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SBYRD5 12-24-2002 09:39 AM

[ooc]SSJKarma=Alright, Karma your right your character did teleport away,but when I posted Karma moving at the speed of light I kinda meant he teleported.(I should've been more clear).

SolidSnake=When I was reading your post I found out that Choas Dragon has a father named Delrith Dragon(King of Dragons).When I read the post about Angelwings fighting Choas I thought it would be cool to include his father.

TJ5=Have you started another story?

Angelwings=Oh, I draw alot it's not the best picture,but we can understand who is in the picture,and the emotions in the picture so it's fine.(Your character is drawn the best)

I suppose I will do some editting now. :([ooc]
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EDIT= Choas Takes Phoenix Prisoner
(Sorry for missing with your story Angelwings)
Phoenix's Capture/Chase To Lord Khan's Ship

KHCloud=How do we reach the spaceship,and find solidsnake?

*Everyone is silent for a moment*

Logan=We could follow the dragons to the spaceship,but how would we ever get them from attempting to kill us.

*Logan reaches into his pocket,and pulls out a lighter,and some C4*

Logan=Look we have to have a divergen...Phoenix you seem to be the strongest here.

Phoenix=Me

Logan=Yes YOU! You seem to be the only one of us that can stand up to the attack of those dragons.

Phoenix=I might can defeat Choas,but Delrith....he seems so powerful.

KH,Chuck= :( Thats true.

Logan=I don't need you to fight the dragons just distract them,and surive in the mean time we will us the C4 packets.We have to aim a direct attack at both of them.For it to count.

Chuck=Sounds dangerous,but it sounds like a winning plan.

KH=Hmmm How close do we have to be to use the C4.

Logan=We are going to send Phoenix in first with explosives to distract the dragons then we toss the C4 out of the hanger for a surpise attack.

KH=So we have to fly above them?

Chuck=Hmm I think this is to dangerous for phoenix maybe a I should do this.

Phoenix=I can handle anything mortal.I'll be your distraction,but be sure not to get spotted.

Chuck=I'll fly this ship so we can move in stealth.

KH=This is my ship Chuck!!

*Chuck and KHCloud have a staring contest,but is interupted when Logan speaks*

Logan=I'm flying this mission...sit down,and shut...upz.

KH/Chuck=Whatever..

*So the gang of fighters are informing each other on the set up of the attack when something makes the "The Whale"(The space ship) shake villiantly*

KHCloud=What the hell was that!!

Phoenix=It must be the dragons...

Meanwhile(outside the ship)

Delrith=You are my son I know you can tackle harder than that.

Choas=ARRRGGGgggHhhhh

*Choas Dragon tackles the "The Whale"(The space ship) again*

Choas=Phoenix...OH PHOENIX...COME OUT AND PLAY!

Delrith=I'm returning to the spaceship to see what torture has befallen this SolidSnake fellow.

Choas=Where is LiquidSnake?

Delrith=LiquidSnake is part of SolidSnake's torture program.

Choas=Thats rich being beaten to near death by your stronger self...that will never happen to me Choas Son Of Lord Of Dragons.

Delrith=Thats right.I'm leaving defeat those rebels,and make me proud.

Choas=As you wish father.

*Delrith flys away from the location of Choas*

Choas=Of course I'll defeat them,but I want to make this defeat hurt...HAAAA...YOU HEAR ME PHOENIX!!!!

Meanwhile(inside the spacship)

?? ?? ??=[echo]YOU HERE ME PHOENIX....

Chuck=What was that?

Phoenix=It's.....It's Choas.

*Phoenix begins to tighten her fist and starts to walk towards the air hanger door*

Logan=Your going to distract him right?

Phoenix=No...I'm going to defeat him...

Everyone(Besides Phoenix= :shocked:

*Phoenix flys out the space ship to confront the vile dragon*

Phoenix=Choas!!! It ends here!

Choas=Bring it on Phoenix!

*Both begin to power up,and seem evenly matched...is this part of the plan*

Phoenix="Cry Of The Phoenix"

*Phoenix transforms into a large fire bird and fly's toward Choas*

Choas="Physco Chrusher Beam Assult"

*Choas begins to shot beams of energy from his eyes,and mouth that seem to cover the whole sky with a light show*

Choas=You can't surive this attack no one has.

Phoenix=We'll see....

*Everything turns blinding white*

Meanwhile(Inside the ship)

KHCloud=This is our chance to fly above the battle.

Chuck=Yea, Logan hurry up.

*Logan is staring at the battle betweem Phoenix,and Choas with aww*

Logan=Amazing how can a girl move so fast,and with so much force.

KHCloud=First she wasn't a normal girl to begin with secound there is a spirit in her body controling her called the "Phoenix."

Logan=I know all that KH stop trying to be a smart ass I'm just inpressed with that movement.

Chuck=Nah, you just think Phoenix is hot.

Logan=Alright, I'll fly this damn thing above the battle get the C4 ready.

KH/Chuck=Right!
Meanwhile(outside the ship)

Phoenix=*Weezing* That wasn't that bad for something with such bad hygene.

Choas=My breath isn't....HEY!!!.

Phoenix=Take this..(Throws some C4 at Choas)

Choas=Ahh what the..

*Choas evades the attack and counters so fast Phoenix could not detect his movements*

Choas="Choas Distroyer!!!!!!!"

*A beam flashes from the chest of the dragon,and aims head on for phoenix*

Phoenix=Uh Oh....ARGGGhhh.....

*Phoenix is hit by the blast and now APPEARS unconiscious,and is now falling downward*

Choas=I win...HAAHAA again.

*Choas swoops down and catches Phoenix*

Choas=I'm going to take you back with your friends...Hey wait a minute... :shocked: where are those rebels.

*Choas looks around,but fails to see the ship above his head*

Choas=Oh well I'll just bring back Phoenix,and show her to dad...then he'll tell me the coolest way to kill her..MHAAAAA

*Choas begins to fly away*

Phoenix=(Thinking=This better work...oh I better us telepathy to tell the gang I'm still alive.)

Meanwhile(Inside the ship)

Logan=Why didn't you launch out the C4?

KHCloud=Logan he had Phoenix captured if the explosives got him it would've gotten her too.

Chuck=Yea....

Logan=Well it doesn't matter if you had dropped the C4 down on Choas she's died anyway..

Chuck/KH= ???

*Inside everyone's mind they all hear a small voice*

?? ?? ??=Oh really you think I would die so easyily Logan?

Logan=dubya tee eff!

Chuck=Did you hear that KH.

KH=I heard it,and I don't like ghost.

?? ?? ??=It's me phoenix listen I'm still alive I'm using telepathy to contact you right.

Logan=Hmm telepathy.

Phoenix=Follow Choas and me to Lord Khan's space ship guys...I'm losing my connection...HURRY...*Connection broken*

Chuck=Phoenix!

Logan=We better hurry.

KH=Indeed.
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To be continued

SBYRD5 12-26-2002 07:05 PM

So ths thread is done... :(

TJ5 12-26-2002 08:10 PM

I dunno Im waiting 4 them to post lol

AngelWings 12-27-2002 08:12 AM

i'm too confused to post lol :laughlong: (sbyrd this thread will never be done!...well not yet :) )

AngelWings 12-28-2002 12:23 PM

no one posts in here ne more :(

SBYRD5 12-28-2002 02:29 PM

[ooc]You know I have some pictures I drawed of our characters I wish somene could host them for me.Oh, yea Angelwings this story will die only if we let it[ooc]
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Logan's Flashback

Narrator=So far in this epic story all of the characters seem to be in tact.Well TJ and Wolfgang's location is unknown of.SolidSnake is prisioner on the space ship of Lord Khan's ruler of the Kloen race.Logan is now partner less.KH and Chuck seem to be getting along.Phoenix has been captured by Choas, and now is being taken prisoner to Lord Khan's space craft.Logan seems to think this is his last mission...Let's begin the story..

*Logan is setting in the polite seat pondering over some things.*

Logan=(Thinking)I've been Snake's partner for some time now..I know he will get out of this someway,but....

*Logan holds his and snake's dog tags tightly*

Logan=[Thinking]I think this is my last mission....hmm maybe my tags know the answer...

*Logan stares at his tags looking for an answer..as Chuck enters the room*

Chuck=What's up with you logan we'll get snake back...don't worry he's the legendary soldier he's unbeatable.

Logan=....

Chuck=Hmm listen Logan I've lost my best friend TJ he was like a mentor to me...

*Chuck looks at his armlet and has some words carved into it*

Chuck=Listen to this logan..


Quote:

The path from a boy to man is a hard trail.The reality of the world could break an innocent mind.You have to choose a path.Be it a ruler or a serf.Never lose determination,or your dreams during the trail.....
*Chuck is reading aloud,but logan stops him*

Logan=What does that have to do with a lost soldier like me...

Chuck=I'm not finished let me continue..

Quote:

...Once a man you must determine if you are strong enough to ask for directions in where you are headed...There will be friends along the way that will ask you if your going there way,but you have to remeber is that the right path?...Only you know when you've expired son.
-Chuck's Father
Logan=What does it all mean?

Chuck=I don't know,but when I'm lost in thought I read my armlet it makes everything more clear.

Logan=...I'm more lost in my thoughts now..

Chuck=Well maybe you'll understand it later here..

*Chuck gives logan the armlet*

Logan=Why are you giving this to me didn't this belong to your departed father?

*Chuck closes his eyes and begins to walk away*

Chuck=You seem to need it more than me right now...give it back whenever your ready to...later.

*Chuck leaves the room,and closes the door behind himself,but leaves it partly open..*

Logan=....Hmmm path of a man...path of a soldier...

To be continued

TJ5 12-28-2002 10:32 PM

Epic battle Higher other world Vs lower other world
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Vegeta - When will ur lazy arses get up so we can go fight them !!!!! Im going alone ! * starts to go *

Goku - Vegeta ..... u cant ...... too many strong fighters down there..... you wouldnt stand a chance... I wouldnt even stand a chance..... We need these new fighters !

King kai - Well im going to go get them from grand kais palace ! * walks there and returns with Chuck, logan, KH,Wolfgang and rocko * alright ppl lets get a move on !

Goku - Chuck wolfgang come with me !

Vegeta - KH rocko and logan lets go !

* they reach the gates of the lower other world, hearing blasts and explosions *
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to be continued

AngelWings 12-29-2002 09:54 PM

[ooc] sry to inturrupt again... i got the hosting corrected (finally...) so if u ppl couldn't see the pictures b4, i'm pretty sure u can now. they're pretty bad cuz
1. i can't draw guys
2. i can't draw these things...
3. itz just messed up.
4. i changed some of the colors on the comp which i think made it worse...i'll be sure that if i draw more pictures for this i won't color them in

i drew two pictures Picture number one that one is the one i posted last time...
Picture number two this one...well i thought there should be some comic relief lol (dun ask...) well enjoy i'll be sure to draw much better next time lol [ooc]

SBYRD5 12-29-2002 10:26 PM

[ooc]In that picture thats KH,Chuck,Phoenix(Sorry forgot her first name),and TJ.Well me and Tj are arguing over who's team your going to be on.Chuck is just hanging around.Listen since you have an interest in drawing pictures...(I have a scanner,and I've drawn pictures for this topic,but I don't know how to host pictures).Maybe you should should start a drawn picture thread.[ooc]

AngelWings 12-30-2002 07:47 PM

well...i drew another picture for my character...and i'm wondering which one i should use..lol so if u guyz can help me out and say which one is better to use for my character ??? just tell me which one u think is better for my character (not on looks...lol) the one in the first picture or this one second picture just say in the first picture or this one ok? thaaaaank you :laughlong: (i would appreciate it if u helped me choose :) ) and yes the clothes matter too! or u can just say what should be with what. like one head with the other person'z clothes...etc etc? ...would really appreciate if u helped me choose :laughlong: then i could kno how to draw my person in diff pictures. thaaaaank you


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