View Full Version : .:|james's art v.01|:. - Ms paint
I posted this on BG, and I know most of you don't go there. So I'll post it here also.
If you can, please judge the work with no crucial slurs or anything more. This has been done by MS paint. Rate 1 - 10 with explain and comments on how to make the picture better. Judge... Great, Alright, Bad, Mediocre. You decide.
http://bmx22002.250free.com/Screenshots/0_ART_0/MAN2.JPG
Edited By BMXX on 1104116919
Zpower
12-27-2004, 12:26 AM
Ear, eyes way out of proportion. The top of the ear and the eyeline should match up. Top of the left side of the head shouldnt bend out then in then out again. It should only bend outward going down to the chin. Hairline needs to be refined alot more. Nose is out of proportion again nose should line up with bottom of the ear. Also your nose curves downward looks awkward. Maybe actually creating a eye on this character would help it look better. Eye doesnt even have an iris ect.. but besides all that ohyah the chin isnt straight and besides that pretty good for begginner even in ms paint you should be able get proportions atleast somewhat right though.
Beginner... yeah okay...
Here's another one I did, y'all rate it. MORE PEOPLE RATE!
http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2004-12/917748/boy.JPG
Edited By BMXX on 1104167434
marvel911
12-27-2004, 11:44 AM
In my opinion, the only real problem is that is ear is way higher than it should be, so that takes away the realism. Other than that the face is outlined pretty well, plus its all done in paint so that also adds to the score. Overall 7.5/10.
estset
12-27-2004, 03:12 PM
Not bad for paint user :D And you make the BG the same as the guy T Shirt =/ I give it 6.5/10.
http://bmx22002.250free.com/Screenshots/0_ART_0/goku.JPG
I decided to draw a Goku on MS paint. RATE. Don't view and just leave... rate!!! All three of the works.
{Predator}
12-27-2004, 08:29 PM
all 7's thats good by using paint am not really good in that so i cant give u any advice but nice paint work
Heh, okay thanks...
MORE COMMENTS. DON'T BE LAZY.
SBYRD5
12-27-2004, 11:57 PM
HMM
I suppose on the pc it's hard to draw.....
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umm..man I'm a serious art freak....you don't want my opinion. :plain:
Pyromaniac666
12-28-2004, 10:04 AM
They keep getting better and better as u go, keep up the good work.
HMM
I suppose on the pc it's hard to draw.....
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umm..man I'm a serious art freak....you don't want my opinion. :plain:
Ohhh please... share it. Embarrass me, impress the croud.
Edited By BMXX on 1104340297
More comments, don't be flipin' lazy for fliping sake. Btw, thanks Pyro. And BYRD, I'm waiting for this "negative" opinion.
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