieces of wood land all around Jopia, scattered.

Jopia: *gets hit in the head with a piece of wood* "Oww!!" *grabs his head, and rubs it*

Tacq: "Hey Tudeki...."

Tudeki: "What?"

Tacq: "Took me a while to find you, maybe I can help you."

Tudeki: "How?"

Tacq: "Well, I know of the magics the sword posseses, maybe if I explain them to you, you can use them."

Tudeki: "Ok..."

Tacq: "Well, what do you know so far?"

Tudeki: "Well, I can do the blue ice... blue fire, blue lightning...."

Tacq: "Is blue your favorite color? hahaha."

Tudeki: "No, umm... the green spirit blast thingy."

Tacq: "Well, there are alot more..."

Tudeki: "How many??"

Tacq: "Alot."

Tudeki: "Ok, what's left?"

Tacq: "Hmm... let's see... There's red shooting flames... yellow lightning from the sky. Umm... white spheres that cure..."

Tudeki: "Let's try the cure thing first."

Tacq: "Well, you're supposed to be able to feel out the magic, just get the one that makes the sword glow white.

Tudeki holds his sword out, and goes into meditation.

Tacq: "Hmm, what else was there... oh yeah, the white blizzard, and orangey-pink colored beam of super hot energy. That's all I know of."

Tudeki's sword turns white.

Tudeki: "I got it!!" *A bright glowing sphere comes out his sword*

Tacq: "Ok, make the sphere fly into you."

Tudeki: "Ok... Here goes."

The sphere flies into Tudeki, and his cuts and bruises from his fight with Zegar vanish.

Tacq: "Amazing."

Tudeki: "Agreed. Whats next?"

Tacq: "Try the sky lightning."

Tudeki: "Ok..."

About an hour later....

Tacq: "There's just one more left, the beam.

Tudeki: "Ok."

Tacq: {This is the most powerful one I've heard of, I wonder if Tudeki can even control it.} Tudeki, this one's strong, if you lose control....

Tudeki: "..."

Tacq: "The beam doesn't stop, it will keep going foward if you can't control it. shoot it upwards."

Tudeki: "Ok."

Tudeki holds his sword straight up, and returns to his meditation.

Minutes later-

Tudeki: "Got it!" *his sword starts glowing orange.*

The sword becomes too hot for Tudeki, and just as the beam starts he drops the sword.

Tacq: "NO!!!!"

The beam comes flying out of the sword and travels foward at a fast pace, leaving holes in big trees, and knocking down small ones.

Tacq: "Look at what you've done!!"

Tudeki: "Can I stop it?"

Tacq: "Grab the sword!!!"

Tudeki takes hold of his sword, it is still burning hot, and he winces in pain.

Tacq: "Pull the beam up!"

Tudeki's sword glows bright again. He struggles to raise the beam.

Tacq: "PULL IT UP!!!"

Tudeki angles the beam up slightly, and it slowly rises into the sky.

Tacq: "......"

Tudeki: "It was burning hot!" *shows Tacq his hands*

Tudeki's hands are smoldered, and bleeding bad.

Tacq: "You can just use the healing spheres.... who knows what kind of damage you've done now!!"

Tudeki: :(

Tacq: "No use feeling sorry for yourself now, heal your hands."

Tudeki uses the curing spheres on himself. healing his hands.

Tacq: "Go back and see the others, I'll see if anyone got hurt."

Tudeki runs back to camp.

<Narrator> Has anyone been hurt by the wildly misaimed beam? How is the training coming along for the others? Is the food ready yet?! Find out in the next exciting post! </Narrator>

[ooc]I'll take care of this part, since you obviously think the world is supposed to be shaped to your liking. Plus, you're still making him Super Human with everything. Able to sense spirits... special powers... super strength greater than Zegars?[/ooc]

When Tudeki arrived at the camp, he saw Jopia lying on the ground, with Mizuki looking at him. She suddenly looked up an saw Tudeki.

Mizuki: "What did you guys DO!"
Tudeki: "Well...I..uh.."
Mizuki: "Jopia could've been killed if that beam didn't miss him. Luckily for you, the beam hit the ground, which exploded and hit him heavily."
Tudeki: "....."
Mizuki: "Learn to be more careful. You might end up killing Jopia!"
Tudeki: "....."
Mizuki: "Ugh.....if you have nothing to say about this, then go back to training. Obviously you need work on a lot of things, like the seriousness of a weapon or attack."
Tudeki: "But...."
Mizuki: "GO!"
Tudeki: "....."

Tudeki finally left Mizuki alone with Jopia. After Tudeki left, Mizuki used a gypsy herb on Jopia, and as he lay unconcious, he healed slowly.

[ooc] This is what happens when you make yourself all too powerful. With extreme magic swords, and Strength greater than everyone, and higher speed along with Vitality and Defence, you made yourself way too strong. Because of that, penalties will be happening to you because of Luck, which no one can raise at all. Only a specific few have high luck ratings.[/ooc]

[OOC]He's not stronger than Zegar, Zegar kicked his ass in a hand to hand fight.[/OOC]

Tudeki: {I can't believe I hurt Jopia... How could I have done this.} :( {I guess I can't control the beam at all yet, only part of it went up....}

Tudeki passes out in the woods from the exhaustion of his training, and from his sorrow of hurting his friend.

Hours later-

Tacq: *Splashes water on Tudeki* "Get up Tudeki, follow me."

Tudeki: *gets up slowly* "What now?"

Tacq: "Jopia woke up, he wants you."

Tudeki: "Ok."

When they get back-

Tudeki: "Hey Jopia, are you ok?"

Jopia: "Yeah, Mizuki took care of me."

Mizuki: "You shouldn't try to do magic you can't control Tudeki!"

Tudeki: "I know, but I was just testing it out."

Tacq: "It's my fault really, I shouldn't have told him to try out something I thought he couldn't control yet."

Mizuki: "Be careful next time... If that beam didn't split at the last minute, he'd be dead."

Jopia: "It's ok, you didn't mean to do it."

Tudeki: "I'm sorry." :(

Jopia: "I'm ok Tudeki, can you train me now?"

Mizuki: "You're still hurt."

Tacq: "Use the Spheres."

Mizuki: "Spheres?"

Tudeki: "Ok..." *Tudeki's sword turns white, and a white glowing sphere comes out of it, and it flies into Jopia.*

Jopia: "Wow!! The pain is gone!"

Tacq: {I have a feeling these powers are taking more out of him than he knows...} "Tudeki, when you use the magic from your sword, do you feel weak afterwards?"

Tudeki: "No... only after the beam."

Tacq: "Don't use more power than you can handle, or it will take a toll on you."

Tudeki: "Ok. I understand... I'm not strong enough yet to use the stronger spells without exhausting myself, right?"

Tacq: "Seems to be so... just don't push it. Don't use the hard to control spells, especially the beam unless it's absolutely necessary..."

Tudeki: "Ok, got it. Jopia, ready?"

Jopia: "Yes I am."

Tacq: "We have to find Zegar, and discuss some things, meet back here in an hour"

<Narrator>What do they have to discuss? Will Jopia be up to the training? Find out in the next exciting post!</Narrator>

[OOC] good idea roll, still i can kick his ass better then that ! [/OOC]

ZEGAR:"no need to find me, i was here even before the blast came in"
MIZUKI:"i didn't saw you"
ZEGAR:"i was over there, trying to figure out what kind of trap duraga is preparing for us ! glad my sword came in to help, or jopia would have had the beam head on"
MIZUKI:"your sword ? it's your sowrd who deflected the blast !"
*zegar start to explain a few things*
*the screen blurs into memory of the past*
zegar:"i was there during the night, i couldn't get to sleep knowing duraga's forces could have attacked us anytimes. so i asked my blade to protect this place"
*zegar shows a giant drawn circle on the ground*
Zegar:"so my blade protects whoever is inside. when the blast came in, my sword powered-up enough to deflect it, but the blast was too strong and the blast hitted the ground."
*blurring back into the present*
zegar:"but now my balde has to recharge her strenght. i have to let rest a little"
*shows his blade hanging on his side*
tacq:"that explain the strange energy i felt"
tacq:{i know that kind of energy, it was used by BLACK MAGICIAN who wanted to rule this universe 5000 years ago. that kind of power couldn't be controlled, but he seems to know everthing about the blade. does that mean... i should learn more about that legend. i sens a terrible fate for him !}
*tacq wasn't alone to be like that, mizuki seemed to have sensed it too*
Jopia`:"does that mean we don't have any protection from now on ?"
ZEGAR:"i'm afraid so ! we'll have to rely on each other for the next hours ! thanks to you tudeki, i now have to fight without my blade !"

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action reaction TANTUM, you did an action, you made the reaction became worst then it were !

[ooc]I could make it worse...but, I dunno. I think you've done enough already.[/ooc]

Mizuki looked at what she was cooking. So far, it seemed to be ok. The boys had ran off to have some fun, and she stayed behind to cook. Secretly, though, Mizuki was also practicing her magic and reading up on some spells and the histories of them. Today, she has engrossed herself in her book about the magics of the Water Sphere. While reading it, she stirs the pot of soup as it slowly cooks to it's best temperature. Suddenly, Mizuki's eyes go wide. She looks from the book, to the pot, and again to the book. Suddenly, Mizuki says some strange words, and the fire underneath the pot goes out. Mizuki looked into the pot, and saw that it was still boiling. She watched for 2 minutes...5 minutes... 12 minutes.... and finally at 30 minutes, Mizuki stopped looking at it, and she said some other strange words. Suddenly, the water stopped boiling. Mizuki looked around. She saw a couple of birds in the trees, chirping some song that was heard by only those who listened deeply enough. Mizuki also saw Corona laying by a bed of flowers, sleeping to his hearts content. At this she smiled and finally muttered another few words. Suddenly, a small bubble came out of her hand, and expanded itself. It expanded so large, that it covered the entire camp site. She walked out of the bubble, and hit it. It just shook for a second, and then went back to normal. Satisfied, Mizuki went back in, and finished the cooking.

In about five minutes the boys came back. They looked at the bubble, and called for Mizuki. Mizuki rushed over to them, and saw their peril. They pushed, kicked, slashed, and punched, but nothing allowed them to go through. Mizuki went outside the bubble, cut a hole out, and closed the hole up when they entered. Mizuki smiled at them as they asked what it was.

Mizuki: "It's a little water barrier I created with my magic. I think it should protect us..."
Zegar: "Good. Because my sword still needs to rest, and so do we."
Tacq: "I'm starved! What's for supper?"
Mizuki: "Hm? Oh, we're having Soup!"
Tudeki: "I was kinda in the mood for meat.. but.. this should do."
Mizuki: "If you want meat, you'll have to hunt for it, and since it is getting late, I do NOT want you going out."
Tudeki: "I can take care of myself..."
Jopia: "Yeah!"
Mizuki: "He sure didn't show it when he used the magic... whether Tacq suggested it or not. He should've known. Besides... I don't need him running off to get killed by who knows what. We have enough problems already."

Underneath Mizuki's kimono, the pendant she wore was glowing a bright blue color. Unseen by everyone else, Mizuki knew she had completed her basic training under the water sphere, and was now able to do some basic healing, water-based magic attacks, and basic protection...

[ooc]Finally.. I really am reading about these things, and I just finished that section. I'm moving onto the intermediate water sphere spells. I've been bored lately.[/ooc]

Tudeki: "After we rest, we must go to Duraga."

Mizuki: "I don't think you should be giving orders anymore, seeing how you put everyone in danger."

Tudeki: "I don't think it's up to any of us. Things are the way they will be. I'm not in control of what's going on, but the information I'm getting from Suko in my 'flashbacks' is all we have to go on."

Tacq: "I agree, Tudeki is the only reason we know where Duraga is, and what's going on."

Jopia: "I'll follow you to Lake Kasp Tudeki."

Zegar: "Tacq is right Tudeki has all the information we have to go on."

Mizuki: :angry: "Fine, but I'm still mad that you put us in danger for no reason."

Tacq: "It wasn't for no reason. If Tudeki was able to control the beam, we could have killed Duraga from here!"

Mizuki: "I guess you're right..."

Tudeki: "Besides, I was going to shoot it straight up, but I dropped the sword at the last second, due to the extreme heat the beam created."

Tacq: "He tried to pull the beam back up, but it was no use..."

Zegar: "Luckily my sword deflected it" ;)

Mizuki: "Yeah, I guess you're right, but be careful next time."

Tudeki: "I will, I don't plan on using that thing ever again."

Tacq: "Well, we must go to sleep now, Good night."

The gang goes to sleep.

<Narrator>Will anything happen during the night? Find out in the next exciting post!</Narrator>



[OOC] My guy is not physically the strongest(Zegar is), nor does he have the most vitality(Who does? Zegar??). He is the fastest, and thus has good defense... He also has the sword which gives him all those neat powers. But no one is dwarfed by Tudeki's power like you make it sound. It takes him a long time to pull off the powerful spells, and those ones drain him.

Besides, I'm spicing things up alot with all the new stuff I added i.e. the story about Suko and the sword. And the part about Duraga becoming a servant for Lord of the underworld who is trying to rid the world of powerful fighters.[/OOC]

Tudeki wakes up in the middle of the night. He walks away from the camp.

Tudeki: {How could I not control the beam? I'm the greatest Samurai on the planet, weilding the most powerful weapon on the planet... HOW CAN I NOT CONTROL THAT STUPID BEAM!!!!} "NO, I WILL NOT EXCEPT FAILURE!!!"

Tudeki holds his sword in the air and begins his meditation.

Tacq wakes up

Tacq: "oh no..."

Tacq runs outside and sees Tudeki's sword glowing Orange.

Tudeki looks over at Tacq.

Tudeki: "I must do this."

Tudeki fires the beam in the air... he begins pouring more and more energy into the beam. The beam becomes wider and wider. With more struggle, it begins to turn sideways....

Tudeki faints from the energy drain.

Tacq: "NO!!!"

Tacq runs over to Tudeki, and screams for help.

Mizuki and Zegar run over to them.

Mizuki: "What happened?"

Tacq: "He was controlling the beam, it was huge... but he's not moving now."

Mizuki: "He's breathing, he's alive. He seems to be in a state of coma."

Zegar: "Just our luck... You damn arrogant kid!!!"

Tacq: "What can we do for him?"

Mizuki: "Nothing much... he needs rest."

Zegar: "Tacq, you should teleport him and Jopia back to Thonia."

Mizuki: "We will go on without him?"

Zegar: "We must. There's no other option now."

Mizuki goes and wakes Jopia.

Jopia: "Whats going on?"

Mizuki: "Tudeki attempted to control his beam, and he's now in a coma."

Jopia runs outside.

Zegar: "We're sending you back to Thonia with Tudeki."

Tacq: "I really hate to do this... I'm gonna miss you two."

Zegar: "There's nothing else we can do."

Tacq: "Hold on to Tudeki, Jopia. I'll send you back to the Inn."

Jopia: "Good bye Mizuki, Zegar, and Tacq... I hope we see you again soon. Goodbye Corona, thanks for saving my life!!"

And then they were gone.


<Narrator>What will happen to our heroes without their friend Tudeki? What will happen to Tudeki? Find out in the posts to come!</Narrator>


[OOC] I'll take care of the Tudeki storyline, you guys concentrate on getting to Duraga [/OOC]

[OOC]
glad you are not in the story anymore...
why ?
because you broke the very first rule of ROLE PLAYING.
this is in too...
[/OOC]

ZEGAR:"let's continue this alone guys !"
MIZUKI:"let's go, we have not reached our destination yet !"
TACQ:"all three of us again !"
zegar:{if only we were three, but this guy who's following us around is there too.}
CORONA:"BARF !!!"
TACQ:"sorry, i meant four !"
*our heroes goes back on track with their journey*
*tacq, mizuki, and the rest followed up the lake borders to reach the next town*
CORONA:"BARF BARF !!!"
MIZUKI:"what is it corona ?"
*mizuki looks at what corona was looking*
MIZUKI:"what's with smoke ? could it be ..."
MIzuki:"GUYS !!!!"
*everyone looks at mizuki who is pointing the forest near the end of the lake*
TACQ:"that's KASP VILLAGE !"
*everyone runs to it*

<narator>what is waiting our heroes will be tell in the next exciting post, don't miss it !</narator>

[OOC]well, that will be a very good part of the story[/OOC]

[quote:post_uid0="SSJKarma"]glad you are not in the story anymore...
why ?
because you broke the very first rule of ROLE PLAYING.
[/quote]
[OOC]Dude... the reason Tacq said that, was because he figured out the monsters weaknesses.

and the reason Zegar said what he said, was that Tudeki knew what was going on... thus - all we have to go on (meaning, information wise)

And yes, he's the most powerful Samurai with the best weapon, that doesn't mean he's the strongest person/thing on the planet. (Note the word Samurai, not person)[/OOC]

[ooc]You're still calling yourself the most powerful of something with the strongest weapon. Take my character for example. I could say she's the most powerful caster, especially with that pendant, but I won't. She'd have to work up to that level, and not be there right at the beginning.[/ooc]

[OOC] Oh, my guy couldn't possibly be the most powerful Samurai?? You're telling me that it's impossible to be the most powerful Samurai? You could be the most powerful caster, no one would really care... it's a story, have fun. :D[/OOC]

Back in Thonia-

Jopia: "Can someone help me carry my friend to my house?"

Man: "Yeah sure kid."

Jopia and the Man carry Tudeki down the streets to his aunts house.

Man: "What do I get for payment?"

Jopia: "I don't have anything."

Man: *Looking at Tudeki's gem encrusted sword case* "This sword will be payment."

Jopia: "I don't think so."

Man: "I know so, punk."

The man grabs the sword.

Jopia lunges at him and punches him in the nose.

Jopia: "I said you're not taking my friends sword, now get out of here!"

The man runs down the street.

Jopia gently drags Tudeki over to the corner, and props his head up with a pillow. Jopia falls asleep on Tudeki's chest.


<Narrator> Will Tudeki be alright? Find out in the posts to come.</Narrator>

[OOC] Spicing it up? SPICING IT UP?! YOU'RE @#$%ING TAKING THE DAMN THING OVER! Introducing Gods and Goddesses, maybe this was a world without them, have you ever thought of that? And @#$%, don't make anyone say that 'if it weren't for you were wouldn't be here', that's just a really @#$%ed up thing to do, especially since we've been telling you to ease down on the "all powerfullness" for the past FIVE PAGES!
And you know what? Tacq's the fastest. haven't you ever read my posts? How he moves so fast that you can barely see him? That he's a master of Kenetics? Tudeki's a samuri, not a master of Kenetics. And yes, you did make your character the strongest and in one post, you "helped" create everyone's character, without permission. Let's see if I can find it... Oh yes, here it is.
"Tudeki: "Here are your estimated Fighting Spirits. Zegar's is 68, Tacq, your's is 54, Jopia's is 17, Mizuki's is 59, mine is 62, but with my Fathers Mystical Sword, it's 76.""
Well, with the sword he's the strongest, but he always has it so he's always the strongest... And what about all of our big battles? You always finish'em like... you friggin second post! It's really awesome when battles go on for like, a page or two. I could give you all an example of that... lemme find it now. Crap, the site's down. But, the battle went for a page or two and new challenges were added. And the only time your guy got hurt in a battle was when you were practicing with Zegar.
Well, that's my beef.

I'll let someone post what's in Kasp village... I'm really stink'n tired.[/OOC]

[OOC] I know I know, but I've been trying to even the score out... now Tudeki is in a coma because he went all out. He isn't as powerful as you make him out to be. and the only reason I "added on to other characters" is because you don't even tell enough about them that one could get a basic idea of their powers!! I've been very specific about what Tudeki can do. Maybe that is why he seems the most powerful. [/OOC]

[OOC]tantum, you didn't UNDERSTAND A #### FROM 12 PAGES OF STORY !
from the start i shown exactly what i could do, so has roll and so has razz ! YOU didn't see it in the first place as i NEVER made roll being in a DESPERATE place neither did i done that for any other ! but YOU came in and telled that our characters wouldn't be there if he wouldn't had come ! i am sorry but 50 monster against mizuki ! SHE WOULD HAVE WON IT ! but no, you said somthing like, SHE DOESN'T STAND A CHANCE ! and you made your text like she wasn't even able to fight ONE of them !

start to read and understand a little !
your characters aren't the HEROES around here !
WE ALL ARE ! WE ARE A TEAM ! not just a ONE MAN WAR with YOU as the LEADER.
again, you made my character all LICKING THE BOOS NUTS !
from the first page i was making my character the very worst COMPANION you could have.
men, he was like vegeta and you made him act like goku !
sorry but i am not the kind of person to let this pass !
we have been telling you how our characters was from the very start and you DARE tell us our characters are not very DETAILED ?

i't not our fault if you aren't reading right and if you don't know what RPing is !
you broke the very 2 rules of RP and you dare tell us to CHEER as it is only for fun ?
let's see it straight...

would it be FUN if you could get around ALL games like your were a god or something ?
let me take a guess...
when you first played DIABLO you CHEATED to have ALL weapons from the start ?

come on men, you have to DIMINISH your character stats and ABILITIES !

and YES, SAYING YOUR ARE THE MOST POWERFULL SAMURAI ON EARTH IS GOING FOR BEING STRONGER THEN ANYTHING !
having power is something kid, but playing a WEAK character is an ART and THAT is what makes RP the best games ever !


to others, i let you make the rest, i mean that i have been RP more then you all. come on, think of somethings sometimes ! don't mean to take it rude roll or razz, it's just that i am a little short on story right now. i have been acting like a DM from page 3 and that's the last thing i want ![/OOC]

[ooc]Hey,I`m new here at the posts,but Im a big fan of RPGs,and I`ve been following your posts.So I'd like to create 2 characters your characters meet on the way to Lake Casp,if you guys wouldn`t mind (if not,just discard me and my posts.You guys go good enough without me.).[/ooc]

Two large Dragons soar the skies above the heroes.One seems to be just like the true Asian Dragon,with a long,slender,snake-like body and multiple arms.The other resembled the outlawed Dragon of Europe,with wings and four arms.Behind them were a small brigade of other Dragons.The brigade slowly faltered and started shooting at the two in front with many different elements;they were burned with fire,bited by frost,scathed by wind,and battered by Earth.Dark and Light elementals in the back started charging somehow with energy,then joined their attacks in beams of energy.This forced the two Dragons in front to land.Battlescarred,they hurtled toward Kasp village while the others left the two for dead.But right before they hit ground,the Asian Dragon changed into a young man.The man had dark tan skin,long black spiky hair,and had many eternal scars on his body,the most noticeable being a long one from his eye to his chin.They curled up for a few minutes,but hurredly rose.The other Dragon stayed the same,unlike the transforming Asian.The Dragon healed the new human,who suddenly stood with Ninjitsu gear on,declaring himself a Ninja."Gomen-sai..."The once-Asian Dragon raised his hands up and they started glowing.Some of the Dragon`s scars healed.They slowly limped toward the heroes,the Dragon speaking a half-Japanese,half-reptilian tongue."Konni-wahr humar-jih.Watari ShinRyu Deru."He points to the human/Dragon."ShoRyu....Runaway..........Shinobis..."He gasps at his attempt of speaking the human tongue.The Human nodded."Brother says 'Hello,humans.I am ShinRyu.He is ShoRyu.We are runaway..........Shinobis.'He struggles to say the human words."We able to transform...we different...not wanted by Dragon...clan.We runaway.They find us.Hurt us.Consider us dead.But we live.Help,please."They were both considerably young,and only had slightly greater-than-human curative magic.

[OOC]good entrance dragondude, but ...
do not put everything on the very same paragraph.
do it like we did, like this...

SSJKARMA:"blah blah blah"
DRAGONDUDE:"blah blah blah"

doing so help us in UNDERSTAND what you are saying !
i had lots of trouble understanding your post. that makes it ROUGH afterwards ![/OOC]

ZEGAR:"well, i am no leader nor am i asking you to join ! we are on a journey that do not concern you. do whatever you want !"
MIZUKI:"ZEGAR ! they are victims in here, we cannot just let them alone without helping them !"
TACQ:"zegar is right thou, we cannot involve other in our own journey !"
MIZUKI:"but..."

TO BE CONTINUED...

[OOC]sorry i couldn't think of anything else to say or do, i let ROLL or RAZZ do the rest. [/OOC]

Sorry to come out of no where,but Roll did you copy the URL for the page the "Moogle Hunting Thread" was on.

I want a link so I can see it again.

[OOC] SSJKarma, you're telling dragondude not to put everything in one paragraph, that's the reason i couldn't read the beginning of the story, that's all you people did!

You're making it sound like I came in the story at the end, I've been here 2/3rds of the way!!

You've been RPing longer than anyone?? You're the only one who doesn't know what the f-ck they're doing.

Wow, "your character is all powerful" No, he isn't... And so what if he was? I also have the weakest character in the group too.

You people are afraid to add more to the story (for some weird reason). No, you didn't explain your characters specifically, you only give off some powers a character can do, I gave out all the powers mine can. You hide too much... and it leads to other people posting stuff that you don't like. It's not my fault, it's your fault. [/OOC]

[OOC] This isn't a run on paragraph?? and there are many almost this big!





Mizuki went over to the bat. It squeaked, and moved it's wings, then flew onto Mizuki's hand. Mizuki looked at it, as the world came into another memory. She was about 13 months old at this time. Mizuki looked around, only to see herself walking around. Seemed like she was already walking well enough to move fast. She was moving around like crazy, but suddenly stopped when she saw a blue bird. She marveled at it's flight as it soared through the blue sky. Suddenly, lil Mizuki was flapping her arms and running after the bird. She was trying to fly. The blue bird moved farther and farther away, until it disappeared out of view. Lil Mizuki stopped and fell on her butt, and looked really sad. 'Wow,' thought Mizuki 'I really DID have such wonders.' A small little animal was coming towards lil Mizuki. It had wings on it, and it flapped them frantically as it headed in her direction. It finally jumped up and flew, but not until lil Mizuki grew to understand that you needed wings to fly, or as she said it, thin stuff. Finally the world around her went black again, as the bat flew away from Mizuki. Mizuki looked around, and finally moved onto the stick. When Mizuki looked at it, it bore a marking. She read it, but her eyes glazed over again. "Mizuki." Mizuki looked at the world around her as it turned, not into a bright sunny day, but into a clouded, gloomy night. She was in her cottage in the ice cold mountains of the Ancient Algora Tribe. Mizuki walked around in the house, looking for herself. She moved all around the house, and finally found herself on the floor asleep under a blanket. She looked about 2 years old. Mizuki moved around more, and looked all over the place for the black figures that resided in her every memory, which she thought to be her parents. Finally, she went into the kitchen. There were wolves on the floor, dead. Next to them lay the black figures, lying in a pool of blood. Mizuki's eyes filled with tears, as she looked at the site. Suddenly, another wolf came out of no where, and sniffed at the black figures. This wolf had a gray coat of fur, looked wise, was male, was about 1 year old (human terms) and was familiar. It licked one of the figures in an attempt to get their attention. After a time of attempts, the wolf stopped, and finally moved around the house as if looking for something. Mizuki followed it all around the house, until it finally stopped next to lil Mizuki. It sniffed at lil Mizuki, whined, and ran away. Mizuki stood here wondering what had happened to the figures that she believed to be her parents. After a bit of thought, she came to no possible conclusion about the figures fate, but figured out that they were her parents. She stopped thinking when the wolf finally returned with a basket, a blanket, and a stick. The wolf picked up lil Mizuki without waking her up, and placed her inside the basket. Then, he placed the blanket over Mizuki, and then placed the stick next to her. Lil Mizuki suddenly woke up and looked around. She saw the wolf and giggled. "Corona!" said lil Mizuki, and the wolf licked her face twice, starting continuous giggles. Finally, Corona picked up the basket, and started out of the house. Mizuki followed them both through the forest filled with snow, ice, and serenity all around. When they finally got out of the forest, (about 1 minute, since they were dashing as fast as they could) lil Mizuki coughed twice. Corona just twitched his eyes at her, and Mizuki looked at herself. Her nose was red, and she was shivering a little bit. Corona started to cross some ice. It moved fast, but with deepest caution. He finally made it about half way, and looked a little less worried. Lil Mizuki was awake now. She pulled the blanket over herself for warmth, and lifted her hand to touch Corona's face. Corona looked at her as she touched his face, continuing his way.... and then the ice broke underneath him. Corona immediately threw his paws onto the ice in front of him, and he tried as hard as he could to climb back up. Lil Mizuki was scared and shivering from the water, and eventually, saw the look on Corona's face. She closed her, scrunched up her face, and began chanting something. "terepooto" repeated lil Mizuki over and over, until finally, she and Corona disappeared. Mizuki looked all around, and saw both of them on the other side of the ice. Taking into mind what lil Mizuki just said, she went over to Corona and lil Mizuki, who were moving on. They eventually stopped in front of a house, where lil Mizuki fell asleep, and Corona left her there in front of the door. Finally, Corona scratched the door a few times, and Mizuki heard a yell. Corona gave lil Mizuki one lick, and ran off into another forest. Suddenly, the door opened, and the world went black again. Mizuki was shocked. This was how everything happened. How she was adopted, how she never knew her parents, and how she felt more secure in the wild. She looked around her and found the last thing. She moved to it, and saw Zegar and Tacq, standing there looking around in a worried way. Finally, after taking one last look at the world around her, she touched the ball of light, and said something. The light finally shaped itself into a golden pendant. She took it in her hands, and examined it. It was gold, heavy, and had black around a small circle of gold in the middle. She took it, and finally put it on. Then everything was blindingly bright.



Who the hell is gonna read that without getting a headache?

Plus what's with the font colors that NO ONE CAN READ!!!
[/OOC]

[ooc]It`s okay Tantum,no trouble.Just that every other RPG online I`ve been to,controlling the other character gets you kicked out.[/ooc]

*The two Dragons stood there,licking their wounds,hoping the humans would heal them.But secretly,they started channeling their energy as much as they could,and established telepathy!*
ShinRyu:>Should we eat them if they refuse to heal us?<

ShoRyu:>No,Shin,we just leave...But if they show disrespect to us WHEN they don`t heal us...<

*A low growl emits in his throat*:angry:

*Zegar looked menacingly at the ShoRyu`s growl,then to Mizuki*

Zegar:"Your call."

*Tacq nodded*

[To be continued!]

[OOC]How was that?[/OOC]

[OOC]DDude, that was pretty cool. I like your characters :D [/OOC]

Well, actually, there's always room for help. But...
Mizuki," But?"
Something about these guys turning into dragons just doesn't kick my jollies.
Zegar," what?"
I don't really like the idea...
While the group was disussing the matter, the "dragon-people" were staring at Tacq, Mizuki, Corona, and Zegar. Tacq found their gaze un-easy.
Nope, I don't trust them. I think the safest thing to do right now would be to just walk away.
Mizuki," WHAT! Look at them! the least we could do is heal them a bit! Come on!"
Zegar," Tacq's right... it's dangerous."
Tacq nods and watches the injured two in the corner of his eye. Tacq doesn't want to just leave them there... hurt and injured, but he doesn't want harm to come to anyone. Confusion swept over him and Corona could see it in Tacq's eyes. Corona came up to Tacq, and Tacq knew that if it were human it would be giving him some good advice about now. Tacq gave off a quickly fading smile then looked at Mizuki and Zegar. Zegar was leaning against a tree with his arms crossed, and Mizuki seemed to be slightly pouting, Tacq could tell she wanted to help them.
Mizuki... I'm not your boss or anything. If you want to help them, go. Go heal their wounds. But...
Tacq sighed.
But, I don't want you to get hurt.

[/OOC]oOoOoOoOo[/OOC]

[OOC]on tantum, i won't be telling anything new right now, but i won't DISCUSS anymore with you either !

FINE, you made your character all powerfull and have the WEAKEST character at the same ! let me tell you that fighting moinsters and knowing EVERY of their WEAK SPOTS is just no fun at all !

if we did not do it right ? then why have we only troubles with you in here ? ROLL, RAZZ, ME, we have no troubles and are not yelling at each other ! even DDude seems to be good !

anyway...[/OOC]

ZEGAR:"and again, we are helping peoples that could just be with DURAGA. i mean, they could be our demise if they wanted to kill us right ? don,t know for your part, but i can't fight dragons in my present state !"
*Zegar shows his fists*
Tacq:"i understand"
Mizuki:"i too but you have to understand me, i cannot just leave knowing those two could die without my help !"
*Tacq looks at mizuki, then at zegar and sigh*
Zegar:"do what you want mizuki, but i won't be of any help if it turn to the worst !"
TACQ:"neither will i mizuki !"
Mizuki:"understood !"

TO BE CONTINUED ...

[OOC] I know, the monster weakness thing was accident, I wont do that stuff again. [/OOC]

dang there are to many threads like this!

Yeah? Well, this one's been going on for over a month... and TJ got his idea off of Razz. So go complain to TJ, not us.