the thing is...
ALL, and i mean ALL you characters are ALL the very same !
- all have 3 super form
- are all human
- have rip-off picture of SUIKODEN 2, FINAL FANTASY and CHONO TRIGGER
- have pretty much all the same BASIC attacks !

now where the originality of all those SUPOSED heores ?
i probably made only 2 chars, but they are very different in story, weapons and powers ! i say, do 1 chars but do it very good !

no need to have ALL the very same POWERS, RACE and LEVELS !

Name:Jeff

Age:21

Home planet:Earth Medievil time period

Home town:Faloder Kingdom

Race: human/warlock

Jeff is a mystic knight one who can weild a sword and use black magic. And has beating many kindoms in battle. And it's to be that he is invincble, he has a legedary sword of light.

Weapon: Sword,Bow & arrow,Staff.

Armour: Mythril helmet,plate,legs, and kite shield

Magic spells: Jeff can cast spells to destory a whole group of Beast. Elments of Earth, Fire, Water, Wind,thunder,and ice.
his magic can be used to enhance his weapons or armour to damge monsters in the elments. And make his armour resist magic elments.
Jeff even has his own full grown dragon with scales of myrhril,
and the ablity to fly,swim and use fire or ice spells. And the dragon is manily Jeff's protector from childhood.

[quote:post_uid0="SSJKarma"]the thing is...
ALL, and i mean ALL you characters are ALL the very same !
- all have 3 super form
- are all human
- have rip-off picture of SUIKODEN 2, FINAL FANTASY and CHONO TRIGGER
- have pretty much all the same BASIC attacks !

now where the originality of all those SUPOSED heores ?
i probably made only 2 chars, but they are very different in story, weapons and powers ! i say, do 1 chars but do it very good !

no need to have ALL the very same POWERS, RACE and LEVELS ![/quote]
YES!! karma is RIGHT!

you ppl are too fckin obsessed with dbz and rpgs by squaresoft.

there's a lot better quality rpgs and anime in the world than those fcked up crap.

this should be called fan fiction, not create new characters, cause what you ppl are basically doing is create fake characters out of already existing crap.

go get some originality! create something more unique, AMAZE us with your imagination!

ok...i kno this might not be the greatest...but this is my first character (and plz dun make fun of the picture) i drew it on the comp...which took...a long time ??? oook...so here it is :
This is the picture...click

Name: Angel
Age: 16
Race: Mercurian/Earthling
Home Planet: Earth
Home Town: unknown

Story:
When Angel was just a child, her family was brutally murdered by an anonymous gang. The reason was unknown. She was the only survivor. The gang had taken her back to their base and brainwashed her so that she would forget everything about her past. They trained her, teaching her fighting techniques and she became the greatest fighter in their gang. By herself, she found out that she had magnificent mind powers. And so, she continued her life as a gang member, training her newfound powers and perfecting her fighting skills.
One day, Angel was training and she suddenly remembered the brutal murder of her family. Another thing that was really weird was that she remembered her former life. She learned that she was really a Mercurian goddess that ruled the Mercurian kingdom for some time. Her home planet was slowly being taken over by a secret alliance that was planning to conquer the whole solar system. Not wanting that to happen, Angel

not bad, keep it up ppl.....

You want some originality? I'll give you originality.

Name: Gohan X
Age: unknown
Race: Human/Sayain/Reploid
Planet:Earth

Description: He is teh ultimate fighter. He has never lost a single match and everyone fears him. He uses his laser gun that's atached to his arm. When he defeats an enemy, he learns one of their moves(like megaman).

Moves:
-KamehamehahX
-Charge Shot
He learns more when he defeats enemies.




lmfao :laughlong:

The Evil side of Angel is unearthed...

Name: DevilishAngel

This is Angel's badside. Considering she was in training with that bad gang, she has an evil side. This rarely happens because Angel tries to keep her power intensity low. What happened is that not all of the brainwashing that happened to Angel went away, and sometimes, if she powers up too much or uses her mind powers to their full potential, not only does she become stronger, but she becomes more evil too.
When Angel becomes evil, her clothes turn black, her hair turns dark violet/black, and her eyes turn to a dark violet with a hint of red. This takes out a lot of energy from Angel once she turns back to normal. o yes, to turn back to Angel, she either loses too much energy and turns back to Angel...oor something happens which forces to turn back to Angel...which i'm not gonna tell ya cuz...well...i'm not sure myself lolz . :(

Moves:
Fighting: kicking, punching etc.

Mind Moves: unfortunately, when Angel turns to DevilishAngel, DevilishAngel can use mind powers too which r also kinda more powerful...

Black Hole: This takes the opponents power, energy, and strength and is either disposed, or DevilishAngel takes it for her own uses.

Asteroid Laser: Little small energy balls that explode with a tremendous amount of energy.

Dark Illusions: DevilishAngel forms illusions that trick the mind.

Io Arrow Blast: An arrow made of lava/fire is formed and shot.

Mind Control: Same as Angel's

Flying: Same as Angel's except her wings are dark violet

Demonic Meteorite Beam: A beam that shoots at the opponent from all directions.

oook the evil angel is done :) hope itz ok.

[quote:post_uid4="Nantuko Joe"][quote:post_uid4]You want some originality? I'll give you originality.

Name: Gohan X
Age: unknown
Race: Human/Sayain/Reploid
Planet:Earth

Description: He is teh ultimate fighter. He has never lost a single match and everyone fears him. He uses his laser gun that's atached to his arm. When he defeats an enemy, he learns one of their moves(like megaman).

Moves:
-KamehamehahX
-Charge Shot
He learns more when he defeats enemies.[/quote:post_uid4]

[color=green:post_uid4]I don't know if I should take that post seriously or as a joke...[/color:post_uid4][/quote:post_uid4]
[color=blue:post_uid4]Hey Joe take it as a Joke :lol: :biggrin:

I am going to post my character in here.

Just need a bit more time to work on some detail's.[/color:post_uid4]

ALL my characters are original I made them up b4 I even saw DBZ b4 and I could only find icons that look kewl for them on square game sites So get off my case.

Good characters ppl ( cept tantum since he stole my 2 ppl and made them sickos )

oh yeah, not copyed !
SUPER HUMAN 1 = SSJ1
SUPER HUMAN 2 = SSJ2
SUPER HUMAN 3 = SSJ3

the fact they are HUMAN can pass at some extends !
you didn't even tryed to do YOUR OWN pictures ! i did if you never notice my AVATAR and BANNER.

no, that are just some example...
to complement them all....
THEY ARE FOR DRAGONBALL AF
no, you never created them you just copyed them from DBZ and changed them a little !

as for nantuko, i never said you weren't original...
like me you made DBZ chars, but ones that were never seen on any of the manga or serie. that classify in ORIGINALS as they are unique !

Just cause I put Dragon ball Af dont mean nothin I made those characters b4 I ever even heard of dragon ball but I just pUt Dragon ball af so the thread would have more feeling hence the name Anime or game characters :plain:

[color=#000000:post_uid8]Edit: Links and Photos Don't work[/color:post_uid8]



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Joe, take it as a joke :D


Okay, here's a real origional character.

Name: Tacq Allegoed
Race: Believed to be human, but some say he has been sent from the Heavens
Planet: Earth
Home: Seraphim's Calling HQ
Age: 17

Physical Description:
He has short silver hair with two seperate bangs that hang down over his eyes. He has a skin-tight dark purple shirt and dark blue baggy pants. He wears a blue sash around his waist and wears a black cape. His eyes are a piercing green.

Equipment:
Tacq uses throwing knives... and that's about it. :eh:

Bio Thingie:
As a baby, Tacq was found asleep in a forest near the main headquarters of the clan Seraphim's Calling. This clan were like the unnoficial police of the near-by towns. Their arch enemy clan was Skull Dusect. Tacq was raised by SC (Seraphim's Calling) because there was no one who knew of the boy. SC raised Tacq to be a fierce warrior, but kind hearted and gentle. Tacq is a master of Kenetics, meaning he can move almost as fast as light itself making throwing knives his ideal weapon. Tacq is not very strong muscle-wise, but he is strong in the mind. Tacq is one who doesn't believe in using magic, but he is training in the arts of Light. He just recently learned how to teleport large groups of objects and/or people and animals using his power of Light. Near the end of each day, Tacq spends around half of an hour gathering energy from the sun to prepare him for any possible attacks at night. Unknown to him and his comrads, there is more to Tacq than meets the eye.

There. That's my character. :alien: :eh:

[quote:post_uid0="Roll"]Wow, you guys! You're characters are very.... Cute! ^-^ But then again, everything is cute to me, so that's not really saying much, is it? Oh well, I like the characters anyway! I'll make one too!

Name:Yae Hanabatake
Meaning: flourishing flower garden
Kanji: http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Flourishing.gifhttp://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Hanabatake.gif
Age: 18
Race: Human
Hometown: Harajuku, Japan
Homeplanet: Earth
Anime: .....She's, like, kinda not from any?

Yae Hanabatake is just like any girl... unless you count the fact she was born on christmas, and that she had natural green hair since she was born. She had also been blessed with the ability to use ki, but it was unknown to her. She lived a normal life in the snowy mountains, and spent a lot of time outside, exploring forests, higher mountains, lakes, ponds, and buildings. One day, though, she went into a very tall building, and found herself in a room with a lot of tube-like cages holding mutated monsters. She saw them, and was seen, and then security took her to the Scientist behind the dirty work. He began to run tests on the girl, and noticed that she had an immense amount of ki, and wanted to experiment with the Ki. But one night, out of fear from a sound, Yae threw a projectile of ki at her door, and it was destroyed. She looked at her hands for a few minutes, and then escaped. She ran all the way back home, but when she got there, she found her family slaughtered on the living room floor. She mourned what happened, and eventually went into a fighting dojo about 20 miles away from her house seeking training to harness her ki abilities. Her master, Cho Chang, knew only the basic use of using ki as an attack force. When she taught Yae how to use her ki, Yae used the training to be able to use more advanced forms of using it, and was soon able to shoot beams, strengthen her attacks, and do some other things with her ki. Now, at the age of 18, she works for a justice organization called "Secure Thoughts". She has become the best agent in her fields, which are investigation, and undercover investigation.

She doesn't have power stages, but she looks like... this:

http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Mizukipf.jpg

Attacks as of her current level (yes, I know I am copying Mizuki):

Enmai: a mixture of Ki, strength, and elegance. This attack has the elemental attribute of wind and can only be used at close range. Perfect for any enemy. http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Enmai.gif

Kyokuenmai: A ki blast with the force of a...er... (looking for example)....Oh! The Kamehameha Wave thingy! Has the elemental attribute of ice. Perfect against beasts, and can sometimes freeze the opponent! http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Kyokuenmai.gif

Kenmaikyaku: A non-elemental aerial attack that can be used in close range, and mid-range, but not far range. Great for flying enemies, but bad for beasts. http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Kenmaikyaku.gif

Renenmai: Another mixture of even more ki, more strength, and more elegance, but with added differences. Can be used from any range, and has the elemental attribute of water. Very good against human fighters. http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/RenenmaiMizuki.gif

Chiyu No Uta: A song that has the strange ability to heal. This can be good and bad, but mostly good. Doesn't fully heal, and can only heal the one person that is focused on when singing the song.[/quote]

additional info>Music: (Mp3's away!<!--emo&;)
1: Theme ( ! )
2: Desperate attempts

Additional Info>Character>Attacks>Additional attacks due to level ups in the past month:
Hoshi no Ame: A lot of Shooting Stars target a group of enemies, and pummels them for Holy Damage. Uses MP.
Kiseki no Umi: Water-based healing and protection, causes all allies to be healed, and gives protection from fire/ice/water/earth damage for a limited time. Uses MP.
Juden Inmetsu: Thunderbolts surround the enemy, closing in on them, until they are finally shocked! Can cause status effects (slow, confuse, stop) and uses MP.

[quote:post_uid0="Razz"]Joe, take it as a joke :D


Okay, here's a real origional character.

Name: Tacq Allegoed
Race: Believed to be human, but some say he has been sent from the Heavens
Planet: Earth
Home: Seraphim's Calling HQ
Age: 17

Physical Description:
He has short silver hair with two seperate bangs that hang down over his eyes. He has a skin-tight dark purple shirt and dark blue baggy pants. He wears a blue sash around his waist and wears a black cape. His eyes are a piercing green.

Equipment:
Tacq uses throwing knives... and that's about it. :eh:

Bio Thingie:
As a baby, Tacq was found asleep in a forest near the main headquarters of the clan Seraphim's Calling. This clan were like the unnoficial police of the near-by towns. Their arch enemy clan was Skull Dusect. Tacq was raised by SC (Seraphim's Calling) because there was no one who knew of the boy. SC raised Tacq to be a fierce warrior, but kind hearted and gentle. Tacq is a master of Kenetics, meaning he can move almost as fast as light itself making throwing knives his ideal weapon. Tacq is not very strong muscle-wise, but he is strong in the mind. Tacq is one who doesn't believe in using magic, but he is training in the arts of Light. He just recently learned how to teleport large groups of objects and/or people and animals using his power of Light. Near the end of each day, Tacq spends around half of an hour gathering energy from the sun to prepare him for any possible attacks at night. Unknown to him and his comrads, there is more to Tacq than meets the eye.

There. That's my character. :alien: :eh:[/quote]
I like your character Razz ;) ;)

TJ5, the idea was to copy your characters, i was making fun of you, i wasn't trying to make original characters, the idea was, I'm saying you wouldn't know an original character if it hit you in the ass.

...And you wouldn't know proper Netiguette if it danced in front of you naked wearing a tea cozy... :dozingoff:

Heh. Why beat around the bush? Don't act fake online, be yourself... and don't be afraid to tell someone off if needs be.

my custom character would have to be a fusion between ss3 Gohan and kid buu :D

Tantum I belive my characters are original because I made them up....... and I dun care what others think about them as long as I am happy with them. :plain:
Ok ppl could we now go back to making characters and try not to dissrespect others characters. If you have nothing nice to say do not say anything at all :laughlong:

TJ5, you talk about originality, but have you ever look in the dictionnary to actually know what ORIGINALITY means ?

i think not, as originality isn't just somthing you made out yourself. it is something you made out yourself that is UNIQUE and never seen from anything already existing !

my characters are based on DBZ UNIVERSE but have you ever saw characters near mines in DBZ ? no, because they are UNIQUE !

UNIQUEness make the chars ORIGINAL not the fact you pulled them out of your head !
i could just make another GOKU clone and say, he is ORIGINAL ! but the fact is, he would still be the exact same as goku and wouldn't be ORIGINAL at ALL !

First off this is TJ's topic so flaming the person that made the topic you are posting in makes you seem a bit undeservering. So what if his characters are not perfectly out of his head. His ideal was original atleast. So stop being critics,and make your own custom character.

i already made two, SBYRD5 !

and i think it is useless to make 25 charcters just to try and show you can do it !
and that's 2x true if all the characters you make are all IDENTICAL !

yes, i'm a critic ! so what ?
at least i'm not saying he sucks !
i'm saying he could be MUCH more original !

anyway...
this isn't a flame topic so i'll stop talking cause i am SURE someone will say i am flaming which i am not !
i just say, BE ORIGINAL people !
don't just make the same charcater over and over !
it is so easy to make a character when you always use the same PROCESS !

ppl who can't create original characters have no talents

if they had any, they would be able to use their talents to create original characters

Name:Dero
Age:19
Hometown:Tokio,Japan
Planet:Earth
Race:human]
Animine:None

Orphaned when he was a boy he wondered around the world his bayonit by his side.

Wepons:Bayonit, Its like a gun blade only in rifle way

Looks like this
http://http://www.rpgdreamer.com/rpg...wa2/wa2-15.jpg

Attacks,
Kirsuin Mekanoun: a Blade attack with a shot of the gun
Kibdau:a Firey Slash with a sword
Dragon Slash:A GIANT COMBO With a all element slash and a shower of bullets

I am not going to even argue with you 2 anymore or even try to convince u But im gonna say this - ALL Characters are original in thier own way, the only way a character wouldnt be original is if I say - EX. I take cell and copy him and say I made him. Thats not original, Everyones characters are original because no one copied something from a series, They made thier own ppl with own powers And the reason I made so many ppl is because its 4 a story....

[color=#000000:post_uid8]Edit: Links Don't work[/color:post_uid8]



Edited By TJ5 on 1101439904

[quote:post_uid0="Tantum"]TJ5, the idea was to copy your characters, i was making fun of you, i wasn't trying to make original characters, the idea was, I'm saying you wouldn't know an original character if it hit you in the ass.[/quote]
*Tacq hits TJ5 in the ass with a baseball bat*

TJ5," GET LOST YOU DAMN DBZ KNOCK-OFF!!!"

*Tacq laughes and walks away* :buttrock:

Dude ur an idiot....

Edit: ^ that was a joke, we used to all get along back then



Edited By TJ5 on 1101439755

Razz great you used your made up character.mean,but good.

ok,

*KHCloud looks at TJ,and takes his sword and slowly walks away.*

Cool,yes,no :laughlong:

Um the story was supposed to be like roll's old story not the rpg game......... heh .... :laughlong:

You mean like the moogle hunting story?

Exactly roll ! lol

Well I started the thread for the story so post the rest of it

Character Creation - I made 3 games on various game making programs and have made some of the characters you used to call un-original, I will admit thier powers weren't entirely original because I had no basis to work with at the time. My resources weren't that great and I was just starting in the game creating hobby.

Name: Tommy
Age: 19
Race: Human
Home Planet: Earth
Home Town: South City

Bio - Tommy went through a lot as a kid, He fought off many enemies to protect his friends and family. The 1st was a power hungry murderor. The second was a demon with extraordinary powers. The third was a General that wanted all other races on earth to be annihilated besides humans. Through all those troubles he always relied on his instincts and will to go on. Then one night he awoke from hearing screams and explosions and looked out his window..."What are those things" he said as he stared at his neighborhood being torn apart by shadowy figures. Tommy ran downstairs to be confronted by these figures in his own living room. Fighting past them he got outside only to see his mentor Ricky be tossed around by a tall man right infront of his eyes. Tommy rushed the man but was smacked away like a bug. Bleeding and bruised Tommy staggered to his feet and tried to confront this man again. The man punched Tommy into the outside wall of his home and it crumbled down on him. Ricky then attacked the man but was destroyed almost instantly with a flash of light from his hands.. A dark figure kicked the man backwards and ran towards the rubble on top of Tommy and dug him out. "I'm going to get you out of here" The figure said. Tommy awoke the next day in a field face down bleeding everywhere....he couldn't stand...A rescue team found him and took him to SHIELD base.
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Now 19 Tommy is forced with the task to find the monster who ruined his life...and killed his friends and family...



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