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underlaie

10-12-2004 05:27 AM

nice poem girlNferno666

girlNferno666

10-12-2004 01:32 PM

aww y thankies underaie ^_^ *huggles* see u around sfo ^_^

shy_gurL21

10-12-2004 10:09 PM

i'm here sitting quietly
waiting for him to notice me
i'm falling in love with this guy
i want to approach him but i'm too shy
so i just ask myself with anticipation
what do i have to do to win his attention?
does he realize my presence?
is he bothered by my absence?
if i disappear will he even care?
does he miss me when i'm not there?
i find my happiness when he's around
every pain that i feel he relieves
i know in his eyes i'm just a face in the crowd
but i'm sure when everyone else leaves
i will be the only one to stay
and never let him go astray.

dominicankid098

10-12-2004 10:52 PM

I really liked that poem shygurL. Very nice and emotional.

dragon_cloud

10-13-2004 12:09 AM

i like ur poem alot i think it tell alittle about u do it shy ^.*

shy_gurL21

10-13-2004 09:47 AM

thanks dominicankid and dragoncloud. :)

Evil-Blanka

10-13-2004 09:56 AM

[quote:post_uid0="shy_gurL21"]thanks dominicankid and dragoncloud. :)[/quote]
who was that poem about lol

girlNferno666

10-13-2004 10:09 AM

the man i see is not whole his heart is broken and his soul is numb
with lifes many truths does this come
he grew up in a broke home
all the yelling, fighting, and beatings is all he's ever know
a mothers tender touch her loving grace
he can't even recall her face
much less know a mothers role
when she let him go
for all his life she was a no show
the harsh realities r cold
in and out of his life many come and go
many will love him for simple reasons then leave
and those that stay usually go astray
yet he still searches and looks for that one girl that'll stay
who will love him till his dying days
to heal the hurt thats in his heart
to teach him the loving arts
and teach him something he's never known
how it's like to have a loving home

shy_gurL21

10-13-2004 10:11 AM

[quote:post_uid0="Evil-Blanka"][quote:post_uid0="shy gurL21"]thanks dominicankid and dragoncloud. :)[/quote]
who was that poem about lol[/quote]
hmm... someone.. lol.. my bf

rabbitalien

10-13-2004 10:56 PM

i like shy gurls poem more then girlnferno's (sry girlnferno) mayb cuz shy gurl ends her sentences with the same suffix as the previous sentence... girl nfernos is nice 2 but some sentences dunt connect. theyr both good ^.^

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