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thanks masterx u know how it go... i try i try and dragon that last one u made toward me was kinda hot i give u props for that but the machine will be back with mo thats 4 sho
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i got mo rhymes and dimes in a bucket f*** it. dragon why u tryin to front, u cant mess wit my stunts. i roll u into a bunt and smoke u. dont try to be like me and smoke cause you'll choke cause u a stupid ass that probably smokin grass if he think he can beat me.
i'll take u back in time, to when i was 10 then u couldsee that had skillz back then and obviously i still do. u call yourself a dragon? man my lil sister could ride your ass as a wagon. u talk so much stuff, u always bluff when u say your lyrics are hot, guess what... there not! you probably white trying to be a vanilla ice, and if u are im a slice u in half, u know why i got the 1 on my name? its cause i am #1 son. im your ####### father dont bother to continue this or i'll take my belt and hit u so hard yo ass will melt. yo, you so lame wishing u could have some fame well the only thing you will get is a flame, u aint got no game, look at my name, it says it all, who u think u are? man ive been a superstar when i was five, people were watching me live, clappin to my skillz,payin my billz, they be clappin for me but they be nappin for u cause u so whack they just wanna fall asleep, im gonna drop u deep in the ground, just wait till next round, when i come back with mo u silly ho till next time .... holla at yo boy #1stunna aka machine1 |
[quote:post_uid0="Dan Hibiki"]
It doesn't match into any traditional rhyme patterns, and I know my rhyming very well. It doesn't rhyme (except in a few places, but the rhymes are uncreative). Also, in case you haven't noticed, this IS a rap thread.[/quote] you know... they made me take english 9 .. they taught me nursery rhymes, with shua vowels and ending lines.. we started with la la lending chimes. yall is jokes if u think u is cool, cuz u broke the law fo' skippin school, u be smokin and doing crimes, well if ur flowing good then you should be drinking booze and spendin' yo dimes, don't be goin' to waste a man's time, u still as fake as lipton lime, just chill yo try again at ur prime |
whoa dx...THAT SUCKED!
I don't need ta prove nothin, All you be huffin and puffin Trying so hard to impress eachotha, Why can't we all just embrace and love one anotha? Go on down to Mallarky and you'll see what I got Me and you can chill; I'll smuggle some pot. No need to pout I'm rollin' out |
both of u are whack .. look at my 2 freestyles i posted... those are hot
either learn from the best or die like the rest <span style='font-size:22pt;line-height:100%'>holla!</span> |
[quote:post_uid0="machine1"]thanks masterx u know how it go... i try i try and dragon that last one u made toward me was kinda hot i give u props for that but the machine will be back with mo thats 4 sho[/quote]
yo machine1 u more rubbish than clipse, they cashin' in the g's but they ain't crips, at least they flashin' the g's and payin they tips u can have hops but u ain't got no hips i will crush you like hot potatoe chips enough of writing and mockin' yo skillz holla back to me with a no or will... |
Nice,Machine,I can see you have a few skills,
But you see,I`m new at this,don`t know how it feels, Oh and guess what?I`m black,and that`s for reals, But I wish I was Asian,America kills. I don`t smoke anything, Only got one ring, I may not know the true "Bling"! But for you I got more shing, Growing a fro, Step off,yo, Gettin' better fo sho, Ain`t got no rims, But I sure know how to roll. Better than your lyrics, No,I`m not rich, Had you thinking with my class A words, Yet I don`t flip that many birds. |
im ryhmin like a diamond is shinin' so bright you think you can stop me?you'd have a better chance of gettin beat by a whitee.should i say anymore? cause im gonna come nokin on your door singin' and bling bling blingin' you gonna get beat like a blade to a stalk of wheat and then get some more!eminem would like to stand up to me but he will get beat beat beat beat! cause i am the king of the street!
what do ya think? i know i suck andbe truthful! |
[quote:post_uid0="DanYankees"]whoa dx...THAT SUCKED!
I don't need ta prove nothin, All you be huffin and puffin Trying so hard to impress eachotha, Why can't we all just embrace and love one anotha? Go on down to Mallarky and you'll see what I got Me and you can chill; I'll smuggle some pot. No need to pout I'm rollin' out[/quote] kool u can flow like vanilla ice u know he's hella old hes just another white guy that thinks hes tight yo but back off fo realz i don't wanna turn off yo lightz i ain't preachin like an alley mcbeal i ain't got hops like shaquille o' neal i ain't no lil' like mike i ain't be doin' mike tyson fights i jus have sunthin to say u'll be dazed.. yall ready? hey GOT RICE? |
whoa...that sucked even more...
No need to pout I'm rollin' out |
dx zero plz shut up ...u are so whack... instead of people payin to hear u rap they will pay to hear u shut the hell up . lmao
and dragon u seem to impress me a bit. but rest assure machine1 will not be beaten to the likes of you. u know what lets start now...... yo.. yo.. yo... im a always stay gangsta, u cant be that cause you a wanksta. u just actin like a fool , yes i may be cruel, but thats cause i will not lose any duels, machine1 rules, i got so much money and um... plenty of honeyies, im sora like the energizer bunny, cause i just keep goin, and goin, and goin, my rhytmes can never be stolen u aint much u can never touch such a powerful force, u and your rhymes must be marriaged but y'all gonna have a divorce of course machine1 is gods' son god gave me a lift and gave me this gift.. and i will use it wit my brain and and get the knowledge to maintain, i hope i make u go insane, man u look like asama bin laden have u forgotten about the times that i hit them rhymes, they were so hot but yours is not man u make dxzero- look like a rap legend the way u suck but he suck too. i always make good points, always gonna make them hot joints, i wish i could be beaten but i cant, dont have a fit this is it, the end is near u lil queer, after u lose we can celebrate your death with a beer, we can go huntin and kill some deers, nah! i just wanna kick your rear- behind this match is mine, i design the rap game without me it just wouldnt be the same holla at me |
what.about.mine? :(
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[quote:post_uid0="akuma_forever"]what.about.mine? :([/quote]
it was whack akuma |
be truthful, i know it sucked...... :(
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Sorry it took me so long,but I pressed tab and enter to many times.So here`s the rest.And at least you guys were better than me when I started out.But this IS when I started out.
Nothing but turd,Is your saying, Bet you be nothing but faking, In your words are no meaning, You ain`t nothing but weaning, 'Cause you have no vocabulary, When I grow,get better than a ferrari, For you I feel sorry, 'Cause you'll live to be on Maury. Discussin' your problems, Guess what's my anthem, You nothing but a joke, You the only thing I smoke, Are you sure your brain ate broke, 'Cause you rapping like it's yolk. I may be black,but I'm not the ordinary black dude.I study a lot of Asian stuff.I'm not trying to dominate,so please appreciate,me,just having some fun,,I`m twelve and young. |
yo watch me i be rappin on the streets
tha stunnas starts slappin them beats tha whole family thinkin u tha black sheep i got words from the deep beep beep leave me alone yo u son of a freak can't get no privacy when i go to sleep the heat lastin every other week they can't make me write anything neat well what can i say except for these dot dot dot.. ya i aint no rapper i just rhyme alot |
Where ma wankstas at?
I'm gonna have to whack you wit a bat. You be all up in ma biz Who you dink you is? You best step away from ma crew, Or we'll viciously attack you once we get some brew. You betta pout Cuz I'm rollin' out |
dragon i dont think u can beat me.. cant u see with my 1st post i had the most skillz and im still doing it dominatin this topic u better lock it before i unleash my tricks. if u think im good now wait till i unleash my bag of tricks i have just been warmin up this whole time, tryin to see how good y'all are now i know 4 sho that i can win, i know i aint rhyming right now but rap aint all bout rythming sometimes u just gotta let the flow go.
people used to say i sucked, but now they all say im the man and i can hit ur ass wit a fryin pan, so u better duck cause wit your luck, you will probably be hit, u aint ####, this is the real deal, dont even try to steal my words, before i send them birds after you, i ride with the 23 inch rims on my escalade, i got it made, i got it paid, i'll go get my blade and slice you, you know i will kill you, my rhymes are so ill and still they continue to have a huge impact yep thats right i have a big impact and this is a fact, im always exact when i say im correct, u better go direct-ly home and think a while, and dial 911 u son of a gun cause u gonna need it, u got just a lil bit of skill left looks like theres a lot of rain of pain on u,ucan not mantain the skillz to get the kill over me, you'll never be a true rapper what mo can i say u so gay, u need to lay low for a while, and take a a break, cause u a fake, u need to be on ricki lake and discuss yo issues, go blow yo nose with some tissues, im a miss you cause u wont be postin here much longer cause u have been beaten, now stop cheatin holla! |
Like I said,I`m not here to win,
Your rapping must be a sin, I heard better rapping from Rin Tin Tin, Help me spell it right,cause I can see your his friend. I`m just for some fun, I`m twelve and I`m young, But I put up good challenges, And all my songs are sung. Going up against me and you`re bound to be hung, 'Cause when I`m through with you,you're like socks,you are wrung. You may have good skills, And I may not have the best. But couldn't you just chill, and say you were put to the test? Pretty good just startin' out, Causing riots,causing bouts, causing challenge,causing pouts, Admit it,you had doubts. It may not be my dream, (I like cookies 'n' creme), But to keep the record clean, This 12 year old can really sing. He may not be an afro shing, And he may not be of the "bling bling", Of course he only got one ring, And he got the skills to cling, When you look,don't see his fringe, Admit,this boy can really sing. Alright,so I got kind of lanky,but I don`t feel too good,so if you want this to be a contest,sure,whatever,you win.I`m just testing my skills. |
lol that one wasnt as good as your others but um still fairly good. but u cannot stop me..
wait a minute did i just hear u say i won?......... u came to your senses.. :lol: |
Wanksta? Oh yea!!! :laughlong:
Like 50 cent I've been shot from behind, I learn that not everyone sings the same Ryhmes, Some pose as friends that only stab from behind, And that don't even really share any of there time, Well I'm still not blind, I know who I can define as my friends, I have one girl-friend that sticks with me tell the end, She always lends her friendship, I guess thats the end of my rhyme chip... |
dis stage ain't suppose tah be corn foo :buttrock: :D
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Machine1 I challenge you
So you like the clipse, I'm Rhyming,I'm Rhyming, That almost sounded like the grinding beat, Machine1 get ready your about to feel your first defeat, I rap faster than Swiss Beats, I have the rapping skills that make everyone reap, I sing better than Mobe Deep, And I keep my game mad neat. Nigga, I will take you in a single bound, I make it look like one of my simple clowns, Bust your grill and make your face always look like a frown, I'm going to take this rap to the "New Grounds". So you feeling that you got it, Hotter than the hottest Jahalopino Machine1 step into my arena, I'll blast the mic from all your fingers, |
[quote:post_uid0="SBYRD5"]Machine1 I challenge you[/quote]
i would destroy u... well i have to go now and i probably wont be back on till oh god i dont know i may not be back till the first friday of january so if u can be on then say 6:00 p.m. on that first friday then we can have this battle cause i accept... i never back down from a challenge. and umm u better review ur opponent cause if u challenged me u must be unaware of my talent. maybe u should read my freestyles real closely over and over. u cant stop that. well cya net time |
[quote:post_uid0="dragondude_r"]Yeah,that`s true.For some reason,I can`t bust rhymes like I type 'em.And you`re right,a**hole,that`s what America is.
Yo,DX,if you can make 'em disappear, Then tell me one thing,why the crap you still here? Think you rapping,busting rhymes,think you floating on air, But you see,what I got,is nothing but rare. And yes your right man, America`s not great, Full of racism,murders, and nothing but hate, No one to appreciate,the other nations, who are better at rates, Compared to other nations, America is of the late. Stealing land from others, And continues to do so, Don`t be stupid,you fools! Only go for Bin Laden and his co, Don`t drop bombs and destroy nations Like you did to poor Japan, Don`t be stupid you fools,just Only go for one man. So they`re not Christian? Who gives a sh**, I`m not a religion, Maybe Bhuddist,a little bit. Or maybe Taoism, ShinTaoism, 'S Like da Vinci`s Cubism, As long as everyone is in the chizzum. That means as long as everyone is alright It`s okay, To be different from us fools, In your very own ways. I may be American,but I don`t go up like that, Unhealthiness and stupidy, Not to mention heart attacks. America is pathetic, So I wish I was Japanese, Stupid,death,and torture, That what America bes. So if your Asian, Please stay in your homes, America is worse,for that You don`t need Sherlock Holmes. :yinyang:[/quote] That's probably the Best Rap song i've ever heard! Oh and Dan, WHERE does it say This is supposed to be Rap? It says FREESTYLE, which can mean a lot of things! |
Thanks,A**Hole.I was inspired by yours,of course.And yes,freestyle doesn`t just mean to rap.It means to express yourself [b:post_uid14]free[/b:post_uid14]ly in your own [b:post_uid14]style[/b:post_uid14].Oh,and just to wander,what nationality are you,A**Hole?I was thinking I was the only not-braindead American.And are you any religion?I`m probably the only person who is not one of yet.
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[quote:post_uid0="SBYRD5"]Hmm not bad I'm going to get serious,
DXZero I challenge you!!!!! DXZero, you think your a hero, When your macking game is below degree zero, The words in your mind now is"WOW oh man Neato!!" I'm not even at full power yet...YO. So prepare yourself for a critical freestlying flow, So your called donut, I guess thats where I'll begin my cuts, I guess your a live Homer with a wide gut, You must hate being picked away like a mut, I guess the Big N' Tasties just aren't enough.... Woah maybe that was a little ruff, But your skills are starting to show some buff, So say quit when you've had enough, Because the rapping game might be alittle to tough, But let's see if your skills can handle me, This is bigger than any spelling bee. This is life to me..... Take that dx... |
Dragon, Im Asian.
I'm from a State called "Punjab" which is located in "India", but Punjab is tired of the bull$hit government of India and trying to be it's own country. But, gay ass India won't let us! |
dam machine just cant be touched. :biggrin:
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Oooh...harsh.But still,I bet it`s better than America.I live in North Carolina state.Not much action or anything of importance,though...But becoming your own country seems extremely cool.
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[quote:post_uid0="dragondude_r"]Oooh...harsh.But still,I bet it`s better than America.I live in North Carolina state.Not much action or anything of importance,though...But becoming your own country seems extremely cool.[/quote]
I live in North Carolina State.... |
[quote:post_uid0="SBYRD5"][quote:post_uid0="SBYRD5"]Hmm not bad I'm going to get serious,
DXZero I challenge you!!!!! DXZero, you think your a hero, When your macking game is below degree zero, The words in your mind now is"WOW oh man Neato!!" I'm not even at full power yet...YO. So prepare yourself for a critical freestlying flow, So your called donut, I guess thats where I'll begin my cuts, I guess your a live Homer with a wide gut, You must hate being picked away like a mut, I guess the Big N' Tasties just aren't enough.... Woah maybe that was a little ruff, But your skills are starting to show some buff, So say quit when you've had enough, Because the rapping game might be alittle to tough, But let's see if your skills can handle me, This is bigger than any spelling bee. This is life to me..... Take that dx...[/quote] ding he came off |
Dragon, it'll ONLY be cool, if it actually happens...
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hey, look whose talkin' bout the skillz that he got,
with the crap thats comin out yo' mouth, you should be shot, your prob'ly outta breath from all the whack you've been rappin, you think that you're the best? well that ain't ever gonna happen, are you a white wanna-be, or just a harlem joke? pretendin' that he's puffed some when he's never had a smoke, you prob'ly still ask yo parents for dough for the mall, have you lived on your own? you got no clue at all, why dont you just cry you little whining sissy girl, you embarrass all who rap and you make me wanna hurl, so just shut up, shut down, run home to yo dad, you call yourself a rappa? hell, dog, thats just sad. Not bad, eh? |
this ... is written for a friend of mine.. that i never got to know.. now its too late.. and I don't know if he's ok anymore.. Al .. i rap as hard.. as a black belt martial artist.. i ball and guard.. and tackle down the largest.. shoot from downtown the fartest.. they ask who i am cuz im the smartest.. i earn my crown to be as GOOD as this.. trampling every mound thats AHEAD of this.. now.. i tell you this..so the truth is told.. and the proof unfolds.. that my soul is not made of gold.. i ain't no old rich mofo, im from the o-town.. where my a** got jacked BE-FOE.. my friend Al has been smacked BE-FOE.. behind the head sent him to the HOS-PI-TAL.. blood clot and his gloves and bat got stole.. while we play marvel and sit at home.. thinkin bout the time we wuz alone.. dudes from the same school FRIGH-TENED us.. like we wuz sh*t and they was MAR-VE-LOUS.. pocket checked us and stole THREE BUCKS from us.. I try to restrain from kicking their nuts.. they had a car so I wuz smart enough.. ever since I haven't seen my friend no moe.. I wish my friend good luck.. Happy holidays to my friend, Alvin Sarmiento.. :( |
Alvin Sarmiento..
I never got to know u before.. I understand where u comin' from.. I wuz sorry we weren't there when you wuz walking home.. If I could've taken your place to be there.. and that your race doesn't matter in here.. we wouldn't be drowning with tears.. becuz we can't do nothing but care for your family worrying if ur alive or dead.. when you were lying on the bed spread.. we wuz all crying like I just said.. Our unity would've shown.. we wouldn't have been alone and you're dad would've answered the phone.. and we'd be safe on our own.. this song I sing in freestyle tone.. be ok, be happy and safe, be at school, and be home. |
[quote:post_uid0="SBYRD5"][quote:post_uid0="dragondude_r"]Oooh...harsh.But still,I bet it`s better than America.I live in North Carolina state.Not much action or anything of importance,though...But becoming your own country seems extremely cool.[/quote]
I live in North Carolina State....[/quote] This one's for North Carolina! C'mon and raise up Take your shirt off, twist it 'round yo' head Spin it like a helicopter North Carolina! C'mon and raise up This one's for you, uh-huh, this one's for who? Us, us, us lol i am from North Carolina to. :biggrin: |
:shocked: Well what do you know.Well,at least we got Pitty Pablo (sp) on this side...But still,it isn`t that great.I live in Lumberton.How 'bout ya'll?
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"Pitty"...
HeH, nice one Dragon.. But just for the record, Petey Pablo isn't a good rapper at all, for he was commercial talk and a ONE-HIT-WONDER!!! Oh and by the way, Jaims, that was a ncie one. |
[quote:post_uid0="MasterX05"]dam machine just cant be touched. :biggrin:[/quote]
tell me about it.. no competition round here |
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