Akuma - Tried a new style

[y_09]

yea well the topic title says it all, oh and rate and comment, and anyways you think it can be improved

http://www.SkyCache.com/img/akuma.jpg

[underlaie]

it look nice i give it a 9/10 :D

[(-StarWarrior-)]

too much Red o o its really killing it. Put around with a black brush.
Your typo not really going "well" More like not needed.
If you meant new style i bet your talking about the border. If it is...don't use these kinda borders.
Alecko did borders and they were good but it was not to put effert on Real gfx then some gay borders.
Keep trying.

[LAB~MONSTER]

don't waste ur time making fancy borders. take those time and work on ur backgrounds more. yes like star said there is too much red. not bad though it looks like u r improving.

[y_09]

it look nice i give it a 9/10 :D
whoa a 9 thankz..

too much Red o o its really killing it. Put around with a black brush.
Your typo not really going "well" More like not needed.
If you meant new style i bet your talking about the border. If it is...don't use these kinda borders.
Alecko did borders and they were good but it was not to put effert on Real gfx then some gay borders.
Keep trying.

oh yea the text dnt look that good i didn't know how to make it look good, and i shold've added more black to the background i guess *sigh* well i'll try and remember next time
thanks for teh comments keep them coming :;):