[OOC]good entrance dragondude, but ...
do not put everything on the very same paragraph.
do it like we did, like this...

SSJKARMA:"blah blah blah"
DRAGONDUDE:"blah blah blah"

doing so help us in UNDERSTAND what you are saying !
i had lots of trouble understanding your post. that makes it ROUGH afterwards ![/OOC]

ZEGAR:"well, i am no leader nor am i asking you to join ! we are on a journey that do not concern you. do whatever you want !"
MIZUKI:"ZEGAR ! they are victims in here, we cannot just let them alone without helping them !"
TACQ:"zegar is right thou, we cannot involve other in our own journey !"
MIZUKI:"but..."

TO BE CONTINUED...

[OOC]sorry i couldn't think of anything else to say or do, i let ROLL or RAZZ do the rest. [/OOC]

Sorry to come out of no where,but Roll did you copy the URL for the page the "Moogle Hunting Thread" was on.

I want a link so I can see it again.

[OOC] SSJKarma, you're telling dragondude not to put everything in one paragraph, that's the reason i couldn't read the beginning of the story, that's all you people did!

You're making it sound like I came in the story at the end, I've been here 2/3rds of the way!!

You've been RPing longer than anyone?? You're the only one who doesn't know what the f-ck they're doing.

Wow, "your character is all powerful" No, he isn't... And so what if he was? I also have the weakest character in the group too.

You people are afraid to add more to the story (for some weird reason). No, you didn't explain your characters specifically, you only give off some powers a character can do, I gave out all the powers mine can. You hide too much... and it leads to other people posting stuff that you don't like. It's not my fault, it's your fault. [/OOC]

[OOC] This isn't a run on paragraph?? and there are many almost this big!





Mizuki went over to the bat. It squeaked, and moved it's wings, then flew onto Mizuki's hand. Mizuki looked at it, as the world came into another memory. She was about 13 months old at this time. Mizuki looked around, only to see herself walking around. Seemed like she was already walking well enough to move fast. She was moving around like crazy, but suddenly stopped when she saw a blue bird. She marveled at it's flight as it soared through the blue sky. Suddenly, lil Mizuki was flapping her arms and running after the bird. She was trying to fly. The blue bird moved farther and farther away, until it disappeared out of view. Lil Mizuki stopped and fell on her butt, and looked really sad. 'Wow,' thought Mizuki 'I really DID have such wonders.' A small little animal was coming towards lil Mizuki. It had wings on it, and it flapped them frantically as it headed in her direction. It finally jumped up and flew, but not until lil Mizuki grew to understand that you needed wings to fly, or as she said it, thin stuff. Finally the world around her went black again, as the bat flew away from Mizuki. Mizuki looked around, and finally moved onto the stick. When Mizuki looked at it, it bore a marking. She read it, but her eyes glazed over again. "Mizuki." Mizuki looked at the world around her as it turned, not into a bright sunny day, but into a clouded, gloomy night. She was in her cottage in the ice cold mountains of the Ancient Algora Tribe. Mizuki walked around in the house, looking for herself. She moved all around the house, and finally found herself on the floor asleep under a blanket. She looked about 2 years old. Mizuki moved around more, and looked all over the place for the black figures that resided in her every memory, which she thought to be her parents. Finally, she went into the kitchen. There were wolves on the floor, dead. Next to them lay the black figures, lying in a pool of blood. Mizuki's eyes filled with tears, as she looked at the site. Suddenly, another wolf came out of no where, and sniffed at the black figures. This wolf had a gray coat of fur, looked wise, was male, was about 1 year old (human terms) and was familiar. It licked one of the figures in an attempt to get their attention. After a time of attempts, the wolf stopped, and finally moved around the house as if looking for something. Mizuki followed it all around the house, until it finally stopped next to lil Mizuki. It sniffed at lil Mizuki, whined, and ran away. Mizuki stood here wondering what had happened to the figures that she believed to be her parents. After a bit of thought, she came to no possible conclusion about the figures fate, but figured out that they were her parents. She stopped thinking when the wolf finally returned with a basket, a blanket, and a stick. The wolf picked up lil Mizuki without waking her up, and placed her inside the basket. Then, he placed the blanket over Mizuki, and then placed the stick next to her. Lil Mizuki suddenly woke up and looked around. She saw the wolf and giggled. "Corona!" said lil Mizuki, and the wolf licked her face twice, starting continuous giggles. Finally, Corona picked up the basket, and started out of the house. Mizuki followed them both through the forest filled with snow, ice, and serenity all around. When they finally got out of the forest, (about 1 minute, since they were dashing as fast as they could) lil Mizuki coughed twice. Corona just twitched his eyes at her, and Mizuki looked at herself. Her nose was red, and she was shivering a little bit. Corona started to cross some ice. It moved fast, but with deepest caution. He finally made it about half way, and looked a little less worried. Lil Mizuki was awake now. She pulled the blanket over herself for warmth, and lifted her hand to touch Corona's face. Corona looked at her as she touched his face, continuing his way.... and then the ice broke underneath him. Corona immediately threw his paws onto the ice in front of him, and he tried as hard as he could to climb back up. Lil Mizuki was scared and shivering from the water, and eventually, saw the look on Corona's face. She closed her, scrunched up her face, and began chanting something. "terepooto" repeated lil Mizuki over and over, until finally, she and Corona disappeared. Mizuki looked all around, and saw both of them on the other side of the ice. Taking into mind what lil Mizuki just said, she went over to Corona and lil Mizuki, who were moving on. They eventually stopped in front of a house, where lil Mizuki fell asleep, and Corona left her there in front of the door. Finally, Corona scratched the door a few times, and Mizuki heard a yell. Corona gave lil Mizuki one lick, and ran off into another forest. Suddenly, the door opened, and the world went black again. Mizuki was shocked. This was how everything happened. How she was adopted, how she never knew her parents, and how she felt more secure in the wild. She looked around her and found the last thing. She moved to it, and saw Zegar and Tacq, standing there looking around in a worried way. Finally, after taking one last look at the world around her, she touched the ball of light, and said something. The light finally shaped itself into a golden pendant. She took it in her hands, and examined it. It was gold, heavy, and had black around a small circle of gold in the middle. She took it, and finally put it on. Then everything was blindingly bright.



Who the hell is gonna read that without getting a headache?

Plus what's with the font colors that NO ONE CAN READ!!!
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[ooc]It`s okay Tantum,no trouble.Just that every other RPG online I`ve been to,controlling the other character gets you kicked out.[/ooc]

*The two Dragons stood there,licking their wounds,hoping the humans would heal them.But secretly,they started channeling their energy as much as they could,and established telepathy!*
ShinRyu:>Should we eat them if they refuse to heal us?<

ShoRyu:>No,Shin,we just leave...But if they show disrespect to us WHEN they don`t heal us...<

*A low growl emits in his throat*:angry:

*Zegar looked menacingly at the ShoRyu`s growl,then to Mizuki*

Zegar:"Your call."

*Tacq nodded*

[To be continued!]

[OOC]How was that?[/OOC]

[OOC]DDude, that was pretty cool. I like your characters :D [/OOC]

Well, actually, there's always room for help. But...
Mizuki," But?"
Something about these guys turning into dragons just doesn't kick my jollies.
Zegar," what?"
I don't really like the idea...
While the group was disussing the matter, the "dragon-people" were staring at Tacq, Mizuki, Corona, and Zegar. Tacq found their gaze un-easy.
Nope, I don't trust them. I think the safest thing to do right now would be to just walk away.
Mizuki," WHAT! Look at them! the least we could do is heal them a bit! Come on!"
Zegar," Tacq's right... it's dangerous."
Tacq nods and watches the injured two in the corner of his eye. Tacq doesn't want to just leave them there... hurt and injured, but he doesn't want harm to come to anyone. Confusion swept over him and Corona could see it in Tacq's eyes. Corona came up to Tacq, and Tacq knew that if it were human it would be giving him some good advice about now. Tacq gave off a quickly fading smile then looked at Mizuki and Zegar. Zegar was leaning against a tree with his arms crossed, and Mizuki seemed to be slightly pouting, Tacq could tell she wanted to help them.
Mizuki... I'm not your boss or anything. If you want to help them, go. Go heal their wounds. But...
Tacq sighed.
But, I don't want you to get hurt.

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[OOC]on tantum, i won't be telling anything new right now, but i won't DISCUSS anymore with you either !

FINE, you made your character all powerfull and have the WEAKEST character at the same ! let me tell you that fighting moinsters and knowing EVERY of their WEAK SPOTS is just no fun at all !

if we did not do it right ? then why have we only troubles with you in here ? ROLL, RAZZ, ME, we have no troubles and are not yelling at each other ! even DDude seems to be good !

anyway...[/OOC]

ZEGAR:"and again, we are helping peoples that could just be with DURAGA. i mean, they could be our demise if they wanted to kill us right ? don,t know for your part, but i can't fight dragons in my present state !"
*Zegar shows his fists*
Tacq:"i understand"
Mizuki:"i too but you have to understand me, i cannot just leave knowing those two could die without my help !"
*Tacq looks at mizuki, then at zegar and sigh*
Zegar:"do what you want mizuki, but i won't be of any help if it turn to the worst !"
TACQ:"neither will i mizuki !"
Mizuki:"understood !"

TO BE CONTINUED ...

[OOC] I know, the monster weakness thing was accident, I wont do that stuff again. [/OOC]

dang there are to many threads like this!

Yeah? Well, this one's been going on for over a month... and TJ got his idea off of Razz. So go complain to TJ, not us.