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girlNferno666
08-18-2004, 09:47 PM
well i wrote something for all the warriors in sfo ^_^ and i know it's not the best but i tried for u guys so i hope u guys like it to all the fighters out there this poems for u ^_^



I need to know the man behind the dark eyes
The secrets and lies
The warrior who fights an endless battle with his soul
The lover who keeps this on going war
I need to know the shadows that lurk in his heart
Which he wants to keep in the dark
The man I know so well
And the shadow that lurks beneath
The man who can love so much
His hand a tender caress
And the fighter who's hand a deadly touch
2 souls trapped in one body like day and night
Your soul longs to find that balance between the warrior and the lover the
Caretaker and the destroyer
Needing seeking looking for that answer that

EvilAkuma
08-19-2004, 06:57 AM
i love it. ur poem is great and if i need help with poem i'll contact u

gouki2008
08-19-2004, 07:14 AM
very good congratulations I like enough the footpath of the warrior jejeje

Gambit036
08-19-2004, 07:15 AM
wow! i'm not very good when it comes 2 writing poems, but urs was gr8!

girlNferno666
08-19-2004, 01:58 PM
y thankies *blushes and looks down all shy* i never thought anyone would like it or it'd be consider great by anyone. it means a lot to me that u guys like it for it was written for all u fighters in sfo ^_^ much love to the dark warriors out there. take care ofurselves and good luck with all that u do.

Sportschick155
08-19-2004, 02:17 PM
yeah that was good..i wrote this one last nite..while i was listening to my boyz ll men cd..hmm
im not to good myself but hey wat the fack!

there are times
i wish i wasnt here
here im always in fear
my dying heart is in so much pain
right now it just feels like the end
with you by my side you make it so much easier
like my life is worth more then it seems
its a journey between me and you
itll never end, i hope this is true
it feels so right when im chillen with you
im getting scared it feels too good to be true
here i lie in my bed
wondering why? how?
never had a friend like yu before
your the best and i love ya for that
its like i can give a smack and yu can still joke about that
things are too perfect
but still i ask myself how? someone like you?" are you fo real?
yeah her name is mirella
shes the best of the best
my best friend for life
nothing can come between us
cause its best friends for life



Edited By Sportschick155 on Aug. 19 2004 at 17:23

alamgir
08-19-2004, 02:20 PM
Nice poems nferno and sports. Damn u guys are good.

Sportschick155
08-19-2004, 03:08 PM
kool thx

akuma_forever
08-19-2004, 05:23 PM
Great poems. Bravo. :thumbsup:

girlNferno666
08-19-2004, 05:50 PM
^_^ nice poem sports. ur a better poet then i can ever wish to become *smiles* ^_^ well heres another one for u all


Like lovers entwined on a Grecian vase
Like a poster of a beautiful face
In captured in ever lasting time
I hold u close and call u mine
Like soft rain that falls with grace
Like lilies that adorn the surface of a lake
My fingers gently trace those soft lips I wish to kiss
Those gentle eyelids upon your face
Like summers last warmth that slips to fall
Like my heart that

party_gurl
08-19-2004, 06:56 PM
[quote:post_uid0="girlNferno666"]^_^ nice poem sports. ur a better poet then i can ever wish to become *smiles* ^_^ well heres another one for u all


Like lovers entwined on a Grecian vase
Like a poster of a beautiful face
In captured in ever lasting time
I hold u close and call u mine
Like soft rain that falls with grace
Like lilies that adorn the surface of a lake
My fingers gently trace those soft lips I wish to kiss
Those gentle eyelids upon your face
Like summers last warmth that slips to fall
Like my heart that

Sportschick155
08-19-2004, 07:03 PM
i never thought id feel this way for you
i dumped you like just another fool
you loved me
you cared for me
you protected me
you did everything no one else has done for me
i was blinded by the light
and put you outta my sight
dropped you like it was hot
i didnt know any better
im now mature and better
you made me feel special
like no other
it was you who really cared
it took months for me to notice that
made my stupid mistakes
ive always ended up being true too you and you know that
and now you dont want me back
it hurts like someone stabbed me in the back
i feel like a fool for being so selfish
its time to move on
but badly i dont want too
u will always be loved by me
and i hope u feel the same way too
its just time to set u free
like one of them mother flipin bees

hahahahahaha sorry didnt kno how to end it

party_gurl
08-19-2004, 08:16 PM
i never thought id feel this way for you
i dumped you like just another fool
you loved me
you cared for me
you protected me
you did everything no one else has done for me
i was blinded by the light
and put you outta my sight
dropped you like it was hot
i didnt know any better
im now mature and better
you made me feel special
like no other
it was you who really cared
it took months for me to notice that
made my stupid mistakes
ive always ended up being true too you and you know that
and now you dont want me back
it hurts like someone stabbed me in the back
i feel like a fool for being so selfish
its time to move on
but badly i dont want too
u will always be loved by me
and i hope u feel the same way too
its just time to set u free
like one of them mother flipin bees

hahahahahaha sorry didnt kno how to end it
lolz like da ending...

azncat
08-19-2004, 08:19 PM
o 0 lol theyre bette than mine so i give them a 10/10

girlNferno666
08-19-2004, 08:35 PM
^_^ very nice

heres one that goes out to those who have been forgotten and misused and abused much love to u all i know how it feel like *gives a huggle to them all*



Have you ever wonder where those things left over go
Those things left uncared for
Like pieces of a puzzle that have no use
Are those people who have been abused
No one hears the silent cries that we hide
The hurts we have inside
The darkness that consumes our souls
The things left untold
Things we've long to unload
Pain that scorches our souls
And burns our flesh
Like memories of being lashed
Sins of the past
Our only crime is being born next in line
In an endless cycle made before our time

coolkilla
08-19-2004, 08:50 PM
Nice poems girlnferno and you too sports =)

dragon_cloud
08-19-2004, 10:36 PM
i love both ofur poems girlnferno and sportchicks there breath taking....i wrote this it well just tell me what u think cause i dont no what to say

.its call only time can heal...im sorry ..........only time can heal all things that are said hole in your heart...the hole in my head only in time that time can stop the pain ...only in time that i can stop the pain...the pain i gave in haste is now...what i gave in shame deep in my heart i know u feel the the same when i say that its a shame that things could not stay the same but i never give up hope that i take to my gave when i say that im sorry well u ever for give me for the shame i know i'm theone to place blame when we all say its just a dam shame......

Razz
08-19-2004, 10:48 PM
This isn't really a poem, but it's close enough.
Don't mind the guitar chords.

REFLECTION
Capo 7

Verse 1:
E
As I saw you
Walking up to say goodbye
A
It didn't hit me
How much it would hurt inside
E
As later on it
Sunk into my mind
B
That I wouldn't see you smile
For a very long time

E
I just hugged you
And sent you on your way
A
I didn't think that
There was any more to say
E
Now that I reflect
I regret it
B
I should have held you longer
And I wish that you could stay

Chorus:
A
Everytime I turn around
B
I see you standing there

In my mind, holding on
B7
Keeping me back in time

Verse 2:
E
I'm at home on my own
And I'm missing you
A
Don't even have a decent picture
To remember you by
E
I took a survey and
The colour of my life is blue
B
but it would be gray
If it wasn't for meeting you

-Chorus-

Bridge:
E?
I'll go out of my way
A?
To tell you
E?
Just what you mean to me
A?
I miss you
B
I may be shy
A
It may feel akward at times
B
but I want you to know
A Em
I've got you on my mind

-Verse 1-

-Chorus-

girlNferno666
08-20-2004, 02:47 AM
to my Nferno666


with no more then a smile u light up my world like sun shine peircing the darkest night
with one soft whisper of i love u jade from ur lips gives me wings and i take flight
my heart soars and knows no fears
i know no wants no needs no worldly things as long as u love me
for all i need is thee
u free my soul and make my mind believe in me
u show me the world through ur eyes and i can see past all the lies
and when i'm with u i no longer hurt inside
i close my eyes and know there will no longer be any more tears
for all i hear is i love u my dear and u have no reason to fear

girlNferno666
08-20-2004, 09:31 AM
Time moves with no speed
Each day passes like the last
Nights fall with no notice
Days comes with no markings
Seasons come and go
From spring buds to autumn leaves before snow
Years move like sands through the hourglass like minuets as they slide past
The only thing that change is the wrinkling of the flesh
but nothing has aged since last
My eyes soften with care whenever you are near
My heart still holds you close and dear
Time had no meaning since you were last here

Sportschick155
08-20-2004, 12:03 PM
dude...uhm..r u with nferno?

girlNferno666
08-20-2004, 04:00 PM
two strangers we were
in danger
of losing what we held dear
so very scared
your smile so sweet
your touch so tender
and so my heart
i surrender
my vowels of love i gave
your hand i took
i know you love me
with just one look
those lips so soft
your fingers gentle caress
and so to you i gave all my trust
your loving kisses
those gentle hands
whos soft touch
tells me you understand
those warm arms
that hold me safe from harm
the melody of your heart
when i lay my head upon your chest
tells me
i've found true love
at last. . .

Saijin_Ryu
08-20-2004, 04:03 PM
[quote:post_uid14="Sportschick155"]dude...uhm..r u with nferno?[/quote:post_uid14]
[color=blue:post_uid14]Yea i am.[/color:post_uid14]

Razz
08-20-2004, 04:54 PM
Yeah, Saijin and Nferno have had the hots for eachother for a while now.

Sportschick155
08-21-2004, 03:07 AM
=\

Nferno666
08-21-2004, 05:59 AM
Yeah, Saijin and Nferno have had the hots for eachother for a while now.
don't make me kill you.... :biggrin:

alamgir
08-21-2004, 06:06 AM
Hold on a sec are girlnferno and nferno together? Lol what a good couple that would be.

Gambit036
08-21-2004, 07:31 AM
i dont know, but girlnferno is a very good poet, and so is sportchick! u guys must spend ages finkin of things 2 rite bout!

girlNferno666
08-21-2004, 02:18 PM
hehe y thank you and no not really i do it when i have a lot of things inside i don't know how to say or express so i write it down on paper or else draw it out in my sketch pad well heres another one for u all much love to those i've come to know and call friend and for those ofui haven't had the honor of meeting yet ^_^ feel free to say hi when u see me in the servers *smiles*


your not perfect
u don't always tell me what i wanna hear
but one thing i know thats for sure
is you'll always be there to wipe away the tears
someone who won't mind taking the time
to make sure i'm fine
always doing something silly and wild
to get me to smile
i'm glad what you've given me just didn't last for a while
this thing you've given me
i'll cheerish to the end
*kisses u softly on the cheek and whispers*
thank u my friend

alamgir
08-21-2004, 02:42 PM
Lost in a lonely and distant land
Staring at the blood stains on his hand
Hordes of evil approaching with haste
He tightens the armour around his waste
All good has perished and all hope is lost
His tears drifting in the cold frost
The monsters appear fiery all through
The humongous army crying death awaits you
He has no where to run and must hold them off
His hopes of survival are severely rough
He ready's his sword for a final fight
The creatures surround him through marching and flight
He calls upon the light one last time
And charges forward with a chill upon his spine
His glistening blade darting in several directions
Slashing at monsters of many selections
He dodges around, faster than any
but the odds are against him although he's killed many
The evil winged beasts swoop down low
And the edge of a sword pierce him to his sorrow
Staring at the cackeling horrors all in chrome
Flashbacks rush through his mind of his former home
His blood spills as he staggers by a tree
This heroe's soul has finally been set free



Edited By alamgir on Aug. 21 2004 at 22:45

girlNferno666
08-21-2004, 04:51 PM
aww i like it ^_^ hehe good job meanie well done ^_^ *hands u her bra autograph? jk hands u a sheet paper like a normal person for once x.x thats scary me being normal well heres another one for u all

Here I lie where I

dragon_cloud
08-22-2004, 12:04 AM
there all lovely poems ur really good and jade is really really really good :buttrock: ^_^

shy_gurL21
08-22-2004, 12:10 AM
i agree...they're awesome

dragon_cloud
08-22-2004, 01:09 AM
go ahead shy shake ur boom boom give us a A give us a W give us a E give us a S give us a O give us a M give is a E what that spell awesome !!!! what that spell AWESOME now give me some G,s cause im b.r.o.k.e after that letters aint cheap ..... :p

shy_gurL21
08-22-2004, 01:12 AM
wtf? ??? u on crack? u must be...

dragon_cloud
08-22-2004, 01:18 AM
.......MAY B.....WANT SOME (not really im just freaking nuts with my post that all)

girlNferno666
08-22-2004, 01:40 AM
aww u guys i'm glad u guys like it so much ^_^ well heres another one for all those long term couples i hope u all like it


Long kisses in the night
Strong arms holding me tight
Movies and dinner by candle light
Our love burning bright
Gentle love melodies floating in the air
You holding me near
Soft whispers of I love you against my ear
Things I recall from over the years
Little special things we've shared
From dances under the moon light
And stolen kisses in the night
Little love fights
And making up after we turn off the lights
Before saying our good nights and holding each other tight
Waking up in your soft gaze that says I care
Doing laundry and washing your underwear
All blessings we've had through out the years
Things I

dragon_cloud
08-22-2004, 01:48 AM
AWWW SNIFF SNIFF SNIFF....THAT WAS SO BEAUTYFULL ...JUST...LIKE...U HERE A POEM I HOPE U LOVE ITS ABOUT A SHY GUY WHO LIKE THIS GURL ITS CALL....

DREAM GIRL:
I no as I stair knowing that u dont care to know that im their..wishing and dreaming that u was there by my side. the way you look at me make me feel all warm inside. i love the way your hair flow thought the air with out a care as i wish that i was there leting my hand flow down the side. i dream from afar asking god why WHY dont i have the courage deep inside to say hi but i do have enough to say good bye.... as i watch from afar. i feel so alnoe as i watch your sweet tender lips sing my heart flys with many wings. I walk to her and ask her nicely may i plz have a date . she looks at me as she smiles (as i say to my self oplz let me hear!!) she say: ok i see u at 8 THEN OK ITS A DATE....that was the start of the best thing that happen.......so the messge is clear its not to have fear when the one u love is near in stead give a cheer to know that the one u love is here.........THE END xoxoxoxo
:buttrock:



Edited By dragon_cloud on Aug. 22 2004 at 05:37

jz3232
08-22-2004, 03:03 AM
[quote:post_uid2="girlNferno666"]^_^ very nice

heres one that goes out to those who have been forgotten and misused and abused much love to u all i know how it feel like *gives a huggle to them all*



Have you ever wonder where those things left over go
Those things left uncared for
Like pieces of a puzzle that have no use
Are those people who have been abused
No one hears the silent cries that we hide
The hurts we have inside
The darkness that consumes our souls
The things left untold
Things we've long to unload
Pain that scorches our souls
And burns our flesh
Like memories of being lashed
Sins of the past
Our only crime is being born next in line
In an endless cycle made before our time[/quote:post_uid2]
um i like all ur poems i know the other ones u did are better but um i personaly like this one the most. i give u props on all of them um ill try to do some also but i dont know if it will be poetry ill do something different something with no rhyme but with tendeness and all



Edited By jz3232 on Aug. 23 2004 at 03:12

alamgir
08-22-2004, 03:55 AM
[quote:post_uid0="girlNferno666"]aww i like it ^_^ hehe good job meanie well done ^_^ *hands u her bra autograph? jk hands u a sheet paper like a normal person for once x.x thats scary me being normal well heres another one for u all

Here I lie where I

Gambit036
08-22-2004, 12:42 PM
hey girlNferno666, clear a message frm ur inbox cause i need 2 tell u something.

girlNferno666
08-22-2004, 03:39 PM
^_^ silly i call everyone a meanie i didn't say it to offend u i'm sorry if it did ^_^ it's kinda my word for friend ^_^ well i wrote another poem for u all i guess i write this one for those who seem to be in love with a person they can't have so they love those memories they've once shared. . .



Like a dream you appear to me
So close and dear
My fingers reach out to touch
but you disappear
Like an apparition of my imagination
You haunt my dreams and taunt me
Your presence still lingers here
Your fragrance still clinging to the air
My bed sheets still hold your scent
My pillow the shape of your head

Sportschick155
08-22-2004, 06:42 PM
you depress me but you never cease to impress me
I hate you for everything you've done to me or for me
like you thought it was supposed to be..
I hate it that you were never there when I just needed someone to say I care..
when you were going through tuff times I was the only one their saying you'll be fine
I tear up everytime I think about this about you and how I never
had it a family who cared.
It was hard for me to just say "I Love You"
since it was never true
to huge you since it didn't feel true
or to even give you a simple kiss because I felt like I was used
my feelings always locked up because i never wanted to bring
up my stupid poop
Always thinking who wants to litsen to this
I hate you
I don't care about you like I should but no one said you are
supposed to love your mom or to even care.
If you've just had enough I can understand i'm right off the edge
I feel like I can barely breathe
these feelings inside of me..
tired of her stupid poop
I just wished she would just stop it, just drop it
leave me alone
just let me be..Me

dragon_cloud
08-22-2004, 07:28 PM
:shocked: there great poems
....sport it sound sometime like ur just hurting inside
....when it hurts do u cry or do u say good bye to
the pain its all just the same i wish i dream nay
i hope this is seen happyness 4 every one that
dreams plz if youhurt in side let me tell u what i
want to say what u what to here what
u want me to say and what we never fare
......it b ok lets see that beautyfull smile dont
b blue let me take the pain 4 u i dont want u
t ob sad i then b that glad that
im here to say it b ok that with evey rain u must
no that it will shine anther day so im here 4 u
to let u no im here and and to say it b ok

i made it up on the fly so plz exuse the mistakes :buttrock:

girlnferno sport im ur dorky fan!! :p



Edited By dragon_cloud on Aug. 22 2004 at 22:30

Sportschick155
08-22-2004, 07:49 PM
:shocked: there great poems
....sport it sound sometime like ur just hurting inside
....when it hurts do u cry or do u say good bye to
the pain its all just the same i wish i dream nay
i hope this is seen happyness 4 every one that
dreams plz if youhurt in side let me tell u what i
want to say what u what to here what
u want me to say and what we never fare
......it b ok lets see that beautyfull smile dont
b blue let me take the pain 4 u i dont want u
t ob sad i then b that glad that
im here to say it b ok that with evey rain u must
no that it will shine anther day so im here 4 u
to let u no im here and and to say it b ok

i made it up on the fly so plz exuse the mistakes :buttrock:

girlnferno sport im ur dorky fan!! :p
heyy..that was nice :)

party_gurl
08-22-2004, 07:50 PM
you depress me but you never cease to impress me
I hate you for everything you've done to me or for me
like you thought it was supposed to be..
I hate it that you were never there when I just needed someone to say I care..
when you were going through tuff times I was the only one their saying you'll be fine
I tear up everytime I think about this about you and how I never
had it a family who cared.
It was hard for me to just say "I Love You"
since it was never true
to huge you since it didn't feel true
or to even give you a simple kiss because I felt like I was used
my feelings always locked up because i never wanted to bring
up my stupid poop
Always thinking who wants to litsen to this
I hate you
I don't care about you like I should but no one said you are
supposed to love your mom or to even care.
If you've just had enough I can understand i'm right off the edge
I feel like I can barely breathe
these feelings inside of me..
tired of her stupid poop
I just wished she would just stop it, just drop it
leave me alone
just let me be..Me
wuvz..* haha..

dragon_cloud
08-22-2004, 08:15 PM
;) blushes* th...th...thank..u it was ez cause ur a nice girl

rachel....hehe ur nutty some times :p :laugh:

Evil-Blanka
08-22-2004, 08:22 PM
ok her e is evil blanka poem

slash bash u cut another

hole in your ass leave blood
on the wall play tennis wit your
balls when the phone ring dont
answer the calls split your throte
hump you like a foat shave your
fearm and make a winter coat
a winter coat i got it from you
i like it because its from you and
its also blue but i cant believe its true
im a artist what do you think i think all of
you stink did i say all i mean the ones
with there backs aginst the wall its sad
some didnt even grow up wit a dad this is
recles but it has to go i want to spend
all my time in the snow you know

-Ski-
08-22-2004, 08:26 PM
Yea i got a sensitive side

Emotions

To see through ones eyes they must know what they feel, feelings beyond spiritual and physical,beyond the skin and bone, the feelings of emotions that has no being, that has no form, but has the strength of a 1000 tears, tomake one cry, that holds our sword and shield, the emotions of mine and your, the feelings that feel.

when i write poems it happens like if i were in a trans ( its weird ) like i wrote this during my history class and like when i wrote it down it felt like i never wrote it so its weird for me like if it were another person inside writing.

ill post one more of my poems later



Edited By -Ski- on Aug. 22 2004 at 23:28

dragon_cloud
08-22-2004, 08:28 PM
..... :shocked: well.....that sure is some thing..... :shocked: is that a rap or a poem.......( he sound a little nuts) at least the guy in it dose not u....yet..... :shocked:

and ski poem sounds good.... :buttrock:



Edited By dragon_cloud on Aug. 22 2004 at 23:30

-Ski-
08-22-2004, 08:31 PM
hehe lol i didnt write it ( I think ) but i did physicaly write it


my body was there but not my being

Evil-Blanka
08-22-2004, 08:31 PM
..... :shocked: well.....that sure is some thing..... :shocked: is that a rap or a poem.......( he sound a little nuts) at least the guy in it dose not u....yet..... :shocked:
yo i got that from scary movie the rest i made up

-Ski-
08-22-2004, 08:44 PM
My second poem that my spiritual self made was

Normal friends, unnormal self
To be normal be unnormal what everyone else is, so they can see your like them, to take the personality of what is, to be someone else is being normal, to be unnormal be yourself and show them the real you, the you thats hidden behind your friends, To be unnormal shows your trueself the person only you know, consealed well that is only seen by your soul. Keep hidden for the time being, but when facing eternity, become nothing but normal.

when i write these it feels like these are messages sent form my spiritual being to my physical to become one

dragon_cloud
08-22-2004, 10:01 PM
:buttrock: DEEP

girlNferno666
08-22-2004, 11:04 PM
very well done ^_^ nice imagery and feelings behind ur words in ur poems ^_^ heres another one for u all who don't mind reading my poems they're not that great so yeah



when time has past
and you have gone
and here at last i still stand waiting for that grain of sand to fall to mark that last moment with u
but in the end i'm a fool just dreaming away unreal dreams of you
when at last i'm left alone the ghost of yesterday haunts my home
your laughter rings like enchanted melodies in the night
your smiles like faded ambers
reminding me of a passion that once let me on fire
but like the ashes of yesterday and the sands of time u slip away
leaving me to face yet another day of not having u here with me
one last good bye one last touch one last sweet memory for my heart. . .


for those who have loved and lost

-Ski-
08-23-2004, 05:34 AM
nice what inspired u to wright it was it something you were going through or a friend of yours ( or was it a poem that u just thought of

really cool

alamgir
08-23-2004, 05:41 AM
Nice poems everone. I dont make as many good ones nowadays.

girlNferno666
08-23-2004, 08:35 AM
i wrote it when i broke up with the last ex ^_^ so yeah hard times but we all see them every once in a while i guess it's good to have a cry every now and then u write good poems too silly so tell me what inspires u

dragon_cloud
08-23-2004, 02:06 PM
ur poems ur so sweet but i wish i cant stop u from ever seeing hard times so u never have to see hard times again ,_ _, :buttrock:

blanka09
08-23-2004, 02:54 PM
My world.. forgotten and full of hate
Sad, destroyed and desolate
I run through, lifeless, thoughtless and emotionless
Without giving thoughts to things I should expect
With the slightest hint of respect,
I welcome the juggernaut of my ascent
Thy words shall continue to affect
My very thought and emotions.. but regardless
should I say I have the emotions of one with something to spare
Nay... yeah.. nay.. yeah.. nay DAMMIT
For thus, I shall remain a purist
Even with Scott, Ryu, Ken and Spidey,
I graze the SFO world with a lost and complicated mind
Waiting for thou to come and bind
with great words, a loving heart and one that would combine
My inner essence and my soul entwined
No one shall ever replace that sound of mine
till today, I shall honestly and truely say
Dear lady, please come my way..


That was the Dr. Jekkyl of Blanka09 .. and I'll try my possible best to keep him in check :biggrin:

girlNferno666
08-23-2004, 11:51 PM
awwblanka u dork :P see nferno was right it was only time before u snapped :p and started confessing things :p winks* i like it lots smiles* well done thats one lucky lady coming ur way *cheers ya on go blanka go blanka go blanka :P hehe runs away before u can ask her whats wrong with her :P because theres way to many things to list or name or say :P



Edited By girlNferno666 on 1093330393

girlNferno666
08-24-2004, 02:09 AM
well heres one for the love of my life


you pick up the peices when they fall
you do it without any complaints at all
never taking the easy way out
you never raise your voice or shout
always so devoting and caring
the weight of the world your always baring
your love your always sharing
so it's not surprising when i say
i love you more each day
so very special and dear to my heart
my insperation from all my poetry to art
the reason i paint with colors
instead of shades of gray
because you light up my world
i nevery way



Edited By girlNferno666 on 1093338931

alamgir
08-24-2004, 02:26 AM
well heres one for the love of my life


you pick up the peices when they fall
you do it without any complaints at all
never taking the easy way out
you never raise your voice or shout
always so devoting and caring
the weight of the world your always baring
your love your always sharing
so it's not surprising when i say
i love you more each day
so very special and dear to my heart
my insperation from all my poetry to art
the reason i paint with colors
instead of shades of gray
because you light up my world
i nevery way
Is that to nferno lol?

girlNferno666
08-24-2004, 02:33 AM
i don't know go ask him if it's for him :P

alamgir
08-24-2004, 03:03 AM
i don't know go ask him if it's for him :P
Hey you wrote it.

gouki2008
08-24-2004, 03:24 AM
i don't know go ask him if it's for him :P
??? what he hell u write it so u must know if is 4 n ferno

girlNferno666
08-24-2004, 03:54 AM
ok so i know if it is or not but go ask him if youwanna know i'm not saying :P u guys can think what u like hehe

blanka09
08-24-2004, 04:02 AM
awwblanka u dork :P see nferno was right it was only time before u snapped :p and started confessing things :p winks* i like it lots smiles* well done thats one lucky lady coming ur way *cheers ya on go blanka go blanka go blanka :P hehe runs away before u can ask her whats wrong with her :P because theres way to many things to list or name or say :P
For this reason I have made Dr. Jekkyl slumber for many years... *sigh*

Oh well, another day, another loaf of bread.. and another burning desire :biggrin:

coolplayer2K2
08-24-2004, 05:04 AM
lol girlnferno nice 114 posts and u started in august... the next iplay2win maybe

ok i got a poem.

roses are blue
violets are red
mess with me
and i bust ur fking head

so wat do u think of it? :biggrin: i no its the best

Evil-Blanka
08-24-2004, 09:12 AM
My world.. forgotten and full of hate
Sad, destroyed and desolate
I run through, lifeless, thoughtless and emotionless
Without giving thoughts to things I should expect
With the slightest hint of respect,
I welcome the juggernaut of my ascent
Thy words shall continue to a fect
My very thought and emotions.. but regardless
should I say I have the emotions of one with something to spare
Nay... yeah.. nay.. yeah.. nay DAMMIT
For thus, I shall remain a purist
Even with Scott, Ryu, Ken and Spidey,
I graze the SFO world with a lost and complicated mind
Waiting for thou to come and bind
with great words, a loving heart and one that would combine
My inner essence and my soul entwined
No one shall ever replace that sound of mine
till today, I shall honestly and truely say
Dear lady, please come my way..


That was the Dr. Jekkyl of Blanka09 .. and I'll try my possible best to keep him in check :biggrin:
im a weirdo arnt ii die you die we all die when we are high high i mean as high as a kite that will never com dow neven if you wish with all your might might when you do that you will iether die or loose your site i love the dark and the dark loves me i medatate on pokemon and that lil pokemon caterpie i hate you all and you all hate me some day i will die and become a tree a tree thats what i want to be to stand still and tall and be the tallest of all maybe even taller than a wall :ghostface:

blanka09
08-24-2004, 09:14 AM
Tell me why you had to quote my post Evil-Blanka... O_O

oh and coolplayer2k2.. wonder why no one cares?? This is Random Insanity.. my guess is, everything goes :biggrin:

Evil-Blanka
08-24-2004, 09:23 AM
Tell me why you had to quote my post Evil-Blanka... O_O

oh and coolplayer2k2.. wonder why no one cares?? This is Random Insanity.. my guess is, everything goes :biggrin:
ok sorry blanka what are you talking about im a free minded person well i dont know im kinda weird well i am not as bad as i use t to be double posting spamming doing every thing lol ok here is another



why do we do what we do why dont i do what i told i try to find things but i have to un fold un fold when i open it i find gold im blanka and i like chanka chanka and blanka goes with each other i hate her and she loves me chanka leave me the hell alone and let me be free free is for me and your a slave to open your mind you must be brrave

girlNferno666
08-24-2004, 12:58 PM
:) well done meanie on the poems evil blanka thankies for sharing ur poem with us *smiles*

girlNferno666
08-24-2004, 02:48 PM
well this ones for evil_blanka ^c^ i hopes u like it

slowly day in and day out
this demon that lives with in me wishes to get out
this darkness that no one knows
that consumes my soul
the secrets and lies that hides inside
the evil that no one sees
wishes to be set free
slowly it eats at me
whispering to me i should let it be
the shadow is all i need
and slowly it sweeps
from it's dormant sleep
fude by old age rage
breaking free of it's cage
the beast within
now roams free in this world of sin



Edited By girlNferno666 on 1093397801

Evil-Blanka
08-24-2004, 03:18 PM
well this ones for evil_blanka ^c^ i hopes u like it

slowly day in and day out
this demon that lives with in me wishes to get out
this darkness that no one knows
that consumes my soul
the secrets and lies that hides inside
the evil that no one sees
wishes to be set free
slowly it eats at me
whispering to me i should let it be
the shadow is all i need
and slowly it sweeps
from it's dormant sleep
fude by old age rage
breaking free of it's cage
the beast in me has been unleashed. . .
i like it it was nice i am not realy like that i just like posting poems with hatred in it lol looke at my ghost face :ghostface:

dragon_cloud
08-24-2004, 07:58 PM
[color=#000000:post_uid2]:alien: :stupid: GIRLNFERNO'S R THE BEST :buttrock:[/color:post_uid2]

Riseabove
08-24-2004, 11:51 PM
Yeah as you begin to write for many years. You notice that your writing goes thru phases. I have had about 3 or 4 meanie phases and several lesser meanie phases. Rejection phases, acceptance phases, contemplative phases, reminiscing phases, wishing phases, dreaming phases, damn man. poop gets soo deep. I prsonally try not to draw from one inspiration for too long. but i always find myself getting stuck on the subject of romance like many poets. but hey, i know i aint the only romantic in this world. So heres one i recently wrote. :hehe:


Pain picks at pleasure like painted passion from pressed lips.
All your anguish anger astonishment arms are out asking for answers.
Iniside it lies intertwined in illuminated illusions.
Numb and nodding nervously nursing noxious nubile narcotic need.

Innocently inclined to the inescapable isolated idea.
Silently sleeping surrounded by solemn sounds of solitude.

Left like dried leaves loosely lying as lonely as autumn's love.
Overly ope novertunred to a noverture of oncoming waves and oceanic tides.
Vindicated and voluptuous as violet, valued voraciously in volumes.
Enchanting elegance as eve enters early light's embrace.



P.S. Nice work girl inferno. I havent read all of it yet, but i liked what i saw so far. Caretaker and destroyer..hehehehe. i was reading that one like YOU GO GIRL!

P.P.S Yo im having a problem with spaces and such......and O's look at the line where it says a noverture of oceanic tides and al that poop> the O line, i corrected those typo's twice and they still switch back like that...same thing happened with the marquee on ym sig, i couldnt get them to stay spaced...every OTHER time i would edit it, It would take out the double spaces between words and also make some O's and B's lowr case.../shrugs it was odd. but it was one of the first things i noticed since the forum's make over.



Edited By Riseabove on 1093417013

girlNferno666
08-25-2004, 02:48 PM
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blanka09
08-25-2004, 05:45 PM
The world around me
My foolishness before me
The pain inside me
The bitterness within me
It's so sad to know the truth
that your work proves nothing but a lie
and even being called a fool
doesn't justify the good for which you thought you tried
And although I ask myself why
There's no "correct" answer for the errors.. with the fate that woe betides
I only wish and hope that those would take hold of me
and stop me from falling and actually hurting me
That the one whose B's and hellos..
would charm me like a sweet meadow
for nothing else seems to choke
like her voice in which only an angel can cloak
That the one whose dork knighting
wouldn't stop stop her loving
and that the Nferno, wouldn't stop "it's" burning
You never know.. until you realize
that you're a fool even when you hurt inside
Nothing can at this point justify my woes
and not even I can contend with my foes
but I know this one truth
that a survivor never gives up without a fight
and though it may seem that I will certainly loose
Ahead of One day and One dream shall be my light
Even with the Shinjitus no uta
I have come to realize that there's no one as fitting as her
so as I always end my words of despair
I will thrust this one spear
into the hearts of those who beckon against my dear
and then I shall lay
and wait for the day
she shall come my way...


... LOL.. that felt.. really good :biggrin:



Edited By blanka09 on 1093481388

SBYRD5
08-25-2004, 06:05 PM
Nice blanka,but I see a word error in your poem...seems to recieve your real life...though...you do seem to contiue regardless very strong man.


Ave...today I realized that I died with the blood of shiva running through my viens.

Hindu....Shrines to a GOD of carnation....

My pockets are warm because I hide my needed hands in them with passive gesture....

A poor mans hands are firm....

I carried a walking stick the day I died...and used it as a blind man.....but a blind man that didn't know himself..

no one knows themselve better than a blindman...

Sense I have real sight I stared at the sea in the sky wishing it would rain pruple....breathing at the sky righting my name in the air with my breath.....

Seeing only Red through my malicious colorblindness....so when it rains for me i see the blood of the virgin mary...

Mellow shades of blue cruised through my mind and for a moment I was in Nirvana....

Was my nirvana in the skies...?

I smirked...as if I new of my own awakening...

And in this golden Age of sin...there isn't much to smile about...

Broken smiles...with broken christian dreams...

So when you lose your dream you die...

I don't dream anymore...

That's why I think I'm dead...



Edited By SBYRD5 on 1093482521

dragon_cloud
08-25-2004, 06:12 PM
there all good......my head hurts from all the reading !!!

girlNferno666
08-25-2004, 06:14 PM
wow very powerful both ofuguys well done *is speechless*

dragon_cloud
08-25-2004, 06:22 PM
[color=# f0000:post_uid1]i miss my happness:

some times it feel like its pain from the rain deep in side my head deep in side
i do so cry and that the rain is the tears i shed but then i look up at u and
all the storm with in me go away to rain anther day
that the day i wish that cause last the most i no it cant come true i no i miss u
and the rain comes back
deep in side i have that hope that it will go away again but this time never
come back but when i see ur reflection
in the rain i no that its going to shine just the same
i wait in side my house looking out
wondering when u come once again
to use that smile once more its all the more make me explode from waitin g
to see that glow in ur eyes makes the stars twinkle and the moon shine
as i wait 4 ur return i die alittle deep in side lusting 4 more ofur presents
as my heart go away deep in darkness not even trusting its shadow
but only ur light shining shows the way that saves me from my sorrow

i wrote that when i was talking to girlnferno[/color:post_uid1]



Edited By dragon_cloud on 1093483643

blanka09
08-25-2004, 06:27 PM
wow very powerful both ofuguys well done *is speechless*
If only.. if only you knew.. :biggrin:

Ludacris
08-25-2004, 06:33 PM
man... I'd post my poems.....but all in french........and I don't like sharing my feelings.........cuz all my poems are about me or the people surrounding me...........

blanka09
08-25-2004, 06:39 PM
Put it this way.. A poem is the easiest way of actually posting what you feel.. without letting others know how you feel.. :biggrin: .. I'm not one to post how I feel for the whole world to see.. and besides, I'd enjoy it more if 2 or 3 ppl know how I truely feel

but with a poem.. they see the mixture of words and the rhyming.. but never actually get a good peak at ur soul :biggrin: .. only a gifted few can actually do that.



Edited By blanka09 on 1093484417

Ludacris
08-25-2004, 08:25 PM
yah but still..........my poems are good but easy to get, I mean people can find out everything about me..........and I don,t want that lol......... I mean some things are really deep............even for me

girlNferno666
08-25-2004, 09:38 PM
aww silly it's what u feel there should be no shame in that so what if people understand i bet you'd be surprise how many people actually can relate to u but then you'll never know till u post well heres a poem for u guys about life


where this road leads no one knows
continuous like the moon cycles and tides
it'll never end till life dies
with it's crimsion sun rise
and golden skies
of tomorrows
walking this lonely road
with many of lifes sorrows
one feet in front of the other
they say
one step at a time each day
live for the moment before it pass
cheerish it for it won't last
nights come to soon
days end to fast
before u know it
it'll be consider the past
when tomorrow comes
and today is done
so let the road take u where it may
lifes to short to chart out everything along the way
so live it day by day

dragon_cloud
08-26-2004, 02:49 AM
that lovely!!!!.....(wait 4 it).....silly:D

tears of the heart...i no ur here:

i always no ur here in my heart but
at the same time im wishing 4 some
thing i can not have.. when i do i feel the
pain and it makes me want to die just so i can
feel again but always know that i know your there
even if it is or is not for me...your my happness and my sadness cause when your here you give me a smile
but at the same time you give me my tears ...
when u say good bye or when u say i love anther and
its not ur mother but were friends and at lest we are happy
...yes its ture but it dont hurt to want more
or does it.....i....think i know



Edited By dragon_cloud on 1093514583

girlNferno666
08-26-2004, 03:13 PM
very lovely as usual dragon well done :) smiles* well heres a poem i wrote for joejoe and his gf. many happy wishes for u guys may u guys always be blessed with many happy moments together forever.

your lips like roses
who's petals so soft
my fingers can't help but caress
your eyes like a mirror that reflects my soul
thats why i love you and can't let go
your skin so soft and fair
i can't help but want to touch when your near
your smile that you give so free
melts my hearts and makes it hard to breath
the kindness of your heart
sets u apart
from all the rest
you're the reason for that which beats in my chest

dragon_cloud
08-26-2004, 08:56 PM
that real beautyful and thanks ^c^

NIGHT WISH:
your smile lights the way of this night the night
that should never end as a lovely friendship
for ever grows to some thing that is lovely so...
i wish it to ever go to never end its so nice its....
its just a passing dream that pass us by so fast
that i cant help but to dream of the past the
day a head i wish for anther dream excape to put
me i nonce again the lovely mood i in the lovely mood
that make its all special



Edited By dragon_cloud on 1093580384

shy_gurL21
08-26-2004, 09:36 PM
hmm..here's a sonnet...i wrote it for a school contest...it's about autumn...my favorite season...

nature's display

the majestic blue sky and the gentle heat of the sun,
cold nights, adorn the woody hills with hundreds of colors,
tints of yellow, shades of orange, and hues of red that stun,
the breathtaking views of autumn among the hilly course.

the evergreen and cedar trees turn into fiery red,
the beech and maple trees with their wonderful o fering,
of garlands of scarlet flowers, like roses on a bed,
the breathtaking views of autumn, colors ever changing.

crisp leaves of red, orange, and yellow that gracefully fall,
that flap and flutter like hundreds of golden butterflies,
like pieces of a puzzle, when into the ground they fall,
the breathtaking views of autumn that deeply tantalize.

the time of autumn is a lively, wonderful season,
with breathtaking views that astound with a thousand reasons.



Edited By shy_gurL21 on 1093581438

dragon_cloud
08-26-2004, 09:38 PM
[color=# f0000],-

shy_gurL21
08-26-2004, 10:19 PM
thanks dawg :D

Riseabove
08-27-2004, 06:43 PM
from the day your eyes met mine.
things are not so di ferent
you're so big inside my mind
i've been blown away
all the blood my heart has churned
never seemed to wash away
this pai nof my love for you
so many words unspoken
the pai nof my love for you
gives me more joy than you could ever know
no matter who your heart beats for

the pain my love, for you
so bittersweet
this story untold
the sweetest symphony
to the ghosts that circle around my head
for all the love i never had
means nothing
its these dreams of you
i've always had
kept me warm
in this cold, dead world.

Another night i sleep.
Another chance to waste away.
In my own nightmare.
Its doom inside my eyes nowbaby.
And i love it. Sacrifice me.
As you carefully deviate ways.
To painlessly sever the ties that bind us.
So as not to be burdened by my anguish.
Spill my blood.
Watch the juices splash all over your face.
As you snatched then smashed my still beating heart
I always loved to watch you smile through my blood red misery.



Edited By Riseabove on 1093658366

girlNferno666
08-27-2004, 08:12 PM
well everyones been wanting to know this so heres a poem to my love nferno *kisses him softly*


blind was i to the world and everything and all
darkness was all i saw
i need not take part in this world that moves
all it ever gave me was abuse
dead was i inside
and all i saw in my world withered and died
from the wilted grass to the twisted trees
and the gray skies above
till the day you showed me how to love
with the simple touch of your hand
my life began
your lips breath life into me
with a tender kiss
and showed me blist
my pain u stole
my heart you hold
my world so full of gray
reflects back beautiful when held in your eyes gaze
your the beauty i see the thing i need
the reason i breath



Edited By girlNferno666 on 1093704618

dragon_cloud
08-29-2004, 09:54 PM
that beautyful:blues: ............

girlNferno666
08-31-2004, 02:55 AM
where this road leads no one knows
continuous like the moon cycles and tides
it'll never end till life dies
with it's crimsion sun rise
and golden skies
of tomorrows
walking this lonely road
with many of lifes sorrows
one feet in front of the other
they say
one step at a time each day
live for the moment before it pass
cheerish it for it won't last
nights come to soon
days end to fast
before u know it
it'll be consider the past
when tomorrow comes
and today is done
so let the road take u where it may
lifes to short to chart out everything along the way
so live it day by day

-Ski-
08-31-2004, 05:55 PM
this is a russle simmions type poem ( a poem about truth and has a type of rapish tune ) but it is poetry

this is also a personal fear of mine laugh if youwant

such hate in diz rhymes i wants to go back in time to where da rymes i here neva made me fear to step on my porch or to walk in da street neva fearin to be shot o f my feet from some weed smokin fool who thought that it would be kool to shoot a friend to his knees but instead of him it was me and i cursed his name as i began to bleed

Im starin at da sky hearin da sirins ring as i lay in a pool of a red type thing. My head starts to lighten and I begen to see how a bullit wit someones name hapen to hit me and now i believe its da music we here and da music we fear that devistates me

SnuggLes__
08-31-2004, 08:58 PM
I got a poem....
i bet no one will like it though... :bored:
Aight here it goes..

......
.......
.......
..........
...........
......


Aight that wasnt that good was it...
Lol i know i could never make a better poem then nfernogirl shy or anyone else.. Good job youll :yinyang:

Riseabove
09-01-2004, 12:42 AM
Holy poop...i was diging through my garage yesterday right? Lookin for my skateboard helmet. When what do i find??? My FIRST ever poetry scrap book! I havent seen this thing in about 2 years. I started it when i was about 14. Well im 20 now. And there are still plenty of empty pages in the thing. Im pretty excited about this. Anyway, here is my fav poem i found in the book. Me and my first girlfriend wrote this together. I wrote half and she wrote half. And it came out pretty damn good. (Dont tell the rap/hip hop community what i am about to tell yall.) but after reading this poem for the first time in like 4 years. It had me in tears. Anyway, here it is.

These tired lips will speak once again
Of so many years spent, cherished, lost.
These years of laughter, years of joy. Back when tears were shed over broken toys.
Now replaced with broken lives, broken homes, broken hearts, broken bones.
Life so bittersweet in these memories held in me heart.
staring back into my eyes, this shattered reflection of the child i once was, and always wished to be.


These things we dont understand.
Rambling madly over traces of my broken past.
I'll smash the mirror, where i stand.
Only to ask myself how i sunk so low so fast.
Looking back as if saying goodbye.
Trying not to believe the lies once told.
Innocence left in a shambles.
Scrambling for the pieces.
With no hope to reassemble.
The broken child. Cold and dead inside.
We'll look to the future for answers.
but our past will never die.




She wrote the top part, i wrote the bottom. Enjoi.

Note: One thing we both had in common was the fact that our parents were divvorced around the same time. Right before we met each other. I still talk to her. After reading this poem i called her and i might go see her tomorrow for the first time in almost a year! =P oh wait, no...wait, actually i visited her at her house a few months ago when she was feelin kinda sad. =/ i miss that girl.



Edited By Riseabove on 1094024940

girlNferno666
09-01-2004, 01:10 AM
when that which i have built so bold and brave
to that which i have given my hands engrave bend and break
and my world quivers and shakes before it to dissipates
i will not give
but endure and live
among the ashes you will not find
that which is mine
my spirit soars
to create once more
that which i adore
these wither hands
who builds the foundation on which this world stands
these aged old eyes who have watch countless creations die
will know no bounds
till thats which is lost is once again found

blanka09
09-01-2004, 02:12 AM
Not bad.. not bad.. lol :biggrin:

dragon_cloud
09-02-2004, 11:33 PM
i like them

SBYRD5
09-03-2004, 01:47 PM
So tonight were going to party like it's 1999. :kungfu:

dragon_cloud
09-04-2004, 09:47 AM
huh? ...yea..........where u been we party like its 3000 up in here!!!!!
LOVE MIST(hopeless love).....
Love is a mist that sprad in the air with out a care.
On who it nay land with uts glowing lushter it hits.
Where ever it may shine where ever it may glow.
Irs the some thing many people searh for but never
may find.
Cause looking to hard just makes it hard to find.
Ymay love the big you may love the small you may
love them all.
but you may never know it or see it their.
but its true what they say love is there its in the air.
Its an arrow cause when its hits you it hurts you.
but the only time I see it hurts is when your heart breakes.
when the one you love is use it as a sheild against your charms.
That leaves you in the rain its may hurts but dont turn to the darkness.
You must try again thought the pain even when it rains.
you must try again dont worrie love is every where.
Look to the stars look to the signs and you may never know,
when it strikes again.........
:blues:

dragon_cloud
09-13-2004, 07:11 PM
U NO WHAT TO DO post ur poems here show me what u got i really like sportchick and girlnfernoz its like they do it 4 alone time

poemz:

poems may show how u feel poem may b nothing at all
but the best poem of all is u how u write how u feel how ur day been how u cry how u laugh how u love and how u hate
how u think and what u say u r what makes the poem the poem ofuthe poem of nothing the poem of every thing
poem just 4 fun just to show here or ther to and fro poemz
may live poems may die but thoes poems r alwayz on ur mind cause u may feel what some one eles may feel it may bring u closer or leave u far behind.....
(i no u guyz feel what the hell is that ) hehe jk

Nferno666
09-14-2004, 05:13 AM
topic was merged with old...don't need another topic for it :biggrin:

105-1091146135
09-14-2004, 07:12 PM
wow u ppl r reallly good!! i loved readin them which is just fine but makin thm is too much work for my brain lol

girlNferno666
09-15-2004, 02:40 AM
well yeah this is late in my tribute to sept 11 sorry people i couldn't find the poem topic so there was no way for me to post it x.x i know i'm a dork who needs to learn how to use the forum better hehe :P


The heavens spread wide open over our heads
The soft sweet smelling grass our beds
The gentle brushing of wings like kisses upon or cheeks
The soft melody of buzzing the lullaby that sings us to sleep
Dreaming of ever lasting peace
Where no mothers weep
And sons lie in bed and not in an open field of the dead
With no markings upon our resting place
No remembrance of our fall from grace
Like garbage we litter countryside
Our last thought mother please don't cry
We have the flies here to sing us our lullaby
As we dift off into ever lasting peace. . .



Edited By girlNferno666 on 1095241381

dragon_cloud
09-15-2004, 06:49 PM
NFERNO!!!!.......thanks and gn ur not the only one i could not find it to and gn that was really good

dragon_cloud
09-21-2004, 09:59 PM
love angel's light:
when my love angel leave she leave a sea of tears not from her but from i cause i love my love angel she a close friend she so kind so sweet and smart and helpful she watches over me even when i sleeps my love angel mist spreads love across the land of which she walks on and leaves them with a kind heart a heart that was per that has a an ever lasting flame in her heart 4 her love that has a lovely holy soul of light that shines at dawn and though out the day the day that i wish that stays still the moment i wish that was 4 ever lock in time is the time we spend to gether cause those r some of my happest times thought my journey of darkness in this evil crule world i found not a love but a friend and 4 now that all i need or ask.....(something i made up awhile ago)

shy_gurL21
09-21-2004, 10:04 PM
i cried when i wrote these words
i know something's missing in my world
i'm getting tired of searching everywhere
i just want to have someone who will always be there
i sit here in the dark feeling wasted
without him my life has been jaded
i wish someone would take a journey inside me
and find out how what it is that no one can see
my heart is broken and hollow
it's the only place where i hide my sorrow
i know sometime this emptiness will end
and somehow these wounds will mend...














......hmm...this poem doesn't reflect how i feel at all...lol



Edited By shy_gurL21 on 1095829572

dragon_cloud
09-21-2004, 10:13 PM
i HEAR THAT LAST NIGHT ITS REALLY GOOD .....*gives shy a hug*....*turns and put hood over my head* ....(i dont want u to see me cry...)

shy_gurL21
09-21-2004, 10:35 PM
when times get rough and lonely
you're always there to make me happy
you changed my world, my destiny
i'm yours from now until eternity
i love what you've done to me
i don't know what it is that you see
there are times when we disagree
you still stayed and put up through me
you accept me for me as i accept you for you
i know the love that we share will always be true....




very very simple... but hey... this is how i feel! :love:



Edited By shy_gurL21 on 1095831413

dragon_cloud
09-21-2004, 10:44 PM
well i like it ............(i still cant turn around)

shy_gurL21
09-21-2004, 10:51 PM
meh.....




thanx...

party_gurl
09-22-2004, 02:15 PM
when times get rough and lonely
you're always there to make me happy
you changed my world, my destiny
i'm yours from now until eternity
i love what you've done to me
i don't know what it is that you see
there are times when we disagree
you still stayed and put up through me
you accept me for me as i accept you for you
i know the love that we share will always be true....




very very simple... but hey... this is how i feel! :love:
aww... datz mah sweety... :love:

i dunt have da patience to make a poem... meh.. i lubz gn poems to...! and umm dragon clouds :sarcasm: ? kool..haha

azncat
09-22-2004, 03:28 PM
0.o o.0 so many peoms i cant keep up...

capcomman12213
09-22-2004, 03:38 PM
i got one stupid one my lil bro wont shut up about saying from yugioh:
great beast of the sky please hear my cry transform thyself from orb of light envelop the desert with your glow and cast your rage upon my foe unlock you powers from deep within so that together we must win appear in this shadow game as i call upon your name "winged dragon of ra!" ayya that is long one to say without breathing!

shy_gurL21
09-22-2004, 08:09 PM
when times get rough and lonely
you're always there to make me happy
you changed my world, my destiny
i'm yours from now until eternity
i love what you've done to me
i don't know what it is that you see
there are times when we disagree
you still stayed and put up through me
you accept me for me as i accept you for you
i know the love that we share will always be true....




very very simple... but hey... this is how i feel! :love:
aww... datz mah sweety... :love:
well...lol :D

i'll write more..

azncat
09-22-2004, 10:00 PM
I said to her who takes plants,

someone gave me Loves-Lies-Bleeding its name, who on a differently day, differently reminded, might have called it loves sweet aftermath or erarly passion... its drooping purple-red
flowering spikes so broadly suggestive...

we had the book open between us...

that someone i continued.. must have been an authority for the name... to have struck. Dont you think so?or perhaps a wit...

isnt Love-lies-Bleeding comic... like midlife crises to those long past them?
the name... i mean isnt it funny?
like B movise the dialogue purple as a giant bruise all the characters actually saying out loud? what they think?

no i dont think its funny not at all... she said and laughed the way id seen good actors do in lieu of what they felt.
it was time to stop talking about it i was sure...

but i continued on...

... my poems are.. nvm... you wont understand



Edited By azncat on 1095915654

Roll's Friend
09-23-2004, 12:41 PM
I started to dream a dream that was never ending...

Everyone everything in this life was a dream...clouded with smoke....from school yards with pepsi cans that described how to vive.

My life this life wasn't real it was only an exam....I experienced a ICEE and thought for a moment "All I wanted was a pepsi/just one pepsi." Then it all became gray and white...my vision faded...

All I could see was shadows preshaded and fake people controled by puppets that ate figs from a fig tree that produced a fruit which was forbidden...yet all ate from that tree for pleasure...

The pleasure lead to that of the flesh....

The pleasure was a brief feeling of heaven in the mind...
'
An artic wind through the ears which traveled into the mind..

The mind was numb....but you knew this was the best feeling you could feel in this flesh world...

a chill up your spine....and at this time you finished your Coke flavored ICEE. :sleepy:

dragon_cloud
09-23-2004, 11:02 PM
im trying to write poems but i dont have the time but i like ur poems there good

girlNferno666
09-24-2004, 05:16 PM
why do u wear the mask
as if it can change the past
all those memories that i thought would last
turned to ash
that pain that will always be
is the love that was between you and me
those things you gave so free
satisfiying all my needs
letting me believe you'll never leave
like fading memories of yesterday
i slowly waste away
till the day
you'll love me again
in that kinda way. . .

dragon_cloud
09-24-2004, 10:37 PM
awww im going to cry when did u write that jade

shy_gurL21
09-24-2004, 10:53 PM
^ D... u r so plastic

girlNferno666
09-25-2004, 07:33 AM
an addiction of the soul
a drug that no one knows
fast and quick it does the trick
it blinds the eyes to the lies
it hands u blist in a soft kiss
it twists the facts
changes the way u act
it fools the mind
and that is y they say
love is deadly and blind
but in all honest truth
love sees and doesn't mind

shy_gurL21
09-26-2004, 09:43 PM
i've been waiting for you all my life,
if i lose you i won't survive,
now that you're here with me,
i won't set you free.

no one can stop me from loving you,
it's only you i am attached to,
deep in my heart i know it's true,
without you my life will be through.

you had my heart right from the start,
promise me you won't tear it apart,
i will never leave you again,
because i know it's you and me until the every end...

girlNferno666
09-26-2004, 10:20 PM
the things i've come to know
things that i've had to let go
things i long to hold
o how i miss those long soft kiss
those hours of blist
long pillow talks and midnight walks
days spent in the sun having fun
soft eyes that lit up with laughter
rainy days where we'd just sit and listen to the pitter patters
moments in time when i recall u as being mine

dragon_cloud
09-27-2004, 12:12 AM
im going to use gn ending and start there:
as i here these thoughts in my head i rember the days that we spend
going out as the stars watch us threw the night as we grew founder of
each other in every waking moment i thought it would last 4 ever as i
always wish it would bi always dream of some one so perfect one such as u
but things was never ment t ob i dream about u night and day wish that u could
of stay but things just didnt seem that way cause when i awake from my dream
i call it both my dream and my nightmare cause with out u in my life its like walking though
hell with no end in sight but one day....as i see u there siting in ur chair i wonder if this was the sign
anther chance in life but its true what they say u olny get ones that once as i found out the hard way
that u date anther as my world fell apart as i stand there and shutter i walk away and mutter (u never no how much i love u ) as she slip away as i turn around and shed a tear she grab me and kiss me and say i do no how much u love me o plz just stay as i look in to her eyes i saw her tears fall as i sigh and look up in the sky and say that today i may have die but ......then i was reborn once more to get a new chance that i dont never want to miss ....as i end it there i gave her my kiss that kiss that i made my wish apond i held her so much that i never wanted to let her go as my soul was heal by her genlty loving inbrace her kiss gave me happness that i miss u much that i never what to lose again................

shy_gurL21
09-27-2004, 12:25 AM
you're everything i could ever wish for,
i'm complete i won't ask for more,
no one can ever replace you,
nothing can compare to your love that is true,
no one can love me like you do,
forever i'm holding on to you,
i will never let you go,
baby you know i love you so,
even when i'm not there by your side,
i know all the things you hide deep inside,
a piece of me will always be there with you,
keep it as long as you want to... =)

i love him so much...



Edited By shy_gurL21 on 1096270372

dragon_cloud
09-27-2004, 01:06 AM
...yea i can see that
nice poem by the way

girlNferno666
09-27-2004, 01:57 AM
love is like the sun shine that sweeps in to greet u as u sleep
kissing u softly upon ur cheek
love is like the soft melody of the rain as it gently sings u to sleep
love is like the gentel wind that ruffles its invisable fingers through ur hair never seen but always there
love is natural, it's beauty unseen for it's present in everyday things
and so i tell u love is you
for u that which is beautiful without words to describe for it says it all already from how u make me feel inside
love is you basked in the sun light ur hair wind tossed and ur laughter rining with delight
love is you and angel without wings the most beautiful of all things
love is you . . .

asshole
09-27-2004, 12:06 PM
Sorry to be off toPic, but it's funny.. on R.I Page, it says Dragon cloud started this thread, but the first Post is made by GirlNferno.. wtf?

girlNferno666
09-27-2004, 12:12 PM
because dragon made a 2nd topic to this one thinking it was deleted when it really wasn't and nferno just fused the 2 together and for some reason his name just ended up being the one who started the thread instead of mine but o well ^_^ so yeah

asshole
09-27-2004, 12:41 PM
Ohh, tricky!

blossom
09-27-2004, 02:54 PM
its magic?

shy_gurL21
09-27-2004, 07:29 PM
i know i am not alone,
you're here to keep me going on,
if you ever need anything,
i'll give you everything that you're missing.

even though we're far apart,
you can trust me with your heart,
i will never do anything to hurt you,
no matter where i am and what i do,
the only one i think of is you.

i've discovered so many things in life,
things that i was not able to see,
when you weren't here with me,
i would say you're the best guy i've found,
because i know you'll always be around.

you've changed me in many many ways,
forever i will remember those days,
even if you won't respond when i call your name,
one thing will always stay the same,
you mean the world to me.

=)

azncat
09-27-2004, 09:31 PM
you mean the world to me.
nothing means the world to me =) no really =/

shy_gurL21
09-27-2004, 09:55 PM
you mean the world to me.
nothing means the world to me =) no really =/
i feel bad for u... doesn't ur girl mean anything to u?

anyway... my baby means the world to me.. ^_^

azncat
09-27-2004, 09:58 PM
do i HAVE to answer that?

shy_gurL21
09-27-2004, 10:04 PM
ok i never should have asked that question. let's change the subject. :p

azncat
09-27-2004, 10:14 PM
....

shy_gurL21
09-28-2004, 06:52 PM
pretty dots...

here's something for all you people out there..

how could everything fall apart
the love that we had disappeared just like that
it popped like a bubble
i thought we would stay forever
but i was wrong
the bond wasn't too strong
it didn't hold us together
i wish you would find your happiness
while i sit here experiencing loneliness
wherever our paths lead us to
the only one who'll always be in my heart...
is YOU...

party_gurl
09-28-2004, 06:59 PM
do i HAVE to answer that?
well dat just shows it all... doesnt it...LOL evil evil!

shy's poem *

wish you would find your happiness
while i sit here experiencing loneliness

dat was sad...

shy_gurL21
09-28-2004, 07:08 PM
yeah i know... but that poem is not about me.. hehe

dragon_cloud
09-28-2004, 10:24 PM
ITS ABOUT ME!!!...........o...sorry ,_ _

shy_gurL21
09-28-2004, 10:31 PM
excuse you. that poem is not about you. :plain:

hmm... i'll come up with something about you. something that describes you. you know it could just be a simple word... but no...

:sarcasm:

dominicankid098
09-28-2004, 10:33 PM
Poems are gay. Blah whatever, I will post one up sometime this week.

dragon_cloud
09-28-2004, 11:06 PM
but if they r gay then y r u posting one up........and what do u mean one word .......u call me annoying and 4 some unknow reason hentai yea im not saying it in english but i just posted what it means in under ur chair so u no

shy_gurL21
09-28-2004, 11:21 PM
^ forget it dragon

here's a poem about...getting played..

sorry ain't gonna do it
i'm sick and tired ofur bullsh!t
i've put up through u for so long
now it's time for me to move on
u never had anything for me
u shoulda told me that u weren't for real
if youonly knew how i feel
i'm hurt, i'm jaded
i feel like my life has been wasted
u ruined my life, broke my heart
u shoulda told me from the start
that u ain't nothin but a player
all the things u did i can't get over
u played me good u was a liar
i don't know what to do
i hate myself for ever trusting u
i wish u felt my pain
the scar that u left
in my heart will always remain
all the things that u said
somehow i believed now i feel like a poophead

i don't know why i wrote this.. i guess i'ts bcuz was bored.. hehe.. don't take it too seriously now.. it's just a poem..!



Edited By shy_gurL21 on 1096439226

68-1093009699
09-29-2004, 11:46 AM
^ forget it dragon

here's a poem about...getting played..

sorry ain't gonna do it
i'm sick and tired ofur bullsh!t
i've put up through u for so long
now it's time for me to move on
u never had anything for me
u shoulda told me that u weren't for real
if youonly knew how i feel
i'm hurt, i'm jaded
i feel like my life has been wasted
u ruined my life, broke my heart
u shoulda told me from the start
that u ain't nothin but a player
all the things u did i can't get over
u played me good u was a liar
i don't know what to do
i hate myself for ever trusting u
i wish u felt my pain
the scar that u left
in my heart will always remain
all the things that u said
somehow i believed now i feel like a poophead

i don't know why i wrote this.. i guess i'ts bcuz was bored.. hehe.. don't take it too seriously now.. it's just a poem..!

Mmmmmm that's real deep stuff :cool:....lol

silent-killer
09-29-2004, 12:26 PM
nice one roses are red birds are blue are all a family but i love u.......... lol..........

girlNferno666
09-29-2004, 05:05 PM
aww silent ^_^ huggles ya since her her bro ifur poems true _ ^ winks*

105-1091146135
09-29-2004, 06:03 PM
wow tht poem is soo touchin, shy!!

shy_gurL21
09-29-2004, 10:34 PM
Mmmmmm that's real deep stuff ....lol

i know huh? lol

wow tht poem is soo touchin, shy!!

i just felt like writing a "touching" poem.. something that we all have experienced..

nice one roses are red birds are blue are all a family but i love u.......... lol..........

very nice poem... lmao :p

dragon_cloud
09-29-2004, 10:38 PM
.....shy........that was beautiful

shy_gurL21
09-29-2004, 10:46 PM
thanks d-dog.




that should teach those players out there a lesson...

girlNferno666
09-30-2004, 09:19 PM
ashes to ashes dust to dust
i bury the person i use to be
the day u left me
search among the sweet smelling grass
along the rows of tomb stones alineing the paths
you shall see where i laid it to rest
that which no longer beats in my chest
along with all that love i had to give
for without u there is no more reason to live
it was u who bridged that gap in my life
gave me reason to always think twice
but now with u gone it won't be long
till i too will be moving on
but things r never what they appear to be
the hurt i feel inside of me
will never heal
cursed am i live a lie
smiles on the surface dead inside

dominicankid098
10-01-2004, 05:24 PM
:barfs: lol :p

dragon_cloud
10-03-2004, 07:46 PM
awww girlnferno .....that was sad........i feel sorry 4 u if any one u love die

shy_gurL21
10-03-2004, 09:29 PM
here's another poem...


there are times when she just feels like crying
behind the pretty face
is a girl that is slowly dying
always feeling out of place
she tries so hard to fit in
when will someone see what she's hiding whithin
she's always misunderstood
if she could change her destiny she would
she just needs a shoulder to cry on
someone who she can rely upon
she can't take all the suffering
all the burden that she's bearing
can anybody save her from this ignorant world?



Edited By shy_gurL21 on 1096864239

dragon_cloud
10-04-2004, 09:56 PM
,-.- I CANT TAKE IT IM CRYING!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAA IT WAS GOOD buT U TO SOUND SO SAD

dominicankid098
10-04-2004, 10:08 PM
dragon cloud stop with your lies you did not cry. It was not even that sad of a poem to read over the internet and cry about it. I can see your pathetic ass crying over e-greeting cards with poems in it. Get a life.

dragon_cloud
10-10-2004, 12:47 AM
0 0....get of my d1(k any way no i didnt thats ghay (at least 4 that ) and besides i ran out of things to say so howbout u get a life and get the @#$ out of mines u mother@!#@!#@!



Edited By dragon_cloud on 1097394572

girlNferno666
10-10-2004, 04:06 PM
those sad eyes that i be hold
lets me know i've hurt u so
u need not say a word
for i undestand the unjust i've done with my 2 hands
those tears i've made u cry
makes me hurt and wanna die
i never meant to hurt u so much inside
i know i've not made it easy for u to love me
for it's hard to meet my many needs
and at times i know i forget to say thank you
for all the many things that you do
for all those countless i love u's that you'd say
at the end of each of our days
and all those other wonderful things u show me how to do
that seems so amazing and new
to someone like me who could not understand the basics of how a computer works muchless how to type
and so i don't know how to say this but i'm sorry i hurt u a lot last night
please forgive me. . .

azncat
10-10-2004, 05:48 PM
I sent these special angels
To keep you safe and sound,
To bless you and to love you
When I am not around.


I asked them to look after you,
And not to let you frown.
To cheer you up when times are rough,
Or whenever you feel down.



I hope they take good care of you
And bring you lots of love,
Because I called upon them specially
From Heaven up above.

`Crystal
10-10-2004, 05:57 PM
i dont write poems, i dont read poems..i juss like dem

DarkKen
10-10-2004, 06:18 PM
i was a poet..
i didnt even know it..
man.. i love to rhyme
i wish i could do this all the time. :biggrin:

RedEyedWolfen
10-10-2004, 08:19 PM
Mornings like this, so clear and quiet
Seem to let the time go by
And with you and I, the way we wander
While the world goes on and on
Does it really matter with all of the worries
And yet at times we cry
Sometimes we spend all of our hours
In thoughts we should not ponder
but at least with you, I can feel good
From the morning until the dawn

DarkstriderX
10-10-2004, 08:25 PM
Darkstrider senses talent.. nice work everyone:laugh:

dominicankid098
10-10-2004, 09:14 PM
0 0....get of my d1(k any way no i didnt thats ghay (at least 4 that ) and besides i ran out of things to say so howbout u get a life and get the @#$ out of mines u mother@!#@!#@!
Now is that a way for a child your age to speak? Having misspelled crap all over the damn post. And please get the hell out of here with that corny poop, not even an animal would lie on your dic.k so you can keep your dumbass mouth shut. Telling me to get a life but yet you are the one chasing every girl who talks to you. She can be fat, ugly as hell, have STDs whateva and you still chase them trying to hook up with them. What a loser, do you not have any standards at all? lmao You my friend are the one who needs a social life.

You have been bitch slapped by LancerPX. Here's 2 dollars. *gives them to you* Now save up money and buy yourself a life. And I better not find out you used it to buy your gay porn, or else ill bitch slap you again.

shy_gurL21
10-10-2004, 10:48 PM
it seems like i'm invisible
every move that i am about to make
is and will always remain unpredictable
nobody really tries to understand me
nobody listens to what i have to say
when i speak it's just blah blah
i always try to be someone i am not
i've always wanted to be perfect
but it's hard living life as a reject
i got nobody by my side
my pain, i just hide it deep inside
i wish i could open up heaven's door
and ask for a new life, n3wbeginning
so i can live life over again and forget about everything...



Edited By shy_gurL21 on 1097473868

underlaie
10-10-2004, 10:54 PM
it seems like i'm invisible
every move that i am about to make
is and will always remain unpredictable
nobody really tries to understand me
nobody listens to what i have to say
when i speak it's just blah blah
i always try to be someone i am not
i've always wanted to be perfect
but it's hard living life as a reject
i got nobody by my side
my pain, i just hide it deep inside
i wish i could open up heaven's door
and ask for a new life, n3wbeginning
so i can live life over again and forget about everything...
very nice shy very nice :D :buttrock:

105-1091146135
10-10-2004, 11:16 PM
wow all these poems r so good!!! i have no talent in the poetry field =/

underlaie
10-11-2004, 12:22 AM
wow all these poems r so good!!! i have no talent in the poetry field =/
the same for me

girlNferno666
10-11-2004, 10:35 AM
the enchanting ways of a lovely face
everyone sees and adores
yet a person everyone ignores
better to be seen then heard they say
at lease ur face shines with grace
leaving countless smiles upon every fellows face
the bell of the ball
the gale they say who has it all
except that someone to catch her as she falls
the one thing she wants most of all
that simple guy who won't lie
the one who won't just love her for her beautiful smile
or love her for just a while
the man who's not afraid of her growing old
or giving her his hand and heart to hold
that smiple pleasures in life that few ofus get to know
thats beautys fatal flaw
to all those girls who everyone claim to have it all
we'll never find that guy
that'll loves us for who we are inside

dragon_cloud
10-11-2004, 06:20 PM
0 0....get of my d1(k any way no i didnt thats ghay (at least 4 that ) and besides i ran out of things to say so howbout u get a life and get the @#$ out of mines u mother@!#@!#@!
Now is that a way for a child your age to speak? Having misspelled crap all over the damn post. And please get the hell out of here with that corny poop, not even an animal would lie on your dic.k so you can keep your dumbass mouth shut. Telling me to get a life but yet you are the one chasing every girl who talks to you. She can be fat, ugly as hell, have STDs whateva and you still chase them trying to hook up with them. What a loser, do you not have any standards at all? lmao You my friend are the one who needs a social life.

You have been bitch slapped by LancerPX. Here's 2 dollars. *gives them to you* Now save up money and buy yourself a life. And I better not find out you used it to buy your gay porn, or else ill bitch slap you again.
....and im the one who needs a life nooo i think u do cause u go out ofur way to talk down to me i hate kids like u....i cant wait to see u burn in hell .....only sad ppl like u going on and on how u talk about ppl to do this and that is the one who needs a life like the senders ppl ur just like them and if they was not watching i cuss u out uncut style
........0.0 hehe o and i love every one poems......



Edited By dragon_cloud on 1097544117

shy_gurL21
10-11-2004, 10:27 PM
oh my word... when will the flaming, the bitching and the arguing stop? let's just all get along and everything will be fine.

underlaie
10-12-2004, 05:27 AM
nice poem girlNferno666

girlNferno666
10-12-2004, 01:32 PM
aww y thankies underaie ^_^ *huggles* see u around sfo ^_^

shy_gurL21
10-12-2004, 10:09 PM
i'm here sitting quietly
waiting for him to notice me
i'm falling in love with this guy
i want to approach him but i'm too shy
so i just ask myself with anticipation
what do i have to do to win his attention?
does he realize my presence?
is he bothered by my absence?
if i disappear will he even care?
does he miss me when i'm not there?
i find my happiness when he's around
every pain that i feel he relieves
i know in his eyes i'm just a face in the crowd
but i'm sure when everyone else leaves
i will be the only one to stay
and never let him go astray.

dominicankid098
10-12-2004, 10:52 PM
I really liked that poem shygurL. Very nice and emotional.

dragon_cloud
10-13-2004, 12:09 AM
i like ur poem alot i think it tell alittle about u do it shy ^.*

shy_gurL21
10-13-2004, 09:47 AM
thanks dominicankid and dragoncloud. :)

Evil-Blanka
10-13-2004, 09:56 AM
thanks dominicankid and dragoncloud. :)
who was that poem about lol

girlNferno666
10-13-2004, 10:09 AM
the man i see is not whole his heart is broken and his soul is numb
with lifes many truths does this come
he grew up in a broke home
all the yelling, fighting, and beatings is all he's ever know
a mothers tender touch her loving grace
he can't even recall her face
much less know a mothers role
when she let him go
for all his life she was a no show
the harsh realities r cold
in and out of his life many come and go
many will love him for simple reasons then leave
and those that stay usually go astray
yet he still searches and looks for that one girl that'll stay
who will love him till his dying days
to heal the hurt thats in his heart
to teach him the loving arts
and teach him something he's never known
how it's like to have a loving home

shy_gurL21
10-13-2004, 10:11 AM
thanks dominicankid and dragoncloud. :)
who was that poem about lol
hmm... someone.. lol.. my bf

rabbitalien
10-13-2004, 10:56 PM
i like shy gurls poem more then girlnferno's (sry girlnferno) mayb cuz shy gurl ends her sentences with the same suffix as the previous sentence... girl nfernos is nice 2 but some sentences dunt connect. theyr both good ^.^

girlNferno666
10-14-2004, 10:19 AM
rabbitalien i don't write to compete with shy i write to express myself wether u like hers more or mine is fine with me ^_^ i could careless i don't write to please anyone else but myself so i don't need anyones approval ^_^ and if i wrote only to compete with shy i rather not write at all for believe it or not she's really not worth all that effort and thats not to be mean it's just truthful i don't even know her so y waste the time to write all that just to compete with her so till i feel like it my poems they'll end the way i feel they should and theres no rules to writing a poem it's call free writing because u write it the way it please u no rules of english applies to it

poems ryhem all the time
except for some
maybe one
but it's not a crime not to ryhem :P



Edited By girlNferno666 on 1097774527

Evil-Blanka
10-14-2004, 10:25 AM
the man i see is not whole his heart is broken and his soul is numb
with lifes many truths does this come
he grew up in a broke home
all the yelling, fighting, and beatings is all he's ever know
a mothers tender touch her loving grace
he can't even recall her face
much less know a mothers role
when she let him go
for all his life she was a no show
the harsh realities r cold
in and out of his life many come and go
many will love him for simple reasons then leave
and those that stay usually go astray
yet he still searches and looks for that one girl that'll stay
who will love him till his dying days
to heal the hurt thats in his heart
to teach him the loving arts
and teach him something he's never known
how it's like to have a loving home
yo that was good i have 1
your eyes are deep
your foot is wide
why do you have so mutch pride
let it out let it go
let that crap melt in the snow
the snow i am a yo
call me that you get hit with a bat
i am not playing
all i know is the bloody hoody in my closet
is praying
praying you know i have a gat and i am spraying


thats a stupid poem i am way better than that

girlNferno666
10-14-2004, 10:42 AM
^_^ hehe evil that was cute it made me smile to read ur poem hehe ur so silly *huggles ya* i missed u i hope i see u on the server more or u should add me to ur msn u dork ^_^

girlNferno666
10-14-2004, 11:21 AM
this ones to all the shy guys who's afraid to tell a girl how he feels much less say hi


for one breif moment i saw ur face
like an angel u appeared with grace
as u gently passed me by
i saw the soft glimmer of joy in ur eye
as if you were saying hi
my heart stops and i forget to breath
for some reason i feel all weak in the knees
and then u passed without a backwards glace
making me wonder if i'd missed my chance
your beauty my hearts enchant
your smile so lovely and magnificent
those eyes that burn with fire
my hearts desires
the angel i sawby chance on the street
is what dreams r made of when i sleep
i'm sure you've all had these encounters before
of seeing a beautiful girl your heart adores
making u wonder if she's the girl you've been searching for
and yet before u know it she's out the door



Edited By girlNferno666 on 1097778630

Evil-Blanka
10-14-2004, 01:17 PM
this ones to all the shy guys who's afraid to tell a girl how he feels much less say hi


for one breif moment i saw ur face
like an angel u appeared with grace
as u gently passed me by
i saw the soft glimmer of joy in ur eye
as if you were saying hi
my heart stops and i forget to breath
for some reason i feel all weak in the knees
and then u passed without a backwards glace
making me wonder if i'd missed my chance
your beauty my hearts enchant
your smile so lovely and magnificent
those eyes that burn with fire
my hearts desires
the angel i sawby chance on the street
is what dreams r made of when i sleep
i'm sure you've all had these encounters before
of seeing a beautiful girl your heart adores
making u wonder if she's the girl you've been searching for
and yet before u know it she's out the door
girl nferno here is my email email me some timeskhalilj92@yahoo.com (http://khalilj92@yahoo.com)
dont ask why the name is that a few days ago my bro made it that for some stupid reason

girlNferno666
10-14-2004, 01:25 PM
heres a dedication to chunforever from evilken123456 a.k.a kyo898989 he asked me to write him a poem for the girl he loves so here goes nothing ^_^ he hopes u like it


my raven hair angel
who's eyes r that of the midnight skies
who has no wings to fly
the angel of my dreams
the most lovely of all things
o how u make my heart sing
with that melody that rings
of love untold
and so I must say my heart u do hold
if i am to live
then it is to u that i must give
this love which i feel in my heart
for i do not part my lips and say
i love u more each day
then it shall surely brust from keeping it all inside
and i will surely die
for not expressing that which i feel inside

105-1091146135
10-14-2004, 08:13 PM
awww ths so sweet nferno girl!! when i read poems...for som reason...memories just flood back! happens all the time!

shy_gurL21
10-14-2004, 08:46 PM
i don't write poems to compete with other people. i write them because it's one way to express how i feel.

underlaie
10-14-2004, 09:00 PM
nice poems girlNferno666 and shy

party_gurl
10-15-2004, 08:30 PM
i'm here sitting quietly
waiting for him to notice me
i'm falling in love with this guy
i want to approach him but i'm too shy
so i just ask myself with anticipation
what do i have to do to win his attention?
does he realize my presence?
is he bothered by my absence?
if i disappear will he even care?
does he miss me when i'm not there?
i find my happiness when he's around
every pain that i feel he relieves
i know in his eyes i'm just a face in the crowd
but i'm sure when everyone else leaves
i will be the only one to stay
and never let him go astray.
omgoSH!! my sweety is sOooO talented..=T!!

girlnferno yours is awesome !! cant make any good poems compare to yooh guys.. :love:

azncat
10-15-2004, 08:41 PM
Roses, exquisitely
fragrant
Overpowering me in
the garden of love
Their secret delight,
delightful
Spinning in aromatic
pleasure
Breathing in deeply
of their complexity
Their scent of pleasure,
dreams of paradise
Dazzling, glistening
exotic petals in
sunbeam days
The pleasure everlasting
in my mind of
those roses
Fragrant roses to
soothe my soul
Fragrance to delight
my senses
Fragrant roses of love


.... o o..... For a certain friend close to me... very close



Edited By azncat on 1097898302

shy_gurL21
10-15-2004, 09:04 PM
i'm here sitting quietly
waiting for him to notice me
i'm falling in love with this guy
i want to approach him but i'm too shy
so i just ask myself with anticipation
what do i have to do to win his attention?
does he realize my presence?
is he bothered by my absence?
if i disappear will he even care?
does he miss me when i'm not there?
i find my happiness when he's around
every pain that i feel he relieves
i know in his eyes i'm just a face in the crowd
but i'm sure when everyone else leaves
i will be the only one to stay
and never let him go astray.
omgoSH!! my sweety is sOooO talented..=T!!

girlnferno yours is awesome !! cant make any good poems compare to yooh guys.. :love:
lol. let me see a sample of your poem. it doesn't matter if it's good or not. :cheesy:

nice poem azncat.

girlNferno666
10-15-2004, 10:02 PM
^_^ aww cats got a sweet side and he's not just 100% crazy :P like i thought he was *huggles the cat* kisses ya on the cheek* hey nice poem silly u should share more offten u have quite a talent ^_^

dominicankid098
10-15-2004, 10:10 PM
azncat Posted: Oct. 15 2004,11:41

Roses, exquisitely
fragrant
Overpowering me in
the garden of love
Their secret delight,
delightful
Spinning in aromatic
pleasure
Breathing in deeply
of their complexity
Their scent of pleasure,
dreams of paradise
Dazzling, glistening
exotic petals in
sunbeam days
The pleasure everlasting
in my mind of
those roses
Fragrant roses to
soothe my soul
Fragrance to delight
my senses
Fragrant roses of love


Not to embarrass anyone in this place but I read that poem azncat posted before.

Oh lookie, I got a link of it. =)

http://www.seekermagazine.com/v0798/sun.html

Now unless your name is Michael David Coffey, then I don't think you wrote that.



Edited By dominicankid098 on 1097905356

evilhadoken
10-16-2004, 02:16 PM
heres one that i saw somewhere :

Roses are red
violets are blue
they'll need dental records
to identify you.

Necro2k2
10-16-2004, 03:20 PM
Plagerizing is an illegal form of writing young azn cat. Would you know that I could call the police and if the writer wanted to put any charges against you, you could get sued for a TON of money. It's just something I'd like you to know. Young girls like you shouldn't be getting into any type of controversy like that, now should you?



Edited By Necro2k2 on 1097965332

girlNferno666
10-16-2004, 09:50 PM
i haven't slit my wrist but y is there pain
theres isn't any blood but yet i see the red stains
no ones dead but i hear morners
as i sit here in this dark coner
my world torn and shatter
and nothing any more in life matters
time is of no essesence
i've learned all of lifes lessons
there is nothing more for me here but tears
the hurt my soul bears
i am broken inside
so i wonder y am i still alive
y won't u let me die
i've forgotten the warmth of the sun
or how it's like to laugh and have fun
my soul is numb
and to me life is done
so let me go
hold me not here supsended in pain
let all those memories of me slide down the drain
there is nothing left for u and me
so let it be
you've broken me

mastergrim8
10-18-2004, 12:22 PM
Nice poem and the panda is cute

mastergrim8
10-18-2004, 12:30 PM
I got a poem so dont read it, it's crazy

Love,
A better sweet feeling
its the best of life
nothing brings more joy
through near the end
it shall be in there
to whom it gives
yall dont know
wat is meant
is meant to be
it aint bought
every soul has a true 1
be patient
patient
till the day comes
u wont know wat true love is
when that day comes
u will truly be free
I will do all for love
I am not worth living
with the love ofu.

Written by the one and only. Dedicated to my love



Edited By mastergrim8 on 1098128763

girlNferno666
10-18-2004, 02:31 PM
may i ask who's love that is ur talking about ^_^ it's a rather intresting poem you've written there grim ^_^ thankies for sharing it

mastergrim8
10-18-2004, 02:46 PM
u really think it's interesting. that's touchy. My true love. Oh it's somebody. I perfer to keep it a secret

shy_gurL21
10-19-2004, 08:38 PM
=)

your love is so rare
it's so special that nothing else can compare
every day with you is golden
when i cry you're there to listen
you're always there to stand by me
i know you'll always be eternally
i don't want to know what it is like without you
i can live forever without a single clue
all the things that you have done
assure me you are the one
it doesn't matter what others think
in my heart you'll always be my everything
as i reminisce on our past
looking back on the times that had passed
there is not one thing that i regret
i remember the first day we met
i thought you were just like those other guys
but i found out that you were an angel in disguise
sent from the heaven's above
who showed me that unconditional love...



Edited By shy_gurL21 on 1098331650

mastergrim8
10-23-2004, 02:33 PM
nice poem

pip99
10-28-2004, 07:40 AM
Rice is nice ,

but

paster is faster.

mastergrim8
10-29-2004, 07:02 PM
post a poem PIP!

shy_gurL21
11-01-2004, 11:44 PM
you treated me like dirt
to you i was just a tart
i ignored all your childish things
i even gave up everything
you took control of my life
kept me out of the light
you never paid attention to me
i was blind i couldn't see
you were two-timing me all along
i thought i was wrong
until i caught you in a lie
now you're asking me why do i cry?
you could've just shot me in the head
flip all the things that you said
there are some things i won't get through
i wish i never met you
i was dumb to let things misshappen
why didn't i sense that you were lyin
i hope you realize what you got yourself into
i'm lost now all i can say is flip you

vx_unicom
11-02-2004, 04:11 AM
dude...uhm..r u with nferno?
Yea i am.
Lol rob...,anyways i love reading peoms and read all of them..."Woah", most impressive...,however.."few indivuals"..didn't quiet come up with the poem by themselves....but very well done..!!



Edited By vx_unicom on 1099397665

shy_gurL21
11-08-2004, 05:44 PM
meh... i just wrote another poem.. it's like the only way i can express how i really since i don't really have anybody to trust with these kinds of things...

she's separated from the rest
she has given everything
she has tried her best
yet nobody takes her side
she conceals pain inside
nobody hears her voice
being different is not her choice
if they could feel her pain
maybe all their love
she will gain
nobody listens when she cries
she pretends it's okay
but it's just a lie
every person she meets is a two face
isolates her because this isn't her place
she doesn't know where to belong
she has nothing to call her own
yet she still tries to stay strong

KenDaShoto
11-13-2004, 02:19 PM
these demons in my brain
tryin to escape
tryin to distort the kindness always upon my face
so hard it is to contain
somethin u must let go
somethin the doctor tells u u just gotta let blow
but what the doctor doesnt kno
is that what im holdin is evil
cause if youlet it go then what will happen is lethal
it might end up in murder,battery, assult or rape
so the doctor is wrong when he says let it escape
so im still tryin to hold it
and i will as long as i should
so please dont test my patience when u see me in ya hood
cause when the evil is out i might just pull a trigger
or beat u down till i distort ya bodily figure
now im the nicest homie that most of my people kno
and have any ever seen me let this demon go
no!
and if havent caught on
or on ya own u couldnt figure
that the demon that im talkin bout
is my uncontrollable temper

(and dont worry im not crazy i wrote this when i got mad a long time ago and yea i controlled my temper i actually only let it loose once)
i didnt know this site had the sensor replace thingy either



Edited By KenDaShoto on 1100384643

girlNferno666
11-14-2004, 09:45 PM
red roses and chilled white wine
writing u love poems that ryhme
taking u out to fancey places to dine
things i did for u when u were mine
always giving u all my time
never making u take a number or wait in line
i loved you and it was divine
you, my goddess o so fine
i can recall that loving angelic face
those dark velet locks that fell with grace
to gently frame that beautiful face
i gave u all i had
so when u stopped loving me it hurt so bad
i don't know how someone so sweet and kind
could kill this love that was so pure and divine
to break my heart and shatter my world beyound words to describe
to cause this pericing pain i feel inside
even though you've hurt more then words can say
i still think ofuand love u each and every single day
and so as i sit here wirtting this confession of my soul
bearing all for others to see for i have nothing left to lose
for my soul can take no more abuse
then what it's recieved from you
with all this said my confession is done
i feel that part inside of me thats hurting numb
this world slips away cold and gray
maybe i shall find peace in my dying day. . . .

mastergrim8
11-15-2004, 03:01 PM
great poem. Too bad I'm too dumb to read it just kidding :blues: but I have my goals

dragon_cloud
11-16-2004, 10:34 PM
shy that was a nice poem ken...u got problems....haha im joking its good and girlnfero i love ur poem it was great but the ending was sad........i hope u find peace....cause someone like u and shy should never fell.....pain................(puts up hood turns around pull me cape and walks away in the misty moon lightwith a tear down my cheek.)

shy_gurL21
11-16-2004, 10:39 PM
hah! thanx dawg...

-----------------------------------

love once broke me down
now it's turned my life around
i'm the same old me but brand new
the only reason why i'm here is you
i've loved and lost many
and i know this is my destiny
sometimes i know you get hurt
and it's not what you deserve
to me the world is what you worth
i wish i can always be there
to take away the pain that you bear
it's only you that i wanna live for
i've opened up the magic door
and i found you my angel on the other side
you always know when i'm hurting inside
you're here to save me from my loneliness
because of you i know i'm truly blessed.



Edited By shy_gurL21 on 1100842645

KenDaShoto
11-20-2004, 08:45 PM
shy are these poems to a boyfriend or somethin cause if i was gettin stuff like this a girl would have me on a leash

shy_gurL21
11-20-2004, 10:56 PM
yessir, they are. well sort of...
btw... is that bad or wat? ???



Edited By shy_gurL21 on 1101020297

KenDaShoto
11-21-2004, 06:06 PM
no its not bad at all
i was just wonderin but i wish some of my girlfriends would write stuff like that for me :(
or maybe they did and i didnt kno
does ur bf kno u write that stuff

Riseabove
11-24-2004, 09:19 PM
think ill call you autumn's whisper
tell me something of a winter's love
i love the way you show your soul
i love the way we crash like leaves
blown together by october's breeze
you dont know what you mean to me
we play our games yet i see
there is so much love for you
still left in me.

dear autumn.

i am so thankful to have you in this life
here with me or someplace else
i love god for creating you
who else could tame me
so glad god gave me
you in this life
your smile is
the sunrise
you are
my sky.



I wrote this for my high school sweetie. I have known her since jr high. I miss her so much it hurts. She's visiting me in NY in exactly 31 days. :xmas:



Edited By Riseabove on 1101360383

Nantuko Joe
11-25-2004, 07:24 PM
Viciously attacking the living
Asking unanswerable questions
Masking their true feeling
Preying on the weak and fool-hearted
Indiscriminately killing all who cross their paths
Returning the bodies lifelessly
Envying our mortal souls
Suffering throughout eternity alone

__________

Tearful eyes hide in the brain
Mourning the loss of a brilliant light
A light to bring joy to the darkest regions of sorrow
To rend chaos into order
To forge order into chaos
but the fire is waning
The forge has grown cold
And the tears flow deep in darkness

blueseyes
11-26-2004, 01:45 PM
rose are red violets are blue umm..... lets get some fried chicken :p

Riseabove
11-27-2004, 10:13 PM
Ill just make one up on the spot.

I call it, Hey Rise.



I paid Tmy so my gi's can be black.
It says it next to my name
Every time i enter the chat.
They see the name Rise
Everyone quickly steps back.
Knowing that i will own, every time.
My name is heavy on their minds.

That is why i only fight ####s.
####s dont know who i am.
I chew em like gum, because i can.
They tend to get stuck beneath my shoes.
I consume ####s like daddy with booze.
I step on your pride, i laugh, you cry.
Your tears make me feel happy inside.

This is what happens when you say "Hey Rise"

Merry Christmas to all my children :xmas:



Edited By Riseabove on 1101623462

`Crystal
12-02-2004, 05:52 PM
hold u can post any type of poems right? not juss sad love and stuff like dat?

Riseabove
12-02-2004, 06:45 PM
anything you want bro....yeah i know, alot of love stuff. that seems to be the motivation for most writers these days.

say whatever you want tho. thats why i am jsut writing things up on the spot.

Jewel03
12-05-2004, 08:32 AM
i like those poem.becuz i cant really write poems that good

SBYRD5
12-06-2004, 07:11 PM
Grass was cyan,
Desire was in the air,
The winter wind swirled in the curls of her hair.
The trees embraced the land..like straightened hair,
And the grass hazed as a goatee...for everyone to see.

I waltz into the world...alone my soul wasn't alive.
Till I began to walk...I ventured from homes.
Everyone told me thier stories..and invited me to remeber thier memories...

With thier soul came experience....with experience came wisdom.
I was only a teenager with the hair of a drunken master,
So much wisdom I have gathered for only being 1 month from Adultry...

This is my story....supplied by me..byrd....not a poultry....



Edited By SBYRD5 on 1102389190

Sportschick155
12-14-2004, 04:42 PM
hmm,,

SBYRD5
12-15-2004, 12:39 PM
She said she could treat me better,but she abandoned me,
Sticked my heart then decided to hand it to me,
Evey woman in my life abandons me,
Drives lunatics like me near insanity,
I'm not a toy soldier...when I break I break,
I'm not from harlem...when I'm cold I shiver..I don't shake,

I smoke in my longevity,
Jimi Hendrix "Purple Haze" is my gravity,
That keeps me to earth grounds....from riding an escalada to heaven bounds,
This isn't a rap this is my own sound...my heart is distroyed...when well that guy in a robe..descend from heaven to end it all...maybe now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


:down:



Edited By SBYRD5 on 1103143274

75-1103076306
12-15-2004, 12:58 PM
hmm,,
Well i like those poems they are realy good.Here is myn

Every thing is dark purpl and blue
The girl who i love is looking rgith at you
i think in my head how dare you
i looke at the guy who tooke my gurl mad and blue
I just want to rush your head and stab you
but if i do the gurl in purple in blue will miss you
then she will go boo hoo

Short but it was ok.

SBYRD5
12-15-2004, 01:01 PM
I was angry today..better take it out in another post here...


MY eye's searching like an eagle,
My hands tensed ready to let the marrow escape,
My heart is burning red...my pulse is quick,
MY ears are being eaten alive by haters an exlovers that bring words that break my clique..I took so long to build my heart with bricks,

So bad love is the big bad wolf..blowing our hearts down,
Or is it just my humanity being questioned on this lifestream,

I MEAN "Who am I." "like phuck who am I"
A lad making ends meet on a burger King Salary...my escape being my words,
If I was mute I'd have nothing...like a painter that paint's landscapes being blind,

My depression creates insects whenever I close my eyes and try to think with my mind,

I got tooth decay from kissing a princess so sweet even a queen of spades couldn't resist her...

And now I'm something less to her....
Once I meant more to her than my mother's birthright to my last name,
All a young man like me can do is just tie on his du-rag tight...and keep wearing his chain....=/



:dozingoff:



Edited By SBYRD5 on 1103235354

75-1103076306
12-15-2004, 07:06 PM
I was angry today..better take it out in another post here...


MY eye's searching like an eagle,
My hands tensed ready to let the marrow escape,
My heart is burning red...my pulse is quick,
MY ears are being eaten alive by haters an exlovers that bring words that break my clique..I took so long to build my heart with bricks,

So bad love is the big bad wolf..blowing our hearts down,
Or is it just my humanity being questioned on this lifestream,

I MEAN "Who am I." "like phuck who am I"
A lad making ends meet on a burger King Salary...my escape being my words,
If I was mute I'd have nothing...like a painter that paint's landscapes being blind,

My depression creates insects whenever I close my eye's and try to think with my mind,

I got tooth decay from kissing a princess so sweet even another queen of spades couldn't resist her...

And now I'm something less to her....
Meant more to her than my mother's birthright to to my last name,
All a young man like me can do is just tie on his du-rag tight...and keep wearing his chain....=/



:dozingoff:
That was a good poem and sbyrd you looke like carmello lol. thats my name 2 i looke just like him i realy do.well thats what all the girls say.

theWhale
12-16-2004, 02:08 PM
id post my pic but i cant find student card..........damn..
ill post this instead:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v629/theWhale/woviejugg.jpg

theWhale
12-16-2004, 02:37 PM
i hate when peeps say that my poop is wack
makes me hope that they get a heart attack
or makes me wanna pull out the f***in mac
n spit until they fall flat on they back
take that im makin it up as i go
so dont say im violent cause ill say "no"
n its cold outside its startin to snow
my heads real nappy need to pick my fro
on the go if i go n party down the street
n drink some alchohol with my peeps
n gamble with dice we'll play for keeps
n today i saw a guy drive by in a jeep.


w00t

J-Kw
12-24-2004, 09:39 AM
I gots the rap right hurr. I mean poem :p

We Drop that track as hot as we. We beat down the street like shot flying from hood. Put it on Cash money like it should. lights out I am from 3point line. when I cross you up its like where will you find. Aka 47 on my hand becasue we werent happy with fans. poets flip the media because they look for you name in the encyclapedia.


I droped like it was hot right. :xmas:

{DS}cholozen
12-26-2004, 12:20 PM
Once apon a time i beat up a Kid.
Shot him with a shot gun.
but he still kinda lived.
so i walked down the street.
thinking of a plan on how to get him to eat green eggs and ham.
sky is blue and dirt is a redish brown.
Thats y mom is scared of Clowns
Puppys are Cute Cats r Fat.
thats why 50 cent got shot with a Gat
My name is mark it rymths with Shark
it kinda sounds like that game Nark and Fart An Park



a poem by {DS}cholozen top that :sly:

PSYCHO
12-28-2004, 04:07 PM
black gloves- black mask
black shirt- black pants
blue steel- blue vest
he dead- you next

SBYRD5
12-28-2004, 05:17 PM
???

I'm your simple fellow very mellow often mistaken for carmello. :xmas:



Edited By SBYRD5 on 1104283396

hellboy666
12-30-2004, 05:49 PM
[quote:post_uid0="girlNferno666"][color=#000000]well i wrote something for all the warriors in sfo ^_^ and i know it's not the best but i tried for u guys so i hope u guys like it to all the fighters out there this poems for u ^_^



I need to know the man behind the dark eyes
The secrets and lies
The warrior who fights an endless battle with his soul
The lover who keeps this on going war
I need to know the shadows that lurk in his heart
Which he wants to keep in the dark
The man I know so well
And the shadow that lurks beneath
The man who can love so much
His hand a tender caress
And the fighter who's hand a deadly touch
2 souls trapped in one body like day and night
Your soul longs to find that balance between the warrior and the lover the
Caretaker and the destroyer
Needing seeking looking for that answer that

Nosoul4Sfo
01-05-2005, 04:41 PM
We both were hot and heavy. but we knew what we were going to do in that chevy.
I am putting my hand in her belly. but still we are in a Chevy.

As we continue she put her hand on my thigh. I am thinking the first time I saw her she was shy.

This aint any situation we are in a back seat of a car. but I wonder we how we get so far. I remember we wanting each other. but I i am wondering where whe going.
Because when we where looking at each other our private parts where showing.

As the night goes on we are doing it for hours. but in our minds We wanted to do it in a shower.

Jin^Kazama
01-13-2005, 10:24 AM
nice :)

SBYRD5
01-18-2005, 03:49 PM
We both were hot and heavy. but we knew what we were going to do in that chevy.
I am putting my hand in her belly. but still we are in a Chevy.

As we continue she put her hand on my thigh. I am thinking the first time I saw her she was shy.

This aint any situation we are in a back seat of a car. but I wonder we how we get so far. I remember we wanting each other. but I i am wondering where whe going.
Because when we where looking at each other our private parts where showing.

As the night goes on we are doing it for hours. but in our minds We wanted to do it in a shower.
Her coochie was loud son...fishy. :blues:

blanka09
01-18-2005, 03:59 PM
Oh common man... don't turn this thread into "THAT"