The best poet - Who is good

[darkmasterX]

ok here is one have

There are so many things can say
To make you feel the same way
Girl you are like a pearl so beautiful
But I want to know will you go wit me
Make me feel like the boy that I was sapusta to be
Girl I can be the key to set your soul free
You may think I am playing but if you choose me
You will see what the key can open for you

If you don't have a clue
A boy like me came out of the blue
And wanted to talk to you
Cuz I like you since I saw you
You had this thing that I could not explain
It nearly drove me insane
That was it that little thing
That made you appealing to my feeling

[Razz]

'Twas pretty good . . .
Here's one of mine.

<span style='font-family:unicorn'><span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'>Holy War</span></span>

Angels descend from the heavens,
And Demons from the ground.
The fight will soon begin,
For the humans chained and bound.
They stand there ready and willing.
All standing their grounds.
The battle will be everywhere,
The Supernatural has no bounds.

A single sound of the shofar,
Has just begun the war.
The Angels with their righteous cry,
And the Demons with their roar.
The sounds of clashing blades,
Echo as the Light,
And the Darkness battle,
For eternity

[machine1]

i can free style now its time to show my poetic skillz...lol


roses are red
violets are blue
ehhh forget it i aint no dam poet

[blossom]

[quote:post_uid0="Razz"]'Twas pretty good . . .
Here's one of mine.

<span style='font-family:unicorn'><span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'>Holy War</span></span>

Angels descend from the heavens,
And Demons from the ground.
The fight will soon begin,
For the humans chained and bound.
They stand there ready and willing.
All standing their grounds.
The battle will be everywhere,
The Supernatural has no bounds.

A single sound of the shofar,
Has just begun the war.
The Angels with their righteous cry,
And the Demons with their roar.
The sounds of clashing blades,
Echo as the Light,
And the Darkness battle,
For eternity

[SolidSnake76]

down the alleys and down the streets.
territory for the gangs to keep.
watch what u say, watch what u do.
or sum1 will bust a cap in ur ass. :biggrin:

cops in full force, fat as they may be.
always at dunken doughnuts with a trainee.
the black man cant drive down the streets.
hell, they already commited a crime: being black with a benz for keeps. :biggrin:
whites in the suburbs, blacks in the slums.
at least the hughleys r lucky, as well as the klumps.

U.S at war. bush is insane. :biggrin:
saddam hussein? he's so damn insane.

i think thats good.

[darkmasterX]

here is a good one i have

Love

What is it to you
is it when i say i love you
or is it when they make it through
is it when i kick the ill will game to you
to make you feel the same
well i don't know so i ask you
what does it take to make you my L-O-V-E
so is when they understand your view
if only you knew what i could do for you
then you know i why i am misunderstood
is cuz my love is true cuz i am one young of
poeple who are mature to understand
what love is....




this was what i did when i was in love wiht this girl even though i am 13

[SBYRD5]

NATURE BEYOND THE THICKNEES OF WATER

I set where I am in a calm state of mind,
No fears,no failures that bond me,
Just the sounds of voices that echo truth,
A truth that demands reason,
Reason that has to be answered,

I seat on this rock...as though I'm on top of the world,
My mind is clear I can see my victories,and learned battles,
My soul is an eruption in a small container,
The deepness of the sounds around me come so clearly,
Dap...Dap... I can hear the rain..

The same touch and feel I can imatate now is my peaceful state of mind,Nothing can break it not cliques,Prejudice ignorance doesn't move me from my rock,I remain firm and calm....


I don't feel like writing any more right now.

[Razz]

Oooh, Sbyrd, pretty funky!

Oh, and thank you kindly, Blossom!
I don't have any more poems, but I do have a few songs. Here's one.

<span style='font-family:unicorn'><span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'>Crash and Burn</span></span>

Verse 1
Everything I

[SBYRD5]

[b:post_uid6]ALONE OUTSIDE[/b:post_uid6]


Alone Outside (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/sega/saturn/Intro_The_Darkness_(Astal).mid)

Through childhood...one wants to belong,
To feel the inbracement of peers,
Through any means...even join cliques,
Yet inside our souls are dreary,

My soul demands to have it's own unique taste,
Yet we tend to deny from giving our soul....food,
We poison them...in being followers in which we disbelieve,
I'm one of GOD's SONS...in what I believe..

I'm a bouncer in the tides of my homeland,
Supposed as an ignorant follower without direction,
I remain silent even though I scream tears inside,
Which is the direction of the tide?
Is it really my choice to fight the tide...

My parents...never gave me direction,
Yet I'm alone in ideas of this world of war,and production,
I'm outside writing my soul to paper..soon it will reach other souls,
Those to far to be reached by my oral words...maybe my writing can reach them...

Perhaps,...yet will they respond in agreeing or in uncomprehending manner.....

Look at my banner it shows my rage,
And hate,and even my will to keep my pride,
Now..I see pride as ignorance,
To be pride full you will only lose,

Enlightment is a long road to walk,
Yet I come closer to it by each passing day,
The road to Enlightment is a road that must be traveled alone,
So I'm outside in this world of culture,and machines,

And I realize everyone walking past me is going there own direction,

It's time I walked mine,

I won't shame my last name in that direction either,
I will have the dreams of my father..my mental sibling,and myself to insure now,

When my father died he was angry..angry because he didn't have the strenght to control his life.
He looked at me his only son to have success were he had fallen weak,and defeated.
When he had seen me fail he wanted me to have perfect success with my goals.....

From what I was taught to believe my father won't join me in me in Thugz Mansion.
No matter how I live my life from this day onward it will be to my best,

When I die..if he is judged to be with me after that death..then he will see that his son was a boy,and became a true man.
Thats what I'm striving for....If we can't be together then he will look above and see a mans tears crying for him to ease the pain of his heart....and him alone...must be the way the fates played our cards...

Because some how...I'm going to make right of my life...

and....I'm still outside...walking my journey...accept this time I'm going somewhere....

[darkmasterX]

yall is mad deep feel yall

[SBYRD5]

HOLY WAR...Razz you know that time is close...very well said...

I hope I can see my father again that day...it doesn't matter what side he's on....

[EYO]

man all those poems where deep.......now ma turn

*AHEM*

"paper"

first you get a paper
any kind of paper
but i prefer a dried swiffer

"how to get cash"

now you put da ashes
the ones they call golden scratches
on the paper to make some cashes ($$ching$$)

"busted"

when you get caught youl get some lashes
for those ashes
dat you sold for your cashes ($$ching$$)

"ways not to pay"

it aint a big deal
cause it gave you some meal
but wen you get da bill run for the hill (peace)
cause you know dey will kill

*claps all around him*

if ya think dis about drugs or sumtin, you may be right
but the main thing about this says is dont do drugs.....i think

[Sportschick155]

Lmfao, i just suck at poetry, give me a few years to write a decently good one :D

[darkmasterX]

i thought it would never end there is no one to tend so
i live the bowles of the earth so i am in all was in search
for someone to turn to for help since i think
i might go insane i can not explain what it is like
i try to put on my flight but it is to tight there is nothing in sight
but wait i see the light i try to touch try to cluch it
but it keet moving it left me with out a clue then out of the blue
i see a wanderer moving towards me i ran it ran i hope it had a plan
then it stop then it said then end of forever is now and it ended.....


this one is phat :)

[WhiteTigerClaw]

i got one...it's called you suck

You Suck...
You Suck Little Ducks..
After You Suck Little Ducks..
You Want To You Know What To Little Ducks...
Now Forget This Little Poem...
Before I Do To You Know What In The Butt


:laughlong:

[Sportschick155]

did u kno that poems, DONT NEED TO RHYME, so in ur case white tiger, dont ryhme lol

[EYO]

*AHEM*
"a drug addicts pain"

i use to be a alcholic
i use to be narcotic
now i just use dem

for pleasure and pain
which cause great amount of strain...

wen ever i see them, it drives me crazy
for these moments always causes me to go frenzy

da only thing i see is now crazy bunnies
and for these bunnies had great amout of energy


ok......this poem talk about "bbbaaaddd" drugs
never use them cause they cause u pain and strain, sometimes pleasure

[darkmasterX]

you need to finsh it had a good start

[EYO]

another one of my great poems.....

*AHEM*

"wen ever i get high"

wen i get high
things go die
for i have no controls
over my mind
this crazy momemts
makes me feel bad
cause i have no dad

drugs cause u to do bad stuff

[mooo1]

alright,let me show you how it's done.
Razz, your poems are very good indeed, but know it's time for your demise!
yugioh!!!! it's time to duel! uhhh, ahem... ehh... ??? eh uhh sorry bout that.. to much yugioh.. anyway here's the poem.

Cow
There once was a cow from Main,
Who ate almost half of Spain.
He devoured the stores
and munched on the floors
And finally flew back in the rain.

well.. 0k so it's not that good,,, :laugh: but i tried.



Edited By mooo1 on Feb. 08 2003 at 23:34

[SolidSnake76]

who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who feels ignored?
who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy that works hard to be recognized?
who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who feels like a nobody?
who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who has big dreams?
who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who is tormented every day?
who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who is poor?

who will pay attention to the depressed boy?
the boy who has nobody in his life.
i will pay attention to that depressed boy.
because i am that depressed boy.

[EYO]

solidsnake78 went deep wit dat one

ok...i shall make another poem

*AHEM*

for many days passed
many knights clashed

deaths and wounded flesh
covered the feild
for their future was never fortold

now in our world
da same things happen
war and battles terorism too

why does this happen
wut was the cause
is there any reason for this many loss

ok......ma poem doesnt talk about drugs dis time......
and mooo1 urs is good...it rhymes :D

[SBYRD5]

Snake I know what it's like to be that boy....deep.



Constallations Of Mankind
Classical Music (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/sega/saturn/besn/4-1.mid)(It set my mind for this poem)

Love is printed in the stars is it not?
The same plot as Romeo and Juliet,
There stars were written to only end in tragic love,
But is it not better to have love than to not have loved at all?

We ask these questions to our inner self,
And sometimes share this with others,
But those you truely love you keep hidden,
In fear of being the victim of pain,

Isn't love it's on pain on the heart,
Cupid's arrow has it's way of striking,
The time you first wore your BIRTHDAY SUIT
Seems to decide your fate in those days...

We only consider stars beautiful,
Like Flowers that never wilt,
We often wish for a falling star to appear,
So we can have our chance to wish...

Wish for our inner desires,
Oh how we admire a companion,
To watch this wish asked for,and later recieved..

I have to go to sleep my eyes are burning

[Razz]

alright,let me show you how it's done.
Razz, your poems are very good indeed, but know it's time for your demise!
yugioh!!!! it's time to duel! uhhh, ahem... ehh... ??? eh uhh sorry bout that.. to much yugioh.. anyway here's the poem.

Cow
There once was a cow from Main,
Who ate almost half of Spain.
He devoured the stores
and munched on the floors
And finally flew back in the rain.

well.. 0k so it's not that good,,, :laugh: but i tried.
Wow, what an amazing limmerick.
(in french accent)
Ah shallenj yiu to ah dooell!
*slap*


Cheese
Look in the holes of this cheese
It makes you fall on your knees
Once you get up
You will throw up
And after that, you will sneeze


muhahahah . . .

[EYO]

i got another poem......

"how u feel wen your high"

u feel so high
you think your higher dan the sky
den you try to fly
but you keep falling and die
and u still always try

"pass it on, and run"

wen you get it
puff and pass it

wen its your turn run and take da whole thing
wen they catch up say u wer joking
and wen dey fall for it run again

[SolidSnake76]

friends come and friends go.
but for me, they all just go.
why dont any girl just like me for who i am?
why am i always hated through my life?
why is there conflict in this world?
why cant i find peace?




why do pple hate and ignore me?

[EYO]

"wen i get high"

wen i get high
i look at da sky
it always looks pale
sometimes looking like a whale
and right next to me a can of ale

but one thing you must always
bring is a can of air freshner
so wen your parents come
they wont smell a thing
they will smell two things
and if dat doesnt help, run and say daddy did it...............

[Razz]

friends come and friends go.
but for me, they all just go.
why dont any girl just like me for who i am?
why am i always hated through my life?
why is there conflict in this world?
why cant i find peace?




why do pple hate and ignore me?
I don't hate or ignore you . . . and I'm sure not a lot of ppl hate you.

[darkmasterX]

razz its is the junk here


World War 3

yo its like every day is a strugle
cuz it is like i am a pawn
and soon i will be gone
so when i die no one will cry
cuz everyone will still be fighting on

days will go by and so many people will die
because diesese will mutiply
when i look in the sky
i see the blood of every man and woman
who died fighting they where the first

that god placed a curse on
but that was not the worse one
now listen to this verse
people are scared to converse
they will disperse

cuz when they hear the sound
when bodies hit the ground
it feels like i am bound
to this place every time
i breath it tastes like waste

so now i am on the front line
putting my life on the line
its like going down stairs blind
you never know when its going to end
and you never know what going to happen


this is my feeling

[mooo1]

alright,let me show you how it's done.
Razz, your poems are very good indeed, but know it's time for your demise!
yugioh!!!! it's time to duel! uhhh, ahem... ehh... ??? eh uhh sorry bout that.. to much yugioh.. anyway here's the poem.

Cow
There once was a cow from Main,
Who ate almost half of Spain.
He devoured the stores
and munched on the floors
And finally flew back in the rain.

well.. 0k so it's not that good,,, :laugh: but i tried.
Wow, what an amazing limmerick.
(in french accent)
Ah shallenj yiu to ah dooell!
*slap*


Cheese
Look in the holes of this cheese
It makes you fall on your knees
Once you get up
You will throw up
And after that, you will sneeze


muhahahah . . .
wow Razz.... I'm flattered..( what does that word mean?) anyway, thx! i tought mine was nothing compared to your poems, but thx. now i got another one.


The sun and moon
The time has come for us to rise,
For all the birds and bees and flies
The light is shining bold and bright,
The time has come for one more fight,
Every day goes by the same,
Every day we play the same game
Then all is quiet and the day is done,
Then the moon comes out, and takes over the sun.

I hope you guys like this one better than my other one. Heh, not bad for a thirteen year old, eh?

[SBYRD5]

I rembered this poem form years ago during my early childhood I remeber almost every word of it and I even added some....


Mysidian Legend
Mystic Paladin (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/nintendo/snes/FF4Lunarians_KJMix.mid)

In the world of today we have two sets of mind,
We have pure evilness,and then we have pure goodness,
Some of our souls demand to share both sides evenly,
Often one of the sides prove to be more powerful,

What side rules your life?We all begin innocent,
Somewhere we are influenced then..some mantipulated,
Either way all our thoughts are different from the next being,
Me my soul...tells me to always honor my parents,

To honor the friendship of my comrades,
To protect those that can't protect there selves,
My soul tells me defeat all evil..even hidden evil,
I'm the holy knight and this is my legend....

One to be born from a dragon hoisting the light
And the dark arises high up in the sky to the still land.
Veiling the moon with the light of eternity,
It brings another promise to Mother Earth
With a bounty and mercy
That will in trust peace between two worlds..........

I sink fear deep in the heart of foul people,
And bring joy to those that only want peace,
My state of mind will not fail them,
I'm there Night light in the darkness,

My words make the devil scream in his fire kingdom,
I'm one of god's son's,and I tend to stay that,
I'm a christian that donates to the poor,
I slay the rude and give to the just....

I'm me...SBYRD5 the Paladin

[Shin_Jito]

Wish Upon a Shattered Star
by Trung Nguyen

Your beauty astounds me,
Set even brighter than the stars in the nighttime sky.
To the essense that lights my world.

You are the moon and stars in a lovers mind,
If you don't have a clue
A boy like me came out of the blue
I set you upon a pedestal atop the world.

Alas, you do not love me.
Lost forever, meant for another.
So what am I to do now that you are gone,
Wait for the moon's setting, East's first sign of dawn.

But my love for you still stays true.
A thousand words I yet cannot describe,
Two thousand, three thousand, my love still survives.
Because love is life and life is love,
Therefore I cannot live without you.

[SBYRD5]

*sigh* :biggrin:

[_-_Diablo_-_]

:D Roses r Red
Violets r Blue
The Smell of $hit Reminds me of u ! :D
:hehe:

[darkmasterX]

your smile makes my day
its simple your dimples
your eyes from your hips and thighs
got me hypnotized

sometimes i want take you for stroll
czu i like you i want you
i tried playing these roles
of a nice guy and a bad guy

but now i am going to be me
its like i am paying toll
cuz now my soul
is being suck down a black hole

and now i feel no emotion
to others but girl
you can be the one that makes
me see the turing point

when i talk to you
you make forget the worries of my life
i don't care what they think of you
cuz i love you

it seems like use love alot
cuz i think its always apart of the plot
i can't like someone cuz that is to weak
they might think i am a geek

but i have what for you
is passion compassion
its so strong not even iraq
can crack it

and now you know what i think
but now i am not sure you feel me
but thats ok if do call me

this is from victor
the boy who loves you

[darkmasterX]

SBYRD5: i am the poertry master :D

[SBYRD5]

lol :buttrock:

[mooo1]

um, ok let me try.

Frog

One sunny autumn day I saw,
As i was eating my fish errrr....raw
I noticed soemthing small and green,
It wriggled a little and threw up his uhhhh..... spleen.
I stared in suprise as it started to glow,
It jiggled a little and started to blow!
I got up and started to run,
Watching frogs was now no more fun,
For what I wasn't a frog at all
but a- hmm.. u don't what else to put here.
well i hoped ya liked it.

[SBYRD5]

Umm I made this last year it was...well if she reads it she will know it's her...


MY LOVE FOR JOY(Umm I know what you like to be called..but it fits better here...)

The music in my head... (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/sony/ps1/SabinWaltz.mid)

I've known you almost as long as a year now,
You seem to be like wine,
Each day your sweetness is more divine,
You really gave me a chance to come in your mind,

You and you alone are the only girl I think I have,
Ever loved,but never meet,I knew you were special,
From my first reply from you..and your friends are even cool
You seem happy and I want that to stay,

I realized one day I liked you to much..so I pushed away,
Yea that sounds foolish,and our bound slowly begin to
fade away like the memory of you was a dream,
A fantasy....but one day I woke up.....

I only had you on my mind that day....
I waited all day to just get a reply from you
But you never came.....

You know you helped me so much..
I felt lost and you said some nice..*snif*
Beautiful things to me...even though today..
I know what your body looks like,

I think your mind is your best feature,
I remeber you saying things like this to me...
"James what is your favorite flavor of icecream"
I would've said the same as you just to make you happy..

You told me people change...and your right,
But sometimes your feelings don't completly change,
For that someone...that someone you love...
You might not say it right nor express this love..

But love never dies...if it was ever there...
What I felt for you wasn't lust...but love..
I don't know what to think of you or myself now..
BUT I DO KNOW EVERYDAY AND EVERY PASSING SEC.

OF THOSE DAYS WE SPENT TO GATHER JUST TALKING I LIKED YOU FOR YOU.....I NEVER REALLY HAD A GOOD CONVERSATION WITH MY GIRLFRIENDS OR EVEN MY MOM.

You seem so cool...and your beauty is so divine...so
Baby girl I pray one day you will be mine....

[darkmasterX]

that was hot man :( i admit defeat

















sike soon i will write another one

[AfterMath]

roses are red violets are blue (are they or are they purple???)
this poem is soon over, i now kill u :buttrock: :buttrock: and ppl poems dont have to ryme just so ya know

[darkmasterX]

and ppl poems dont have to ryme just so ya know
poems do have to ryme what is wrong with you
that is the whole concept is on ryming scheme

[Sportschick155]

and ppl poems dont have to ryme just so ya know
poems do have to ryme what is wrong with you
that is the whole concept is on ryming scheme
actually, darkmaster..u r completely WRONG! poems r really about the meaning behind the words itself..not the rhymes..a poem can b just as great wid a rhymes...did u just learn something?

[darkmasterX]

then its not a poem then it is just words that your are saying that sound nice.

[Sportschick155]

naww..theres always a meaning behind a poem....U SHOULD KNOW THAT. u can make it sound nice with the words but the poem could just b completely pointless, no meaning...get it? i bet u dont.

[darkmasterX]

they have to ryme all poems have to ryme or they are not poems. sports you don't know i went though with my poems when people say that they don't ryme and this teacher in my school gets my poems copy righted and she says that they have to ryme sports i do know end of story.

[Sportschick155]

alrighty.. :laughlong:

[SBYRD5]

Umm I made this last year it was...well if she reads it she will know it's her...


MY LOVE FOR JOY(Umm I know what you like to be called..but it fits better here...)

The music in my head... (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/sony/ps1/SabinWaltz.mid)

I've known you almost as long as a year now,
You seem to be like wine,
Each day your sweetness is more divine,
You really gave me a chance to come in your mind,

You and you alone are the only girl I think I have,
Ever loved,but never meet,I knew you were special,
From my first reply from you..and your friends are even cool
You seem happy and I want that to stay,

I realized one day I liked you to much..so I pushed away,
Yea that sounds foolish,and our bound slowly begin to
fade away like the memory of you was a dream,
A fantasy....but one day I woke up.....

I only had you on my mind that day....
I waited all day to just get a reply from you
But you never came.....

You know you helped me so much..
I felt lost and you said some nice..*snif*
Beautiful things to me...even though today..
I know what your body looks like,

I think your mind is your best feature,
I remeber you saying things like this to me...
"James what is your favorite flavor of icecream"
I would've said the same as you just to make you happy..

You told me people change...and your right,
But sometimes your feelings don't completly change,
For that someone...that someone you love...
You might not say it right nor express this love..

But love never dies...if it was ever there...
What I felt for you wasn't lust...but love..
I don't know what to think of you or myself now..
BUT I DO KNOW EVERYDAY AND EVERY PASSING SEC.

OF THOSE DAYS WE SPENT TO GATHER JUST TALKING I LIKED YOU FOR YOU.....I NEVER REALLY HAD A GOOD CONVERSATION WITH MY GIRLFRIENDS OR EVEN MY MOM.

You seem so cool...and your beauty is so divine...so
Baby girl I pray one day you will be mine....
Darkmaster examine this poem..it barely rhymes but it has a touching point...aslong as the poem has a message it is a poem...

Actually Rapping is poetry just the rhyming scheme your thinking about...

[darkmasterX]

its does ryme go to poetry.com cuz i to lazy to explain it

[SBYRD5]

Oh ok let me explain the type of poetry you are subscribing is rhyiming scheme..

Umm forceful statement poetry does not rhyme..

I wish the member asshole could come to this thread and show..

???

[Elena]

its does ryme go to poetry.com cuz i to lazy to explain it
Poems do not need to rhyme. Look at hikuis and a poems(or others) by langston huges called mother to son. It does not ryhme but it is a poem never the less.

[SBYRD5]

Love 50 like a fat kid loves..donuts

Anyway listen to Elena..

[Scorponok]

[color=blue]This is.. a little late but... it's not quite over a month. I found's this poem, and I think it's sort of cool..

It

[KickurassKen]

[quote:post_uid0="Razz"]Oooh, Sbyrd, pretty funky!

Oh, and thank you kindly, Blossom!
I don't have any more poems, but I do have a few songs. Here's one.

<span style='font-family:unicorn'><span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'>Crash and Burn</span></span>

Verse 1
Everything I

[Scorponok]

Did you write that Razz?

[darkmasterX]

sorry people i was wrong i forgot about free verse :D

[Scorponok]

Well.. um.. any opinions on the poem thingy I wrote? Or is it to worthless to wrote about, lol

[WhiteTigerClaw]

Roses Are Red
Violets Are Blue
What Is That Poo?
It's Under Your Shoe

:laugh:

[AngelWings]

all of u have great poems...such poetic talent :) mine...well itz limited..lol..but herez one of my poemz that i made a long time ago...

The world spins around and around,
Never stopping
The scenery passes me by.
The crazy merry-go-round,
Itz never stopping.
Memories spin with the scenery.
Memories of happiness and lies,
The memories of being told one too many lies...

No one knoz wut goes on behind the curtain,
They only see the show.
Never understanding the pain,
Never caring,
Never looking backstage...
Only seeing the show...

Few lights dimly shine thru the darkness,
Just to be covered by the shadows again.
My soul and heart can be ripped only so many times.
Why should i even try
Just to be torn apart over and over again?

Nothing is ever good enough,
But i don't have to worry nemore
Why you ask?
Because i've given up.
I shouldn't have tried before,
No one realized how much i had to sacrifice
No one understood
My scarred self trusts so few now
Never letting anyone in...never letting them understand...

Never will i sit,
Blaming me, myself, and i.
All those "happy" memories
Have gone down to the cellar,
To be buried, never to be seen again...

I can finally open my wings and fly
Fly away from all the pain...
I'm never going back to that hell that was once paradise.
I'm never going to have my mind clouded with confusion,
Then suspicions
And turning into frustration
With my feelings being bottled up
And kept deep within me..

Never will i go thru the pain that i've suffered all those days
Never will i break and fall
For i only have my pride and spirit
Never will it happen again...
Never...

[PSYCHO]

Roses Are Red
Violets Are Blue
What Is That Poo?
It's Under Your Shoe

:laugh:
pff...

[DCMAX123]

Roses Are Red
Violets Are Blue
What Is That Poo?
It's Under Your Shoe

:laugh:
;)

[EYO]

yo.....

im da old dayz
purple haze
makes der mind turn into a maze
dey got dat crazy gaze on dey face
so wen you see dem crazy facez
run like ders no other places

[apocolypse83]

Today is very boring,

It's a very boring day,

there is nothing much to look at,

There is nothing much to say,

Theres a peacock on my sneakers, and a penguin on my head, theres a dormouse on my doorstep i am going back to bed, Today is very boring, it is boring through and through, there is absolutely nothing that i think i want to do. Theres a dragon blowing smoke rings theres an ogre with a sword there are giants riding rhinos i am positively bored.

[SBYRD5]

<span style='font-size:12pt;line-height:100%'>I close my eyes and I keep seeing things
Rainbow waterfalls
sunny liquid dreams....are you a dream?

Is this now which is present,
When wind passes me I'm reminded of whispers,
Yet each breeze has it's own tale..

Confusion creeps inside me raining doubt
A thousand thoughts yet one voice creates it's own droubt(Misspelling when there is a serious lack of water),
My very mouth is dry from my retorts at society...

I find my oasis in a group ofundergrads,
I find my winter when surrounded by posers,
I wonder into my spring when I'm with Erica.</span>
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Please view this thread to understand the minds of the older members of this forum much more clearly....

Only in poetry & art can I truly express myself...=/



Edited By SBYRD5 on May 06 2004 at 16:32

[wargun]

I'm giving this a shot so don't laugh

There's one thing that angels can't do that u do
and that's love me the same way that i love you
our togetherness makes the stars shine bright
and if we break up the world may end tonight
Love is the game that I play with you
But you played your beauty as a card so i must lose
And when i go to sleep at night at night
I see your face as a guiding light
The Bond we have can never break
Forin you forever my heart will stay

[Restavega]

I thought I heard TMyApp say no topics over a month old should be revived... this thing is over a year old and you guys are bringing it back from the attic!

But I will post my poem anyway... this is what I call a freestyle poem...

"I look into the sky with cherries in my eyes,
what a surprise my girl got some nice thighs.
Everybody gettin blessed kid,
my money was well invested.
When my mom was arrested
she did the bid suggested.
When she was released
she must've thought her son was deceased
Saw her in with casanova, I walked over to where she was at
grabbed my gat, cocked it back, exploded, pulled over and reloaded

Watched as my mom fell, but couldn't tell she was on the cell
heard shots poppin saw heads droppin, knew the po po's were here, popped it into first gear!"

Well, like I said, it was a freestyle poem and what sucks to you can be loved by someone else.

[Angel-Eyes]

Im not a poet by my favorite poem is this one by Sir Walter Scott.

Breathes there the man, with soul so dead,
Who never to himself hath said,
This is my own, my native land!
Whose heart hath ne'er within him burn'd,
As home his footsteps he hath turn'd
From wandering on a foreign strand!
If such there breathe, go, mark him well;
For him no Minstrel raptures swell;
High though his titles, proud his name,
Boundless his wealth as wish can claim;
Despite those titles, power, and pelf,
The wretch, concentred all in self,
Living, shall forfeit fair renown,
And, doubly dying, shall go down
To the vile dust, from whence he sprung,
Unwept, unhonour'd, and unsung.

[SBYRD5]

I revived this topic for a GOOD reason.

Everyone is gaining tainted minds and maybe such a topic could help everyone express themselves in a positive way including myself.

If someone gets in trouble for this I accept full punishment.

[azncat]

Follow your destiny

If you had a a special person...
a sensational love...
What would you feel?

In that persons heart...
Certanly in my heart....
Would be in the realms...
the gates....
the path of glory....

A path in your heart....
a special path...
will tell you to follow....

If you had a petrified beauty...
would you create a special item to you?
I know that I would write
about a prosperous love and glory,
glory to tell you to follow...
follow what you believe....
follow what you think...
follow your dreams to your destiny....

[Nosoul4Sfo]

I like to fart because i ate a pop tart.
come on man let me suck your hand.
Im so crazy because My name is daisy.

So listen big boy Im a girl better shut up before i make you hurl.
In China they eat rice, so if you mess with me then I will give you Lice.
Peace doggy G Lmnop Fizz,tizz, Pizzi my nizzi

[SBYRD5]

I boy is downsized for his lineage...of failure and shame,
He was defeated in his warrior camp
In his defeat he was stripped of his clothes and stripped of his pride,
Now a comedy in it's self that he has become he flees this camp to return one day stronger....

He later finds a women she has truth an innocence,
This woman decides to mak a pilgrimage that will end suffering,
Suffering of the world there in,

The boy now a teenager finds that this woman he truely loves
For her will motivated him to find the manhood he had forgotten,
He makes a goal to himself to guard this woman,
For her well is strong....yet her body is small,
So to protect her he decides to master a sword...
He decides to pick up a sword and cut his own path,

He is silent,but agrees to return to the camp he was once humilated and rend assunder because to complete thepilgrimage you would have to journey in that drection closes to Mecca.

He is one day confronted by his past fiends,
Now as a man he returns to face these..no those who considered his family and birth right a comedy.

He is teased and tuanted all pointing at the warrior who defeated him in such a fashion.

The woman says"We must continue our journey."

The man says "I must win..."

THe warrior who defeated him says "Woman may pass..... little samurai may not pass."

"Only the strong can enter this land you would shame this land if I allowed you to continue your pilgrimage here or beyond."-Says this warrior

Man walks over to man who defeated him and holds his head up with burning eyes and says"So I must prove my worth...Biran." :angryfire:

" I'll remove your horn just how I removed your pride..."

Man="No I will not lose.....I will win."

A battle begins......a battle for respect... :buttrock:



Edited By SBYRD5 on May 11 2004 at 15:31

[azncat]

A box of hope

I keep a box in my study....
for things that draw me
and useful sometimes in hope of need.
i keep not one but many hopes in my mind.
when someone dies and i have no one to help me
i dont give up hope... when that person died i felt like my heart struck with prosperity and sorrow... i couldnt take it.
i thought i lost hope... but i met another person to help me back up


that person filled my heart again.... i was no longer alone...
because i never gave up hope

[96-1084566791]

IM THE BEST POET LISTEN TO DIS;

ROSES ARE RED
VIOLET ARE BLUE
I WRITE POEMS, BETTER THAN YOU

[PSYCHO]

u keep spammin the forum with those post and ull end up being banned