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`Crystal 12-02-2004 05:52 PM

hold u can post any type of poems right? not juss sad love and stuff like dat?

Riseabove 12-02-2004 06:45 PM

anything you want bro....yeah i know, alot of love stuff. that seems to be the motivation for most writers these days.

say whatever you want tho. thats why i am jsut writing things up on the spot.

Jewel03 12-05-2004 08:32 AM

i like those poem.becuz i cant really write poems that good

SBYRD5 12-06-2004 07:11 PM

Grass was cyan,
Desire was in the air,
The winter wind swirled in the curls of her hair.
The trees embraced the land..like straightened hair,
And the grass hazed as a goatee...for everyone to see.

I waltz into the world...alone my soul wasn't alive.
Till I began to walk...I ventured from homes.
Everyone told me thier stories..and invited me to remeber thier memories...

With thier soul came experience....with experience came wisdom.
I was only a teenager with the hair of a drunken master,
So much wisdom I have gathered for only being 1 month from Adultry...

This is my story....supplied by me..byrd....not a poultry....




Edited By SBYRD5 on 1102389190

Sportschick155 12-14-2004 04:42 PM

hmm,,

SBYRD5 12-15-2004 12:39 PM

She said she could treat me better,but she abandoned me,
Sticked my heart then decided to hand it to me,
Evey woman in my life abandons me,
Drives lunatics like me near insanity,
I'm not a toy soldier...when I break I break,
I'm not from harlem...when I'm cold I shiver..I don't shake,

I smoke in my longevity,
Jimi Hendrix "Purple Haze" is my gravity,
That keeps me to earth grounds....from riding an escalada to heaven bounds,
This isn't a rap this is my own sound...my heart is distroyed...when well that guy in a robe..descend from heaven to end it all...maybe now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


:down:




Edited By SBYRD5 on 1103143274

75-1103076306 12-15-2004 12:58 PM

[quote:post_uid0="Sportschick155"]hmm,,[/quote]
Well i like those poems they are realy good.Here is myn

Every thing is dark purpl and blue
The girl who i love is looking rgith at you
i think in my head how dare you
i looke at the guy who tooke my gurl mad and blue
I just want to rush your head and stab you
but if i do the gurl in purple in blue will miss you
then she will go boo hoo

Short but it was ok.

SBYRD5 12-15-2004 01:01 PM

I was angry today..better take it out in another post here...


MY eye's searching like an eagle,
My hands tensed ready to let the marrow escape,
My heart is burning red...my pulse is quick,
MY ears are being eaten alive by haters an exlovers that bring words that break my clique..I took so long to build my heart with bricks,

So bad love is the big bad wolf..blowing our hearts down,
Or is it just my humanity being questioned on this lifestream,

I MEAN "Who am I." "like phuck who am I"
A lad making ends meet on a burger King Salary...my escape being my words,
If I was mute I'd have nothing...like a painter that paint's landscapes being blind,

My depression creates insects whenever I close my eyes and try to think with my mind,

I got tooth decay from kissing a princess so sweet even a queen of spades couldn't resist her...

And now I'm something less to her....
Once I meant more to her than my mother's birthright to my last name,
All a young man like me can do is just tie on his du-rag tight...and keep wearing his chain....=/



:dozingoff:




Edited By SBYRD5 on 1103235354

75-1103076306 12-15-2004 07:06 PM

[quote:post_uid0="SBYRD5"]I was angry today..better take it out in another post here...


MY eye's searching like an eagle,
My hands tensed ready to let the marrow escape,
My heart is burning red...my pulse is quick,
MY ears are being eaten alive by haters an exlovers that bring words that break my clique..I took so long to build my heart with bricks,

So bad love is the big bad wolf..blowing our hearts down,
Or is it just my humanity being questioned on this lifestream,

I MEAN "Who am I." "like phuck who am I"
A lad making ends meet on a burger King Salary...my escape being my words,
If I was mute I'd have nothing...like a painter that paint's landscapes being blind,

My depression creates insects whenever I close my eye's and try to think with my mind,

I got tooth decay from kissing a princess so sweet even another queen of spades couldn't resist her...

And now I'm something less to her....
Meant more to her than my mother's birthright to to my last name,
All a young man like me can do is just tie on his du-rag tight...and keep wearing his chain....=/



:dozingoff:
[/quote]
That was a good poem and sbyrd you looke like carmello lol. thats my name 2 i looke just like him i realy do.well thats what all the girls say.

theWhale 12-16-2004 02:08 PM

id post my pic but i cant find student card..........damn..
ill post this instead:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6.../woviejugg.jpg


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