Storm - Help.

[matsuzo]

This is a work in process so its not finalized. I need some tips plz. What could I do to this image to make it better?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v664/Matsuzo/Stormpcopy.jpg
I also have this same copy but the lightning is a glowy white color. Also I have one of her slightly downsized to reveal more of the picture. Still...tips. =/

[evryoung8998]

i dun know wat ta tell ya...i mean it's sloppy so try to fix on dat ???

[matsuzo]

What is sloppy about it though? =(

[evryoung8998]

everything.....the background is sloppy and the "lightning" on storm is sloppy....work harder, also wat program do you use??? and do you have MSN

[marvel911]

Don't leave that black spot in the upper left corner. I don't know what you could fill it with, but don't leave it empty.