Drawing done in pen

[-NYCE-]

Ya I'm Back Again With Sumtin New I Drew This Pic Using Only A Pen I'm Gonna Use It For My Avatar On Forums Let Me Kno Wat Ya Think Lata--Nyce

http://67.18.37.18/1126/12/upload/p5266538.jpg

[EvilAkuma]

nice man. I wish u can make some comics for my site i'm working on. I finally got my paycheck. Now must get a cc to get a domain :biggrin:

[-NYCE-]

yo wat kinda comic u have in mind cuz i'm thinkin of makin one tryna get a good storyline set up

[68-1093009699]

it looks kind of..............*cough* ripped *cough* question Marks ???

[Zpower]

Looks ok. WORK ON YOUR ANATOMY. I cannot stress this enough why do people work so much on details and forget the correct anatomy. START FROM THE BASICS PEOPLE.. Anyhow looks like this guy has a BROKEN NECK. ALSO this guys CLAVICLE..."COLLARBONE".. Is protruding WAY too far up shouldnt be seen that much. Also work on the shoulders they look too far down and un proportioned... rest looks ok though

[EvilAkuma]

it looks kind of..............*cough* ripped *cough* question Marks ???
if it's rip provide us the link in order to see proof

[BMXX]

Nice job J, you was always good in art man. Hey DarkKidbuu, stop hatin' on the bruvah. You got skills, pop off your shet then. Ya' dig that?

[(-StarWarrior-)]

it looks kind of..............*cough* ripped *cough* question Marks ???
if it's rip provide us the link in order to see proof
Seriously, what EvilAkuma said.
Looking threw some of your posts...you want to become a mod...then start acting smart for a change....darkbuu.

People has different talent, Jyno's is with the pencil.

:) your drawing is clean, unlike mine :(



Edited By (-StarWarrior-) on 1099345580

[-NYCE-]

thnx star

aiight check i kno wat mistakes r there i drew it in pen can't edit any strokes i made y don't ya comment on how the ear in not proportioned right

and i don't rip nuffin the pic i loaded on my forum

Wat up B! long time no see dawg



Edited By -NYCE- on 1099347852

[BMXX]

Hells yeah man. Yo draw me somethin' lol.

[Wave Master]

you can't see the shoulders o.0 and also the main problem is the neck its too long

[rabbitalien]

zpower... the reason the anatomy isnt correctly done and some things might b skipped, is that it isnt an american style of drawing, its anime... this reason being that anime overlooks general anatomy and jus gives it a more likable and clean pic... adding all those veins cartilage, muscles... sweat and blood might not make it that attractive. i think its kinda nice... but u need to work on casting those shadows...

[-NYCE-]

well in anime it is anatomically correct in most but it's all up 2 the individuals styles and the different uses of foreshortening but in this case i made mistakes that i couldn't erase cuz i used a pen CAN'T ERASE PEN!

[Elena]

Well, you did good. I could never draw in pen, it would look all smudged and stuff if I did. And that looks like it came from your imagination...which I don't have....yes the neck does look snapped but, It's All Good. :)

[bloodpack]

http://67.18.37.18/1126/12/upload/p5266538.jpg

http://imageuploading.com/041104/1099574799.jpg

i edited her work, now tell me which one has a broken neck and which has a proper posture...

point is, regardless of what type or art youre drawing, whether its anime or american style, you must treat the character as if they too can "feel", how would you feel if youre the one doing that pose, would your neck hurt? even its fiction, you it should have an essence of anatomical realism

[Battleaxe22]

point is, regardless of what type or art youre drawing, whether its anime or american style, you must treat the character as if they too can "feel", how would you feel if youre the one doing that pose, would your neck hurt? even its fiction, you it should have an essence of anatomical realism

Good point. However, I find you are taking away from some of the skill Jyn has demonstrated. Not that this was your intention, I sensed more ridicule than constructive criticism.

Hot joint of the month- Pharoe Monch- New World Symphony
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-Chris

[bloodpack]

point is, regardless of what type or art youre drawing, whether its anime or american style, you must treat the character as if they too can "feel", how would you feel if youre the one doing that pose, would your neck hurt? even its fiction, you it should have an essence of anatomical realism

Good point. However, I find you are taking away from some of the skill Jyn has demonstrated. Not that this was your intention, I sensed more ridicule than constructive criticism.

Hot joint of the month- Pharoe Monch- New World Symphony
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-Chris
well forgive me if thats the first impression although its not

-im not taking her skill away, if thats her style then its ok, im just trying to correct it, sharing what i know but its still up to her if she wants to follow

-no its not a ridicule

again pardon me

[-NYCE-]

I'MA A GUY!!!!!! I getwat u guys r sayin bout wats wrong can't fix this pic it's ova and done

aiight i'll say wun last thing conserning this pic the mistake happened when i messed up the left side when i was desiding wat clothing choice 2 use i drew this before determing the hieght of the shoulders cuz fo the pose i was gonna use the shoulders needed 2 be raised

p.s. I'm posting another pic i'm workin on tomorrow(for those that seen da 1st version of my angel fighter full scene complete well almost)

[evryoung8998]

yo i wish i can post the pencil drawings i make u'll stay in amazement, i'll show u one of these days i'll scan it and i'll show u. It's a whole bunch of DBZ DBGT characters dat i drew and some kingdom hearts, i'll be the best drawer in the forum if yousaw ma drawings. i'll show u one day,maybe tommorow i'll scan it and show u!!

[Zpower]

It's a whole bunch of DBZ DBGT characters dat i drew
:laugh: dont bother.. j/k but really man drawing dbz is soooo old now its not even funny. If you're going to post fanart pleeeeeeeeeease do something other than dbz. Also its not that creative or imaginative or artistic to just draw characters people have already made...

[rabbitalien]

well hopefully its diff characters but same style.

[-NYCE-]

yo dawg i don't kno bout u but i have many styles.

i wasn't gonna post dis until i finished inking it and transfer it 2 a bigger sheet of paper so i can add more chars 2 this scene
but i'm starting my new job monday so i'm hangin dis weekend won't have no time 2 show it

http://67.18.37.18/1126/12/upload/p5319138.jpg



Edited By -NYCE- on 1099679841

[Zpower]

Pretty nice sketch.. I want to see this when its finished. The girl on the left corner looks out of perspective she should be larger than the two guys going back.... like the guy on the right... anyhow looks pretty good might wanna work more on details of the hair.. and that left arm on the guy with the halo over his head looks a taddddd bit too long. Also the guy on the left to him looks like hes about to fall over.. would be good idea to balance out his wieght so he has a realistic stance. Background looks veeeeeeeeeeeeeery plain though you might want to work more on anatomy more instead of learning how to draw great backgrounds...which includes looots of stuff. Though over-all pretty good man keep it up I need to make a sketch thread or something everyone thats interested in drawing, painting, ect.. can post their work there.

[rabbitalien]

hmmm i hav sum realistic comments zpower... but in drawings like that... the possibilites can b endless... those 2 can b giants so that the girl wont need to have her head enlarged, the guy with the shining eye can b holding on something while leaning... the drawing isnt done so there can still b alot we havent seen

[Vash]

Dang man you can draw good just like me except I will draw pics for the site later if I have the chance to.

[limbei]

Really a very nice pic of sketch!
Much better than ur "avatar" one, Cant wait to see the completed piece!
Woah... the girl, the angels abstracted piece of work..................



Edited By limbei on 1099697049