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Name - TJ
Age - 21
Race - Human
Home town - south city
Home planet - Earth
Anime - Dragon ball AF (alternate future)
Backround story -
As a child TJ didn't like fighting and he was just like any normal 13 year old boy, But one day a evil tyrant attacked his city and starting wreaking havok. When the tyrants soldiers attacked TJ's home he was the only survivor, and later escaped the city. TJ ventured to the military base known as <^> And was sent to an outer space colony only inhabited by a few fighters. 8 years later TJ returned to earth somehow and went back to south city and stopped the fiend with his new super human abilities, Now he has dedicated his life to protecting Earth and its inhabitants from evil.
Bio -
TJ is a very strong fighter with ablities that normal humans cannot posses, He is the kind of person that doesnt take orders very well and likes to do things his way. The problem with that though is he sometimes causes trouble with his fellow teammates but he always Follows 1 philosophy with his team - All of us come back or none of us come back.
lol cool story eh ? well Now I am going to show u TJ's power stages
Human - [img:post_uid8]http://www.gsarchives.com/psx/nanim_sprites/ff8/card4.gif[/img:post_uid8]
Super human 1 - [img:post_uid8]http://www.gsarchives.com/psx/nanim_sprites/ff8/card7.gif[/img:post_uid8] He looks like that but without the black tattoo :laugh:
Super human 2 - [img:post_uid8]http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/cc/faces/youngdario.gif[/img:post_uid8]
Super human 3 - [img:post_uid8]http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/cc/faces/dario.gif[/img:post_uid8]
Super human 4 - [img:post_uid8]http://www.gsarchives.com/psx/nanim_sprites/ChronoCross/glenn1.gif[/img:post_uid8]
Super human evil - [img:post_uid8]http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/xg/faces/ramsus.gif[/img:post_uid8] Hair turns white and the person loses all emotions but anger. ( extremly deadly and can only be aqquired by getting possed by the pshyco dragon in the green star dragon balls.
Last but not least his music.
1.
TJ's theme (http://www.rpgdreamer.com/music/lunar/lunar19.mid)
2.
TJ's Holy Dragon Sword attack (http://www.rpgdreamer.com/music/ff9/ff990.mid)
3.Evil TJ (http://www.rpgdreamer.com/music/ff9/ff948.mid)
4.
TJ's Battle (http://www.rpgdreamer.com/music/ffx/ff105.mid)
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Here are some of his attacks.
1. Annihilator cannon - A strong kamehameha like beam
2. Pshyco Annihilator cannon - The strongest beam ever can only be used at level 4
3. Burning punch - Hand is engulfed with flame.
4.Final cutter - 1 slice down the middle
5. Pshyco final cutter - many slashes then 1 slice down middle
6. Air lance - Uses air as weapon
7. Rapid heal - Heals myself or others
8. Prisoner of fate - A move made of rage and sorrow - can only be performed when TJ losses a friend to death....
Evil moves.
1. Soul absorb - Absorbs the opponents life force and gets stronger
2. Rage expell - Uses all rage and attacks with a massive unseen force
3. Void - opens up a portal and takes opponent inside and continues match there
4. Life force attack - Uses the powers of the stolen life forces to attack with thier moves.
5. Super nova - If you played final fantasy 7 you know what it is heh heh heh
6. Forever zero - Makes the whole enviroment black and attacks with a huge dark spark - (chrono cross move)
Well that wraps up my character, post your characters too. :plain: :laugh:
The musics messed up I will fix them some day :laugh:
SBYRD5
10-18-2002, 10:25 PM
Wow, TJ thats really cool.The music was kinda good.
Lunar=Your theme
RPGDreamer=Your cool sword
FF9=Evil TJ
FFX=TJ's battle, thats way to cool.
Um TJ5 you have a great idea. This thread could be the spot were every RPG story writer in this forum puts the stats for there RPG character.
I'm going to put my stats here too.Wow TJ what a cool idea.So we can read each others character.
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Name=KHCloud
Age=21(I want to drink)
Race=Human/Lunarian
Home Town=New Nibeland
Home Planet=Born on Earth
Anime=Dragonball AF(Uncut)
Well,KHCloud is really the average guy besides him having mako energy(The planet's life force) inside him.His father was the great hero he was the legendary"Paladin(Warrior of Light)".He lost his father at the age of 7,and his mother was killed by his worst rival when he was at the age of 17.He wonders the world looking for jobs that pay well.He has been on many adventures,and he also was in the military group "Shield".He was never heard from again after a horriable battle.He has resurfaced again in this anime.He also dreams of going to the moon....
These are his music themes for each level strenght he reaches,and also the music for different things.He only has three levels of strenght,an one evil level of strenght.(You have to have one.)
1.
KHCloud (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/nintendo/snes/dkctitle.mid)
2.
KHCloud and party win the battle (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/nintendo/snes/Fanfare2.mid)
3.
KHCloud traveling..... (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/nintendo/snes/FF2_Underground.mid)
4.
Paladin level 1 (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/nintendo/snes/ff4-WithinTheGiant.mid)
5.
Paladin level 2 (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/nintendo/snes/X3_Cainlab.mid)
6.
Paladin level 3 (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/nintendo/snes/x3zero2.mid)
7.
Memories Of KHCloud's Family (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/sony/ps2/findream_V1_2.mid)
8.
Evil KHCloud (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/nintendo/snes/snesMMX1_Sigma_BattleV1.1.mid)
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Now images of the stages of Paladin=
Level 1=
[img:post_uid5]http://www.ffextreme.com/kh/gif/riku.gif[/img:post_uid5]
Level 2=
[img:post_uid5]http://www.ffextreme.com/ff4/abilities/paladin.gif[/img:post_uid5]
[img:post_uid5]http://www.ffextreme.com/ff4/characters/icons1a.jpg[/img:post_uid5]
Level 3=
[img:post_uid5]http://www.gamegen.com/fightgen/characters/kofJhun.jpg[/img:post_uid5] [img:post_uid5]http://www.gamegen.com/fightgen/characters/snk-jhun.gif[/img:post_uid5]
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Now for an image of KHCloud,and the evil version of him...easy. ???
KHCloud=
[img:post_uid5]http://battlerobo.com/khauthority/graphics/prof_jay.png[/img:post_uid5][img:post_uid5]http://battlerobo.com/khauthority/pics/characters/mini_cloud.gif[/img:post_uid5]
Evil KHCloud=
[img:post_uid5]http://www.gamegen.com/fightgen/characters/k9999-k2k1-2.gif[/img:post_uid5][img:post_uid5]http://www.gamegen.com/fightgen/characters/k9999-windcape.gif[/img:post_uid5]
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Now that I've informed you about the music themes of my character,and the images of him.I fell you should know his attacks.
Final Buster Heaven=KHCloud's Limit Break.He hold's his right hand towards the moon and gathers the Kai off the Lunarians.He then fuses the energy into his blade just by simpily holding it.He points the blade at his enemy then runs straight towards the enemy.He fades right through the enemy for the first strike.Then he appears from behind with a Kai bladed strike.After hitting the target KHCloud uses a wind spell,and knocks the oppentant away from him.Next appearing infront of the oppentant with a lighting spell fused with his blade to perform a maxmium damage hit.
Spirit Cover=KHCloud summons the spirit of his departed parents to protect the party from attacks for a limited time.
E.R. Beam=E.R.Beam stands for Electric Razor Beam.First KHCloud Swirls his sword around his head to make a small twister whic protects him like a shield.After the twister is able to keep it's speed stable.KHCloud slams the sword straight towards the oppentant to make a shockwave beam.The beam travels directly towards the oppentant.If the oppentants tries a form of counter attack the twister will suck the enemy towards the twister.There for the oppentant will be hit by the attack unless he/she has some form of teleportation.
Tears Of Justice=KHCloud grows anger,and tears form on his face.The oppentant often think they have won when this happens.With his tears is the power of mako energy in each tear.This can heal his team mates to almost full health.
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Paladin Attacks
Light Warrior's Faith=This tech. can bring up the attack power of KHCloud as well as his skill level,an evading ability.It is done when a Paladin beleives in his on abilities,or if there is a spiritual desire to honor someone beyond the living.
Legend of Paladin=Only a level three can perform this task.You must be focused on the strongest evil as well to pull this one off.First,KHCloud withdraws his sword,and begins to focus upon the evil force.Naturally the oppentant will attack now,but if your a true paladin warrior level 3 do not counter attack.By now the moon has eclisped.That means the "Dragon Of Light" will appear.The "Dragon Of Light" is really a living airship for transportation to the moon.If using it for transportation the proper term is the "The Holy Whale".
Well anyway, with the "Dragon of Light".Your oppentant should fall easily.
Shining Glare=This attack blinds all enemies for 5 min.s
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My weapons,and armor,ect.
Zepher Cape(Increases evading ability)
B.Buster Sword(you need a weapon)
Timberland Boots(look cool)
Buckler(used as a shield)
Scouter(Read fighting powers)
Ribbon(pervents stats change)
Military pants(I wear pants)
military vest(I wear shirts)
I think I've covered my character completely....whos next?
Here's my other character for my cousin
Name - Chuck
Age - 17
Race - Human
Home town - West city (capsule corp town)
Home planet - Earth
Anime - Dragon Ball AF
Backround story -
Chuck is way younger than his cousin TJ but age doesnt matter, because he can hold his own against the toughest opponents. He was born in South city but moved to West city at the age of 3.... When South city was attacked Chuck was worried about TJ and that the ppl that attacked south city would eventually attack West city, So he went to the <^> base and found that TJ was ok.., Chuck was also sent to the space colony to train. Chuck only has 2 power stages of super human.
Bio - A strong fighter, but he is too reckless. It doesnt matter who's in the way he will still destroy his target no matter the costs. Because chuck has the power to heal ppl with touch and not just himself unlike TJ, He can heal the innocent ppl he hurts with his power, He works well in a team but when he is teamed with TJ chuck always tries to show off his "true" power and look cool.
Here are Chuck's power stages -
Human - [img:post_uid14]http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/suik1/faces/flik.gif[/img:post_uid14]
Super Human 1 - [img:post_uid14]http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/suik2/faces/flik.gif[/img:post_uid14]
Super Human 2 -[img:post_uid14]http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/suik2/faces/camus.gif[/img:post_uid14]
Super Human evil -[img:post_uid14]http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/suik2/faces/lucablight.gif[/img:post_uid14]
Here are his attacks -
1. Dominator beam cannon - A smaller variation of annihilator cannon
2. Death blastor - AN upgraded dominator beam cannon
3. Breaker - A massive combo of attacks ending with an uppercut and then an axe handle smash in air
4. Beam saber rush - Makes an energy sword and slashes opponent
5. Master kick - A very strong kick that has a 70% chance of KO'ing the opponent
Evil moves -
1. Shock wave pulsar - Takes opponent into sky and blasts them with massive electric energy beams
2. Pshyco - GOes completely insane and does massive damage to opponent till he/she dies.
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Chuck is the only character that has a brown haired evil mode because he wasn't possesed by the pshyco dragon he was injected with dark cells.
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That wraps up chuck's character :plain: :laugh:
princevegetam
10-19-2002, 11:20 AM
LMAO!! i call that 0% originality. so much is copied from DB series
akuma_forever
10-19-2002, 11:31 AM
wow!this could be the next thing that comes close to dbz!!!(but the superhuman stages need work.) ;) ;) ;)
Yes they do. But im lazy :laugh:
Vegetam none of those moves are copied they are all made up by me and sbyrd right now, I am waiting for more ppl to make thier characters then We might start a little story thread
lol :plain:
princevegetam
10-19-2002, 11:59 AM
i'm talking about everything in general. this super human crap. it's just another version of SS except for humans. and that annhilator cannon(corny name and totally lame) as you said, is a strong KAMEHAMEHA LIKE beam. plus all those stories were modified from either FF or DB. the pictures are taken from FF. come up with something original. like a different kind of story. oh wait, you can't cause you never watched any decent anime, lol j/ks(but it's kind of true you know)
ibuku
10-19-2002, 07:00 PM
ok this isprety...
The stories are made up from my mind and I made this character b4 I started to like dragon ball except it wasnt an anime character it was a fighter maker character..
The cities are just added there for the story when We all start it.
And I said as strong as kamehameha like beam so the readers would know it because many ppl watch dbz, and super human was 1st mentioned in the nes times lol
SBYRD5
10-19-2002, 09:41 PM
Prince if you fell our characters are so lame make your own.Please don't critize other peoples work,and dare not to attempt the same goal.
Nah, your to afraid to make a character.You realize you would do no better.Maybe I'm wrong.Prove me wrong Princevegetam make a character of your own.
LOL :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
G_GUNDAM
10-19-2002, 10:29 PM
hahahahahahahahahahah why you gotta copy so much man!!!!!!! hahahahahahahah air lance and holy dragon sword hahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!! damn tj and whats with the evil tj HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:D ??? :angry: :0 :angryfire:
..............
stop doin that
Panda_Man
10-19-2002, 10:37 PM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA AIR LNCE BASS FAG THAT IS PRETTY COOL ACTUALLY HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA :D :D :D :D :D
AIRLANCE IS A MOVE !
PS: Lance bass is a homo LOL :laugh:
Wow, you guys! You're characters are very.... Cute! ^-^ But then again, everything is cute to me, so that's not really saying much, is it? Oh well, I like the characters anyway! I'll make one too!
Name:Yae Hanabatake
Meaning: flourishing flower garden
Kanji: [img:post_uid4]http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Flourishing.gif[/img:post_uid4][img:post_uid4]http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Hanabatake.gif[/img:post_uid4]
Age: 18
Race: Human
Hometown: Harajuku, Japan
Homeplanet: Earth
Anime: .....She's, like, kinda not from any?
Yae Hanabatake is just like any girl... unless you count the fact she was born on christmas, and that she had natural green hair since she was born. She had also been blessed with the ability to use ki, but it was unknown to her. She lived a normal life in the snowy mountains, and spent a lot of time outside, exploring forests, higher mountains, lakes, ponds, and buildings. One day, though, she went into a very tall building, and found herself in a room with a lot of tube-like cages holding mutated monsters. She saw them, and was seen, and then security took her to the Scientist behind the dirty work. He began to run tests on the girl, and noticed that she had an immense amount of ki, and wanted to experiment with the Ki. But one night, out of fear from a sound, Yae threw a projectile of ki at her door, and it was destroyed. She looked at her hands for a few minutes, and then escaped. She ran all the way back home, but when she got there, she found her family slaughtered on the living room floor. She mourned what happened, and eventually went into a fighting dojo about 20 miles away from her house seeking training to harness her ki abilities. Her master, Cho Chang, knew only the basic use of using ki as an attack force. When she taught Yae how to use her ki, Yae used the training to be able to use more advanced forms of using it, and was soon able to shoot beams, strengthen her attacks, and do some other things with her ki. Now, at the age of 18, she works for a justice organization called "Secure Thoughts". She has become the best agent in her fields, which are investigation, and undercover investigation.
She doesn't have power stages, but she looks like... this:
[img:post_uid4]http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Mizukipf.jpg[/img:post_uid4]
Attacks as of her current level (yes, I know I am copying Mizuki):
Enmai: a mixture of Ki, strength, and elegance. This attack has the elemental attribute of wind and can only be used at close range. Perfect for any enemy. [img:post_uid4]http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Enmai.gif[/img:post_uid4]
Kyokuenmai: A ki blast with the force of a...er... (looking for example)....Oh! The Kamehameha Wave thingy! Has the elemental attribute of ice. Perfect against beasts, and can sometimes freeze the opponent! [img:post_uid4]http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Kyokuenmai.gif[/img:post_uid4]
Kenmaikyaku: A non-elemental aerial attack that can be used in close range, and mid-range, but not far range. Great for flying enemies, but bad for beasts. [img:post_uid4]http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Kenmaikyaku.gif[/img:post_uid4]
Renenmai: Another mixture of even more ki, more strength, and more elegance, but with added differences. Can be used from any range, and has the elemental attribute of water. Very good against human fighters. [img:post_uid4]http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/RenenmaiMizuki.gif[/img:post_uid4]
Chiyu No Uta: A song that has the strange ability to heal. This can be good and bad, but mostly good. Doesn't fully heal, and can only heal the one person that is focused on when singing the song.
SolidSnake76
10-19-2002, 11:03 PM
File on SolidSnake
name-unknown
age-unknown
race-human
hometown-unknown
background:
born from genitics in the 1970's, snake grew into a powerful soldier. talking on armies single handedly in zanzibar, outer heaven, and shadow moses island, snake was a hero to the world. but he got tired of fighting and retired to alaska. now called back on duty. he fights new enemies. but will he survive?
powers-transforming into the incredible hulk.
weapons-a variety from a knife to a 9mm handgun to a m16 assult rifle to a SAM stinger missile launcher.
skills[in percentage]:
intellegance:88%
strength:77%
durablity:76%
vulnability:80%
weapon expertist:100%+
fighting skills:98%
Good characters ppl
PS: Roll in the anime section ur not supposed to take someone from anime u make it up LOL well thats ok :) LOL
PS: So ur both gonna be in the story eh ?
Good characters ppl
PS: Roll in the anime section ur not supposed to take someone from anime u make it up LOL well thats ok :) LOL
PS: So ur both gonna be in the story eh ?
Um... if you were refering to the fact that I had to copy the attacks, and face portrait, then I must say, you're character wasn't exactly completely original either. And at least I was able to come up with attack pics and stuff. But if you weren't, then..okay, thanks?
SBYRD5
10-19-2002, 11:28 PM
See TJ people did come to your thread...you just had to give it time.
Roll he's not cute....he's cool. :laugh:
I'm almost done editing my post on the first page....
No No roll I ment the section that says...
Anime - U could make one up if u wanted...
Just giving some helpful info
SBYRD5
10-20-2002, 03:29 AM
I'm finished check out my character on the first page...phewww ;)
G_GUNDAM
10-20-2002, 12:26 PM
yall need to stop copying dbz and be original!!!!! here is a storyu for ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
http://www.fireball20xl.com/folder/sa/chap1/strip2.jpg
http://www.fireball20xl.com/folder/sa/chap1/strip3.jpg
QUIET_KILLER
10-20-2002, 12:44 PM
[color=blue:post_uid2]My goodness mista GGund@m.I didn't know any better I would think sonic.Is wrestling with knuckles except she's not fight back :lol: My goodness you might want to redit :lol: :biggrin: :wtf: :lol:[/color:post_uid2]
SBYRD5
10-20-2002, 01:15 PM
yall need to stop copying dbz and be original!!!!! here is a storyu for ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
http://www.fireball20xl.com/folder/sa/chap1/strip2.jpg
http://www.fireball20xl.com/folder/sa/chap1/strip3.jpg
Umm you should do what you preach.
Your comic copies of= Mario 2,Megaman X2,and Sonic and Knuckles,and Tails spirits.
Sorry rookie look at my signature http://theria.net for some real comics.
LOL
Quiet killer - Knuckles is a guy..... stupid lol
Personally, I think Knuckles is too good for Sonic...
DARKPICCOLO
10-20-2002, 03:57 PM
isnt knuckles with that BAT CHICK?? :hmmm:
princevegetam
10-20-2002, 04:41 PM
Prince if you fell our characters are so lame make your own.Please don't critize other peoples work,and dare not to attempt the same goal.
Nah, your to afraid to make a character.You realize you would do no better.Maybe I'm wrong.Prove me wrong Princevegetam make a character of your own.
mwuahahahahhahaha, i thought you'd never ask. but i don't have a lot of time so i'll give the basics and post more about the character later (and ppl, plz don't steal my COMPLETELY original characters).
name: Soku Kazaki
age: mystery
race: human
home planet: Aroshi
Anime: blades of VI
i'll post more about the story later
SBYRD5
10-21-2002, 06:11 PM
So you accepted.Maybe there is hope for you after all. :laugh:
SSJKarma
10-21-2002, 06:56 PM
Name: Karma
Age: 500 year
Race: unknown (kind of god in his dimension)
Hometown: unknown
Homeplanet: some dimension
Anime: DB LS (Dragonball Lost Soul)
Karma is a god(king) in his dimension. he make Spirits his slaves and use them to do his dirty works ! one day, one of his slave, named CABBAGE (don't laugh, all sayiens have legume names) succeeded in breaking up his mind slaving. he changed dimension and took refuge on earth. 20 years later Karma find out about his SLAVE hideout and decided to get him back.
in his dimension they have no real FORM. so like CABBAGE, he had to create a body. he looked at every single life form and took the powerfull one. he made a saiyen body ! once on earth he reached CABBAGE and the battle between them started. after a while CABBAGE asked if Karma wanted to know how he had broke free ! when Karma said:"why not..." CABBAGE transformed into a SUPER SAIYEN (how could we have like that race so much) meaning that he had gotten so strong that now he could break free ! after a while again and some KARMA ending beated up. he angered so much about the fact that in 500 years he didn't lost one single soul. that he climbed to SSJ too ! the fight ended up Karma leaving cause of his Wounds !
my friend and i have actually RP those chars and we made a trilogy of it !
SPECIAL MOVES:
- Dragon Buster (just another Kamehameha like beam, very strong and looks like a dragon head)
ay other moves are just no names and are like the rest... BLASTS and FIREBALLS !
me and a friend have other chars... KONACKANS !
they live on earth... that's another story !
if you want to know what Karma looks like then just look at my avatar ! i made it myself ! the hair looking like trunks is just coincidence ! i never wanted to copy !
QUIET_KILLER
10-21-2002, 07:10 PM
Nice character HmMm... A God 499+ years d@m :lol: Isn't that a some Imagination :biggrin: Oh well Sbyrd wow his was huge though :lol: I wonder if princevegetam is going to make one HmMm....
princevegetam
10-21-2002, 07:25 PM
Prince if you fell our characters are so lame make your own.Please don't critize other peoples work,and dare not to attempt the same goal.
Nah, your to afraid to make a character.You realize you would do no better.Maybe I'm wrong.Prove me wrong Princevegetam make a character of your own.
mwuahahahahhahaha, i thought you'd never ask. but i don't have a lot of time so i'll give the basics and post more about the character later (and ppl, plz don't steal my COMPLETELY original characters).
name: Soku Kazaki
age: mystery
race: human
home planet: Aroshi
Anime: blades of VI
i'll post more about the story later
and now for a little more information this guy.
the year is 5,000 years into the future. in the year 2050 humans created the first AI(artificial intelligence) as the years passed, by the year 2200 AI were practically everywhere. from waiters to construction workers. but in the year 2500 they started to become more independent. by 2550, there were AI terrorists all over the planet(of course, by this time humans have long learned of space travel and colonized at least 32 different planets). the AI slowly started to grow in numbers and humans weren't able to control them any longer. the humans fled to their colonies on other planets. so after almost 4500 years, human population was down to only a few million. they are now scattered across 926 different planets. the AI are constantly going from planet to planet and opress the humans on a regular basis. the humans have now long forgotten how they had flourished and created the AIs that now kick them around.
and that's basically, the background story, i haven't gotten to the point where the anime takes place yet, so don't go crazy if you think this aint original cause that wasn't the story, it was the events leading up to the time of the story.
Jhteck29
10-22-2002, 07:01 PM
Name: Jaims (i cant use my real name!)
Age: 21
Race :human
Game: Mvs.C3 (hopefully)
Appearance: My favorite/usual attire - grey sweatshirt, khakis, slip-on nikes, green eyes ands golden brown hair parted down the center.
Concept: DJ with the ability to absorb force or waves and redirect it or conserve it. I can focus on either absorbing a projectile attack and saving it (inc. in hyper bar) or take a physical hit and convert it to health (but not simultaneously). Also applies to specials (except unblockable ones). I have the ability to create an explosive shpere of force around myself and also focus my own power into one giant punch/kick. Specials - huge spherical force explosion, power combo, invincibilty for 10 seconds.
Story: a mutant that keeps his life involved with what everyone else his age enjoys......music. He has the habit of using his ability to absorb force waves and converting them to music waves, acting as a human amp. This is why it always sounds like the dance clubs in the city when he fights.
Sidenote: I attempted to create a new unique character that has a new weird ability that can be used. Hope you guys understand/like it.
SSJKarma
10-22-2002, 08:39 PM
a character with MUSIC FIGHTING techniques ?
i would love seeing you beat on RYU by BREAK DANCING ! :lol:
just joking, at least it is very original as i don't know any MARVEL char able to do that !
NAME: NA
SBYRD5
10-23-2002, 07:01 AM
SSJKarma I do that with a friend in this online game that lives by me he doesn't vist the forum.We do the same things so our moves are perfectly sync.
Wait... I missed something... There's going to be a story with these characters?
Jhteck29
10-24-2002, 07:05 PM
well, if you want to get technical, Dee Jay does fight to the flava' of a heavy jamaican beat, so not quite original, although his moves weren't directly related to music. anyway its just one of those quick write-ups i did, nuthin' serious.
SSJKarma
10-25-2002, 12:12 AM
no roll, it's just our PERSONNAL RP chars that we elaborate to see peoples idea if they had to make chars for a fighting game or any other RPG out there !
for my part, i described two characters i made for DRAGONBALLS episodes we made (me and 3 friends)
SBYRD5
10-25-2002, 03:19 PM
Well,actually these characters we might use for stories,but for right now TJ just wants to see the stats. :buttrock:
machine1
10-25-2002, 05:06 PM
my character:
ultimate dragonball
age: who cares
from: earth
ultimate dragonball was a person who dreamed of having powers of a dragonballz character then one day he was given the powers to a mysterious force. but along with these powers came a evil plague of monsters and villians. and ultimate dragonball is the only person in the universe who has the power to withstand these evil forces. and he must destroy the plague to keep the universe same and in order.
r i g h t........ uhhhh n/m Im not going to say anything lol :laughlong:
XCloudX
10-25-2002, 09:18 PM
lol, he sounds pretty weak to me.......
SSJKarma
10-25-2002, 10:53 PM
machine1: if you're gonna make a character and tell us about it...
at least find a real name ! ULTIMATE DRAGONBALL (when i readed that i though your character was the seven dragonballs) :laugh:
SBYRD5
10-25-2002, 11:04 PM
Princevegetam made a way better character than you did machine....tisk* tisk*
princevegetam
10-26-2002, 06:18 AM
lol, don't get me involved in this
i haven't given any insight into my character.........YET
Well after we get enough characters made we could start a story thread lol :laughlong:
SBYRD5
10-26-2002, 01:55 PM
Macine1..please try this time if that was your best then you can only do your best..no one ask for more...I guess. ???
Name: Wai Chi Fong Wong Lai Lou Paiou Chop-Stick Ting Ting Wo
Age: he has lived since the beginning of time...
From: Everywhere and everything
BIO: He is all powerful and can do anything... anything at all... and he is very horny.
Physical Description: He looks like this :thumbsup:
*is too lazy to make a real guy*
SuperSonicX
10-26-2002, 05:39 PM
Name:Ryo Chan
Age: 18
From: Space Federation 5 (heh)
Year: 2050X
Bio: A Space Mecha Fighter Pilot that hopes one day he'll take home that gold, from local mecha tournament's in his area. He also attracts lots of girls from his acadamy which is called, "SMFA" a place where people go to learn the art of mecha fighting. Ryo Chan ratherd he'd be a fighter than get an education. He's also high ranked among the rest of the pilot's.
Thats all i can think of for now.. ;)
G_GUNDAM
10-26-2002, 06:22 PM
a lot of yalls characters are for some reason related to dbz kind of. FOR EXAMPLE super humans 1 2 and 3 what the dilly yo
SBYRD5
10-26-2002, 07:35 PM
Yes,and your use of ebonics shows that your somewhat ghetto.
SBYRD5
10-26-2002, 09:09 PM
Wow, TJ thats really cool.The music was kinda good.
Lunar=Your theme
RPGDreamer=Your cool sword
FF9=Evil TJ
FFX=TJ's battle, thats way to cool.
Um TJ5 you have a great idea. This thread could be the spot were every RPG story writer in this forum puts the stats for there RPG character.
I'm going to put my stats here too.Wow TJ what a cool idea.So we can read each others character.
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Name=KHCloud
Age=21(I want to drink)
Race=Human/Lunarian
Home Town=New Nibeland
Home Planet=Moon
Anime=Dragonball AF(Uncut)
Well,KHCloud is really the average guy besides him having mako energy(The planet's life force) inside him.His father was the great hero he was the legendary"Paladin(Warrior of Light)".He lost his father at the age of 7,and his mother was killed by his worst rival when he was at the age of 17.He wonders the world looking for jobs that pay well.He has been on many adventures,and he also was in the military group "Shield".He was never heard from again after a horriable battle.He has resurfaced again in this anime.He also dreams of going to the moon....
These are his music themes for each level strenght he reaches,and also the music for different things.He only has three levels of strenght,an one level of strenght.(You have to have one.
1.
KHCloud (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/nintendo/snes/dkctitle.mid)
2.
KHCloud and party win the battle (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/nintendo/snes/Fanfare2.mid)
3.
KHCloud traveling..... (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/nintendo/snes/FF2_Underground.mid)
4.
Paladin level 1 (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/nintendo/snes/ff4-WithinTheGiant.mid)
5.
Paladin level 2 (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/nintendo/snes/X3_Cainlab.mid)
6.
Paladin level 3 (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/nintendo/snes/x3zero2.mid)
7.
Memories Of KHCloud's Family (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/sony/ps2/findream_V1_2.mid)
8.
Evil KHCloud (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/nintendo/snes/snesMMX1_Sigma_BattleV1.1.mid)
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Now images of the stages of Paladin=
Level 1=
http://www.ffextreme.com/kh/gif/riku.gif
Level 2=
http://www.ffextreme.com/ff4/abilities/paladin.gif
http://www.ffextreme.com/ff4/characters/icons1a.jpg
Level 3=
http://www.gamegen.com/fightgen/characters/kofJhun.jpg http://www.gamegen.com/fightgen/characters/snk-jhun.gif
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Now for an image of KHCloud,and the evil version of him...easy. ???
KHCloud=
http://battlerobo.com/khauthority/graphics/prof_jay.pnghttp://battlerobo.com/khauthority/pics/characters/mini_cloud.gif
Evil KHCloud=
http://www.gamegen.com/fightgen/characters/k9999-k2k1-2.gifhttp://www.gamegen.com/fightgen/characters/k9999-windcape.gif
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Now that I've informed you about the music themes of my character,and the images of him.I fell you should know his attacks.
Final Buster Heaven=KHCloud's Limit Break.He hold's his right hand towards the moon and gathers the Kai off the Lunarians.He then fuses the energy into his blade just by simpily holding it.He points the blade at his enemy then runs straight towards the enemy.He fades right through the enemy for the first strike.Then he appears from behind with a Kai bladed strike.After hitting the target KHCloud uses a wind spell,and knocks the oppentant away from him.Next appearing infront of the oppentant with a lighting spell fused with his blade to perform a maxmium damage hit.
Spirit Cover=KHCloud summons the spirit of his departed parents to protect the party from attacks for a limited time.
E.R. Beam=E.R.Beam stands for Electric Razor Beam.First KHCloud Swirls his sword around his head to make a small twister whic protects him like a shield.After the twister is able to keep it's speed stable.KHCloud slams the sword straight towards the oppentant to make a shockwave beam.The beam travels directly towards the oppentant.If the oppentants tries a form of counter attack the twister will suck the enemy towards the twister.There for the oppentant will be hit by the attack unless he/she has some form of teleportation.
Tears Of Justice=KHCloud grows anger,and tears form on his face.The oppentant often think they have won when this happens.With his tears is the power of mako energy in each tear.This can heal his team mates to almost full health.
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Paladin Attacks
Light Warrior's Faith=This tech. can bring up the attack power of KHCloud as well as his skill level,an evading ability.It is done when a Paladin beleives in his on abilities,or if there is a spiritual desire to honor someone beyond the living.
Legend of Paladin=Only a level three can perform this task.You must be focused on the strongest evil as well to pull this one off.First,KHCloud withdraws his sword,and begins to focus upon the evil force.Naturally the oppentant will attack now,but if your a true paladin warrior level 3 do not counter attack.By now the moon has eclisped.That means the "Dragon Of Light" will appear.The "Dragon Of Light" is really a living airship for transportation to the moon.If using it for transportation the proper term is the "The Holy Whale".
Well anyway, with the "Dragon of Light".Your oppentant should fall easily.
Shining Glare=This attack blinds all enemies for 5 min.s
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My weapons,and armor,ect.
Zepher Cape(Increases evading ability)
B.Buster Sword(you need a weapon)
Timberland Boots(look cool)
Buckler(used as a shield)
Scouter(Read fighting powers)
Ribbon(pervents stats change)
Military pants(I wear pants)
military vest(I wear shirts)
I think I've covered my character completely....whos next?
MHAAAAAAA.... :buttrock:
Name - TJ
Age - 21
Race - Human
Home town - south city
Home planet - Earth
Anime - Dragon ball AF (alternate future)
Backround story -
As a child TJ didn't like fighting and he was just like any normal 13 year old boy, But one day a evil tyrant attacked his city and starting wreaking havok. When the tyrants soldiers attacked TJ's home he was the only survivor, and later escaped the city. TJ ventured to the military base known as <^> And was sent to an outer space colony only inhabited by a few fighters. 8 years later TJ returned to earth somehow and went back to south city and stopped the fiend with his new super human abilities, Now he has dedicated his life to protecting Earth and its inhabitants from evil.
Bio -
TJ is a very strong fighter with ablities that normal humans cannot posses, He is the kind of person that doesnt take orders very well and likes to do things his way. The problem with that though is he sometimes causes trouble with his fellow teammates but he always Follows 1 philosophy with his team - All of us come back or none of us come back.
lol cool story eh ? well Now I am going to show u TJ's power stages
Human - http://www.gsarchives.com/psx/nanim_sprites/ff8/card4.gif
Super human 1 - http://www.gsarchives.com/psx/nanim_sprites/ff8/card7.gif He looks like that but without the black tattoo :laugh:
Super human 2 - http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/cc/faces/youngdario.gif
Super human 3 - http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/cc/faces/dario.gif
Super human 4 - http://www.gsarchives.com/psx/nanim_sprites/ChronoCross/glenn1.gif
Super human evil - http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/xg/faces/ramsus.gif Hair turns white and the person loses all emotions but anger. ( extremly deadly and can only be aqquired by getting possed by the pshyco dragon in the green star dragon balls.
Last but not least his music.
1.
TJ's theme (http://www.rpgdreamer.com/music/lunar/lunar19.mid)
2.
TJ's Holy Dragon Sword attack (http://www.rpgdreamer.com/music/ff9/ff990.mid)
3.Evil TJ (http://www.rpgdreamer.com/music/ff9/ff948.mid)
4.
TJ's Battle (http://www.rpgdreamer.com/music/ffx/ff105.mid)
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Here are some of his attacks.
1. Annihilator cannon - A strong kamehameha like beam
2. Pshyco Annihilator cannon - The strongest beam ever can only be used at level 4
3. Burning punch - Hand is engulfed with flame.
4.Final cutter - 1 slice down the middle
5. Pshyco final cutter - many slashes then 1 slice down middle
6. Air lance - Uses air as weapon
7. Rapid heal - Heals myself or others
Evil moves.
1. Soul absorb - Absorbs the opponents life force and gets stronger
2. Rage expell - Uses all rage and attacks with a massive unseen force
3. Void - opens up a portal and takes opponent inside and continues match there
4. Life force attack - Uses the powers of the stolen life forces to attack with thier moves.
5. Super nova - If you played final fantasy 7 you know what it is heh heh heh
Well that wraps up my character, post your characters too. :plain: :laugh:
The musics messed up I will fix them some day :laugh:[quote]
SBYRD5
10-26-2002, 11:02 PM
I think we're ready to start a STORY!!!!!
TJ
Chuck
KHCloud
Yae Hanabatake
SolidSnake
Soku Kazaki
Karma
Jaims
Ultimate Dragonball(sure)=Ud.B-Fighter(sounds better)
Wai Chi Fong.....etc.
Ryo Chan
SiLent_BoB
10-28-2002, 03:23 PM
wait wait heres mine...
name:kagami
age:17
hometown:unkown
apperances:was breifly shown in moogles and magic(but noone really cared.. :p )
kagami's whole life has been bent on survival. he was an orphan at an early age and literaly fought for his life.he grew up as a pit fighter(kinda like illegal dog fights) and earned his living from victory money. one day a match was set up as an opponent used a weapon. kagami suffered a humililating defeat and was badly injured. one day while stumbleing around(due to blood loss) he ran into an old martial arts master and collasped at his feet. the kind old man took pitty on the young boy and took him in as his foster "father". kagami then spent most of his years training under the old man, they were very close. one day when kagami returned from the market he found his master's body covered in blood near a dark figure. filled with greif and rage kagami attacked the man, but was quickly defeated and taken away. when kagami had reganed coincousesness he found himself in a glass tube fill with water and in immense pain. the dark figure was a leader of a secret society who made biological weapons. kagami was subjected to many painfull expirements all meant to make him stronger,faster, and powerfull. because of memory implants in his brain he can't remeber much from his past other then his master's teachings. although kagami was designed to be a perfect killing machine he still seems to be rebelious and refuses to kill a defensless opponent.
http://www.gamegen.com/fightgen/characters/sol-large-stance1.gif
kagami does not have full control of his powers though because his power comes from the dark and unstable orochi and dark hadou. soo many times he has difficulty trying to contain it, if he doesn't it will kill him
http://www.gamegen.com/fightgen/characters/sol-elec.gif
kagami's sword is a high frequency blade. it emits high frequency sounds waves from the blade, thus making it cut through vertiully any thing.
http://www.gamegen.com/fightgen/characters/sol-bg-slash-na.gif
attacks:
hadoken: basic fireball
shinkuu hadoken: bigger much more powerfull version of the hadoken.
orochi burn: infuses his fists with the dark orochi power. anything he touches burns the opponents very soul.
sword attacks:
crescent moon slash: twirls his sword above his head gathering chi then does a downward slash..inflicts large amounts of damage.
wind cutter: single or series of slashes that are so powerfull that the force from it cuts into opponents.
supers(gah couldnt think of a better name :p )
final showdown: kagami charges his opponents and delivers a string of blows and kicks,then grabs them and jumps into the air and slams them headfirst into the ground. the stronger he is the harder the punches and the higher he goes when he jumps.
maiden masher: when on the brink of dying kagami lets his dark hadou and orochi powers take over. his speed and strength are increased but he goes into a blind rage, if his opponent should happen to fall he will pound them into oblivion until he recovers from his transformation.
thats about it.. hope you liked it.. :laugh:
princevegetam
10-28-2002, 03:26 PM
NO ORIGINALITY!! I SWEAR! YOU PPL HAVE NO IMAGINATIONS!
Its our characters and we make them the way we want too...
So shhhhh :angryfire:
SSJKarma
10-28-2002, 06:41 PM
hope you weren't including my chars into that POSt you made vegetam !
i have thought of those characters and they are very originals !
anyway, i agree on some points !
you people should really try and make a THRU characters as characters already existing aren't no fun at all !
princevegetam
10-28-2002, 06:44 PM
i wasn't talking about you SSJKarma, i was mainly talking about silent bob's post
Nantuko Joe
10-29-2002, 06:27 AM
I read the 1st post on page 1, and nothing else. However, I'm still gonna post my character here:
Name: Shauku
Age: 13 years older than Vegeta
Race: Saiya-jin
Hometown: Unknown
Home Planet: Vegeta
Anime-Dragonball SW (Dragonball Super Warriors, My fanfic)
Background story/Bio
Shauku was born 13 years before Vegeta. His father, Vegeta Ou (King Vegeta), was amazed at Shauku's high power levels and fighting technique at such a young age, and was afraid that Furiza would kill him. Therefore, when Shauku was five, he sent him away to train on another planet, and not to return to the Vegeta system until the age 18.
Upon Shauku's 18th birthday, Shauku returned only to see Furiza in the process of destroying Planet Vegeta. Before his death, Vegeta Ou telepathically contacted Shauku, telling him that Vegeta was on Furiza's ship and telling Shauku to kill Furiza and avenge the Saiya-jin race at any cost. During the years that followed, Shauku trained on planets with extremely high gravity levels to increase his strength. He also spent 15 years on a planet where time barely moves at all, so when he finally met up with his brother Vegeta, he wouldn't be an old cripple. He made enemies of the last surviving relatives of Furiza: Lord Frost (King Kold's brother) and Chihl (Frost's son).
Eventually (after Ma-jin Buu was destroyed), Shauku located Vegeta on earth, and finally became a Super Saiya-jin while fighting Lord Frost. Shauku has then promised to stay on earth and protect it with his brother. This is a picture of Shauku, but it's too big to post here: Shauku (http://www.mallarky.net/images/shauku.jpg)
As you can see, he looks like Vegeta, but has a scar running down his left eye, and his left eye is devoid of a pupil. This is due to an injury he sustained at age 5 while fighting Saibamen. I have yet to draw pictures of Shauku in other forms, but his forms are as follows:
Saiya-jin
Ozourou
Super Saiya-jin
Super Saiya-jin 2
Super
Omega
His Music:
1. During the fight leading up to when he goes SSj for the first time (http://www.rpgdreamer.com/music/lod/lod2.mid)
2. When he gathers energy and becomes Super Shauku (http://www.rpgdreamer.com/music/lod/lod16.mid)
3. When he gathers energy and becomes Omega Saiya-jin Shauku (http://www.rpgdreamer.com/music/ff7/ff737.mid)
Note on music #3: I used a calmer, gentle music for when he transcends normal power and becomes Omega because I was looking for a type of juxtaposition. I usually find that an intense event works well with a calm, more relaxing music than loud, intense music.
Here are his attacks:
1. Cornea Cannon: an attack that doesn't take long to charge, but deals quite some damage.
2. Power Ball: Allows him to go Ozourou
3. Apocalypse Chime: Another EXTREMELY powerful attack, the Apocalypse Chime is a gigantic beam that takes a long time to charge. However, it can be case instantaneously, though the user risks draining himself of all power in the process. This is more powerful than the Final Flash or the Kamehameha
Super Shauku attacks:
1. Ki Dan- this takes all of the evil deeds that anyone has committed, solidifies the evil inside of them, and then absorbs it into his own body, powering himself up. Note, this also cleanses the target's soul, making him pure good in the process.
2. Murk- this attack takes Shauku's evil ki and forms it into a putty-like, acidic mass that harms anyone with a good ki and can also inflict evil status on them.
3. Judgment Day- this attack is much like Tenshinhan's Shin Kikoho, in the fact that it sacrifices A LOT of the user's life energy in order to form the attack. Basically, it causes a gigantic eruption of energy that deals EXTREME damage to anyone within an 5 mile radius.
Omega Attacks:
None as of this moment
SiLent_BoB
10-29-2002, 02:12 PM
i wasn't talking about you SSJKarma, i was mainly talking about silent bob's post
yeah i couldnt think of a design for my character so i just pasted some of sol-badguys pictures.
but the story(not very original) i made up..in like 15 min.
SBYRD5
10-29-2002, 06:33 PM
Joe you played Legend of Dragoon?
And Final Fantasy 7?
you said you disliked RPG like games for the searching factor?
Nantuko Joe
10-30-2002, 07:02 AM
Joe you played Legend of Dragoon?
And Final Fantasy 7?
you said you disliked RPG like games for the searching factor?
When did I say that?
And here is another character I created:
Name: Yamuchinhan
Age: Unknown
Race: Human (Fusion)
Hometown: None
Home Planet: Earth
Anime: Dragonball SW
Background/Bio:
after the Cell Games, Yamucha, Tenshinhan, and Chaotzu realized that further training would be useless because of the strength of their enemies. However, the fusion of Goten and Trunks (two relatively weak fighters) into Gotenks (an extremely strong fighter) spurred Yamucha and Tenshinhan into training some more. They finally fused to create the fused warrior Yamuchinhan during the Farmek-jin invasion threat.
I do not have a pic of Yamuchinhan yet, but will scan one in soon. If you can, try to imagine someone slightly shorter than Tenshinhan, but with Yamucha's hair and facial scars and a third eye
He has no other forms other than his normal form.
His Music:
1. When Yamuchinhan is first formed and saves the day (http://www.rpgdreamer.com/music/hoshigami/hoshigami-1.mid)
2.Yamuchinhan2 (http://www.rpgdreamer.com/music/lom/lom256.mid)
Here are his attacks:
1. Dodonpa: much like a Kamehameha, but with a narrower beam and a larger head
2. Shin Kikoho: a more powerful version of Tenshinhan's signature attack
3. Kousegnan: Very thin and concentrated, this technique is used to make a precise hit on a target and do major damage It has a limited range but moves very fast.
4. Mind Control: Yamuchinan also gains some minor mind control.
5. Renzoku Senkouku: much like Piccolo's Renzoku Senkoudan, the Senkouku's ki packets form a huge orb that surrounds the enemy, and is impossible to dodge
SBYRD5
10-30-2002, 05:40 PM
Interesting an attack that can't be dodged.
Joe I will refresh your memory=
"I would like role play games more if searching for the overall objects didn't take so long.Man, it took me so long just to breed the golden chocobo.I play them seldomliy now."
Believe you sadit around those grounds,but it's not inportant great character.
I know the perfect way to dodge ur attack
1. DO this :buttrock:
2. then Do this :laugh:
3 then this ! :angry:
Or u could just teleport away :D
Nantuko Joe
10-30-2002, 06:31 PM
Interesting an attack that can't be dodged.
Joe I will refresh your memory=
"I would like role play games more if searching for the overall objects didn't take so long.Man, it took me so long just to breed the golden chocobo.I play them seldomliy now."
Believe you sadit around those grounds,but it's not inportant great character.
No, That's only what I said I didn't like about FF7, not RPGs in general
SBYRD5
10-30-2002, 06:45 PM
Sorry for spamming,and making a mistake like that.
Nantuko Joe
10-31-2002, 05:19 AM
Names: Lord Frost/Chihl
Ages: Unknown/Unknown
Race: Changeling/Changeling
Hometown: Unknown
Home Planet: Unknown
Anime: Dragonball SW
Bio/Background story:
Lord Frost and Chihl are the uncle and cousin of Furiza, respectively. They are pretty much galactic thugs, dominating planets much like Furiza used to do. Shortly after they found out of the death of Furiza a the hands of a Saiya-jin warrior, they ran into Shauku after Shauku fried a group of Frost's best men. Over the next few years, Frost and Chihl have encountered Shauku on many occasions, but never had the opportunity to kill him. They then discovered Shauku's longing to see if his brother Vegeta was alive, and waited in the background for Shauku to unknowingly lead them to earth. Frost and Chihl then issue a Tenkaichi Budoukai-like challenge against Shauku and the Z fighters.
Frost and Chihl are unique in their race. Their transformations do not match those of the other members of their race (ie, their second form is not big with horns, third not with big alien head). Chihl has 5 unique transformations, while Frost acquires 6.
You guys aren't going to see pics of Frost and Chihl until I draw them, so be patient.
Their music:
1. Indrodcution of Frost and Chihl
2. [url=http://www.rpgdreamer.com/music.... battle (http://www.rpgdreamer.com/music/ff9/ff968.mid)
3. Final Battle between Lord Frost and Shaugita (http://www.rpgdreamer.com/music/ff8/ff87.mid)
Their attacks:
Chihl's attacks:
1. Death Ball-just like Furiza's, but stronger
2. Henshin-transforming to a stronger shape
3. Skaokabikou-a beam of intense cold. It takes about the same amount of time to charge to full power as a Kamehameha, but is a bit weaker.
Frost's attacks:
1. Henshin-transforming to a stronger shape
2. Skaokobokou-a stronger variation of Chihl's attack, the Skaokobokou takes less time to charge and is much stronger than the Skaokabikou
3. Skaokudama-an intense freezing attack, this freezes everyone in a 1-mile radius in a block of ice
Ok sbyrd start a story then I will add my 2 characters in because I dun start storys very well LOL
Tantum
11-01-2002, 02:25 PM
:laughlong: :laughlong:
Tantum
11-01-2002, 02:28 PM
Name: Ballzer
Age. 29
Home planet: Earth
Home Town: Presidential area of Scrotom city
Anime: Prostate Ball Z
Backround story:
Ballzer is the top fighter of the President of earth, and is a Super Testicle warrior like the other characters in the series.
He was the 1st person to find the Blue Prostate Balls, and he brought them back to the presidential estate.
Ever since that day Ballzer has been acting extremly strange and has aquired a new power stage, Everyone in the estate now fears him except the president himself.
Bio- Once a caring man now a ruthless killer, and the president promotes his actions for an unknown reason.
He has very strong attacks and is extremly fast. the higher the power stage, the deeper his voice becomes.
Ballzer's power stages -
Super Testicle lv 1 - http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/xg/faces/sigurd.gif
Super Testicle lv 2- http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/xg/faces/sigurd.gif
Super Testicle lv 3- http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/xg/faces/bart.gif
Super Testicle Lv 4- http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/xg/faces/kim.gif
Super Testicle Evil - http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/xg/faces/stratski.gif
Ballzer's moves-
1. Gonad punch - A big damage giving punch
2. Gonad Kick - A big damage giving kick
3. Sperm Cannon - A big ejaculation like beam
4. Pshyco Semen Cannon - The ultimate Super Testicle attack
Evil moves.
6. Come Shot - Does a massive combo with over 100 strikes and then if the opponent doesnt retaliate Ballzer breaks through them and absorbs thier Testes force
7. Rosie Palm - Much like the friction burning fist but with dark energy
DUDE !
UR AN IDIOT DONT EVER DO THAT AGAIN THAT WAS GROSS AND A RIP OFF OF MY CHARACTER AND PLUS U MADE HIM STUPID IMA KICK THE * stops * sorry about that..... DONT DO IT AGAIN ! :angry: :angryfire: :angry: :angryfire: :angryfire:
machine1
11-01-2002, 02:53 PM
rontflamo pyscho semen attack ... muhahahahahahahahaa :laughlong:
Tantum
11-01-2002, 04:09 PM
DUDE !
UR AN IDIOT DONT EVER DO THAT AGAIN THAT WAS GROSS AND A RIP OFF OF MY CHARACTER AND PLUS U MADE HIM STUPID IMA KICK THE * stops * sorry about that..... DONT DO IT AGAIN ! :angry: :angryfire: :angry: :angryfire: :angryfire:
well, seeing how ALL of your characters are rip offs of TV shows, or other peoples posts... you shouldn't be yelling at anyone. especially people like roll, who were being original.
rotflmfbosmcbidhoahnglrsabtwmksmre!!!! That was great, Tantum!!! lmso
... my character was origional :laughlong: :eh:
Tantum Ur the one that copied my person and I am not the one yelling at ppl its vegatam so b4 u speak think
princevegetam
11-01-2002, 08:45 PM
lol, me yell at ppl?
lol
i got one thing to say to everyone:
<span style='font-size:43pt;line-height:100%'>ORIGINALITY!!!</span>
[color=#000000:post_uid8]None of my links work anymore ?[/color:post_uid8]
Edited By TJ5 on 1101440056
Tantum
11-01-2002, 11:36 PM
Name: GangBang
Age - 21
Home planet - Earth
Home town - Zeo city
Anime - Ball Licker AF (Ass F'er)
Backround story - As a child he was found by a masturbater and hermaphrodite, and taught the dark street walking skills. 5 years after they found him, the zeo city where GangBang lived was destroyed by the same tyrant that destroyed south city. GangBang ended up blowing most of the soldiers then was captured and turned into the ultimate ass bang.
Bio -
A strong sucker with extremly well rounded sack. He carries a pager with him and ppl call it because wherever he goes ppl are found with absolutely no semen left or declared blown away.
GangBang power stages.
Blower- http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/suik1/faces/kage.gif
Super Blower lv 1 - http://www.gsarchives.com/snes/nanim_sprites/ct/magus/magusface.gif
Super Blower lv 2 - http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/cc/faces/karsh.gif
Super Blower lv 3 - http://www.rpgicons.com/images/icons/ff7/faces/sephiroth.gif
GangBangs moves -
1. Hooker Glide - Jumps up and glides then screws opponent with strap on
2. Dark blow - Slams a giant one in his mouth
3. Shadow flamer - Causes enviroment to turn all white and then blows enemy with black mist
4. Double X - Runs up, makes a double and screws someone into unconciousness
Super human level 3 special attack -
5. Monica Lewinski - Transforms into the ultimate kock sucker
SSJKarma
11-01-2002, 11:40 PM
the thing is...
ALL, and i mean ALL you characters are ALL the very same !
- all have 3 super form
- are all human
- have rip-off picture of SUIKODEN 2, FINAL FANTASY and CHONO TRIGGER
- have pretty much all the same BASIC attacks !
now where the originality of all those SUPOSED heores ?
i probably made only 2 chars, but they are very different in story, weapons and powers ! i say, do 1 chars but do it very good !
no need to have ALL the very same POWERS, RACE and LEVELS !
MasterX05
11-02-2002, 06:56 AM
Name:Jeff
Age:21
Home planet:Earth Medievil time period
Home town:Faloder Kingdom
Race: human/warlock
Jeff is a mystic knight one who can weild a sword and use black magic. And has beating many kindoms in battle. And it's to be that he is invincble, he has a legedary sword of light.
Weapon: Sword,Bow & arrow,Staff.
Armour: Mythril helmet,plate,legs, and kite shield
Magic spells: Jeff can cast spells to destory a whole group of Beast. Elments of Earth, Fire, Water, Wind,thunder,and ice.
his magic can be used to enhance his weapons or armour to damge monsters in the elments. And make his armour resist magic elments.
Jeff even has his own full grown dragon with scales of myrhril,
and the ablity to fly,swim and use fire or ice spells. And the dragon is manily Jeff's protector from childhood.
princevegetam
11-02-2002, 07:36 AM
the thing is...
ALL, and i mean ALL you characters are ALL the very same !
- all have 3 super form
- are all human
- have rip-off picture of SUIKODEN 2, FINAL FANTASY and CHONO TRIGGER
- have pretty much all the same BASIC attacks !
now where the originality of all those SUPOSED heores ?
i probably made only 2 chars, but they are very different in story, weapons and powers ! i say, do 1 chars but do it very good !
no need to have ALL the very same POWERS, RACE and LEVELS !
YES!! karma is RIGHT!
you ppl are too fckin obsessed with dbz and rpgs by squaresoft.
there's a lot better quality rpgs and anime in the world than those fcked up crap.
this should be called fan fiction, not create new characters, cause what you ppl are basically doing is create fake characters out of already existing crap.
go get some originality! create something more unique, AMAZE us with your imagination!
Nantuko Joe
11-02-2002, 12:29 PM
At least my characters are somewhat original. THe only un-original thing about the two guys I posted are their musics. I got them from RPGdreamer.com. Other than that, they're ENTIRELY original. I've got some more characters to post, but I'm not gonna until I can get around to drawing some more pics of them
AngelWings
11-02-2002, 12:50 PM
ok...i kno this might not be the greatest...but this is my first character (and plz dun make fun of the picture) i drew it on the comp...which took...a long time ??? oook...so here it is :
This is the picture...click (http://www.boomspeed.com/animezone4/character.jpg)
Name: Angel
Age: 16
Race: Mercurian/Earthling
Home Planet: Earth
Home Town: unknown
Story:
When Angel was just a child, her family was brutally murdered by an anonymous gang. The reason was unknown. She was the only survivor. The gang had taken her back to their base and brainwashed her so that she would forget everything about her past. They trained her, teaching her fighting techniques and she became the greatest fighter in their gang. By herself, she found out that she had magnificent mind powers. And so, she continued her life as a gang member, training her newfound powers and perfecting her fighting skills.
One day, Angel was training and she suddenly remembered the brutal murder of her family. Another thing that was really weird was that she remembered her former life. She learned that she was really a Mercurian goddess that ruled the Mercurian kingdom for some time. Her home planet was slowly being taken over by a secret alliance that was planning to conquer the whole solar system. Not wanting that to happen, Angel
princevegetam
11-02-2002, 12:54 PM
not bad, keep it up ppl.....
You want some originality? I'll give you originality.
Name: Gohan X
Age: unknown
Race: Human/Sayain/Reploid
Planet:Earth
Description: He is teh ultimate fighter. He has never lost a single match and everyone fears him. He uses his laser gun that's atached to his arm. When he defeats an enemy, he learns one of their moves(like megaman).
Moves:
-KamehamehahX
-Charge Shot
He learns more when he defeats enemies.
lmfao :laughlong:
AngelWings
11-02-2002, 02:10 PM
The Evil side of Angel is unearthed...
Name: DevilishAngel
This is Angel's badside. Considering she was in training with that bad gang, she has an evil side. This rarely happens because Angel tries to keep her power intensity low. What happened is that not all of the brainwashing that happened to Angel went away, and sometimes, if she powers up too much or uses her mind powers to their full potential, not only does she become stronger, but she becomes more evil too.
When Angel becomes evil, her clothes turn black, her hair turns dark violet/black, and her eyes turn to a dark violet with a hint of red. This takes out a lot of energy from Angel once she turns back to normal. o yes, to turn back to Angel, she either loses too much energy and turns back to Angel...oor something happens which forces to turn back to Angel...which i'm not gonna tell ya cuz...well...i'm not sure myself lolz . :(
Moves:
Fighting: kicking, punching etc.
Mind Moves: unfortunately, when Angel turns to DevilishAngel, DevilishAngel can use mind powers too which r also kinda more powerful...
Black Hole: This takes the opponents power, energy, and strength and is either disposed, or DevilishAngel takes it for her own uses.
Asteroid Laser: Little small energy balls that explode with a tremendous amount of energy.
Dark Illusions: DevilishAngel forms illusions that trick the mind.
Io Arrow Blast: An arrow made of lava/fire is formed and shot.
Mind Control: Same as Angel's
Flying: Same as Angel's except her wings are dark violet
Demonic Meteorite Beam: A beam that shoots at the opponent from all directions.
oook the evil angel is done :) hope itz ok.
Nantuko Joe
11-02-2002, 03:01 PM
You want some originality? I'll give you originality.
Name: Gohan X
Age: unknown
Race: Human/Sayain/Reploid
Planet:Earth
Description: He is teh ultimate fighter. He has never lost a single match and everyone fears him. He uses his laser gun that's atached to his arm. When he defeats an enemy, he learns one of their moves(like megaman).
Moves:
-KamehamehahX
-Charge Shot
He learns more when he defeats enemies.
I don't know if I should take that post seriously or as a joke...
QUIET_KILLER
11-02-2002, 03:31 PM
[quote:post_uid4="Nantuko Joe"][quote:post_uid4]You want some originality? I'll give you originality.
Name: Gohan X
Age: unknown
Race: Human/Sayain/Reploid
Planet:Earth
Description: He is teh ultimate fighter. He has never lost a single match and everyone fears him. He uses his laser gun that's atached to his arm. When he defeats an enemy, he learns one of their moves(like megaman).
Moves:
-KamehamehahX
-Charge Shot
He learns more when he defeats enemies.[/quote:post_uid4]
[color=green:post_uid4]I don't know if I should take that post seriously or as a joke...[/color:post_uid4][/quote:post_uid4]
[color=blue:post_uid4]Hey Joe take it as a Joke :lol: :biggrin:
I am going to post my character in here.
Just need a bit more time to work on some detail's.[/color:post_uid4]
ALL my characters are original I made them up b4 I even saw DBZ b4 and I could only find icons that look kewl for them on square game sites So get off my case.
Good characters ppl ( cept tantum since he stole my 2 ppl and made them sickos )
SSJKarma
11-02-2002, 09:50 PM
oh yeah, not copyed !
SUPER HUMAN 1 = SSJ1
SUPER HUMAN 2 = SSJ2
SUPER HUMAN 3 = SSJ3
the fact they are HUMAN can pass at some extends !
you didn't even tryed to do YOUR OWN pictures ! i did if you never notice my AVATAR and BANNER.
no, that are just some example...
to complement them all....
THEY ARE FOR DRAGONBALL AF
no, you never created them you just copyed them from DBZ and changed them a little !
as for nantuko, i never said you weren't original...
like me you made DBZ chars, but ones that were never seen on any of the manga or serie. that classify in ORIGINALS as they are unique !
Just cause I put Dragon ball Af dont mean nothin I made those characters b4 I ever even heard of dragon ball but I just pUt Dragon ball af so the thread would have more feeling hence the name Anime or game characters :plain:
[color=#000000:post_uid8]Edit: Links and Photos Don't work[/color:post_uid8]
Edited By TJ5 on 1101439985
Joe, take it as a joke :D
Okay, here's a real origional character.
Name: Tacq Allegoed
Race: Believed to be human, but some say he has been sent from the Heavens
Planet: Earth
Home: Seraphim's Calling HQ
Age: 17
Physical Description:
He has short silver hair with two seperate bangs that hang down over his eyes. He has a skin-tight dark purple shirt and dark blue baggy pants. He wears a blue sash around his waist and wears a black cape. His eyes are a piercing green.
Equipment:
Tacq uses throwing knives... and that's about it. :eh:
Bio Thingie:
As a baby, Tacq was found asleep in a forest near the main headquarters of the clan Seraphim's Calling. This clan were like the unnoficial police of the near-by towns. Their arch enemy clan was Skull Dusect. Tacq was raised by SC (Seraphim's Calling) because there was no one who knew of the boy. SC raised Tacq to be a fierce warrior, but kind hearted and gentle. Tacq is a master of Kenetics, meaning he can move almost as fast as light itself making throwing knives his ideal weapon. Tacq is not very strong muscle-wise, but he is strong in the mind. Tacq is one who doesn't believe in using magic, but he is training in the arts of Light. He just recently learned how to teleport large groups of objects and/or people and animals using his power of Light. Near the end of each day, Tacq spends around half of an hour gathering energy from the sun to prepare him for any possible attacks at night. Unknown to him and his comrads, there is more to Tacq than meets the eye.
There. That's my character. :alien: :eh:
Wow, you guys! You're characters are very.... Cute! ^-^ But then again, everything is cute to me, so that's not really saying much, is it? Oh well, I like the characters anyway! I'll make one too!
Name:Yae Hanabatake
Meaning: flourishing flower garden
Kanji: http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Flourishing.gifhttp://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Hanabatake.gif
Age: 18
Race: Human
Hometown: Harajuku, Japan
Homeplanet: Earth
Anime: .....She's, like, kinda not from any?
Yae Hanabatake is just like any girl... unless you count the fact she was born on christmas, and that she had natural green hair since she was born. She had also been blessed with the ability to use ki, but it was unknown to her. She lived a normal life in the snowy mountains, and spent a lot of time outside, exploring forests, higher mountains, lakes, ponds, and buildings. One day, though, she went into a very tall building, and found herself in a room with a lot of tube-like cages holding mutated monsters. She saw them, and was seen, and then security took her to the Scientist behind the dirty work. He began to run tests on the girl, and noticed that she had an immense amount of ki, and wanted to experiment with the Ki. But one night, out of fear from a sound, Yae threw a projectile of ki at her door, and it was destroyed. She looked at her hands for a few minutes, and then escaped. She ran all the way back home, but when she got there, she found her family slaughtered on the living room floor. She mourned what happened, and eventually went into a fighting dojo about 20 miles away from her house seeking training to harness her ki abilities. Her master, Cho Chang, knew only the basic use of using ki as an attack force. When she taught Yae how to use her ki, Yae used the training to be able to use more advanced forms of using it, and was soon able to shoot beams, strengthen her attacks, and do some other things with her ki. Now, at the age of 18, she works for a justice organization called "Secure Thoughts". She has become the best agent in her fields, which are investigation, and undercover investigation.
She doesn't have power stages, but she looks like... this:
http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Mizukipf.jpg
Attacks as of her current level (yes, I know I am copying Mizuki):
Enmai: a mixture of Ki, strength, and elegance. This attack has the elemental attribute of wind and can only be used at close range. Perfect for any enemy. http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Enmai.gif
Kyokuenmai: A ki blast with the force of a...er... (looking for example)....Oh! The Kamehameha Wave thingy! Has the elemental attribute of ice. Perfect against beasts, and can sometimes freeze the opponent! http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Kyokuenmai.gif
Kenmaikyaku: A non-elemental aerial attack that can be used in close range, and mid-range, but not far range. Great for flying enemies, but bad for beasts. http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/Kenmaikyaku.gif
Renenmai: Another mixture of even more ki, more strength, and more elegance, but with added differences. Can be used from any range, and has the elemental attribute of water. Very good against human fighters. http://www.boomspeed.com/roll/RenenmaiMizuki.gif
Chiyu No Uta: A song that has the strange ability to heal. This can be good and bad, but mostly good. Doesn't fully heal, and can only heal the one person that is focused on when singing the song.
additional info>Music: (Mp3's away!<!--emo&;)
1: Theme ( ! ) (http://angelfire.lycos.com/amiga2/roll/Dearest.mp3)
2: Desperate attempts (http://angelfire.lycos.com/amiga2/roll/Manatsu_no_Eve.mp3)
Additional Info>Character>Attacks>Additional attacks due to level ups in the past month:
Hoshi no Ame: A lot of Shooting Stars target a group of enemies, and pummels them for Holy Damage. Uses MP.
Kiseki no Umi: Water-based healing and protection, causes all allies to be healed, and gives protection from fire/ice/water/earth damage for a limited time. Uses MP.
Juden Inmetsu: Thunderbolts surround the enemy, closing in on them, until they are finally shocked! Can cause status effects (slow, confuse, stop) and uses MP.
Tantum
11-04-2002, 03:35 AM
Joe, take it as a joke :D
Okay, here's a real origional character.
Name: Tacq Allegoed
Race: Believed to be human, but some say he has been sent from the Heavens
Planet: Earth
Home: Seraphim's Calling HQ
Age: 17
Physical Description:
He has short silver hair with two seperate bangs that hang down over his eyes. He has a skin-tight dark purple shirt and dark blue baggy pants. He wears a blue sash around his waist and wears a black cape. His eyes are a piercing green.
Equipment:
Tacq uses throwing knives... and that's about it. :eh:
Bio Thingie:
As a baby, Tacq was found asleep in a forest near the main headquarters of the clan Seraphim's Calling. This clan were like the unnoficial police of the near-by towns. Their arch enemy clan was Skull Dusect. Tacq was raised by SC (Seraphim's Calling) because there was no one who knew of the boy. SC raised Tacq to be a fierce warrior, but kind hearted and gentle. Tacq is a master of Kenetics, meaning he can move almost as fast as light itself making throwing knives his ideal weapon. Tacq is not very strong muscle-wise, but he is strong in the mind. Tacq is one who doesn't believe in using magic, but he is training in the arts of Light. He just recently learned how to teleport large groups of objects and/or people and animals using his power of Light. Near the end of each day, Tacq spends around half of an hour gathering energy from the sun to prepare him for any possible attacks at night. Unknown to him and his comrads, there is more to Tacq than meets the eye.
There. That's my character. :alien: :eh:
I like your character Razz ;) ;)
TJ5, the idea was to copy your characters, i was making fun of you, i wasn't trying to make original characters, the idea was, I'm saying you wouldn't know an original character if it hit you in the ass.
...And you wouldn't know proper Netiguette if it danced in front of you naked wearing a tea cozy... :dozingoff:
Tantum
11-04-2002, 07:38 AM
Heh. Why beat around the bush? Don't act fake online, be yourself... and don't be afraid to tell someone off if needs be.
kingofhearts
11-04-2002, 02:37 PM
my custom character would have to be a fusion between ss3 Gohan and kid buu :D
Tantum I belive my characters are original because I made them up....... and I dun care what others think about them as long as I am happy with them. :plain:
Ok ppl could we now go back to making characters and try not to dissrespect others characters. If you have nothing nice to say do not say anything at all :laughlong:
SSJKarma
11-04-2002, 11:23 PM
TJ5, you talk about originality, but have you ever look in the dictionnary to actually know what ORIGINALITY means ?
i think not, as originality isn't just somthing you made out yourself. it is something you made out yourself that is UNIQUE and never seen from anything already existing !
my characters are based on DBZ UNIVERSE but have you ever saw characters near mines in DBZ ? no, because they are UNIQUE !
UNIQUEness make the chars ORIGINAL not the fact you pulled them out of your head !
i could just make another GOKU clone and say, he is ORIGINAL ! but the fact is, he would still be the exact same as goku and wouldn't be ORIGINAL at ALL !
SBYRD5
11-05-2002, 09:39 AM
First off this is TJ's topic so flaming the person that made the topic you are posting in makes you seem a bit undeservering. So what if his characters are not perfectly out of his head. His ideal was original atleast. So stop being critics,and make your own custom character.
SSJKarma
11-05-2002, 12:16 PM
i already made two, SBYRD5 !
and i think it is useless to make 25 charcters just to try and show you can do it !
and that's 2x true if all the characters you make are all IDENTICAL !
yes, i'm a critic ! so what ?
at least i'm not saying he sucks !
i'm saying he could be MUCH more original !
anyway...
this isn't a flame topic so i'll stop talking cause i am SURE someone will say i am flaming which i am not !
i just say, BE ORIGINAL people !
don't just make the same charcater over and over !
it is so easy to make a character when you always use the same PROCESS !
princevegetam
11-05-2002, 12:36 PM
ppl who can't create original characters have no talents
if they had any, they would be able to use their talents to create original characters
ryu500
11-05-2002, 02:41 PM
Name:Dero
Age:19
Hometown:Tokio,Japan
Planet:Earth
Race:human]
Animine:None
Orphaned when he was a boy he wondered around the world his bayonit by his side.
Wepons:Bayonit, Its like a gun blade only in rifle way
Looks like this
http://http://www.rpgdreamer.com/rpgworld/wa2/wa2-15.jpg
Attacks,
Kirsuin Mekanoun: a Blade attack with a shot of the gun
Kibdau:a Firey Slash with a sword
Dragon Slash:A GIANT COMBO With a all element slash and a shower of bullets
I am not going to even argue with you 2 anymore or even try to convince u But im gonna say this - ALL Characters are original in thier own way, the only way a character wouldnt be original is if I say - EX. I take cell and copy him and say I made him. Thats not original, Everyones characters are original because no one copied something from a series, They made thier own ppl with own powers And the reason I made so many ppl is because its 4 a story....
[color=#000000:post_uid8]Edit: Links Don't work[/color:post_uid8]
Edited By TJ5 on 1101439904
TJ5, the idea was to copy your characters, i was making fun of you, i wasn't trying to make original characters, the idea was, I'm saying you wouldn't know an original character if it hit you in the ass.
*Tacq hits TJ5 in the ass with a baseball bat*
TJ5," GET LOST YOU DAMN DBZ KNOCK-OFF!!!"
*Tacq laughes and walks away* :buttrock:
Dude ur an idiot....
Edit: ^ that was a joke, we used to all get along back then
Edited By TJ5 on 1101439755
SBYRD5
11-10-2002, 10:48 PM
Razz great you used your made up character.mean,but good.
ok,
*KHCloud looks at TJ,and takes his sword and slowly walks away.*
Cool,yes,no :laughlong:
Um the story was supposed to be like roll's old story not the rpg game......... heh .... :laughlong:
You mean like the moogle hunting story?
Exactly roll ! lol
Well I started the thread for the story so post the rest of it
SBYRD5
11-25-2004, 06:04 PM
Why wont some of you try making a custom character...
Use your imagination. :down:
Character Creation - I made 3 games on various game making programs and have made some of the characters you used to call un-original, I will admit thier powers weren't entirely original because I had no basis to work with at the time. My resources weren't that great and I was just starting in the game creating hobby.
Name: Tommy
Age: 19
Race: Human
Home Planet: Earth
Home Town: South City
Bio - Tommy went through a lot as a kid, He fought off many enemies to protect his friends and family. The 1st was a power hungry murderor. The second was a demon with extraordinary powers. The third was a General that wanted all other races on earth to be annihilated besides humans. Through all those troubles he always relied on his instincts and will to go on. Then one night he awoke from hearing screams and explosions and looked out his window..."What are those things" he said as he stared at his neighborhood being torn apart by shadowy figures. Tommy ran downstairs to be confronted by these figures in his own living room. Fighting past them he got outside only to see his mentor Ricky be tossed around by a tall man right infront of his eyes. Tommy rushed the man but was smacked away like a bug. Bleeding and bruised Tommy staggered to his feet and tried to confront this man again. The man punched Tommy into the outside wall of his home and it crumbled down on him. Ricky then attacked the man but was destroyed almost instantly with a flash of light from his hands.. A dark figure kicked the man backwards and ran towards the rubble on top of Tommy and dug him out. "I'm going to get you out of here" The figure said. Tommy awoke the next day in a field face down bleeding everywhere....he couldn't stand...A rescue team found him and took him to SHIELD base.
-----------------------------------
Now 19 Tommy is forced with the task to find the monster who ruined his life...and killed his friends and family...
Edited By TJ5 on 1101441114
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