roses are red violets are blue (are they or are they purple???)
this poem is soon over, i now kill u :buttrock: :buttrock: and ppl poems dont have to ryme just so ya know

[quote:post_uid0="AfterMath"]and ppl poems dont have to ryme just so ya know[/quote]
poems do have to ryme what is wrong with you
that is the whole concept is on ryming scheme

[quote:post_uid0="darkmasterX"][quote:post_uid0="AfterMath"]and ppl poems dont have to ryme just so ya know[/quote]
poems do have to ryme what is wrong with you
that is the whole concept is on ryming scheme[/quote]
actually, darkmaster..u r completely WRONG! poems r really about the meaning behind the words itself..not the rhymes..a poem can b just as great wid a rhymes...did u just learn something?

then its not a poem then it is just words that your are saying that sound nice.

naww..theres always a meaning behind a poem....U SHOULD KNOW THAT. u can make it sound nice with the words but the poem could just b completely pointless, no meaning...get it? i bet u dont.

they have to ryme all poems have to ryme or they are not poems. sports you don't know i went though with my poems when people say that they don't ryme and this teacher in my school gets my poems copy righted and she says that they have to ryme sports i do know end of story.

alrighty.. :laughlong:

[quote:post_uid0="SBYRD5"]Umm I made this last year it was...well if she reads it she will know it's her...


MY LOVE FOR JOY(Umm I know what you like to be called..but it fits better here...)

The music in my head...

I've known you almost as long as a year now,
You seem to be like wine,
Each day your sweetness is more divine,
You really gave me a chance to come in your mind,

You and you alone are the only girl I think I have,
Ever loved,but never meet,I knew you were special,
From my first reply from you..and your friends are even cool
You seem happy and I want that to stay,

I realized one day I liked you to much..so I pushed away,
Yea that sounds foolish,and our bound slowly begin to
fade away like the memory of you was a dream,
A fantasy....but one day I woke up.....

I only had you on my mind that day....
I waited all day to just get a reply from you
But you never came.....

You know you helped me so much..
I felt lost and you said some nice..*snif*
Beautiful things to me...even though today..
I know what your body looks like,

I think your mind is your best feature,
I remeber you saying things like this to me...
"James what is your favorite flavor of icecream"
I would've said the same as you just to make you happy..

You told me people change...and your right,
But sometimes your feelings don't completly change,
For that someone...that someone you love...
You might not say it right nor express this love..

But love never dies...if it was ever there...
What I felt for you wasn't lust...but love..
I don't know what to think of you or myself now..
BUT I DO KNOW EVERYDAY AND EVERY PASSING SEC.

OF THOSE DAYS WE SPENT TO GATHER JUST TALKING I LIKED YOU FOR YOU.....I NEVER REALLY HAD A GOOD CONVERSATION WITH MY GIRLFRIENDS OR EVEN MY MOM.

You seem so cool...and your beauty is so divine...so
Baby girl I pray one day you will be mine....[/quote]
Darkmaster examine this poem..it barely rhymes but it has a touching point...aslong as the poem has a message it is a poem...

Actually Rapping is poetry just the rhyming scheme your thinking about...

its does ryme go to poetry.com cuz i to lazy to explain it

Oh ok let me explain the type of poetry you are subscribing is rhyiming scheme..

Umm forceful statement poetry does not rhyme..

I wish the member asshole could come to this thread and show..

???

[quote:post_uid0="darkmasterX"]its does ryme go to poetry.com cuz i to lazy to explain it[/quote]
Poems do not need to rhyme. Look at hikuis and a poems(or others) by langston huges called mother to son. It does not ryhme but it is a poem never the less.

Love 50 like a fat kid loves..donuts

Anyway listen to Elena..

[color=blue]This is.. a little late but... it's not quite over a month. I found's this poem, and I think it's sort of cool..

It

[quote:post_uid0="Razz"]Oooh, Sbyrd, pretty funky!

Oh, and thank you kindly, Blossom!
I don't have any more poems, but I do have a few songs. Here's one.

<span style='font-family:unicorn'><span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'>Crash and Burn</span></span>

Verse 1
Everything I

sorry people i was wrong i forgot about free verse :D

Roses Are Red
Violets Are Blue
What Is That Poo?
It's Under Your Shoe

:laugh:

all of u have great poems...such poetic talent :) mine...well itz limited..lol..but herez one of my poemz that i made a long time ago...

The world spins around and around,
Never stopping
The scenery passes me by.
The crazy merry-go-round,
Itz never stopping.
Memories spin with the scenery.
Memories of happiness and lies,
The memories of being told one too many lies...

No one knoz wut goes on behind the curtain,
They only see the show.
Never understanding the pain,
Never caring,
Never looking backstage...
Only seeing the show...

Few lights dimly shine thru the darkness,
Just to be covered by the shadows again.
My soul and heart can be ripped only so many times.
Why should i even try
Just to be torn apart over and over again?

Nothing is ever good enough,
But i don't have to worry nemore
Why you ask?
Because i've given up.
I shouldn't have tried before,
No one realized how much i had to sacrifice
No one understood
My scarred self trusts so few now
Never letting anyone in...never letting them understand...

Never will i sit,
Blaming me, myself, and i.
All those "happy" memories
Have gone down to the cellar,
To be buried, never to be seen again...

I can finally open my wings and fly
Fly away from all the pain...
I'm never going back to that hell that was once paradise.
I'm never going to have my mind clouded with confusion,
Then suspicions
And turning into frustration
With my feelings being bottled up
And kept deep within me..

Never will i go thru the pain that i've suffered all those days
Never will i break and fall
For i only have my pride and spirit
Never will it happen again...
Never...

[quote:post_uid0="WhiteTigerClaw"]Roses Are Red
Violets Are Blue
What Is That Poo?
It's Under Your Shoe

:laugh:[/quote]
pff...

[quote:post_uid0="WhiteTigerClaw"]Roses Are Red
Violets Are Blue
What Is That Poo?
It's Under Your Shoe

:laugh:[/quote]
;)

yo.....

im da old dayz
purple haze
makes der mind turn into a maze
dey got dat crazy gaze on dey face
so wen you see dem crazy facez
run like ders no other places

Today is very boring,

It's a very boring day,

there is nothing much to look at,

There is nothing much to say,

Theres a peacock on my sneakers, and a penguin on my head, theres a dormouse on my doorstep i am going back to bed, Today is very boring, it is boring through and through, there is absolutely nothing that i think i want to do. Theres a dragon blowing smoke rings theres an ogre with a sword there are giants riding rhinos i am positively bored.

<span style='font-size:12pt;line-height:100%'>I close my eyes and I keep seeing things
Rainbow waterfalls
sunny liquid dreams....are you a dream?

Is this now which is present,
When wind passes me I'm reminded of whispers,
Yet each breeze has it's own tale..

Confusion creeps inside me raining doubt
A thousand thoughts yet one voice creates it's own droubt(Misspelling when there is a serious lack of water),
My very mouth is dry from my retorts at society...

I find my oasis in a group ofundergrads,
I find my winter when surrounded by posers,
I wonder into my spring when I'm with Erica.</span>
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Please view this thread to understand the minds of the older members of this forum much more clearly....

Only in poetry & art can I truly express myself...=/



Edited By SBYRD5 on May 06 2004 at 16:32

I'm giving this a shot so don't laugh

There's one thing that angels can't do that u do
and that's love me the same way that i love you
our togetherness makes the stars shine bright
and if we break up the world may end tonight
Love is the game that I play with you
But you played your beauty as a card so i must lose
And when i go to sleep at night at night
I see your face as a guiding light
The Bond we have can never break
Forin you forever my heart will stay

I thought I heard TMyApp say no topics over a month old should be revived... this thing is over a year old and you guys are bringing it back from the attic!

But I will post my poem anyway... this is what I call a freestyle poem...

"I look into the sky with cherries in my eyes,
what a surprise my girl got some nice thighs.
Everybody gettin blessed kid,
my money was well invested.
When my mom was arrested
she did the bid suggested.
When she was released
she must've thought her son was deceased
Saw her in with casanova, I walked over to where she was at
grabbed my gat, cocked it back, exploded, pulled over and reloaded

Watched as my mom fell, but couldn't tell she was on the cell
heard shots poppin saw heads droppin, knew the po po's were here, popped it into first gear!"

Well, like I said, it was a freestyle poem and what sucks to you can be loved by someone else.

Im not a poet by my favorite poem is this one by Sir Walter Scott.

Breathes there the man, with soul so dead,
Who never to himself hath said,
This is my own, my native land!
Whose heart hath ne'er within him burn'd,
As home his footsteps he hath turn'd
From wandering on a foreign strand!
If such there breathe, go, mark him well;
For him no Minstrel raptures swell;
High though his titles, proud his name,
Boundless his wealth as wish can claim;
Despite those titles, power, and pelf,
The wretch, concentred all in self,
Living, shall forfeit fair renown,
And, doubly dying, shall go down
To the vile dust, from whence he sprung,
Unwept, unhonour'd, and unsung.

I revived this topic for a GOOD reason.

Everyone is gaining tainted minds and maybe such a topic could help everyone express themselves in a positive way including myself.

If someone gets in trouble for this I accept full punishment.

Follow your destiny

If you had a a special person...
a sensational love...
What would you feel?

In that persons heart...
Certanly in my heart....
Would be in the realms...
the gates....
the path of glory....

A path in your heart....
a special path...
will tell you to follow....

If you had a petrified beauty...
would you create a special item to you?
I know that I would write
about a prosperous love and glory,
glory to tell you to follow...
follow what you believe....
follow what you think...
follow your dreams to your destiny....

I like to fart because i ate a pop tart.
come on man let me suck your hand.
Im so crazy because My name is daisy.

So listen big boy Im a girl better shut up before i make you hurl.
In China they eat rice, so if you mess with me then I will give you Lice.
Peace doggy G Lmnop Fizz,tizz, Pizzi my nizzi

I boy is downsized for his lineage...of failure and shame,
He was defeated in his warrior camp
In his defeat he was stripped of his clothes and stripped of his pride,
Now a comedy in it's self that he has become he flees this camp to return one day stronger....

He later finds a women she has truth an innocence,
This woman decides to mak a pilgrimage that will end suffering,
Suffering of the world there in,

The boy now a teenager finds that this woman he truely loves
For her will motivated him to find the manhood he had forgotten,
He makes a goal to himself to guard this woman,
For her well is strong....yet her body is small,
So to protect her he decides to master a sword...
He decides to pick up a sword and cut his own path,

He is silent,but agrees to return to the camp he was once humilated and rend assunder because to complete thepilgrimage you would have to journey in that drection closes to Mecca.

He is one day confronted by his past fiends,
Now as a man he returns to face these..no those who considered his family and birth right a comedy.

He is teased and tuanted all pointing at the warrior who defeated him in such a fashion.

The woman says"We must continue our journey."

The man says "I must win..."

THe warrior who defeated him says "Woman may pass..... little samurai may not pass."

"Only the strong can enter this land you would shame this land if I allowed you to continue your pilgrimage here or beyond."-Says this warrior

Man walks over to man who defeated him and holds his head up with burning eyes and says"So I must prove my worth...Biran." :angryfire:

" I'll remove your horn just how I removed your pride..."

Man="No I will not lose.....I will win."

A battle begins......a battle for respect... :buttrock:



Edited By SBYRD5 on May 11 2004 at 15:31

A box of hope

I keep a box in my study....
for things that draw me
and useful sometimes in hope of need.
i keep not one but many hopes in my mind.
when someone dies and i have no one to help me
i dont give up hope... when that person died i felt like my heart struck with prosperity and sorrow... i couldnt take it.
i thought i lost hope... but i met another person to help me back up


that person filled my heart again.... i was no longer alone...
because i never gave up hope

IM THE BEST POET LISTEN TO DIS;

ROSES ARE RED
VIOLET ARE BLUE
I WRITE POEMS, BETTER THAN YOU

u keep spammin the forum with those post and ull end up being banned